Poetry competition CLOSED 18th April 2018 4:48pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNER-UP:
case28
king of the hill
anna_grin
ANNAN
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ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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@juvenalis, am not sure quite what ur on about if im honest.
@slipalong, rough subject matter to be sure but pain alone does not poetry make, trust me on that
brady reigns another day
@slipalong, rough subject matter to be sure but pain alone does not poetry make, trust me on that
brady reigns another day
Magdalena
Spartalena
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Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
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R0berat
Joined 26th Mar 2018
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Strange Creature
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A cup of tea
Care for a cup of tea
Maybe just a smile for me
Nowhere else to rather be
Not one place I am free
For the longest time you locked were in
Just a tear just a missing piece
A puzzle as puzzled it can be
Hourglass is only one step behind me
Free from me, my eternity
A wave of fire rides the streets
Fill in don't you dare darling
Carefree swim, swim to ceiling
Simple kiss on my pillow sleeps
Windy summer knocking with its heels
A sleepless night let's me deep
Sinking in a forest sheep
The champagne pops for a New Year
Inside the heart a hole won't heal
Oh rose, how daring of all you be
Small happy moments with you and me
Care for a cup of tea
Maybe just a smile for me
Nowhere else to rather be
Not one place I am free
Maybe just a smile for me
Nowhere else to rather be
Not one place I am free
For the longest time you locked were in
Just a tear just a missing piece
A puzzle as puzzled it can be
Hourglass is only one step behind me
Free from me, my eternity
A wave of fire rides the streets
Fill in don't you dare darling
Carefree swim, swim to ceiling
Simple kiss on my pillow sleeps
Windy summer knocking with its heels
A sleepless night let's me deep
Sinking in a forest sheep
The champagne pops for a New Year
Inside the heart a hole won't heal
Oh rose, how daring of all you be
Small happy moments with you and me
Care for a cup of tea
Maybe just a smile for me
Nowhere else to rather be
Not one place I am free
Written by R0berat
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runaway-mindtrain
Forum Posts: 866
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 30th July 2017Forum Posts: 866
se7en
Stages of spiritual alchemy- calcification dissolution separation
-conjunction fermentation distillation coagulation
Plexus- pharyngeal laryngeal cavernous
-cardiac epi-gastric pro-static sacral
Senses- five awakened two latent
Periods into which life is divided
Notes across the diatonic scale
Major divisions of the embryo
'Organs' at the base of brain
'Organs' around the heart
Layers of the auric egg
Sides to the heptagon
Seals of revelation
Classical planets
Levels of heaven
Levels of hell
Primary colors
Ductless glands
Sacred breaths
Body systems
Deadly sins
Brain disks
Orifices
Elohims
Virtues
Altars
Geometric path through life forming the septenary creature model
A heptad of colors singing the harmony that spreads into planetary
Vibrations as the solar musical dimensions with the keys across our
Consciousness of kingdoms and intuitions into the 7th Sabbath day
7th year a Sabbatic year, 7th Sabbatic year followed by a Jubilee year
7 weeks between Passover and Pentecost
7 days for the temple feast
7 times for our souls to meet
-conjunction fermentation distillation coagulation
Plexus- pharyngeal laryngeal cavernous
-cardiac epi-gastric pro-static sacral
Senses- five awakened two latent
Periods into which life is divided
Notes across the diatonic scale
Major divisions of the embryo
'Organs' at the base of brain
'Organs' around the heart
Layers of the auric egg
Sides to the heptagon
Seals of revelation
Classical planets
Levels of heaven
Levels of hell
Primary colors
Ductless glands
Sacred breaths
Body systems
Deadly sins
Brain disks
Orifices
Elohims
Virtues
Altars
Geometric path through life forming the septenary creature model
A heptad of colors singing the harmony that spreads into planetary
Vibrations as the solar musical dimensions with the keys across our
Consciousness of kingdoms and intuitions into the 7th Sabbath day
7th year a Sabbatic year, 7th Sabbatic year followed by a Jubilee year
7 weeks between Passover and Pentecost
7 days for the temple feast
7 times for our souls to meet
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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summultima
uma
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uma
Dangerous Mind
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1303
misc. catalog of death and dreams
1.
offbeat rhapsodies in shades of b&w
her tears roll down my back
in archways of nonchalance
that’s holding her, she
wriggles directionless- a mess
over a massive mess beneath
in sobbed mumblings, hopes
to be heard this time
but
the fuming summer at 40
in a lethal cocktail
with my
hung over sleeplessness of ages
deprives her of any chances
kindles
her little heart’s fury
over the bed-side heated-up
window sills- stammering
in a butcher’s metallic bass
mixed up in shrill glass strings, tossing
my deafening fallenness
into altitudes
of nowhere… oh baby
not again..had been lost
time and again, not
this time
still knows the blank new pages
that which is inserted by her
disruptive notes
had (en)lightened me beyond anything
in flights of an unhidden glee
but
the glassine splinters of heart
hooked in depths of a bled out
mangled frame, crashes down
this bruised bird in each rise
2.
amphibious existential crisis
tormenting pyres, the pull
and the push podium you
have me in, silently wrestling
your cyanic midnight holds
it’s a mysterious alchemy
of how you unfuckingly fuck me
in the shredding in~out
distant abrasiveness
you maintain so nuanced, staring
onto my daring depths
in your invincible ways…I
couldn’t help
but
remain in your engulfing radii
in a still standstill
this rigorous ritual you spell
metamorphosing me...
could hardly breathe in the freezing cramps
and the sweeping in painbitten ascendance of your touch
towards a drained off cranial flight
eyes of widening fixations are paling blank screens
pulled up hair strands syringe skins in goosebumps
and that, your solidifying sun in the rise
trying to fit in my sudden budding abstractions
of a sunken vacuuming enormity
enough is enough is enough, magic man
frog-leapt yogic dimensions in deep dive
transcends unto our collision
hit-blooms in dews and fragrance
of your eternal presence
far yet so near
the concept of ‘us’
just the scent of your thought pollens
swells an exuding crisis out of logjams
Written by summultima
(uma)
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_Me_
Joined 4th Apr 2018
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Twisted Dreamer
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"Afraid You Are"
Afraid you are not to say
A thing at all, just shy away.
Why so timid, mild and obedient,
I’m telling you not to be lenient.
Is our voice long lost, and taken,
something gone and now forsaken?
Rise up, say something, subjectively
at least to me, speak out objectively.
Rated R, or more as I fall, and reel;
I can’t believe all the people that don’t feel.
What is it that tells you to look away?
I only wish I could fix it here today.
This is why we all are dying;
you turn your back to leave me crying
in these exhausting and murderous days;
please, just stand up only to say:
A meek and lonely phrase,
is powerful enough to praise.
Others likely feel the same;
to say nothing is just a shame.
Written by _Me_
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Anonymous
case28
Alexander Case
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Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2084
The beating of two hearts in an elevator [on the axis of heaven and hell]
case28
(Alexander Case)
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wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1853
Masochist
You’re a masochist,
For going back for more,
I guess you didn’t learn your lesson,
You’ve confused lust for love.
I’m not sure if that’s the way you want to be treated,
When in the long run everything will take a toll,
But I’m sure you already know that,
You just don’t want to be told.
You’re a glutton for punishment,
If you want your heart to be broken
Over and over again,
But then…
You might see something else everyone doesn’t,
Maybe you’re blind,
Maybe you’re just innocent.
You’ve confused lust for love,
Passion for obsession
Or whatever your definition of it is,
Somewhere in there
You don’t consider the value of your worth,
But when you go back for more,
It seems to me you’re a masochist.
You’re a masochist,
For going back for more,
I guess you didn’t learn your lesson,
You’ve confused lust for love.
I’m not sure if that’s the way you want to be treated,
When in the long run everything will take a toll,
But I’m sure you already know that,
You just don’t want to be told.
You’re a glutton for punishment,
If you want your heart to be broken
Over and over again,
But then…
You might see something else everyone doesn’t,
Maybe you’re blind,
Maybe you’re just innocent.
You’ve confused lust for love,
Passion for obsession
Or whatever your definition of it is,
Somewhere in there
You don’t consider the value of your worth,
But when you go back for more,
It seems to me you’re a masochist.
anna_grin
ANNAN
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ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th Mar 2013Forum Posts: 3367
well... sorry for slacking on the updates ive been busy . the best poem won, imo. although had it been up against case's first entry i do not know
Anonymous
As if I came runner up... !!
Case, I almost feel bad.
...Almost.
Congrats to the Brady guy. That was quite the poem. And to all the entrants. I mean, what a comp. Oof.
Case, I almost feel bad.
...Almost.
Congrats to the Brady guy. That was quite the poem. And to all the entrants. I mean, what a comp. Oof.
anna_grin
ANNAN
Forum Posts: 3367
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th Mar 2013Forum Posts: 3367
Miss_Sub said:As if I came runner up... !!
Case, I almost feel bad.
...Almost.
Congrats to the Brady guy. That was quite the poem. And to all the entrants. I mean, what a comp. Oof.
it's not fair to me as a judge to keep coming at me with such class and style . next competition will be more specific cos you're all winners here
Case, I almost feel bad.
...Almost.
Congrats to the Brady guy. That was quite the poem. And to all the entrants. I mean, what a comp. Oof.
it's not fair to me as a judge to keep coming at me with such class and style . next competition will be more specific cos you're all winners here
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