Dark Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Sinister Mind
Outside in the distance a black cat moans
Underneath a blistered sky the stars revolt
Lost in the wilderness while casting stones
Testing fate on the edge of a lightning-bolt
Strangers gather around the mystic stream
In need of quenching some forgotten thirst
Wandering across miles guided by a dream
Only to realize the journey has been cursed
Death will consume them all before sunrise
Silently a creature approaches from behind
Overwhelmed taken completely by surprise
Falling victim to a madman’s sinister mind
Underneath a blistered sky the stars revolt
Lost in the wilderness while casting stones
Testing fate on the edge of a lightning-bolt
Strangers gather around the mystic stream
In need of quenching some forgotten thirst
Wandering across miles guided by a dream
Only to realize the journey has been cursed
Death will consume them all before sunrise
Silently a creature approaches from behind
Overwhelmed taken completely by surprise
Falling victim to a madman’s sinister mind
#horror
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It fell from the sky
It spreads through the air
Dissolving the body internally
This can't be cured
You'll die a turbulent death
Pressure building inside your skull
Eyes popped out, fall on the ground
Tympanum burst you bleed from your ears
Spasmodic convulsion, your moribund
Loss of consciousness, body fluids oozing Out
Coagulated blood, punctured lungs erode
Softening of the brain, muscle contractions uncontrolled
Puss filled bruises
Maggots munch your flesh
Cerebral meningitis
Swollen cranium explodes
Malignantly slaughtered ...
Dissolving the body internally
This can't be cured
You'll die a turbulent death
Pressure building inside your skull
Eyes popped out, fall on the ground
Tympanum burst you bleed from your ears
Spasmodic convulsion, your moribund
Loss of consciousness, body fluids oozing Out
Coagulated blood, punctured lungs erode
Softening of the brain, muscle contractions uncontrolled
Puss filled bruises
Maggots munch your flesh
Cerebral meningitis
Swollen cranium explodes
Malignantly slaughtered ...
#dark
#death
#illness
#MentalHealth
#pollution
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unperceived in the ominous woods~with the talented Sage_6_paths_light
the darkness beckons
and I come forth willingly, into the unknown
sensing something forbodeing, I draw back to the shadows
the trees are silent it's eerie
forsake the angels
it's a spell their under
I've always been friend to the trees
today they loom large
the forest smells of copper pennies
an unmistakable tang
withdrawing further, a tree warns
a madman is afoot
with wild eyes and smile that chills
my blood runs cold, as I catch sight of him
Bloodlust in the air
Hard to breath my thoughts...
and I come forth willingly, into the unknown
sensing something forbodeing, I draw back to the shadows
the trees are silent it's eerie
forsake the angels
it's a spell their under
I've always been friend to the trees
today they loom large
the forest smells of copper pennies
an unmistakable tang
withdrawing further, a tree warns
a madman is afoot
with wild eyes and smile that chills
my blood runs cold, as I catch sight of him
Bloodlust in the air
Hard to breath my thoughts...
#collaboration
#dark
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The Storm
The Storm
The storm is my friend
You can't see me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm is not my friend
I can feel you
The storm will bring my end
The storm
The storm is my friend
You can't hear me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm never ends
I tried to reach you
I know this storm is my end
As I entered, the lighting crackle shelter me
The storm, the storm is my friend
As I climb the stairs, the thunder disguises me
The storm is my friend
Once inside...
The storm is my friend
You can't see me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm is not my friend
I can feel you
The storm will bring my end
The storm
The storm is my friend
You can't hear me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm never ends
I tried to reach you
I know this storm is my end
As I entered, the lighting crackle shelter me
The storm, the storm is my friend
As I climb the stairs, the thunder disguises me
The storm is my friend
Once inside...
#dark
#relationships
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The Birth of a Scream
Lost.
Disoriented.
I mingle between terror
and nightmares.
Lurking creatures
with a lust to scare.
The dark growls,
yearning to be fed.
It gnaws on my fear
in my bone's core.
You become less
in your dark greed for more.
All the petrified, paralyzed hours.
Time groans, grabs and devours.
From the cold bottomless pit
of the abyss.
Can be heard
a real high pitch hiss.
A murderous cry it seems.
The birth of a scream.
Disoriented.
I mingle between terror
and nightmares.
Lurking creatures
with a lust to scare.
The dark growls,
yearning to be fed.
It gnaws on my fear
in my bone's core.
You become less
in your dark greed for more.
All the petrified, paralyzed hours.
Time groans, grabs and devours.
From the cold bottomless pit
of the abyss.
Can be heard
a real high pitch hiss.
A murderous cry it seems.
The birth of a scream.
#dark
#fear
#nightmares
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Prince Of Darkness
I smoke in ways in purple haze
You are on my blacklist
Phase by phase, I'll set ablaze
Firing up this red mist
I'll watch you cry through haunted eyes
The dark has turned you into
Ashes die, you've broken ties
I really fuckin' hate you
You are on my blacklist
Phase by phase, I'll set ablaze
Firing up this red mist
I'll watch you cry through haunted eyes
The dark has turned you into
Ashes die, you've broken ties
I really fuckin' hate you
#curse
#nightmares
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Morbid Curiosity
#animals
#death
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whited sepulcher
#karma
#secrets
#lies
#MentalHealth
#corruption
#politics
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Get Away From The door!
These magazines are expired. The guy who collected them is dead. He's been dead for years now.
I called him Dad.
And these newspaper articles he collected are obsolete. But at one time, he considered them worth something 'cause they represent a time in history.
I can get rid of them now 'cause I don’t want them.
I need to throw them into the garbage where they belong.
I don't like old things. I don't want to go back to the past because... I just don't fucking want to!
I want to wipe away the past like dust.
I don't...
I called him Dad.
And these newspaper articles he collected are obsolete. But at one time, he considered them worth something 'cause they represent a time in history.
I can get rid of them now 'cause I don’t want them.
I need to throw them into the garbage where they belong.
I don't like old things. I don't want to go back to the past because... I just don't fucking want to!
I want to wipe away the past like dust.
I don't...
#WritingPoetry
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LET'S TAKE BACK THE WORLD
As we exchange thoughts on the situations, we have been subject to by the POWERS, that be. 🤨 HOW much more you have to 👁️ to really get the full, picture of the real world. 🌎 Not for the betterment of the American citizens. For a righteous change, is in motion just
moving at full 🚅 speed, to change it all together. For the betterment of life, and liberty and justice ⚖️ for all as ONE. THE NEW AMERICAN WORLD 🌎 FOR IT'S ALWAYS BEEN GOOD VERSUS THAT IS WHAT IS REALLY SEEN AS EVIL. 👿 FOR A CHANGE IS GONNA COME, TO CHANGE...
moving at full 🚅 speed, to change it all together. For the betterment of life, and liberty and justice ⚖️ for all as ONE. THE NEW AMERICAN WORLD 🌎 FOR IT'S ALWAYS BEEN GOOD VERSUS THAT IS WHAT IS REALLY SEEN AS EVIL. 👿 FOR A CHANGE IS GONNA COME, TO CHANGE...
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
#StreamOfConsciousness
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The Shaggy D.A.
Famous MAGA piece of shit Gaetz
reminds us to be wise with votes
lest we wind up with reprobates
shaming daughters with shameless gloats,
which speak to his priorities,
for underage activism...
as merely bro proclivities
for ill suited public jism,
of which the citizens have heard
enough to think his word absurd
and that he is the biggest turd
to ever chase a teenage bird...
and if he could she'd be his slave
leftover from a MAGA rave.
reminds us to be wise with votes
lest we wind up with reprobates
shaming daughters with shameless gloats,
which speak to his priorities,
for underage activism...
as merely bro proclivities
for ill suited public jism,
of which the citizens have heard
enough to think his word absurd
and that he is the biggest turd
to ever chase a teenage bird...
and if he could she'd be his slave
leftover from a MAGA rave.
#corruption
#hypocrisy
#manipulation
#vanity
#vulnerability
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Boo Who
There she is again
Sitting,smiling perhaps, even singing
basking in the sun on the edge
wall of the plaza fountain
I stare from my second floor hotel window
just as she looked up
Almost as if she knew i would be looking
at that precise moment
She wasn't old, she was very old
unattractive in the common way we judge these things
Her clothes, devoid of any colour, hung sackcloth like
from an underfed frame
She raised a bony finger from her left hand
touched her nose and pointed in my direction
I stepped back from the...
Sitting,smiling perhaps, even singing
basking in the sun on the edge
wall of the plaza fountain
I stare from my second floor hotel window
just as she looked up
Almost as if she knew i would be looking
at that precise moment
She wasn't old, she was very old
unattractive in the common way we judge these things
Her clothes, devoid of any colour, hung sackcloth like
from an underfed frame
She raised a bony finger from her left hand
touched her nose and pointed in my direction
I stepped back from the...
#BDSM
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