Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique

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LostViking
LostViking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 3:04pm

Finding Love at the Waffle House  

The Waffle House on the outskirts of Lebanon, MO, exudes an unmistakable aroma of sizzling bacon and fresh coffee that seems to hang in the air like a comforting cloud. This quaint establishment features vinyl booths in shades of fading turquoise and a counter worn smooth by the countless elbows of truckers, tourists, and townsfolk that have propped there over the years. The linoleum floor, a checkerboard of black and white squares, bears the scuffs and marks of time and the shuffling feet of daily patrons.
 
Maggie, a 42-year-old waitress, glides through the diner with practiced...
 #coffee   #sex   #travel 
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CasketSharpe
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 1:55am

CherSakura Pussh

restricted poem
 #sex 
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averageJoe69
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 11:44pm

Moving in together (fantasy write)

restricted poem
 #lover   #passion   #seductive   #sensual   #sex 
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RPM1on1
RPM1on1
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 9:44pm

Again  He Thought…

restricted poem
 #seductive   #sensual 
 #sexy   #temptation 
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fianaturie8
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 9:41pm

Your Time Will Cum!

restricted poem
 #dirty   #orgasm 
 #sex   #sexy 
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RPM1on1
RPM1on1
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 9:05pm

Lost In Thought

restricted poem
 #beauty   #orgasm 
 #sexy   #wife 
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AfterSexDilemma
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 5:03pm

Strip For Me

I got me a lap dance.
Don't need to try,
To get in her pants.
They're gone.

And I'm just there,
For the big and brawn.

Sipping this martini,
Enjoying the porn.
Can't wait for this horny guy,
To come and join.

We'll gamble 'til the light of dawn.
Who gets the dance?
We'll flip a coin.
Ill mind fuck him,
While she gets him on.
He's distracted,
So I know I've won.

Now let's get going.
The sun is out.
Let's do a dance,  at your house.
Id love to whip these titties out. ...
 #funny   #holiday 
 #ThrillSeeking   #vulnerability 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 11:19am

A Result Of Gulping Too Many Beers

Dean woke naked and hungover.
He noticed Lisa sleeping next to him.
He went into the bathroom.
After throwing up, Dean saw his reflection.
A result of gulping too many beers.
 #alcohol   #corruption   #fiction   #friendship   #sex 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 2:33am

I Thought I Knew Her After We Met

Blake stepped into the house.
He saw Ginger stripping and licking April.
He left... never to return.
 #betrayal   #fiction   #home   #lesbian   #sex 
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averageJoe69
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 11:46pm

Calling in sick

restricted poem
 #erotic   #lust   #passion   #sensual   #sexy 
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SweetBobbyBlu
SweetBobbyBlu
Easin On In
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 5:18pm

Your Kiss Commands

restricted poem
 #erotic   #lust 
 #passion   #seductive 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 3:52pm

Our Host Wants Us All To Have Fun

You
need to
take your clothes
off before you
join this party. Our
host wants us all to have
fun in a really big
way. I could tell by the bump in
your pants that you're ready to join in
on the fun. So, are you going to strip?
 #culture   #dialogue   #fiction   #sex   #tolerance 
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