Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
The DUP Court
Ladies and Gentlemen
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
#ForbiddenLove
#girlfriend
#husband
#lust
#wife
123 reads
8 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 11:40pm
11th Jan 2025 11:40pm
Electricity in her kiss
#lover
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
#sexy
108 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 4:16pm
11th Jan 2025 4:16pm
Is He Cheating On Me Or Not?
Crystal felt something near her.
She saw Scott humping her friend Kirstie.
She woke up screaming "no".
She saw Scott humping her friend Kirstie.
She woke up screaming "no".
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#nightmares
#sex
80 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
I'm Sorry. But I'm Really Not Okay With It.
At first, Jennifer
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
#fiction
#friendship
#ignorance
#LGBT
#sex
86 reads
0 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 9:14am
11th Jan 2025 9:14am
Another Year
#dreams
#erotic
134 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 2:45am
11th Jan 2025 2:45am
Just To Make Sure A Divorce Does Not Happen
Camila lets herself get naked.
She allows Sasha to lick her hole.
Jennifer is keeping Mark busy.
She allows Sasha to lick her hole.
Jennifer is keeping Mark busy.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#lesbian
#sex
89 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 1:33am
11th Jan 2025 1:33am
One Night Stand
I can't believe I did it. I knew it was going to happen. But, I usually convince myself that my marriage is sacred to me. Yet, I was pushed to do it. Physically depriving me of his touch, then verbally with his indifference. It was bound to happen.(Jane)
She started the minute I woke up. "When are you coming home? Do you get paid today? Pick up milk? We ran out." Normally, I take this barrage of questions with a grain of salt. But today I had it. Last night, I reached for her. I gently kissed her on the neck, just the spot that always puts her in the mood. You know what?...
She started the minute I woke up. "When are you coming home? Do you get paid today? Pick up milk? We ran out." Normally, I take this barrage of questions with a grain of salt. But today I had it. Last night, I reached for her. I gently kissed her on the neck, just the spot that always puts her in the mood. You know what?...
#dirty
#lover
#lust #sex
#lust #sex
160 reads
18 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 11:32pm
10th Jan 2025 11:32pm
Up to you
#BDSM
#passion
#porn
#sensual
#temptation
135 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
Like What You See?
Jeff was hiking in
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
#fiction
#love
#river
#sex
#tanka
91 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:38pm
10th Jan 2025 8:38pm
March of the Crabs!
This message is for all you sex fiends here on DUP.
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Focus on Internet Porn and dirty mags
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
A prostitute is usually a red flag
Safe Sex Don't stop Crabs!
Itchy, hairy pubes, your partner starts to gag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Tainted bed sheets, throw them in a garbage bag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Disease ridden, need to report to the nearest lab
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
STD's for the rich and for the poor dressed in rags
Safe Sex Don't...
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Focus on Internet Porn and dirty mags
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
A prostitute is usually a red flag
Safe Sex Don't stop Crabs!
Itchy, hairy pubes, your partner starts to gag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Tainted bed sheets, throw them in a garbage bag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Disease ridden, need to report to the nearest lab
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
STD's for the rich and for the poor dressed in rags
Safe Sex Don't...
#illness
#MentalHealth
#satirical
#sex
#CallToAction
96 reads
13 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 11:40am
10th Jan 2025 11:40am
Don't Worry. We Really Do Have An Open Marriage.
Kendra woke up at
Two AM with a pain
in her head and found
herself to be naked
before some chick
said "You must be
my husband's date."
Two AM with a pain
in her head and found
herself to be naked
before some chick
said "You must be
my husband's date."
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#lover
#marriage
#sex
77 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 11:44pm
9th Jan 2025 11:44pm
Spice things up
#lust
#passion
#sexy
#temptation
#threesome
148 reads
0 Comments
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