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Erotica Done Right 18+!!!

Kinkpoet
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elsiesan said:Ok, a funny...
"You are the charmin on my hiney."

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Kinkpoet
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elsiesan
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I had done that a couple if times, but backed out of it.  Thanks.

elsiesan
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Been on the Prowl
Forever searching
For the one
To unlock my door
Fantasies, although
Based in reality,
Simply not real

So...Tonight

Been on the Prowl
Want a good
Hot lover
One night stand
Maybe two
No more after that

Catch my eye
Court me
Win me over
Tell me your
Cock is
Right size
To fill me
Full of cum
Tell me you
You want to
Fuck me
Tell me you
Want me to meet
Your momma

I say...ok

Take me home
To your room
Lay me down
My wrists
In your hand
Held above my head
Lips pressing
Hard to mine

Click...click

Shackled just
That quick
Damn faster
Than the eye
In your power
You love older
Mature women
I ask what
Do you plan to do
Sitting, a lot longer
Than I like
Finally answering
I shudder...

You begin your
Assault
Get me wet
Hands roving
Artfullly
Teasing me
Into submission
You have control
Falling in love
For one night
Destined never
To forget
We as one
Merging, melting
Fire blazing

Daylight seeps in...

Rising, ready
Disappearing from
Night's prizms
Am left
To wonder
Why it's easier
To love a stranger
For one night
Than the one
Next to me
For an eternity

Written by elsiesan
Published Today

Valeriyabeyond
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elsiesan said:On the Prowl
Been on the Prowl
Forever searching
For the one
To unlock my door
Fantasies, although
Based in reality,
Simply not real

So...Tonight

Been on the Prowl
Want a good
Hot lover
One night stand
Maybe two
No more after that

Catch my eye
Court me
Win me over
Tell me your
Cock is
Right size
To fill me
Full of cum
Tell me you
You want to
Fuck me
Tell me you
Want me to meet
Your momma

I say...ok

Take me home
To your room
Lay me down
My wrists
In your hand
Held above my hand
Lips pressing
Hard to mine

Click...click

Shackled just
That quick
Damn faster
Than the eye
In your power
You love older
Mature women
I ask what
Do you plan to do
Sitting, a lot longer
Than I like
Finally answering
I shudder...

You begin your
Assault
Get me wet
Hands roving
Artfullly
Teasing me
Into submission
You have control
Falling in love
For one night
Destined never
To forget
We as one
Merging, melting
Fire blazing

Daylight seeps in...

Rising, ready
Disappearing from
Night's prizms
Am left
To wonder
Why it's easier
To love a stranger
For one night
Than the one
Next to me
For an eternity

Written by elsiesan
Published Today


Perfect ending Elsie
I like the narrative or dialogue in this one
It glides smoothly like a wet pussy from self talk to speaking to what is portrayed as the Dom
Flowed like buckets of cum Elsie
Nice work

elsiesan
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Valeriyabeyond said:

Perfect ending Elsie
I like the narrative or dialogue in this one
It glides smoothly like a wet pussy from self talk to speaking to what is portrayed as the Dom
Flowed like buckets of cum Elsie
Nice work


Thank you for the comment. It was quite fun composing it.  I am honored.

Kinkpoet
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Nicely done. elsisan.
The last stanza raises an important point. I think our culture fails to acknowledge that there are many forms of love: all valid all important and they not mutually exclusive.

poet Anonymous

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elsiesan
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KinkPoet...
Good insight. Thank you for pointing that out and is very true.  Thank you for the comment.

elsiesan
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Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

Sky_Dancer
Well seems you got it. Am glad others are chiming in.  And thanks for adding the above jism to new page.  I had forgotten to comment and will.  Currently, whipping up some homemade, from scratch New York style cheese cake. Yummy, almost as good as sex, decadent and deliciously sensual.  How about that one.  

elsiesan
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MusicallyMrM said:
Jism
 
 
….an “ism” that I never ever    
wish to lose    
 
“control”  
 
Baby    

did you feel it    
when I placed    
the barrel deep inside your womb....    
 
...and fired the “shot”?    
 
I heard you die    
wet nor dry    
cry baby cry    
felt your body seize    
while I was down on    
bended knee    
 
this is what I do when I'm fucking you.......righteously    
 
so damned hot?  Spoken cliched lines.....    
 
…...did it hit the spot?    
 
traversing the white light    
pussy so wet yet so freakin' tight    
cream drips down the inside    
of your thighs    
(oh how I drift when I drive)    
walking the milky white way    

my,my,my    
 
I smoke and tingle    
as I pull my gun out    
random pulses of energy    
body short circuits    
quaking, screaming and shouting...    
 
…..two spent entities    
shape-shifting,    
splayed out    
upon blue sheets    
lying somewhere between the blurred lines    
cumming..... afterglow    
 
     …...as the ”Jism” speaks


You are an amazingly in-depth writer of erotica.  Love the being splayed out and shape-shifting. I have spoke of cells being rearranged.

And of course the very last line "…...as the ”Jism” speaks."  Beauty in the raw attributes of that line.  Thank you for the write.  

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