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king of the hill

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anna_grin
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Poetry Contest

i got this idea from hells kitchen with gordon ramsey

for the love of god, at least try to read the fucking rules
1) post a poem. well done ur the king of the hill
2) if the next person's poem is better than yours, they become king
3) i am the judge, so u can disagree with me, and i respect your opinion, but also suck it

if this goes well I might do it again

4) oh 1 more thing. you have 3 goes @ this, no more. further entries will be sent to gulag

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NightReverie
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Behold



ALL you FEEBLE MORTALS!
Here I write your awe-to-death!
Inky crown upon this screen
YOUR CRIES IN VAIN
Yes, I rule
Monarchy, at their most
CORRUPT IN POETIC-NESS
Mess minded
You follow these
& CANNOT create own
Self-destructed
By this insane business
Queendom I shall call
RULER OF ALLL

Now bow to your king!


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case28
Alexander Case
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fear of suicide

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anna_grin
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This just in: congratulations aleaxander case. enjoy your crown

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Blackwolf
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Aes Sidhe's Mound

Ancient Spiral Mound Fort

What Is Dun , Is Done

Written In Stone

Craggy Defenders

Line It's Walls

For Their

King
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case28
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[88]

 
there's something about petite masculinity

the pure malice when it strikes
chokes out her mate
when she fucks
viscous until the fightback cracks
and spilt blood spells the end

my little fighter

when death metal dies
and everything bad comes to a screaming halt
the question beckons in unspoken meditations
watching the micro-motion of her lips and tongue

when nothing remains in this world of hate
her little skinhead abloom with femininity
and scar tissue blurs the birthmark of the führer

is there nothing good left in her to love


Written by case28 (Alexander Case)
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anna_grin
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case: you still have the crown. you didn't need to enter again.

one entry left for you

yes I added a new rule
no u can not appeal

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Juvenalis66
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Italy
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Will you be there?

Will you be there
when I fall?
When I break down?
when I crawl?
Will you truly
look beyond
and see the man,
the broken lad,
the unadorned,
the once fresh flesh
that has long gone?
When I'll drool
and can't contain
the drink I'll desire,
the tasteless food
no longer there to
please my tongue,
as luscious lust,
a man's eternal stand,
where will you be
and will you be strong?
Strong for the weak
who can't go on,
dreaming tomorrow,
as the clock hits dawn.
I'll waver my commitment,
as I have always,
but will you be there
when everyone else is gone?
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rabbitquest
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bush

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anna_grin
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some admirable entries, nevertheless i do not hesitate to say the crown still belongs to case. I can't force yous to participate, but come on. his head has got to be about the size of a blimp right now.

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IcarusVStheSun
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ANTI-SØCIAL PRISØNER

I think I spend a little bit too much time in my room;  
I keep the blinds shut and the door locked;  
I rarely let the sunlight or moonlight in.  

I talk to these four walls as if they are my only friends;  
I know they hold more secrets than I have ever told;  
Maybe that's just me spending too much time in my mind.  
 
Every now and then, I lay in bed and wonder;  
Am I ever going insane from all these small talks to my little monsters?  
Am I just another fragment of what I use to be when I was younger?  
 
It's two a.m. and the music is playing in the background;  
I have too many notifications blinking on my phone all at once.  
I should just turn it off but then it would only just leave me in complete darkness.  
 
I will never admit this to anyone - not even to myself -  
But I feel like a prisoner in a room that gives me comfort;  
It's not that I am anti-social; I just don't know how to talk to people.
 
COPYRIGHT © 2017 ICARUSVSTHESUN
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anna_grin said:some admirable entries, nevertheless i do not hesitate to say the crown still belongs to case. I can't force yous to participate, but come on. his head has got to be about the size of a blimp right now.

Yeah... come on! Off with his head!

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Miss_Sub
- Missy -
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objets de curiosité

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@Icarus- I feel those feelins friend, but it's not fleshy enough for me. feel free to have another 2 attempts.

this is turning out no type of competition.
please, do not be shy, lay out your words on the table for my tastebuds

@missy - tastebuds pending
@missy - it takes a while for the flavour to come through but it is a strong contender. mature, considered, doesn't really seek audience. a poem that is strong and humble.

case28 with [88] please relenquish your title


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I’ll enter another if required. I’m lost right now as to what the actual fuck is going on...

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