Story Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about Dreams, Fantasy and Fiction
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 12:22pm
1st Mar 2025 12:22pm
The Co-Ed Killer
Young Edmund Kemper would decapitate his sister's cats
Hated his mother, which led to many violent spats
He'd play out his own death in grisly roles
Murdered his grandparents at 15 years old
He honed this facade in the coming years
While his private world contained much darker ideas
After only 5 years in a state facility
He fooled them all, with politeness & civility
Between May 1972 and April 1973
Kemper murdered 8 people, You can say that's a killing spree
A claw hammer to the head and a penknife slit her throat
The murder of...
Hated his mother, which led to many violent spats
He'd play out his own death in grisly roles
Murdered his grandparents at 15 years old
He honed this facade in the coming years
While his private world contained much darker ideas
After only 5 years in a state facility
He fooled them all, with politeness & civility
Between May 1972 and April 1973
Kemper murdered 8 people, You can say that's a killing spree
A claw hammer to the head and a penknife slit her throat
The murder of...
#MentalHealth
#murder
#nonfiction
#PopCulture
#violence
68 reads
11 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 7:57pm
31st Oct 2024 7:57pm
Lost Traveler
Let's pretend
I traveled over a bend
I went back in time
For no reason or rhyme
To be caught and tried
For someone else's lie
My sentence was death
Uttered under someone's breath
I will not go easy into the night
Once the moon is full I will see the whole site
There are men, women, children and aged souls
All out to see the penalty dolled
I'll be the last to go
Making me witness this horrible show
One was...
I traveled over a bend
I went back in time
For no reason or rhyme
To be caught and tried
For someone else's lie
My sentence was death
Uttered under someone's breath
I will not go easy into the night
Once the moon is full I will see the whole site
There are men, women, children and aged souls
All out to see the penalty dolled
I'll be the last to go
Making me witness this horrible show
One was...
#nightmares
#Halloween
186 reads
14 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2024 10:10pm
2nd Mar 2024 10:10pm
CAPTURED BY THE SIRENS
I had been warned
and knew better as
I swam toward the reefs
where the alluring Sirens
waited to lure and seduce
voyagers venturing on
the sea of life in search
of adventure and pleasure.
I knew well the myth of
Orpheus and Eurydice but
the alluring lyre music and
beauty of the Sirens prohibited
me from saying no. I am
honored and thankful for
YOU,
sweet Siren of the sea of lust.
YES!
You know who you are.
and knew better as
I swam toward the reefs
where the alluring Sirens
waited to lure and seduce
voyagers venturing on
the sea of life in search
of adventure and pleasure.
I knew well the myth of
Orpheus and Eurydice but
the alluring lyre music and
beauty of the Sirens prohibited
me from saying no. I am
honored and thankful for
YOU,
sweet Siren of the sea of lust.
YES!
You know who you are.
#happiness
#love
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
197 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 3:13pm
13th Nov 2024 3:13pm
boogie man
my love of boogers began when I was a small child
I would sneeze
and the snot would fly, big mucusy globs running down my face
usually blending with my tears
where asthma was a norm and my breathing constricted
they would let loose and I would eat them
disgusting I know but little did I know I was building immunity
the germs would attack and I would devour them
greenies being favored for their rich salty taste
sliding on down my face
I would often get in trouble for having such a messy nose
my dad insisted it was gross
...
I would sneeze
and the snot would fly, big mucusy globs running down my face
usually blending with my tears
where asthma was a norm and my breathing constricted
they would let loose and I would eat them
disgusting I know but little did I know I was building immunity
the germs would attack and I would devour them
greenies being favored for their rich salty taste
sliding on down my face
I would often get in trouble for having such a messy nose
my dad insisted it was gross
...
#funny
94 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
10th May 2014 10:42pm
10th May 2014 10:42pm
hyper- e<---pic
It seemed the same all over again
Engaged endlessly without a word
Arrowed away those negating equations
that were largely presumed in existence
And then, was not all that was supposed
A sparking fireball reciprocated
in a shrill-felt discovery, a full honey sparkle
mouthed a smashing hit over small tongued
pendulum that dripped your endless concentrates
Soaked drastically thickened thirsting buds in porous breaths
beneath, with enormous flowering proportions, uncontainable
...
Engaged endlessly without a word
Arrowed away those negating equations
that were largely presumed in existence
And then, was not all that was supposed
A sparking fireball reciprocated
in a shrill-felt discovery, a full honey sparkle
mouthed a smashing hit over small tongued
pendulum that dripped your endless concentrates
Soaked drastically thickened thirsting buds in porous breaths
beneath, with enormous flowering proportions, uncontainable
...
886 reads
8 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
26th Dec 2018 9:05pm
26th Dec 2018 9:05pm
A Sneetch ( after Theodor [Dr] Seuss Geisel )
There are havettes, and have notettes–
yet in all honesty, without possessions
who can tell the difference?!
They appear the same shape –
male and female alike; O! But wait!
is it a tittle of a title they covet?!
Or, perhaps, in all honesty –
it’s a jealousy thing ; O! Me! Why
clonedingus another Sneetch?
We each have our trinkets – we’re all
born completus; O! Yet, it’s not enough!
Some Sneetches choose to be leeches!
Is it fortune, fame they don’t deserve –
but feel they...
yet in all honesty, without possessions
who can tell the difference?!
They appear the same shape –
male and female alike; O! But wait!
is it a tittle of a title they covet?!
Or, perhaps, in all honesty –
it’s a jealousy thing ; O! Me! Why
clonedingus another Sneetch?
We each have our trinkets – we’re all
born completus; O! Yet, it’s not enough!
Some Sneetches choose to be leeches!
Is it fortune, fame they don’t deserve –
but feel they...
#jealousy
#conflict
#DrSeuss
1268 reads
7 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:59pm
Yesterday 1:59pm
Under the moon light
Here I am as I am in a place of pure calmness and tranquility, with the quiteness of the moon reflection, upon the peaceful waters, as they flow so peacefully up stream. For sure it's here and now I feel the tension leaving my mind, and heart and spiritual subconsciousness of my soul. As it eliminates to the point there's no hurt and no pain, only the deepness of being replaced by the sounds of the quiet waters, drifting with the winds of time. For even as I feel this great sensation, I begin to inhale and exhale out the negativity, from my subconscious of my deepest thoughts of healing,...
#clouds
#countryside
#nature
#river
#sky
18 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 7:21am
25th Nov 2023 7:21am
I SAW HER RIDE (LADY GODIVA BY PEEPING TOM)
I saw her ride,
legs to one side,
nothing to hide
amid the street,
while the discreet
let not eyes meet.
Her long thick hair
covered her, bare,
to derriere.
She sat upright
in the dim light
as day met night.
No more I saw -
my eyes went sore
sight did withdraw.
I'd been struck blind,
things could not find.
Guilt seared my mind.
legs to one side,
nothing to hide
amid the street,
while the discreet
let not eyes meet.
Her long thick hair
covered her, bare,
to derriere.
She sat upright
in the dim light
as day met night.
No more I saw -
my eyes went sore
sight did withdraw.
I'd been struck blind,
things could not find.
Guilt seared my mind.
#rhyming
#tradition
278 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 7:26am
11th Feb 2025 7:26am
There's a thief in town.
My house was robbed last night.
The thief broke in while I slept and stole my hair,hearing and eyesight.
Not content with that,on waking, my wife also noticed that my ass had been stolen.All that remained was a saggy old bag, barely capable of keeping my pants up.
I alerted the police who told me there had been a spate of similar robberies involving people of a certain age.
They assured me that they had s brilliant team working on the case and I could contact "strikeforce buttcrack" if I needed any further assistance.
Needless to say, my...
The thief broke in while I slept and stole my hair,hearing and eyesight.
Not content with that,on waking, my wife also noticed that my ass had been stolen.All that remained was a saggy old bag, barely capable of keeping my pants up.
I alerted the police who told me there had been a spate of similar robberies involving people of a certain age.
They assured me that they had s brilliant team working on the case and I could contact "strikeforce buttcrack" if I needed any further assistance.
Needless to say, my...
#funny
54 reads
6 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 8:13am
24th Jan 2025 8:13am
Frozen
The cavalry arrived, the orchestra played
Upon a rock, her beauty displayed
Frozen in time, The Four Winds spoke
Lips locked, magic evoked
Heavenly creatures played their harps
Centaurs galloped around
Across the valley, nature danced
To the alluring symphonic sound
The cavalry marched, showering stars
Golden cherubs, witnessed afar
Shadows danced on, into the sun
Entwined eternal, love has begun
Upon a rock, her beauty displayed
Frozen in time, The Four Winds spoke
Lips locked, magic evoked
Heavenly creatures played their harps
Centaurs galloped around
Across the valley, nature danced
To the alluring symphonic sound
The cavalry marched, showering stars
Golden cherubs, witnessed afar
Shadows danced on, into the sun
Entwined eternal, love has begun
#love
90 reads
10 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
22nd May 2022 2:48pm
22nd May 2022 2:48pm
X44C Technology borne from Real Art, Paint, Ideas
I developed X44C Technology
Created it in my personal think tank
Taking a real painting
Micromanagement color structure
Enhanced reduced calculated
In reality
All you need is one painting
Like buying shares in a utility stock
Say 1000 shares were purchased for you at birth
Reinvest the dividends
Banging the high quality women at 31
Living off the coast of Monaco
But the irony is, she's not a woman
It's robotic twang, test tube sex, no fault kink
Pretty good, right ?
The raspberries are good right now... ...
Created it in my personal think tank
Taking a real painting
Micromanagement color structure
Enhanced reduced calculated
In reality
All you need is one painting
Like buying shares in a utility stock
Say 1000 shares were purchased for you at birth
Reinvest the dividends
Banging the high quality women at 31
Living off the coast of Monaco
But the irony is, she's not a woman
It's robotic twang, test tube sex, no fault kink
Pretty good, right ?
The raspberries are good right now... ...
#sex
#technology
#art
589 reads
18 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 1:16pm
21st Feb 2025 1:16pm
Sensitive Heels
In ancient lands where heroes tread,
Achilles and Patroclus, their love widespread.
Through Trojan War, their bond was bold,
a tale of hearts, both fierce and gold.
With Troy behind, they journeyed on.
Their love's bright flame, a blazing dawn.
Olympic Gods, with hearts so kind,
bestowed their blessing fates entwined.
On fields of Elysium they roamed,
in laughter, joy, their spirits honed.
Achilles' strength and Patroclus' grace.
A love eternal, time can't erase.
In every battle, side by side, ...
Achilles and Patroclus, their love widespread.
Through Trojan War, their bond was bold,
a tale of hearts, both fierce and gold.
With Troy behind, they journeyed on.
Their love's bright flame, a blazing dawn.
Olympic Gods, with hearts so kind,
bestowed their blessing fates entwined.
On fields of Elysium they roamed,
in laughter, joy, their spirits honed.
Achilles' strength and Patroclus' grace.
A love eternal, time can't erase.
In every battle, side by side, ...
#LGBT
#love
#mythology
#passion
#tradition
57 reads
4 Comments
DU Poetry : Story Poems by Top Critiquers about Dreams, Fantasy and Fiction
