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A murder mystery Haiku

Posted: 3rd July 2022 6:18pm
Edited: 4th July 2022 2:01pm - edited 5 times
robert43041
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Poetry Contest

Show me your best.
Haikus are short of course.  So write one.  Or a succession and somewhere along the way, it will also involve that murder mystery.

Posted: 3rd July 2022 6:53pm
Edited: 3rd July 2022 8:38pm
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Miss understood the instruction, i thought this was per syllable for some reason.
Good luck

Posted: 3rd July 2022 6:59pm
Edited: 3rd July 2022 8:38pm
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Same issue sorry Robert ♥️

Posted: 3rd July 2022 7:11pm
Edited: 3rd July 2022 8:40pm
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Ugh! I promise to come back and enter correctly Robert.

Posted: 3rd July 2022 7:47pm
Edited: 3rd July 2022 9:08pm
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So the sum of your haikus is twelve lines.....with hope that they all connect in spirit....

Posted: 3rd July 2022 8:36pm
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robert43041 said:Reminder:  the competitions is for TWELVE or 13 lines Haikus............
Lines not syllables?

Posted: 3rd July 2022 8:59pm
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Both.  Such haiku forms exist.  Google it.

Posted: 4th July 2022 10:02pm
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She is cruel

If he died in pain
It would be best for them both
Winter is for joy.
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Posted: 4th July 2022 10:03pm
Edited: 4th July 2022 10:14pm
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The Art Of Alternative Perspectives

mystery written
in so much blood ~ body lay
grotesquely still

no obvious sign
of a murder weapon ~ or
a solid motive

so many questions
not enough answers ~ no clear
clues to the event

what we need ~ is a
different eye on the case
come on columbo.





Posted: 4th July 2022 11:15pm
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Excellent.  Good luck in the competition.

Posted: 5th July 2022 4:57pm
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Murderer's Haiku

I stare at the blood
It drips, drips off of my hands
It wasn't my fault

I couldn't help it
He warped me till I just snapped
He made me do it

They will not find me
I'll burn down his fucking house
It's time to run now

First I feed the dog
He's such a sweet little boy
Now I must clean up
Written by HarleyQuinn (Riah)
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Posted: 5th July 2022 7:51pm
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Excellent submission.  Good luck in the competition.....

Posted: 7th July 2022 4:28am
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MARMONMYS

Marilyn Monroe said
"Diamonds are a girl's best friend"
Mystery death bed
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Posted: 7th July 2022 7:52pm
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Riders on the Storm 2.0


Lost highway darkness
Concealment of a stranger  
Walking randomly  
 
Talking randomly  
Dire silence of twisting thoughts
Rational madness
 
Oblivion thirst
Transformation in layers
Footsteps across voids
 
Black breeze of alone
Lycanthropy heart turns black
Maggot brain turns black
Written by Cipher_O (WarlordoftheWrittenWord)
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Posted: 8th July 2022 8:38pm
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Disappearance ? (senryu)

The jealous knife strikes
life ebbs, now to hide the body
in Ukraine's battle grounds
Written by slipalong
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