Poetry competition CLOSED 13th October 2012 11:15pm
WINNER
Haruhi888 (BarelyBreathing)
Haruhi888 (BarelyBreathing)
RUNNERS-UP:
Joker
and epicRawrz
Leave Behind-Suicide Note
Poetry Contest Description
if you were going to commit suicide what would your suicide note say?
this will be going for 2 weeks
i hope to see lots of entrys
try not to make it too long
something depressing please :')
make me feel your pain in your words
unlimited enteries
have a depressing time
good luck
i hope to see lots of entrys
try not to make it too long
something depressing please :')
make me feel your pain in your words
unlimited enteries
have a depressing time
good luck
I'd leave this:
< time to rest >
the twilight
is my song now
and slow
the night starts
like the day
slow
and it is time to rest
no need watching
anymore
the passing day
its fingers
pick my face away
and there
is no need to pretend
it's better to forget
as this night
covers the day
as the next
will cover it
and the rhythm
of the song
in the twilight
listening to the song
against the bank
and the river
silver
- - -
rayheinrich said:
I'd leave this:
< time to rest >
the twilight
is my song now
and slow
the night starts
like the day
slow
and it is time to rest
no need watching
anymore
the passing day
its fingers
pick my face away
and there
is no need to pretend
it's better to forget
as this night
covers the day
as the next
will cover it
and the rhythm
of the song
in the twilight
listening to the song
against the bank
and the river
silver
- - -
Thank you for posting, i like your poem
i feel like your saying you were already fading
its good :)
I'd leave this:
< time to rest >
the twilight
is my song now
and slow
the night starts
like the day
slow
and it is time to rest
no need watching
anymore
the passing day
its fingers
pick my face away
and there
is no need to pretend
it's better to forget
as this night
covers the day
as the next
will cover it
and the rhythm
of the song
in the twilight
listening to the song
against the bank
and the river
silver
- - -
Thank you for posting, i like your poem
i feel like your saying you were already fading
its good :)
What you wanted
Is this what you wanted?
To leave me behind?
To forget me?
For me to disappear?
Well here you go
I'm gone
Never to see me again
I know you're crying over my bloodstained bed sheets
Wishing you could do something better
Rather than abuse
But then again this is what you wanted right?
To forget what you did?
What about me?
What did I want?
I wanted to be set free
Free from you
I don't want to feel anymore pain
I hated this world
And everything in it
So please let me be released
So I can sprout wings and fly to a place where I belong
A place where they can forgive my mistakes
And forget my past
Please let me fly
Into a place where it never rains
Where everyone smiles
Where I can wait for all of those who were important
Thank you for letting me
...
Fly
Is this what you wanted?
To leave me behind?
To forget me?
For me to disappear?
Well here you go
I'm gone
Never to see me again
I know you're crying over my bloodstained bed sheets
Wishing you could do something better
Rather than abuse
But then again this is what you wanted right?
To forget what you did?
What about me?
What did I want?
I wanted to be set free
Free from you
I don't want to feel anymore pain
I hated this world
And everything in it
So please let me be released
So I can sprout wings and fly to a place where I belong
A place where they can forgive my mistakes
And forget my past
Please let me fly
Into a place where it never rains
Where everyone smiles
Where I can wait for all of those who were important
Thank you for letting me
...
Fly
I simply say
Mom my life is more than what you've seen
So much harder than an average teen
Don't you see
Who you've made me be?
Perfect little angel
I am not.
Straight A's
More like C's
I'm sorry I couldn't make you see
I was more than unhappy
I loved you so much
And you didn't care
About the girl with the large brown eyes
And curly blond hair
Beyond anything else said
I love you
The one with the curly red head
Don't blame yourself
Because what I said isn't true
You cared more than I believed you do
I really love you- me<3
Mom my life is more than what you've seen
So much harder than an average teen
Don't you see
Who you've made me be?
Perfect little angel
I am not.
Straight A's
More like C's
I'm sorry I couldn't make you see
I was more than unhappy
I loved you so much
And you didn't care
About the girl with the large brown eyes
And curly blond hair
Beyond anything else said
I love you
The one with the curly red head
Don't blame yourself
Because what I said isn't true
You cared more than I believed you do
I really love you- me<3
Juliet_Disguised said:I simply say
Mom my life is more than what you've seen
So much harder than an average teen
Don't you see
Who you've made me be?
Perfect little angel
I am not.
Straight A's
More like C's
I'm sorry I couldn't make you see
I was more than unhappy
I loved you so much
And you didn't care
About the girl with the large brown eyes
And curly blond hair
Beyond anything else said
I love you
The one with the curly red head
Don't blame yourself
Because what I said isn't true
You cared more than I believed you do
I really love you- me<3
your poem show love and a little regret, it is something i think we can all feel alittle of
Mom my life is more than what you've seen
So much harder than an average teen
Don't you see
Who you've made me be?
Perfect little angel
I am not.
Straight A's
More like C's
I'm sorry I couldn't make you see
I was more than unhappy
I loved you so much
And you didn't care
About the girl with the large brown eyes
And curly blond hair
Beyond anything else said
I love you
The one with the curly red head
Don't blame yourself
Because what I said isn't true
You cared more than I believed you do
I really love you- me<3
your poem show love and a little regret, it is something i think we can all feel alittle of
Haruhi888 said:What you wanted
Is this what you wanted?
To leave me behind?
To forget me?
For me to disappear?
Well here you go
I'm gone
Never to see me again
I know you're crying over my bloodstained bed sheets
Wishing you could do something better
Rather than abuse
But then again this is what you wanted right?
To forget what you did?
What about me?
What did I want?
I wanted to be set free
Free from you
I don't want to feel anymore pain
I hated this world
And everything in it
So please let me be released
So I can sprout wings and fly to a place where I belong
A place where they can forgive my mistakes
And forget my past
Please let me fly
Into a place where it never rains
Where everyone smiles
Where I can wait for all of those who were important
Thank you for letting me
...
Fly
haruhi thanks for posting i think in one way or another we all want to be set free from something
Is this what you wanted?
To leave me behind?
To forget me?
For me to disappear?
Well here you go
I'm gone
Never to see me again
I know you're crying over my bloodstained bed sheets
Wishing you could do something better
Rather than abuse
But then again this is what you wanted right?
To forget what you did?
What about me?
What did I want?
I wanted to be set free
Free from you
I don't want to feel anymore pain
I hated this world
And everything in it
So please let me be released
So I can sprout wings and fly to a place where I belong
A place where they can forgive my mistakes
And forget my past
Please let me fly
Into a place where it never rains
Where everyone smiles
Where I can wait for all of those who were important
Thank you for letting me
...
Fly
haruhi thanks for posting
i think in one way or another we all want to be set free from somethingJust cause I feel like it
_____________
"Sucide Note"
I want to love
I want to hold you
I truly do
You are my everything
It is that fact that your near
that keeps away this ugly tear
Its all you
Your, love me too
Your, I truly do
You said so many things
Like that all you said was true
But how can I believe those lies too?
When you speak
A little piece of me dies
With every twist of your lies
You are the cause
Of all these tears
And all of my fears
I continue to think
How can I trust
When my hearts going to bust
And every night
I wish I was never born
Then I'd never be so torn
Its all the fault of this fate
Thats full of awful twists
That cause the cuts on my wrists
This is surely hell already
Because every where i look i see your face
Hell is most definatly this place
I cant handle all of this
I have made so many spills
By the way the drain is clogged with pills
This is my life
A broken vase
Cant stand the chase
I am tired
Of the falling tears
The increasing fears
I know I'm almost gone
With every lie
I know I'm going to die
This is what it takes
To achieve my goal
To get rid of this soul
Maybe its all to late
The thing I was using to kill
Was that deadly pill
Why cant I be
One of the dead
Thats the path I have lead
If only I could
Just drop
And go plop
Maybe that would end
I'm tired of buffering
I need to end this suffering
The question keeps coming
Why was I born?
That is the thought like thorn
Why cant I escape
I want no delays
Destroy the rainbow of greys
Why god? Why?
I know Im not clever
So why wont you let me sleep forever?
It is I
That I want to use as the sacrafice
I know this is the price
This Life
Is like a spinning top
MAKE IT STOP!
I cant get what I want
This life I never bought
I will end it with a shot
To me
I wish nothing more
to be in the morge
Why?
Why cant I be dead
With the lies I have been feed
There is
Such a high sky
That after this I will fly
I try to ignore it
But I know what you think
But I dont care, I'm at my brink
Do you know what this is?
This is the world I hate
This is worst than hell's gate
This is the end
This is the final kill
Ended with a pill
This is the final
Its been such a long while
Since I had such a pure smile
One last word
I did try
I didnt just cry
But my efforts were futile
I never stood a chance
In this world's evil dance
This world is more than you think
It is far more cruel
It has you spun on a spool
Say good bye for me
Maybe someone will finaly see
Not just what I couldnt be
This is the thing
That when I sink this will float
This is my Sucide Note
_____________
"Sucide Note"
I want to love
I want to hold you
I truly do
You are my everything
It is that fact that your near
that keeps away this ugly tear
Its all you
Your, love me too
Your, I truly do
You said so many things
Like that all you said was true
But how can I believe those lies too?
When you speak
A little piece of me dies
With every twist of your lies
You are the cause
Of all these tears
And all of my fears
I continue to think
How can I trust
When my hearts going to bust
And every night
I wish I was never born
Then I'd never be so torn
Its all the fault of this fate
Thats full of awful twists
That cause the cuts on my wrists
This is surely hell already
Because every where i look i see your face
Hell is most definatly this place
I cant handle all of this
I have made so many spills
By the way the drain is clogged with pills
This is my life
A broken vase
Cant stand the chase
I am tired
Of the falling tears
The increasing fears
I know I'm almost gone
With every lie
I know I'm going to die
This is what it takes
To achieve my goal
To get rid of this soul
Maybe its all to late
The thing I was using to kill
Was that deadly pill
Why cant I be
One of the dead
Thats the path I have lead
If only I could
Just drop
And go plop
Maybe that would end
I'm tired of buffering
I need to end this suffering
The question keeps coming
Why was I born?
That is the thought like thorn
Why cant I escape
I want no delays
Destroy the rainbow of greys
Why god? Why?
I know Im not clever
So why wont you let me sleep forever?
It is I
That I want to use as the sacrafice
I know this is the price
This Life
Is like a spinning top
MAKE IT STOP!
I cant get what I want
This life I never bought
I will end it with a shot
To me
I wish nothing more
to be in the morge
Why?
Why cant I be dead
With the lies I have been feed
There is
Such a high sky
That after this I will fly
I try to ignore it
But I know what you think
But I dont care, I'm at my brink
Do you know what this is?
This is the world I hate
This is worst than hell's gate
This is the end
This is the final kill
Ended with a pill
This is the final
Its been such a long while
Since I had such a pure smile
One last word
I did try
I didnt just cry
But my efforts were futile
I never stood a chance
In this world's evil dance
This world is more than you think
It is far more cruel
It has you spun on a spool
Say good bye for me
Maybe someone will finaly see
Not just what I couldnt be
This is the thing
That when I sink this will float
This is my Sucide Note
The ol' lady's gone under the knife too many times.
She's tired.
Cancer survivor.
It keeps comin' back.
I tell her, "fuck it;
we're all gonna be worm food- eventually.
Five minutes or five hundred years
all goes to nothin'
after the last breath."
I can't bare to see her suffer, and I'm not a murderer,
so I won't put her down.
We used to joke about who was gonna go first.
Like it was some kind of competition.
The loser would be the last one standing.
Looks like I win.
She's tired.
Cancer survivor.
It keeps comin' back.
I tell her, "fuck it;
we're all gonna be worm food- eventually.
Five minutes or five hundred years
all goes to nothin'
after the last breath."
I can't bare to see her suffer, and I'm not a murderer,
so I won't put her down.
We used to joke about who was gonna go first.
Like it was some kind of competition.
The loser would be the last one standing.
Looks like I win.
This was my actual suicide note from April 11, 2011 i will post an actual poem later.
“Dear whoever finds me,
I don’t expect many to miss me
But please don’t hide what I did
I want people to know that I took my own life
I want people to know that I was pushed this far
I want the kids at school to know what they have done
Not to feel guilty
But to see the power their actions can have
I want the school to start intervening,to start helping
Things like this can’t go on anymore
I may be the first suicide in this town but
If the bulling and harassment that goes on here continues
I won’t be the last
To my friends,
Please know that this is not your fault
You could not of stopped this
You have been the only thing that has kept me going this long
I know this is going to hurt
and I’m sorry
I just couldn’t keep living like this
Please forgive me
Love always,
Hannah"
“Dear whoever finds me,
I don’t expect many to miss me
But please don’t hide what I did
I want people to know that I took my own life
I want people to know that I was pushed this far
I want the kids at school to know what they have done
Not to feel guilty
But to see the power their actions can have
I want the school to start intervening,to start helping
Things like this can’t go on anymore
I may be the first suicide in this town but
If the bulling and harassment that goes on here continues
I won’t be the last
To my friends,
Please know that this is not your fault
You could not of stopped this
You have been the only thing that has kept me going this long
I know this is going to hurt
and I’m sorry
I just couldn’t keep living like this
Please forgive me
Love always,
Hannah"
fred_r_kane said:The ol' lady's gone under the knife too many times.
She's tired.
Cancer survivor.
It keeps comin' back.
I tell her, "fuck it;
we're all gonna be worm food- eventually.
Five minutes or five hundred years
all goes to nothin'
after the last breath."
I can't bare to see her suffer, and I'm not a murderer,
so I won't put her down.
We used to joke about who was gonna go first.
Like it was some kind of competition.
The loser would be the last one standing.
Looks like I win.
aww sad, i like it
She's tired.
Cancer survivor.
It keeps comin' back.
I tell her, "fuck it;
we're all gonna be worm food- eventually.
Five minutes or five hundred years
all goes to nothin'
after the last breath."
I can't bare to see her suffer, and I'm not a murderer,
so I won't put her down.
We used to joke about who was gonna go first.
Like it was some kind of competition.
The loser would be the last one standing.
Looks like I win.
aww sad, i like it
