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Playground Massacre

Tamaura_NightAngel
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the thing is there are two side to every story with colombine the  kids where bulled and people and teachers knew about it and did nothing so they took the matters into there own hands . i think its wrong to always sit there and think that the person who did the shooting is the one in the wrong and not the others who bully them and pushed them to that point and what about the staff they too knew what was happing and no one steped it and i feel that eveyone has a right to say or not say want they want and wright about anything they feel . just becuse it happends on the news does not mean you can not right about it . look at the wars over religan what thats happing on the news too so omg everyone lets stop talking about that or wirghting about it becuse its so horrible .  I am sorry i am just annoyed that one thing is ok and not the other so its bad to wright about shooting up a school but its ok to wright about killing people in the name of god ?

poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous

Nobody Wins in Massacre

I loaded up and let loose. I’m the bloody face on the news, the only one alive to tell the story of what torture I suffered in the playground. Mama never questioned my bruises nor asked why I painted the windows black and played so many war games on my computer.   PTA meetings were never in her schedule, because she didn’t want to give up her dates with her boyfriend.  No teacher who saw what happened will have a chance any more to speak on what abuse I suffered; they are dead.

Well, who knows my fate now?  I may have a cell where I’m kept sedated for the next decade, but I could also get out on good conduct. I have read stories of such cases on the news. I really don’t care either way, since I have no one and nothing to live for.

I did read too that there are men in prisons who will gang up on  kids new to the block and some end up raped or dead too. Bullies everywhere I suppose. I’m too tired to think about this now, much less cram some last minute info by researching documentaries on life after death.  What if the spirits of the bullies are waiting for me?  War goes on...or is there really any forgiveness and peace?  Wish I’d never read  stuff on the damned poetry site where the gory stories of massacre fantasies are, because it only fueled my anger and death wishes.


johnrot
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187
               
               
stupid gato                  
stupid indians                  
i thought you knew                  
us poor mexicans don't have phones                  
               
dude had them ol 11th edition jordans                  
with the 23's on em                  
spike lee's with the ak 47's too                  
but his ol man was an angry martyr                  
plumber                  
weather proofing his own cross                  
jus came home                  
still on paper                
brand new again in that world                  
post jolst gargle                  
with hairy prison poison jesus                  
fakin that AA sheet signature                
pocket got a short draw of bottom shelf                
we all were cutting up and gassing                
when his kid said he quit drinking                  
the boy was real sorry for messin with my momma                
when she disappeared                  
and than so did his                  
               
i remember everything                  
being crystaline                  
autumn in A minor                  
but so not in a hot glass of apple cider                  
with a cinnamon stick                  
shit it feels good to be                  
rocking some dirty jeans,                  
a hoodie and some timbos                  
nobody knows me at this campfire                  
type of way                  
               
too many totems                  
winking                  
with missing teeth                  
swearing bout all the hollows        
with room for glow                  
               
it was 2 days before tuesday                  
i knew no one was home                  
the alarm code was her dad's license plate                  
the square root of both his kid's birthdays                  
used to sneak into the movies a lot                
               
but still                  
being                  
a b side bad track ninja                  
told her i loved her                  
with a backwards hyroglyph
stick fig pic
of a boy bein pushed off the swing                  
on the mirror                  
in her own lipstick                  
and moved away                  
               
you never answer the phone when                  
girl from the third grade who used to bully you calls              
 
she knows you know    
she knows                        
while she been slumming it
her dawg done leveled up                
singin who abandoned who?


Tamaura_NightAngel
Thought Provoker
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even if parents stoped parying and stoped there power jobs . think about it kids learn by watching there parents . if there parents are assholes the kids will grow up to be one too . and the ones who bully other kids are usely the ones who have daddys and mommys with the big fancy jobs and big house and they too are assholes . or the parents who are on the peta and are allways involed in there childs life there kids could be the ones shooting for no reason .  thats the thing you cant always think gee  i am involved in my kids life so that means they wount ever bully or shoot up a school . but school shootings are on the rize becuse of bulling in school no where elece . teachers are not nannies or anything like that but if a child comes to him hurt and brused saying this kid is bulling me they have to do something about it . and since now days in schools no one gives a shit so ya there will be pleanty more deaths. people kill people and teens kill teens  there is nothing you can do about it . and if parents worrie so much about there kids in school then do home schooling that way they will never be hurt or becomeing the one who does the hurting .

poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous

Tamaura_NightAngel said:even if parents stoped parying and stoped there power jobs . think about it kids learn by watching there parents . if there parents are assholes the kids will grow up to be one too . and the ones who bully other kids are usely the ones who have daddys and mommys with the big fancy jobs and big house and they too are assholes . or the parents who are on the peta and are allways involed in there childs life there kids could be the ones shooting for no reason .  thats the thing you cant always think gee  i am involved in my kids life so that means they wount ever bully or shoot up a school . but school shootings are on the rize becuse of bulling in school no where elece . teachers are not nannies or anything like that but if a child comes to him hurt and brused saying this kid is bulling me they have to do something about it . and since now days in schools no one gives a shit so ya there will be pleanty more deaths. people kill people and teens kill teens  there is nothing you can do about it . and if parents worrie so much about there kids in school then do home schooling that way they will never be hurt or becomeing the one who does the hurting .


You began:

"thats the thing you cant always think gee  i am involved in my kids life so that means they wount ever bully or shoot up a school".

So why contradict that truth with your last statement? :

"if parents worrie so much about there kids in school then do home schooling that way they will never be hurt or becomeing the one who does the hurting"

That word "never" really isn't fact. Isolating kids from public interaction isn't going to guarantee anyone's safety.

I'm done with discussion; the host of this thread wants entries for competition, not open debate.



lepperochan
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Take the fucking guns out of American culture and the whole world will be better for it



at three years old,
Jeb was dressed like Custer
and massacred all the little injuns
scattered around his play area

he’d used the Winchester that his father bought him
because it gave a loud bang
when he squeezed the little trigger
then he used his foot to sweep through the ranks

at five years
he’d dressed like a three star general
and went fighting the Germans
who’d set up camp beside his sandbox
he’d used the automatic that his father bought him
because it lit up and went clack-clack-clack
when he squeezed the little trigger

at ten, Jeb could hit Barbie
right between her eyes from five meters
with the air rifle that his father bought him
because he liked shooting the bitch

at twelve
Jeb shaved his head and laced his boots
then jumped into the back of his uncle’s pick up
with his brand new Smith and Wesson
and went on his first hunt

at fourteen
he’d finally shot him a coon

at sixteen,
Jeb had parked up beside the school
with the AR his father bought him
and the sounds of the children playing
sent him into a frenzy

poet Anonymous

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EngrVV
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Dangerous Mind
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lepperochan said:Take the fucking guns out of American culture and the whole world will be better for it



I totally agree with you on this one Eamon...gee, you don't even need a gun to hunt in the tri-state areas of DMV. Every week I see a deer on the road killed by a passing car! On the other hand, there could be an economic problem without guns and other weapons in the art of War - billions could be lost in revenues and millions could be jobless!

poet Anonymous

EngrVV said:[quote-274188-lepperochan]Take the fucking guns out of American culture and the whole world will be better for it



I totally agree with you on this one Eamon...gee, you don't even need a gun to hunt in the tri-state areas of DMV. Every week I see a deer on the road killed by a passing car! On the other hand, there could be an economic problem without guns and other weapons in the art of War - billions could be lost in revenues and millions could be jobless! [/quote]
// billions could be lost in revenues and millions could be jobless! //

Sorry EngrVV this caught my attention and i had to chime in, if not for funding overseas wars would be saving trillion $$ as well, let's face facts on what's going on under the table.

AscensionES
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That's just it, isn't it?

This isn't the 'harder side of poetry'

lepperochan
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Guardian of Shadows
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Vee said:[quote-274194-EngrVV][quote-274188-lepperochan]Take the fucking guns out of American culture and the whole world will be better for it



I totally agree with you on this one Eamon...gee, you don't even need a gun to hunt in the tri-state areas of DMV. Every week I see a deer on the road killed by a passing car! On the other hand, there could be an economic problem without guns and other weapons in the art of War - billions could be lost in revenues and millions could be jobless! [/quote]
// billions could be lost in revenues and millions could be jobless! //

Sorry EngrVV this caught my attention and i had to chime in, if not for funding overseas wars would be saving trillion $$ as well, let's face facts on what's going on under the table.[/quote]


yes, but how else are the kids gonna learn geography?

look, if the only way a country can survive is ensuring the death of other people then perhaps you're doing it wrong?

poet Anonymous

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caxton
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When it's late at night and the teens
Go down to the playground to make out
Sometimes things go a little to far
Like this one time they were getting
Hot and heavy next to the swings
Take off their pants and she gets on top
Riding for all she's got she's no innocent
And now neither is he. She let loose
He was surprised she was so wet
What a good time they had
But when they were over
It looked like a murder
He was covered in blood
What had happened
Surprise!
Bloody playground massacre
Innocence destroyed

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