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First Date
gardenlover
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Poetry Contest Description
Write a short erotic poem describing a first date.
Maximum 100 words
New or old
Up to 3 entries per poet
New or old
Up to 3 entries per poet
J_J_Jay_Jr
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 20th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 218
First kiss
At your door,
When it is time for that first kiss,
I will make it,
Sweet,
Tender,
Touching.
Something you,
And I,
Will always,
Have as a,
Special memory.
I’ll hint that it is coming,
One hand will tilt your face up,
The other will brush your hair back from your cheek.
I will look delicately into your eyes,
While my hands caress from your chin and cheek,
Around your shoulders,
To enfold you in my arms.
I won’t say a word,
Talking about it,
Ruins the mood.
Rather,
I will ask you,
For your permission,
With my actions.
I will hug you close to me,
So that your chest is against mine,
Your hips touching mine.
At that moment you will answer my request for permission,
By stretching up on your toes,
Like the ballet dancer you are,
So that with a slight tip of my face towards yours,
Our lips will met.
No tongue,
No nibbling,
No bruised lips,
Not this first time.
Just our lips,
Sharing a tasting of each other,
For the first time.
When breathlessly our lips part,
While still holding you against me,
I will smile and that smile,
Will ask,
If you would like another.
It will be your hands,
One on the back of my head,
The other around my neck,
That will answer,
By pulling us together a second time.
This time there will be,
A touching of tongues,
A more intimate sharing,
With and of each other.
It will be my body,
With one of my hands on your back,
And the other just above your waist,
Holding you tightly against me,
That will ask you for a third kiss.
It will be your body,
With your leg sliding up the outside of my leg,
Wrapping around my hips,
That will answer back to me.
This much longer kiss,
Will,
With open mouths,
And tasting tongues,
Both ask and answer,
Much,
About what we feel,
What we mean,
To each other.
As that third kiss ends,
Without a word,
Your hand will take mine,
And pull me in your door.
When it is time for that first kiss,
I will make it,
Sweet,
Tender,
Touching.
Something you,
And I,
Will always,
Have as a,
Special memory.
I’ll hint that it is coming,
One hand will tilt your face up,
The other will brush your hair back from your cheek.
I will look delicately into your eyes,
While my hands caress from your chin and cheek,
Around your shoulders,
To enfold you in my arms.
I won’t say a word,
Talking about it,
Ruins the mood.
Rather,
I will ask you,
For your permission,
With my actions.
I will hug you close to me,
So that your chest is against mine,
Your hips touching mine.
At that moment you will answer my request for permission,
By stretching up on your toes,
Like the ballet dancer you are,
So that with a slight tip of my face towards yours,
Our lips will met.
No tongue,
No nibbling,
No bruised lips,
Not this first time.
Just our lips,
Sharing a tasting of each other,
For the first time.
When breathlessly our lips part,
While still holding you against me,
I will smile and that smile,
Will ask,
If you would like another.
It will be your hands,
One on the back of my head,
The other around my neck,
That will answer,
By pulling us together a second time.
This time there will be,
A touching of tongues,
A more intimate sharing,
With and of each other.
It will be my body,
With one of my hands on your back,
And the other just above your waist,
Holding you tightly against me,
That will ask you for a third kiss.
It will be your body,
With your leg sliding up the outside of my leg,
Wrapping around my hips,
That will answer back to me.
This much longer kiss,
Will,
With open mouths,
And tasting tongues,
Both ask and answer,
Much,
About what we feel,
What we mean,
To each other.
As that third kiss ends,
Without a word,
Your hand will take mine,
And pull me in your door.
Written by J_J_Jay_Jr
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J_J_Jay_Jr
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Coffee Date
I ask you to
Have coffee with me.
But what I really want - - -
I want my hands,
One on each side of your face,
Pulling your face to mine.
I want to,
Press my lips against your lips,
My tongue to touch yours.
I want my hands to,
Slide down your neck,
Your shoulders,
Your arms,
To wrap them around,
Your body.
I want to pull,
Your breast against my chest,
Your nipples against mine,
So that I can feel them,
Aroused against me,
As I hold you in my arms.
I want,
Your thighs,
Tight against mine;
My pelvis,
Pressing against yours.
I want you to rise,
On your toes,
Straining against me,
Holding your lips,
Against mine.
I want to hear your breathing,
Quicken,
Your breathe soft against my cheek,
As my lips kiss your ear.
I want the taste of your scent,
In my nose,
Touching my tongue,
As I kiss your neck.
I want the whisper of your voice,
Asking me,
For more,
Promising me more.
I want all of you.
But,
Instead,
I ask you to coffee.
Have coffee with me.
But what I really want - - -
I want my hands,
One on each side of your face,
Pulling your face to mine.
I want to,
Press my lips against your lips,
My tongue to touch yours.
I want my hands to,
Slide down your neck,
Your shoulders,
Your arms,
To wrap them around,
Your body.
I want to pull,
Your breast against my chest,
Your nipples against mine,
So that I can feel them,
Aroused against me,
As I hold you in my arms.
I want,
Your thighs,
Tight against mine;
My pelvis,
Pressing against yours.
I want you to rise,
On your toes,
Straining against me,
Holding your lips,
Against mine.
I want to hear your breathing,
Quicken,
Your breathe soft against my cheek,
As my lips kiss your ear.
I want the taste of your scent,
In my nose,
Touching my tongue,
As I kiss your neck.
I want the whisper of your voice,
Asking me,
For more,
Promising me more.
I want all of you.
But,
Instead,
I ask you to coffee.
Written by J_J_Jay_Jr
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J_J_Jay_Jr
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Joined 20th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 218
Dinner
Over salad,
She smiled,
And,
Said,
"I plan to tease".
With soup,
She smiled,
And,
Squeezed,
Her breasts,
Together,
Emphasizing,
Her cleavage.
As the main course arrived,
Her cleavage,
Expanded,
Showing,
The edge of one nipple,
And the whole of the other.
With the last bite of steak,
She left to powder her nose,
Returning to bend,
Over my shoulder,
Push her hand into my lap,
Whisper in my ear,
"Here are my panties".
While eating desert,
She played,
With her fork,
In and out,
Of her mouth,
Sucking it,
Licking it clean.
Sipping her coffee,
She blew across her cup,
Tasted it,
On her tongue,
Swirled it,
In her mouth,
And,
Said,
"I like it,
Hot".
I called,
The waiter,
And,
Ask,
For the check.
She smiled,
And,
Said,
"I plan to tease".
With soup,
She smiled,
And,
Squeezed,
Her breasts,
Together,
Emphasizing,
Her cleavage.
As the main course arrived,
Her cleavage,
Expanded,
Showing,
The edge of one nipple,
And the whole of the other.
With the last bite of steak,
She left to powder her nose,
Returning to bend,
Over my shoulder,
Push her hand into my lap,
Whisper in my ear,
"Here are my panties".
While eating desert,
She played,
With her fork,
In and out,
Of her mouth,
Sucking it,
Licking it clean.
Sipping her coffee,
She blew across her cup,
Tasted it,
On her tongue,
Swirled it,
In her mouth,
And,
Said,
"I like it,
Hot".
I called,
The waiter,
And,
Ask,
For the check.
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gardenlover
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Sorry JJJayJr but the first 2 are way over the 100 word limit. I am looking for short poems.
MsRockyJackson
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 1st July 2014Forum Posts: 318
The Movie Can Wait
Dressed up in a black low cut top and black jeans,
I was ready for our movie date tonight.
You come to the door and smiled at me with both anxiousness and happiness as you looked me up down
to see what I had on then asked me " are you ready?"
I nodded and you took me to your place.
As we went into your bedroom to sit on the bed to wait for the next showing we ended up locked in a kiss as I was getting on top of you, your fingers were running through my hair while your other was reaching for my full derrière as you gripped it and spanked it.
It made me moan so loudly I couldn't help but start to grind.
I sat up while looking down at you I twirled my hips feeling your hardness pressing against me making me feel so excited, I just wanted you so bad.
Then you pushed me on my back and pulled my top up and kissed and licked all over my chest while biting and sucking on my neck like a vampire.
I cried in such ecstasy as you were also slipping your finger deep in my entrance, you felt so good inside me.
Then you unzipped and pulled my pants down and spread my legs apart and took a lick of my wetness as you kissed it and sucked it.
While clutching onto the sheets in the back of my mind I started to think " well I guess we won't make the movie".
Dressed up in a black low cut top and black jeans,
I was ready for our movie date tonight.
You come to the door and smiled at me with both anxiousness and happiness as you looked me up down
to see what I had on then asked me " are you ready?"
I nodded and you took me to your place.
As we went into your bedroom to sit on the bed to wait for the next showing we ended up locked in a kiss as I was getting on top of you, your fingers were running through my hair while your other was reaching for my full derrière as you gripped it and spanked it.
It made me moan so loudly I couldn't help but start to grind.
I sat up while looking down at you I twirled my hips feeling your hardness pressing against me making me feel so excited, I just wanted you so bad.
Then you pushed me on my back and pulled my top up and kissed and licked all over my chest while biting and sucking on my neck like a vampire.
I cried in such ecstasy as you were also slipping your finger deep in my entrance, you felt so good inside me.
Then you unzipped and pulled my pants down and spread my legs apart and took a lick of my wetness as you kissed it and sucked it.
While clutching onto the sheets in the back of my mind I started to think " well I guess we won't make the movie".
dustyjjewels
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Joined 24th Nov 2011Forum Posts: 241
The Magic Day
We've known each other for quite sometime
It's only been quick glances and nothing more
But then came the magic day
It was like nothing I ever saw
She was so friendly and chatty
So lonely and so bored
So in need of one to be with
But not necessarily outdoor
So in me she found the company
She had needed so bad
It's a chance I've always wanted
So there was no need to play it hard
The night was all ours to spend
One topic led to another
Instantly the metamorphosis began
From neighbours to heated lovers
Soon our hands began the talking
Lips locked in passionate kisses
You can call it a strange attachment
But it was void of skirmishes
So we passed out completely exhausted
Only to awake to the rising sun
With a funny look on our faces like
"What the fuck have we just done?"
We've known each other for quite sometime
It's only been quick glances and nothing more
But then came the magic day
It was like nothing I ever saw
She was so friendly and chatty
So lonely and so bored
So in need of one to be with
But not necessarily outdoor
So in me she found the company
She had needed so bad
It's a chance I've always wanted
So there was no need to play it hard
The night was all ours to spend
One topic led to another
Instantly the metamorphosis began
From neighbours to heated lovers
Soon our hands began the talking
Lips locked in passionate kisses
You can call it a strange attachment
But it was void of skirmishes
So we passed out completely exhausted
Only to awake to the rising sun
With a funny look on our faces like
"What the fuck have we just done?"
eswaller
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 765
1st Date
The knots will not go away.
Darling, I cannot continue to stay
From you this any longer than I
Already have. I take a look into each eye
Of yours and the nerves float away. I can
See that you just as nervous about this plan
To finally meet up face to face.
I have to stop myself from trying to trace
Your face and to hold your
Hand. Instead you held the door
Wide open as I walked through.
Darling, I have to wonder if you
Are secretly staring at me.
With us, I really want to see
Where this goes because for once
I feel happy as I look. You are no dunce
With your words and actions.
I cannot escape these attractions.
The knots will not go away.
Darling, I cannot continue to stay
From you this any longer than I
Already have. I take a look into each eye
Of yours and the nerves float away. I can
See that you just as nervous about this plan
To finally meet up face to face.
I have to stop myself from trying to trace
Your face and to hold your
Hand. Instead you held the door
Wide open as I walked through.
Darling, I have to wonder if you
Are secretly staring at me.
With us, I really want to see
Where this goes because for once
I feel happy as I look. You are no dunce
With your words and actions.
I cannot escape these attractions.
wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1875
First Date Cliffhanger
We sat there in the restaurant,
Throwing innuendos at each other
Like fire and water, it consumed us both,
Burning and drowning in want for one another.
But that’s what happens when you’ve been friends,
The long wait over the years built up the anticipation,
And before we knew it we were already there, like dares,
First dates between old friends only heightens the sensation.
And those stares threw hot fire and desire with so much lust,
It was obvious where all this was leading to and yet we wondered,
How our bodies would…
Oops! I’ve already reached one hundred.
We sat there in the restaurant,
Throwing innuendos at each other
Like fire and water, it consumed us both,
Burning and drowning in want for one another.
But that’s what happens when you’ve been friends,
The long wait over the years built up the anticipation,
And before we knew it we were already there, like dares,
First dates between old friends only heightens the sensation.
And those stares threw hot fire and desire with so much lust,
It was obvious where all this was leading to and yet we wondered,
How our bodies would…
Oops! I’ve already reached one hundred.
Anonymous
First Date's Are Expensive, Second Dates' Are Cheaper, It's The Way It's Going To Be
There she was. It was our first date. I stood there breathless with hardwood in my trousers.
Emerald beads & the biggest mop of fire you ever saw. I mean she could stop a whole regiment of blokes.
All I could think about was what was between her beautiful shapely slender legs.
I mean did she shave or did she have a small jungle down there?
Either way she wore it, it didn't matter to me, she turned me on immensely.
But, I knew by the way she carried herself this was going to be a hard nut to crack.
It wasn't going to be just fish & chips a couple of ales and me bedding her on that first night.
I thought long and hard about it.
I knew this journey was going to take champagne, filet mignon, cavier & creme brulee. Maybe, a shot or two of Hennessey.
And it worked, I bought her all that stuff & she was so happy she passed out overdosed on carbohydrates & protein & sweets.
Too bad I wasn't a date rape kind of guy, I could have had her anyway I wanted her.
I mean I could have gone to town on that pretty thing.
I could have taken pictures of my naked body all over her & put them all over Instagram & sent them to all my mates deployed.
They would have enjoyed the hell out of it out there in the desert nether regions.
But, I figured, you can't rape a chick on the first date.
In fact, you can't rape a chick at all no matter what date number you're on.
But especially, on the first date.
Unless, you're a rapist.
I'm not.
But I'm telling you, she sure looked all sexy laying there.
I can never get her, that image out of my mind.
Oh yeah baby, next time, it's fish & chips & a few ales, maybe a porter or two.
If she's going to pass out & I'm not going to get laid,
I'm going to go the cheap route.
That's my motto now.
There she was. It was our first date. I stood there breathless with hardwood in my trousers.
Emerald beads & the biggest mop of fire you ever saw. I mean she could stop a whole regiment of blokes.
All I could think about was what was between her beautiful shapely slender legs.
I mean did she shave or did she have a small jungle down there?
Either way she wore it, it didn't matter to me, she turned me on immensely.
But, I knew by the way she carried herself this was going to be a hard nut to crack.
It wasn't going to be just fish & chips a couple of ales and me bedding her on that first night.
I thought long and hard about it.
I knew this journey was going to take champagne, filet mignon, cavier & creme brulee. Maybe, a shot or two of Hennessey.
And it worked, I bought her all that stuff & she was so happy she passed out overdosed on carbohydrates & protein & sweets.
Too bad I wasn't a date rape kind of guy, I could have had her anyway I wanted her.
I mean I could have gone to town on that pretty thing.
I could have taken pictures of my naked body all over her & put them all over Instagram & sent them to all my mates deployed.
They would have enjoyed the hell out of it out there in the desert nether regions.
But, I figured, you can't rape a chick on the first date.
In fact, you can't rape a chick at all no matter what date number you're on.
But especially, on the first date.
Unless, you're a rapist.
I'm not.
But I'm telling you, she sure looked all sexy laying there.
I can never get her, that image out of my mind.
Oh yeah baby, next time, it's fish & chips & a few ales, maybe a porter or two.
If she's going to pass out & I'm not going to get laid,
I'm going to go the cheap route.
That's my motto now.
J_J_Jay_Jr
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 20th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 218
Opps. Sorry. Should I delete them?
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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First Date All Over Again
(Limericks)
One day Joe was eating some fries
When who should he happen to spy,
An ex he once knew
Now mother of two,
And undressed the girl with his eyes.
She noticed and made eye contact
And smiled at him to interact.
Joe started to squirm,
His package was firm,
Felt lucky that he could attract.
But suddenly he felt so gay,
Like it was date one of first day.
He smiled at the miss,
Who yearned for a kiss,
And later perhaps a hot lay.
The rest of the meal they would talk,
Forgetting to eat what they'd bought.
They acted like teens,
Their jokes full o' beans,
Then put up a sign "Do Not Knock".
gardenlover
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 19th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 625
Congratulations to the winners. Some of you failed to heed the maximum length specified . I decided that it was only fair to those who had managed to curb their verbosity that I eliminated all those with over 130 words.
I then decided to take up the challenge myself and the poem below is 90 words to show it can be done
She was waiting at the door
I had not been there before
The theatre outing was a success
Then dinner out ,nothing less
So back to her abode
Was she in seductive mode?
'Please come in for a drink
I don't mind what the neighbours think'.
The drink dispensed on the sofa
She could not have snuggled closer
Soon our clothes were discarded
Beautiful anatomy regarded.
Consummation of our desires
Nothing could put out our fires
A good start for our love life
Will she become my wife?
I then decided to take up the challenge myself and the poem below is 90 words to show it can be done
She was waiting at the door
I had not been there before
The theatre outing was a success
Then dinner out ,nothing less
So back to her abode
Was she in seductive mode?
'Please come in for a drink
I don't mind what the neighbours think'.
The drink dispensed on the sofa
She could not have snuggled closer
Soon our clothes were discarded
Beautiful anatomy regarded.
Consummation of our desires
Nothing could put out our fires
A good start for our love life
Will she become my wife?
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
My thanks to our host gardenlover for this opportunity, and selecting my endeavor for the cup. I also extend my congratulations to fellow placers with their talents, wallyroo92 & TimEros! See everyone again soon!