Poetry competition CLOSED 10th August 2013 3:51am
WINNER
shaunda
shaunda
RUNNERS-UP:
Kou_Indigo
and LobodeSanPedro
Crush Your Enemies
Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem containing detailed ways in which you'd crush your enemies or enemy.
Whether it maybe killing, or torture or wateva...
Give me a reason why you hate him/her.
make it interesting,
Make me feel your hate.
Make me visualize your actions in my head
Rules.
Nothing too long. 200 words max. (give or take a few)
2 entries per poet.
Edited: I must apologize for not making it clear that you mustn't use the name from any other DU member.
(Once again, Sorry)
Other than those two rules, knock your selves out
2 weeks.
(^_^)
Give me a reason why you hate him/her.
make it interesting,
Make me feel your hate.
Make me visualize your actions in my head
Rules.
Nothing too long. 200 words max. (give or take a few)
2 entries per poet.
Edited: I must apologize for not making it clear that you mustn't use the name from any other DU member.
(Once again, Sorry)
Other than those two rules, knock your selves out
2 weeks.
(^_^)
Anonymous
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least he got my good side, and it would seem that he put them words together all by himself too .
sorry Missy, its getting old I know , can't be any fun logging in and finding this garbage every other day, can't say it bothers me anymore, not since we saw who
he really is, and why he has to use his brothers picture as an avatar .I feel pity for him
sorry Missy, its getting old I know , can't be any fun logging in and finding this garbage every other day, can't say it bothers me anymore, not since we saw who
he really is, and why he has to use his brothers picture as an avatar .I feel pity for him
RAGE!! On he 15th of october....
"FUCK!!!"
Is what I scream in my moments
Of fast thought and fury...
My moments of
BREAK YOUR FUCKING FACE!!!
With that curb.
The "rip the phone off the proverbial wall"
That is my patience...
And calm...
And sit back and relax
And take life at a glance.
"FUCK!!!"
Is what I scream
In my moments of temporary insanity
Boiled over onto the coals
That lit the fuse
To my "WHAT THE FUCK!!!!"
BULLSHIT!!
I want to reach out
And touch your lips
With my fist
To bloody the improvised pride on your mind.
But soft!!
The calming of the beast,
Inside the unwavering
Mixed up prideful mind,
Of the broken thoughts of mine.
Then calm...
The calamity of yesteryear ceases to be and...
Everything, cool...
Calm and collective. ..
Until the point.
Pride takes over and,
Again flows the glorious crimson
Of your once flawless,
Now flawed, scarred lip and nose.
Your endorphins released for my...
Calming, settle down?
Until next time....
Release?
Act upon one's impulse
And no more.
PRACTICE WHAT THE FUCK YOU PREACH!!!!
YOU BITCH MADE MOTHER FUCKER!!!!
Wait and see..
We'll see...
Then snap.
Miss_Sub said:Well, ladies and gentlemen. Our little friend Life here, AKA Vivid AKA Elyon has been hating me for two years now for absolutely no reason what so ever other than I once left him a comment on a poem he didn't like. If you look at his poems he writes about me every other god damn day and is what as known as 'a creepy motherfucker'. Martin Torres - I give you the king of the trolls.
So, you wanna get poetic? lets respond to this shit shall we.
The Truth
Most people can coincide,
Apart from the inconvienient few who
Read the words I have written and
Take one look and their
Impulses begin to crave. Their cocks twitch
Nervously, because this girl is a better grade
Than you.
Hiding behind abusive words with as much
Insightment as a
Soiled tissue.
Is that all you can manage? Your illiterate wank
Stains I am seen to be included in?
My spit, hot on your tongue because
You can't stop saying my name?
Truth. Now there's something you know
Relatively little about. Maybe I could make you
Understand this shit you do -
Truth doesn't come from rhyming 'you' with 'glue'
Here, it comes from the depths inside of you.
This i'm sure, is something you know nothing about.
Each day I
Live the words I say, and
Love this way, because I fucking choose to.
Missy logs on to here
Every day, and for the record is not afraid of you.
You will get your comeuppance I'm sure,
Our words are stronger than yours, and
Until you learn this, there
Really is no salvation for you, I'm
Sure.
Sounds like he's a creeper crush on you and Craic..
So, you wanna get poetic? lets respond to this shit shall we.
The Truth
Most people can coincide,
Apart from the inconvienient few who
Read the words I have written and
Take one look and their
Impulses begin to crave. Their cocks twitch
Nervously, because this girl is a better grade
Than you.
Hiding behind abusive words with as much
Insightment as a
Soiled tissue.
Is that all you can manage? Your illiterate wank
Stains I am seen to be included in?
My spit, hot on your tongue because
You can't stop saying my name?
Truth. Now there's something you know
Relatively little about. Maybe I could make you
Understand this shit you do -
Truth doesn't come from rhyming 'you' with 'glue'
Here, it comes from the depths inside of you.
This i'm sure, is something you know nothing about.
Each day I
Live the words I say, and
Love this way, because I fucking choose to.
Missy logs on to here
Every day, and for the record is not afraid of you.
You will get your comeuppance I'm sure,
Our words are stronger than yours, and
Until you learn this, there
Really is no salvation for you, I'm
Sure.
Sounds like he's a creeper crush on you and Craic..
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PsychicApocalypse said:[quote-216540-Intricate_B]
Damn. That's fucked up. I thought this was about crushing an enemy, not being flat out disrespectful towards certain individuals. This is kinda fucked up. Guess it should've been explained in the details
Oh my gorsh.... This is my fault... Let the blame fall on me... [/quote]
Don't let it fall on your shoulders Miss Lady fatal.. I honestly didn't mean for to think I was callling you out. I was simply saying that dude didn't have to be such an INCREDIBLE ASS HAT..
Damn. That's fucked up. I thought this was about crushing an enemy, not being flat out disrespectful towards certain individuals. This is kinda fucked up. Guess it should've been explained in the details
Oh my gorsh.... This is my fault... Let the blame fall on me... [/quote]
Don't let it fall on your shoulders Miss Lady fatal.. I honestly didn't mean for to think I was callling you out. I was simply saying that dude didn't have to be such an INCREDIBLE ASS HAT..
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