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Blackwolf (I.M.Blackwolf)
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It's Beginning To Look Like It

Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Poetry Contest

If it's beginning to look a lot like Christmas what does that look like ? Throughout our life the feel of Christmas changes What does Christmas mean to you this year?
Christmas is especially difficult for some families this year lives lost to the pandemic
Jobs lost finances are tight
This year  i ask you to join me and write a poem 50 words or less
Answering the question If it's beginning to look alot like Christmas, what does that look like?
You have one week


Blackwolf
I.M.Blackwolf
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Let The Years Fears Be Erased

( Jesus ) Christ !

Mass Flack Attack

Nuts On The Street , Guns They Pack

People Zipped Up In A Body Bag Sack

Money Scraps Cash They Lack

Governmental Major Computer Hack

Trump Claims He Will Refuse To Pack

Minds Are Warped , Brains Are Wracked

This Christmas Is A Knick Knack Paddy Whack
Written by Blackwolf (I.M.Blackwolf)
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Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Let The Years Fears Be Erased

( Jesus ) Christ !

Mass Flack Attack

Nuts On The Street , Guns They Pack

People Zipped Up In A Body Bag Sack

Money Scraps Cash They Lack

Governmental Major Computer Hack

Trump Claims He Will Refuse To Pack

Minds Are Warped , Brains Are Wracked

This Christmas Is A Knick Knack Paddy Whack
Written by Blackwolf (I.M.Blackwolf)
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Blackwolf said:

Thank you BW
Excellent piece
Thanks for sharing your point of view 🙂

EdibleWords
Tyrant of Words
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Christmas Looks Like Courage This Year

A lion in winter
with white lamb wool
stained feet and belly
with the grapes of wrath

A tattered treelike
symbol packed with
gifts for survivors
stolen from grinches

It has plenty of shoulders
to cry on
after your car is stuck
in the snow

In darkness
burst of light
Written by EdibleWords
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wallyroo92
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This Christmas We're Hunkering Down

 
In the season of giving we have been missing
On being close to the ones we love
But in these times of affliction
Technology has connected the world

From zoom meetings to facetime chats
Computers have helped along the way
Because this Christmas we’re hunkering down
Waiting for sunnier days
Written by wallyroo92
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Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Thank you Wally 🎅and Edible 🤶for your entry

Ahavati
Tams
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The Empty Chair ( for Amy & all who have lost someone )

Christmas is an empty chair
donning a dining table
during holiday—
 
Condolences haunt
as words, until meaning
fumbles between our lips  
 
We flail at half-loss
as razor blades, slicing  
inadequacy apart
 
Yet, offer them regardless
to salvage the wreckage
of our helplessness
 
Praying our brave dearth
proves comfort enough
~
Written by Ahavati (Tams)
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Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
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Non entry

Christmas Day
uncertainty hangs
over garland
and tinsel 

Gift-wrapped confidence, drought stricken, 
peels ribbons, frayed edges
stepped on, stepped over, by carolers
who sing, in fake merriment.

Mothers and daughters stock canned goods,
in silence they listen 
as the book of Revelation plays
on tape, filling
their heads with
fear .


Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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The Empty Chair ( for Amy & all who have lost someone )

Christmas is an empty chair
donning a dining table
during holiday—
 
Condolences haunt
as words, until meaning
fumbles between our lips  
 
We flail at half-loss
as razor blades, slicing  
inadequacy apart
 
Yet, offer them regardless
to salvage the wreckage
of our helplessness
 
Praying our brave dearth
proves comfort enough
~
Written by Ahavati (Tams)
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Ahavati said:

Thank you for this beautiful piece

Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Non entry

Christ,  was born, 
worshipped, 

Confusion builds
a pedestal, where 
the one called 
Christ, Jesus was placed.

Turn your heads
to  the horizon 
in colors of  reds
and yellows,
hear
a joyful uprising
as it speaks
to your hearts 

Together,
share your wisdom,
meditate on what's new
An awakening moves
in with words of love and acceptance
transcend into a new beginning.

Perception controls  human thought 


slipalong
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Joined 1st Jan 2018
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Hanging limp

Missing the weight of that ebullience
the cracker lost its vital snap
conversation and its resonance
a paper crown the jokes fall flat

 Merriment's lost echo, on the empty street
celebration locked in dull captivity
lack's the Ho-Ho-Ho and the joie of vivre
watch out next year, and my reprieve
Written by slipalong
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Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Thank you for your entry
I like it and will respond appropriately at the close of the contest

Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd May 2020
Forum Posts: 2668

Valeriyabeyond said:Christmas is especially difficult for some families this year lives lost to the pandemic
Jobs lost finances are tight
This year  i ask you to join me and write a poem 50 words or less
Answering the question If it's beginning to look alot like Christmas, what does that look like?
You have one week



Thank you for your entries it was very hard to choose
BlackWolf
Your entry captured the Christmas season as I saw and felt this year
Your choice of words and imagery were spot on
Thank you and Congratulations

Ahavati
Your entry was painfully real such beauty and caring was gleaned from this piece
The difficult yet meaningful experience for so many families this year will carry on for many more Christmases to come
May theses families  be blessed.

WallyRoo
Thank you for your entry
The heartfelt realism of this poem was in a way comforting to know how we feel so similar and are unable to express ourselves
You have allowed us to feel your thoughts
Thank you

Congratulations to the winners
And an extra special thank you to EdibleWords and Slipalong for participating

Peace Dhyana

Blackwolf
I.M.Blackwolf
Tyrant of Words
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Many thanks , and a New Year Blessing , Dhyana...

Best to all others and congratulations as well , to
Ahavati , and WallyRoo

Ahavati
Tams
Tyrant of Words
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Congratulations, Blackwolf! And thank you, Val, for the placement and opporunity to participate. Congratulations also to Wallyroo! And to everyone else, I enjoyed your entries. I hope you each have a very blessed New Year filled with happiness, prosperity, and hope! xo

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