Story Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about Dreams, Fantasy and Fiction
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Kalamazoo Kathedral
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Don't try and find me here
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
Someone tried to finger my rear
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Kathedral has no flock
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
The priest tried to suck my kock
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
My backside is red and raw
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
My aunt is a part time whore
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Religion is never on my mind
Last time my mother got naked here ...
Don't try and find me here
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
Someone tried to finger my rear
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Kathedral has no flock
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
The priest tried to suck my kock
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
My backside is red and raw
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
My aunt is a part time whore
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Religion is never on my mind
Last time my mother got naked here ...
#family
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#TruthOfLife
#uplifting
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boogie man
my love of boogers began when I was a small child
I would sneeze
and the snot would fly, big mucusy globs running down my face
usually blending with my tears
where asthma was a norm and my breathing constricted
they would let loose and I would eat them
disgusting I know but little did I know I was building immunity
the germs would attack and I would devour them
greenies being favored for their rich salty taste
sliding on down my face
I would often get in trouble for having such a messy nose
my dad insisted it was gross
...
I would sneeze
and the snot would fly, big mucusy globs running down my face
usually blending with my tears
where asthma was a norm and my breathing constricted
they would let loose and I would eat them
disgusting I know but little did I know I was building immunity
the germs would attack and I would devour them
greenies being favored for their rich salty taste
sliding on down my face
I would often get in trouble for having such a messy nose
my dad insisted it was gross
...
#funny
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Sometimes it's just thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ FOR what if you could find a place, that is disease free and protected, by a crystal dome. Would you want to leave and return back, to a world 🌎 that has become infected with so many peoples are losing there damn minds, that will affect even your own 🤨 well-being. What if you could find a pure source of energy, and with it came with a commitment and consistency, would you rather have that kind of mental health connection. 🤨 What if you could find a spiritual soul, that...
#emotional
#LifeChangingMoment
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
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I SAW HER RIDE (LADY GODIVA BY PEEPING TOM)
I saw her ride,
legs to one side,
nothing to hide
amid the street,
while the discreet
let not eyes meet.
Her long thick hair
covered her, bare,
to derriere.
She sat upright
in the dim light
as day met night.
No more I saw -
my eyes went sore
sight did withdraw.
I'd been struck blind,
things could not find.
Guilt seared my mind.
legs to one side,
nothing to hide
amid the street,
while the discreet
let not eyes meet.
Her long thick hair
covered her, bare,
to derriere.
She sat upright
in the dim light
as day met night.
No more I saw -
my eyes went sore
sight did withdraw.
I'd been struck blind,
things could not find.
Guilt seared my mind.
#rhyming
#tradition
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X44C Technology borne from Real Art, Paint, Ideas
I developed X44C Technology
Created it in my personal think tank
Taking a real painting
Micromanagement color structure
Enhanced reduced calculated
In reality
All you need is one painting
Like buying shares in a utility stock
Say 1000 shares were purchased for you at birth
Reinvest the dividends
Banging the high quality women at 31
Living off the coast of Monaco
But the irony is, she's not a woman
It's robotic twang, test tube sex, no fault kink
Pretty good, right ?
The raspberries are good right now... ...
Created it in my personal think tank
Taking a real painting
Micromanagement color structure
Enhanced reduced calculated
In reality
All you need is one painting
Like buying shares in a utility stock
Say 1000 shares were purchased for you at birth
Reinvest the dividends
Banging the high quality women at 31
Living off the coast of Monaco
But the irony is, she's not a woman
It's robotic twang, test tube sex, no fault kink
Pretty good, right ?
The raspberries are good right now... ...
#sex
#technology
#art
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Lost Traveler
Let's pretend
I traveled over a bend
I went back in time
For no reason or rhyme
To be caught and tried
For someone else's lie
My sentence was death
Uttered under someone's breath
I will not go easy into the night
Once the moon is full I will see the whole site
There are men, women, children and aged souls
All out to see the penalty dolled
I'll be the last to go
Making me witness this horrible show
One was...
I traveled over a bend
I went back in time
For no reason or rhyme
To be caught and tried
For someone else's lie
My sentence was death
Uttered under someone's breath
I will not go easy into the night
Once the moon is full I will see the whole site
There are men, women, children and aged souls
All out to see the penalty dolled
I'll be the last to go
Making me witness this horrible show
One was...
#nightmares
#Halloween
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hyper- e<---pic
It seemed the same all over again
Engaged endlessly without a word
Arrowed away those negating equations
that were largely presumed in existence
And then, was not all that was supposed
A sparking fireball reciprocated
in a shrill-felt discovery, a full honey sparkle
mouthed a smashing hit over small tongued
pendulum that dripped your endless concentrates
Soaked drastically thickened thirsting buds in porous breaths
beneath, with enormous flowering proportions, uncontainable
...
Engaged endlessly without a word
Arrowed away those negating equations
that were largely presumed in existence
And then, was not all that was supposed
A sparking fireball reciprocated
in a shrill-felt discovery, a full honey sparkle
mouthed a smashing hit over small tongued
pendulum that dripped your endless concentrates
Soaked drastically thickened thirsting buds in porous breaths
beneath, with enormous flowering proportions, uncontainable
...
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Sharp View
since the day he
arrived i am in awe
of his sharp view
& super clever
observations
speaking up
radically poetic
about this fucked
up society and this
new generation
its ignorance
and hatred while
switching it up with
a musical break
his knowledge of
artists & bands in his
backstage stories
with lots of humor is
jaw dropping great yet
don't forget how he bares
his soul in reflective ink
so here's an ovation to
our one...
arrived i am in awe
of his sharp view
& super clever
observations
speaking up
radically poetic
about this fucked
up society and this
new generation
its ignorance
and hatred while
switching it up with
a musical break
his knowledge of
artists & bands in his
backstage stories
with lots of humor is
jaw dropping great yet
don't forget how he bares
his soul in reflective ink
so here's an ovation to
our one...
#admiration
#respect
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18 Comments
Evolutions
In a butcher and clockmaker tryst
their scion anon gave skills a twist
when gears put together
in slaughterhouse weather
made her a meaty-horologist.
their scion anon gave skills a twist
when gears put together
in slaughterhouse weather
made her a meaty-horologist.
#limerick
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This Old Mechanical Heart
A song comes on
Memories are sparked that were once lost to time
Wondering where my adolescence went
Bound by the bonds of a cruel fate’s design…
A glance leads to curiosity
When her eyes gaze closer at me in the dim light
The device ticks away behind a glass door on my chest
This old mechanical heart is wound every night
How old are you? She asks
I grin remembering my youth back in 1849
Too old, I reply with a smile, gazing into her eyes
A secret I carry with me after such a long time
The wrinkles on my...
Memories are sparked that were once lost to time
Wondering where my adolescence went
Bound by the bonds of a cruel fate’s design…
A glance leads to curiosity
When her eyes gaze closer at me in the dim light
The device ticks away behind a glass door on my chest
This old mechanical heart is wound every night
How old are you? She asks
I grin remembering my youth back in 1849
Too old, I reply with a smile, gazing into her eyes
A secret I carry with me after such a long time
The wrinkles on my...
#Fanfiction
#loneliness
#love
#scifi
#steampunk
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Hallucinating Alices.
Once upon a time, three Alices
decided to leave their parents'
houses and live alone.
Alice of Oz, built a pink palace by the sea
on a remote beach in Thailand.
Alice Snow, made a sand castle in the clouds
that hover over Mauritius.
Alice Joana Catrin Mariah Isabel Sondra Daisy Elisabeth
etc and such, she got a house of cards
made in the rainforest of Wonderland.
It turns out that the Alices had a common enemy,
who wanted to eat their raw livers for breakfast.
The Callipygian Witch, a perverse woman,
who,...
decided to leave their parents'
houses and live alone.
Alice of Oz, built a pink palace by the sea
on a remote beach in Thailand.
Alice Snow, made a sand castle in the clouds
that hover over Mauritius.
Alice Joana Catrin Mariah Isabel Sondra Daisy Elisabeth
etc and such, she got a house of cards
made in the rainforest of Wonderland.
It turns out that the Alices had a common enemy,
who wanted to eat their raw livers for breakfast.
The Callipygian Witch, a perverse woman,
who,...
#aliens
#evolution
#politics
#prison
#revenge
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Managers That Let Guys Sexually Harass You
Drunk on lies.
Pretending they're not spies.
She needs attention from guys.
That no one likes.
Pretending she's right.
On camera, all night
Staring is how she fights.
Her friends deny.
The way these guys,
Try to get between my thighs.
It's amazing they're alive.
Should be rotting in prison for life.
She's amazingly bright.
The way she pretends to cry.
When I point out how much she lies.
Claiming she has legal rights.
Harassing the polite.
In the middle of the...
Pretending they're not spies.
She needs attention from guys.
That no one likes.
Pretending she's right.
On camera, all night
Staring is how she fights.
Her friends deny.
The way these guys,
Try to get between my thighs.
It's amazing they're alive.
Should be rotting in prison for life.
She's amazingly bright.
The way she pretends to cry.
When I point out how much she lies.
Claiming she has legal rights.
Harassing the polite.
In the middle of the...
#funny
#TruthOfLife
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DU Poetry : Story Poems by Top Critiquers about Dreams, Fantasy and Fiction