Offensive Platonic Poetry
EdibleWords
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Tyrant of Words
9
Joined 7th Jan 2018Forum Posts: 3004
Poetry Contest Description
Rub each other the wrong way, as politely as possible!
Feel free to have as many poems as you want under one or two entry titles. (So it’s all in one or two posts in your name.) One identity per person, please.
Get your free tongue working.
It’s your inherent right. Respect it!
Get your free tongue working.
It’s your inherent right. Respect it!
EdibleWords
Forum Posts: 3004
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 7th Jan 2018Forum Posts: 3004
United We Stand
Common enemies
for the left and right
want us to die
and make us fight
But even if we can’t
agree on anything
We still both have
a common enemy
Do not forget
carpetbaggers
are not here to save us
Like divorce lawyers
for a marriage
who want us to
use them to fight
until they drain us
of every delight
for the left and right
want us to die
and make us fight
But even if we can’t
agree on anything
We still both have
a common enemy
Do not forget
carpetbaggers
are not here to save us
Like divorce lawyers
for a marriage
who want us to
use them to fight
until they drain us
of every delight
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Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
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Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
3
Joined 3rd May 2020 Forum Posts: 2668
Look in the Mirror What Do I See?
Hear him scream freedom is my right
He is arrogant, selfish a bit contrite.
Will he agree
not ever, he will lie, or cry
Before any chest bump,
or a five that goes high
He comes with personal jabs
and a right to the jaw
Perpetual insults spill from his maw
He Joins me for more, then says,
"I don't care"
Three against one , or even a pair
Offenses are given then taken
three and four
So innocently creating a virtual war
Somethings familiar I can't resist
will he back down who will persist
Something exists deep down
Inside resembling you resembling me
A rebound reflection it's yours
Now I see
Too late, I've lost interest
in this brother we share
You know him as Pete, repeat
i admit, do you dare ?
We are one in the same, these
things that we do
This place is beginning to feel
like a s zoo
He is arrogant, selfish a bit contrite.
Will he agree
not ever, he will lie, or cry
Before any chest bump,
or a five that goes high
He comes with personal jabs
and a right to the jaw
Perpetual insults spill from his maw
He Joins me for more, then says,
"I don't care"
Three against one , or even a pair
Offenses are given then taken
three and four
So innocently creating a virtual war
Somethings familiar I can't resist
will he back down who will persist
Something exists deep down
Inside resembling you resembling me
A rebound reflection it's yours
Now I see
Too late, I've lost interest
in this brother we share
You know him as Pete, repeat
i admit, do you dare ?
We are one in the same, these
things that we do
This place is beginning to feel
like a s zoo
Written by Valeriyabeyond
(Dhyana)
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AspergerPoet56
Forum Posts: 1899
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 4th Dec 2018Forum Posts: 1899
Trampled Freedom (NoPoo 73)
The word
Is freedom
We hear it
All the time
But it dont mean
A whole lot
While being trampled
By the mob
Souls of patriots
Tainted
By the right to demonstrate
The resurrection
Of histories inserrection
Its not communism
Taking over
Just gun toting facists
Demoracy
Is just a declaration
On an old parchment
Twitter feeds
Are the modern day
Constitutional truths
Fuelling gangs
Of conspiracy theorists
Steeped in gun law
Taking out of context
Lawful amendments
To incite
The right againt left
Bleeding on the flag
No longer stands
For something
Is freedom
We hear it
All the time
But it dont mean
A whole lot
While being trampled
By the mob
Souls of patriots
Tainted
By the right to demonstrate
The resurrection
Of histories inserrection
Its not communism
Taking over
Just gun toting facists
Demoracy
Is just a declaration
On an old parchment
Twitter feeds
Are the modern day
Constitutional truths
Fuelling gangs
Of conspiracy theorists
Steeped in gun law
Taking out of context
Lawful amendments
To incite
The right againt left
Bleeding on the flag
No longer stands
For something
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anna_grin
ANNAN
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ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th Mar 2013Forum Posts: 3367
you are a trawler in the green gold blue black
sea i love.
you are a trawler calling herself the ark of the covenant
outfitted absurdly for war.
the white dove you send flying
wants to sleep in the sand.
and your lines hang with rotten meat.
you will catch no good fish today.
sea i love.
you are a trawler calling herself the ark of the covenant
outfitted absurdly for war.
the white dove you send flying
wants to sleep in the sand.
and your lines hang with rotten meat.
you will catch no good fish today.
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
90
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5718
Haiku for Thought
Jesus will return
and bring his lawyer with him;
you can bet on that.
Jesus will return
and bring his lawyer with him;
you can bet on that.
Northern1
Joined 15th Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 234
Fire of Insight
Forum Posts: 234
Geez
The western world is on hands and knees
Now world belongs to birds and bees
The lovely flowers and the trees
The mountains and the seas
The earth and the breeze
A respiratory disease
And the Chinese
Now world belongs to birds and bees
The lovely flowers and the trees
The mountains and the seas
The earth and the breeze
A respiratory disease
And the Chinese
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Northern1
Joined 15th Apr 2016
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Fire of Insight
Forum Posts: 234
Note To Self
I have finally figured it out
And know what it's all about
It's a shocking realization
Do you read in anticipation?
I find that rather funny actually
You are not really here factually
When for all is done and all said
You are neither alive nor dead
And I am neither here nor there
There is no here or everywhere
I made it all up on a boring day
It is true man is made out of clay
I am actually writing to myself
There is factually nothing else
I don't care if lines don't rhyme
For I created space and time
You are here for my education
You are only in my imagination
I can do anything I want in here
Beat up a cop or steal a beer
There are no cops there is no jail
Anyway I would get out on bail
I am your God I am your creator
It's merely a show it's just theater
But if it makes you feel any better
I wrote myself a very long letter
You were in it I mentioned you
Wrote of things for you to do
I had fun while making an ostrich
Woman however was a real bitch
Men are simple they are easy to do
Give them sex and feed them stew
So you see this is not even a dream
You must have heat to create steam
Sorry I must break to you this notion
I thank you for service and devotion
Dearest reader you do not exist
You will be missed
And know what it's all about
It's a shocking realization
Do you read in anticipation?
I find that rather funny actually
You are not really here factually
When for all is done and all said
You are neither alive nor dead
And I am neither here nor there
There is no here or everywhere
I made it all up on a boring day
It is true man is made out of clay
I am actually writing to myself
There is factually nothing else
I don't care if lines don't rhyme
For I created space and time
You are here for my education
You are only in my imagination
I can do anything I want in here
Beat up a cop or steal a beer
There are no cops there is no jail
Anyway I would get out on bail
I am your God I am your creator
It's merely a show it's just theater
But if it makes you feel any better
I wrote myself a very long letter
You were in it I mentioned you
Wrote of things for you to do
I had fun while making an ostrich
Woman however was a real bitch
Men are simple they are easy to do
Give them sex and feed them stew
So you see this is not even a dream
You must have heat to create steam
Sorry I must break to you this notion
I thank you for service and devotion
Dearest reader you do not exist
You will be missed
Written by Northern1
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ReggiePoet
Reggie
Forum Posts: 363
Reggie
Fire of Insight
28
Joined 13th May 2018Forum Posts: 363
In Spite of Wrongs
For right or wrong the muse has gone
—Or rather, seldom visits
Should I hold on in spite of wrongs?
My patience has its limits
I’m still bereft from friends who’ve left
And never said goodbye
I’m still upset and won’t forget
Perhaps I, too, shall fly
Written by ReggiePoet
(Reggie)
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Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Treason
So what’s with all this hoopla
this unmitigated gall
fascist racists storm
Capitol Hill halls
The orange face man they call Trump
absconded behind bulletproof glass,
Vice President Pence pulls down his pants
so Trump can fuck him in his ungreased ass
Cops stood by aiding and abetting
while a lunatic runs free on the loose,
He should be tarred then shot at sunrise
then hung by a slingshot noose !
this unmitigated gall
fascist racists storm
Capitol Hill halls
The orange face man they call Trump
absconded behind bulletproof glass,
Vice President Pence pulls down his pants
so Trump can fuck him in his ungreased ass
Cops stood by aiding and abetting
while a lunatic runs free on the loose,
He should be tarred then shot at sunrise
then hung by a slingshot noose !
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PittinixDesigns
Forum Posts: 85
Fire of Insight
3
Joined 8th Feb 2020 Forum Posts: 85
Makers of Lies Hate Truth
Makers of lies hate truth, but I shall speak the truth even if it costs me my life.
Something is fundamentally wrong with the minds of world leaders.
Presidents, prime ministers, kings and queens, all politicians think alike.
They do not regard the people in worn-out clothes as their equals.
In fact, they do not even accept these persons as real men and women.
The lives of all human beings doubtlessly have the same worth.
Race, nationality, economic status, rank or religion, makes no difference at all.
The senseless warmongers neither appreciate nor value truth and right.
And they squander taxpayers’ money on the study of supremacy and aggression.
They cannot love one another because they do not know the Creator of life.
The leaders of countries are public servants; they are not gods and goddesses.
Greedy political candidates instigate bloodshed to win seats in the whorehouses.
People with integrity certainly do not get involved in the nastiness of politics.
Radicalism is not terrorism; sly politicians like to invent definitions for words.
Simply put, radicalism is the aim at fundamental change in the structure of society.
Terrorism is the employment and incitation of terror to drive fear in others,
And in their book of rules, this definition matches the armed forces of the states.
Rich, bourgeoisie and poor, everybody has the right to freedom of expression.
Spokespersons for the governments falsely accuse people of terrorism and extremism.
They regard anybody who disagrees with their delusion as a terrorist and an extremist.
I have a few thought-provoking questions for the leaders and the so-called intellectuals:
Is it true or false that the states are the biggest terrorist organizations in the world?
Who has the nuclear capability to cause worldwide death and mass destruction?
Do you think it is the one who resists oppression or the one who oppresses others?
The mother of terrorism is in fact the notorious self-styled world power,
Yet so many misguided people scurry to that modern-day Sodom and Gomorrah.
Some people have turned their backs on good morals to achieve dishonest financial gains.
The power-hungry Lamblike Beast and its hypocritical allies are under the control of Satan,
But none of them is able to see it because they are afraid to look in the mirror.
They have blind minds, and they murder innocent people to cover up their evil deeds.
The wicked conspirators are buried deep in fright, lunacy, and confusion.
If you ask them who the real enemy is, they will give you a nonsensical answer.
They do not have a clue that their pride, ignorance, and hatred are their worst enemies.
Injustice, intimidation, corruption, and preconception reign in their legislative bodies.
What they call the best system of law and justice is actually dungy toilet tissue.
In plain language, the law and justice of mankind is full of human excrement and urine.
They run for their lives and seek a hiding place when there is no pursuer.
Every day they improve the technology of weapons and the strategy of war because of fear.
How long will the evil, satanic authorities go on building an imaginary foe?
The foul scent of their disgusting filth and pollution is suffocating them to death.
Preachers, teachers, and dignitaries give such eloquent talks on the podiums.
I for one do not take a single word they say seriously, and I do not respect any of them.
All of them have the same rotten intention, and that is to mislead poor people.
Lies and deception issue from their tongues like slime dripping from the sewer.
They have built systems to institutionalize deprivation and bad-mindedness.
We are a futureless civilization because of the rubbish they teach our children.
The size of the bags they carry to school is the equivalent of a donkey’s hamper.
They publish the propaganda theory that higher education is the key to success,
But their many possessions and achievements are not the result of their hard work.
They have achieved wealth and fame by means of exploitation and plunder.
The dishonest leaders take credit for the creativity and production of our hands.
They swindle us out of our meagre earnings and give us a non-prosperous life.
I conclude that they are up to no good, and their leadership is a colossal failure.
Something is fundamentally wrong with the minds of world leaders.
Presidents, prime ministers, kings and queens, all politicians think alike.
They do not regard the people in worn-out clothes as their equals.
In fact, they do not even accept these persons as real men and women.
The lives of all human beings doubtlessly have the same worth.
Race, nationality, economic status, rank or religion, makes no difference at all.
The senseless warmongers neither appreciate nor value truth and right.
And they squander taxpayers’ money on the study of supremacy and aggression.
They cannot love one another because they do not know the Creator of life.
The leaders of countries are public servants; they are not gods and goddesses.
Greedy political candidates instigate bloodshed to win seats in the whorehouses.
People with integrity certainly do not get involved in the nastiness of politics.
Radicalism is not terrorism; sly politicians like to invent definitions for words.
Simply put, radicalism is the aim at fundamental change in the structure of society.
Terrorism is the employment and incitation of terror to drive fear in others,
And in their book of rules, this definition matches the armed forces of the states.
Rich, bourgeoisie and poor, everybody has the right to freedom of expression.
Spokespersons for the governments falsely accuse people of terrorism and extremism.
They regard anybody who disagrees with their delusion as a terrorist and an extremist.
I have a few thought-provoking questions for the leaders and the so-called intellectuals:
Is it true or false that the states are the biggest terrorist organizations in the world?
Who has the nuclear capability to cause worldwide death and mass destruction?
Do you think it is the one who resists oppression or the one who oppresses others?
The mother of terrorism is in fact the notorious self-styled world power,
Yet so many misguided people scurry to that modern-day Sodom and Gomorrah.
Some people have turned their backs on good morals to achieve dishonest financial gains.
The power-hungry Lamblike Beast and its hypocritical allies are under the control of Satan,
But none of them is able to see it because they are afraid to look in the mirror.
They have blind minds, and they murder innocent people to cover up their evil deeds.
The wicked conspirators are buried deep in fright, lunacy, and confusion.
If you ask them who the real enemy is, they will give you a nonsensical answer.
They do not have a clue that their pride, ignorance, and hatred are their worst enemies.
Injustice, intimidation, corruption, and preconception reign in their legislative bodies.
What they call the best system of law and justice is actually dungy toilet tissue.
In plain language, the law and justice of mankind is full of human excrement and urine.
They run for their lives and seek a hiding place when there is no pursuer.
Every day they improve the technology of weapons and the strategy of war because of fear.
How long will the evil, satanic authorities go on building an imaginary foe?
The foul scent of their disgusting filth and pollution is suffocating them to death.
Preachers, teachers, and dignitaries give such eloquent talks on the podiums.
I for one do not take a single word they say seriously, and I do not respect any of them.
All of them have the same rotten intention, and that is to mislead poor people.
Lies and deception issue from their tongues like slime dripping from the sewer.
They have built systems to institutionalize deprivation and bad-mindedness.
We are a futureless civilization because of the rubbish they teach our children.
The size of the bags they carry to school is the equivalent of a donkey’s hamper.
They publish the propaganda theory that higher education is the key to success,
But their many possessions and achievements are not the result of their hard work.
They have achieved wealth and fame by means of exploitation and plunder.
The dishonest leaders take credit for the creativity and production of our hands.
They swindle us out of our meagre earnings and give us a non-prosperous life.
I conclude that they are up to no good, and their leadership is a colossal failure.
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EdibleWords
Forum Posts: 3004
Tyrant of Words
9
Joined 7th Jan 2018Forum Posts: 3004
I love all this poetry. Two of our talents did not use the competition format. You all can do what you like, ...but we need to have our poems in the “box-thingy,” don’t we? I’m not an expert, but I thought we needed those.
Either way, wow. Thank you! Everybody. 😎👍
Either way, wow. Thank you! Everybody. 😎👍
Numer90
Numer0-un0
Forum Posts: 85
Numer0-un0
Thought Provoker
4
Joined 12th Dec 2020 Forum Posts: 85
Blasphemy
The broad way is the wayward way..
You must be so **** stupid to possibly think I wouldn't be riding on the road my way..
Wayward way..
The road to perdition?..
Remind me what they said about temptation.. does it grab your attention?..
The spirit is willing but the flesh is weak..
First of all, they do not come from God, although He does allow
them.
“For God cannot be tempted by evil, and He Himself does not tempt anyone.
Who eat from the Garden of Eden?..
Who was first led astray by the demon?..
There's this verse that reads;
Woe! To every backbiter, slanderer..
It was amazing what living through nightmares will do to people..
I don't know about you, but every fucking person I ever know back bites..
Every norms and ethics condemn the act of lying yet every **** person lies..
Fathers, mothers, teachers, men, women, children, rich and poor, scholars and seekers, vagrants, tennants and landlords.. every ***** body lies..
Lying is an indispensable part of keeping our day-to-day lives running smoothly.. they said..
***** act like one..
Tell me how morally and socially unaceptable, it is for me *** this ****..
Tell me that I'm not complex enough at a point in time to disobey the commands of my Lord..
You sure know I'm not an Apostle and I don't own a fucking castle..
My mind is racing on the last and the final track against me..
And I don't like this marathon..
We got killers..
We got rapists..
We got pedophiles..
We got necrophiles..
We got this we got that and we got ME!..
I do what I do l'm not an exception.. I'm only a human trying to live on a daily basis..
I demand the right to live..
I demand the right to smoke..
I demand the right to write..
I demand the right to feel..
I demand the right to think..
I demand the right to fuck..
All of us fuckers lie..
All of us fuckers gonna die..
Equation balanced!
You must be so **** stupid to possibly think I wouldn't be riding on the road my way..
Wayward way..
The road to perdition?..
Remind me what they said about temptation.. does it grab your attention?..
The spirit is willing but the flesh is weak..
First of all, they do not come from God, although He does allow
them.
“For God cannot be tempted by evil, and He Himself does not tempt anyone.
Who eat from the Garden of Eden?..
Who was first led astray by the demon?..
There's this verse that reads;
Woe! To every backbiter, slanderer..
It was amazing what living through nightmares will do to people..
I don't know about you, but every fucking person I ever know back bites..
Every norms and ethics condemn the act of lying yet every **** person lies..
Fathers, mothers, teachers, men, women, children, rich and poor, scholars and seekers, vagrants, tennants and landlords.. every ***** body lies..
Lying is an indispensable part of keeping our day-to-day lives running smoothly.. they said..
***** act like one..
Tell me how morally and socially unaceptable, it is for me *** this ****..
Tell me that I'm not complex enough at a point in time to disobey the commands of my Lord..
You sure know I'm not an Apostle and I don't own a fucking castle..
My mind is racing on the last and the final track against me..
And I don't like this marathon..
We got killers..
We got rapists..
We got pedophiles..
We got necrophiles..
We got this we got that and we got ME!..
I do what I do l'm not an exception.. I'm only a human trying to live on a daily basis..
I demand the right to live..
I demand the right to smoke..
I demand the right to write..
I demand the right to feel..
I demand the right to think..
I demand the right to fuck..
All of us fuckers lie..
All of us fuckers gonna die..
Equation balanced!
Written by Numer90
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Numer0-un0
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Numer0-un0
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Suspense
Waking up daily with the suspense..
About how to commence..
Now fuck the sixth sense..
Putting everything in past tense..
An open street..
My back on this wall of brick..
Without a trick..
This razor blade is all I pick..
You feel like..
Open me fire..
I wore my attire..
This is the hour of honor..
Cut the crap..
Set the trap..
Cut me loose..
For been the source of your fever..
Not sorry being the weak link of this chain..
Uplift the crane..
Pull the lever..
Dump me in the river..
Unaware of my inner and outer margins of attention..
Zero tension..
No remorse..
Controlling me remote..
I am not a saint..
Dead tell nor story..
This is the war for glory..
Need to withstand this thriller..
They couldn't auctioned me off..
I failed to sell off..
Who can bail?..
God is the highest bidder..
I don't mind this assholes..
Bleeding from their sore holes..
Insane enough..
God is my only healer..
About how to commence..
Now fuck the sixth sense..
Putting everything in past tense..
An open street..
My back on this wall of brick..
Without a trick..
This razor blade is all I pick..
You feel like..
Open me fire..
I wore my attire..
This is the hour of honor..
Cut the crap..
Set the trap..
Cut me loose..
For been the source of your fever..
Not sorry being the weak link of this chain..
Uplift the crane..
Pull the lever..
Dump me in the river..
Unaware of my inner and outer margins of attention..
Zero tension..
No remorse..
Controlling me remote..
I am not a saint..
Dead tell nor story..
This is the war for glory..
Need to withstand this thriller..
They couldn't auctioned me off..
I failed to sell off..
Who can bail?..
God is the highest bidder..
I don't mind this assholes..
Bleeding from their sore holes..
Insane enough..
God is my only healer..
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javalini
Forum Posts: 214
Dangerous Mind
17
Joined 4th Apr 2019Forum Posts: 214
TWO IMBECILES
we are imbeciles, love,
and i would admit as much
but you would not
and you would say
i spoke from weakness
and i would say
it's just the truth
and i'd be right
and i would admit as much
but you would not
and you would say
i spoke from weakness
and i would say
it's just the truth
and i'd be right
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