Poetry competition CLOSED 21st January 2015 7:40am
WINNER
db1
db1
RUNNERS-UP:
lepperochan
and Ealantair
Sweat n Smoke
I had a little bunny - and honey was her name
She was so cute and funny - till I clubbed her in the brain
So sad I had to eat her - but I'm really not to blame
Was the doings of my daddy - and his sickly little games
I cut her throat and peeled her - but I wasn't really there
That's the story of my bunny - my lifeless, skinless little hare
Have you ever heard a rabbit scream? It sounds just like me
She was so cute and funny - till I clubbed her in the brain
So sad I had to eat her - but I'm really not to blame
Was the doings of my daddy - and his sickly little games
I cut her throat and peeled her - but I wasn't really there
That's the story of my bunny - my lifeless, skinless little hare
Have you ever heard a rabbit scream? It sounds just like me
Tq n Kudos all those who entered!!
N reading them has been a learning experience for me in various poetic aspects...the more micropoetry read, the more intriguing are its mutlifold dimensions they subtly reveal..
each scribe a winner to me as i say ever! true that very much.. so keep writing ur amazing words
it was a very close race indeed..hard decisions need to be made with fine differences in score based on constraints- intensity of content, overall poetic feel n word limits.
[N only sad part would be disqualifying two entries for exceeding word limits cos thats wat the microcomp is all about mostly (that of Carpe Noctem n Shaunda's first entry)]
Scores for each entry :(in the order of posting)
Craic (19), Hollydove (first post,15), mikimoondancer (first post,17), LobodeSanPedro (18), Ealantair (19), David Macleod (first post,16), David Macleod (second post,14), mikimoondancer (second post,16), Hollydove (second post,18), Ghoulie (19), toniscales (first post, 18.5), toniscales (second post,18), toniscales (third post,18.5), db1 (19), shaunda (second post,17)
Andddd, a tie between four 19's at top spots!
Well done all you four- Ghoulie, Ealantair, Craic n db 1
kindly bear my ranking for trophy:)
Ealantair -Second runner-up
Craicdealer- First runner-up
db 1 - Winner
Congratzz everyone n wud love to see you all sooner in another microcomp
N reading them has been a learning experience for me in various poetic aspects...the more micropoetry read, the more intriguing are its mutlifold dimensions they subtly reveal..
each scribe a winner to me as i say ever! true that very much.. so keep writing ur amazing words
it was a very close race indeed..hard decisions need to be made with fine differences in score based on constraints- intensity of content, overall poetic feel n word limits.
[N only sad part would be disqualifying two entries for exceeding word limits cos thats wat the microcomp is all about mostly (that of Carpe Noctem n Shaunda's first entry)]
Scores for each entry :(in the order of posting)
Craic (19), Hollydove (first post,15), mikimoondancer (first post,17), LobodeSanPedro (18), Ealantair (19), David Macleod (first post,16), David Macleod (second post,14), mikimoondancer (second post,16), Hollydove (second post,18), Ghoulie (19), toniscales (first post, 18.5), toniscales (second post,18), toniscales (third post,18.5), db1 (19), shaunda (second post,17)
Andddd, a tie between four 19's at top spots!
Well done all you four- Ghoulie, Ealantair, Craic n db 1
kindly bear my ranking for trophy:)
Ealantair -Second runner-up
Craicdealer- First runner-up
db 1 - Winner
Congratzz everyone n wud love to see you all sooner in another microcomp
db1 said:Holy crap!
This site has no notification type things? Sorry I'm just seeing this.. lol
Thank you for this! I'm truly flattered, and surprised... There are so many awesome writers here.
Thank you thank you.
-Dave
The notifications are v.much there, you need to check, "My Updates" part, n more obviously there wud be this medal on ur profile that leads back to this comp.
newayz, congratz agn fr ur well deserved win, db1
This site has no notification type things? Sorry I'm just seeing this.. lol
Thank you for this! I'm truly flattered, and surprised... There are so many awesome writers here.
Thank you thank you.
-Dave
The notifications are v.much there, you need to check, "My Updates" part, n more obviously there wud be this medal on ur profile that leads back to this comp.
newayz, congratz agn fr ur well deserved win, db1
Krosgood said:Razor/Pen
Ashes mixed with perspiration fall in open wounds
Blood soaked butt of a cigarette stains that which consumes
Razors glinting through old smoke
Cutting through veins and hope
Writing suicide notes
Aww..tq fr the post, but the comp. has ended. Maybe an endlez thread of same theme is a gud idea:)
Ashes mixed with perspiration fall in open wounds
Blood soaked butt of a cigarette stains that which consumes
Razors glinting through old smoke
Cutting through veins and hope
Writing suicide notes
Aww..tq fr the post, but the comp. has ended. Maybe an endlez thread of same theme is a gud idea:)
