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Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Published
14th Apr 2025 7:15am
14th Apr 2025 7:15am
Vultures
Step on up, my friend.
You too, can live in a digital hell!
Your body will decay and your brain will rot,
order now and download the latest virus.
First time customer?
Sign up free for a month!
We'll fuck with your head,
then continue to charge your card
Let the buyer beware.
Of totally random hidden fees.
We’ll get you hooked on endless misery,
and jonesing for empty promises.
Bad credit score, got you down?
No worries friend, we got you covered.
It’s our modus operandi to take advantage,
of your...
You too, can live in a digital hell!
Your body will decay and your brain will rot,
order now and download the latest virus.
First time customer?
Sign up free for a month!
We'll fuck with your head,
then continue to charge your card
Let the buyer beware.
Of totally random hidden fees.
We’ll get you hooked on endless misery,
and jonesing for empty promises.
Bad credit score, got you down?
No worries friend, we got you covered.
It’s our modus operandi to take advantage,
of your...
#philosophical
#satirical
149 reads
27 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Published
Yesterday 11:56pm
Yesterday 11:56pm
17th Century Europe
Let me help you
Pain is all you have to endure
Let me cut you
Before the poison makes you turn
Your skin and flesh your blood and bone
Your heart your mind your soul will be torn
Rotten and forgotten before buried in the soil
When the torment stops you‘ll return to home
Those black stains you see
Are formed from the soul of thee
You are rotten to the core
I could try and help once more
But my doubt is too great
And I don't fear nor hate
Do not lie to me
Unlike you I can see
Do not beg of me ...
Pain is all you have to endure
Let me cut you
Before the poison makes you turn
Your skin and flesh your blood and bone
Your heart your mind your soul will be torn
Rotten and forgotten before buried in the soil
When the torment stops you‘ll return to home
Those black stains you see
Are formed from the soul of thee
You are rotten to the core
I could try and help once more
But my doubt is too great
And I don't fear nor hate
Do not lie to me
Unlike you I can see
Do not beg of me ...
#death
#historical
#illness #nonfiction
#illness #nonfiction
36 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Published
Today 2:24pm
Today 2:24pm
molten feelings
Feelings erupt within me
And I swallow them back down
Volcanic, I drink the lava
burning as it goes
until nothing but hot ash comes from my mouth
It's simmering rage beneath
With small escapes of magma
But the intensity it creates
causes small islands around me
The anger is not directed at anyone
Simply, it is present
When the pressure builds
I have no way to vent fully
The earth moves underneath me
The outside world shifts
And the molten fire threatens again
It is a balancing act, holding...
And I swallow them back down
Volcanic, I drink the lava
burning as it goes
until nothing but hot ash comes from my mouth
It's simmering rage beneath
With small escapes of magma
But the intensity it creates
causes small islands around me
The anger is not directed at anyone
Simply, it is present
When the pressure builds
I have no way to vent fully
The earth moves underneath me
The outside world shifts
And the molten fire threatens again
It is a balancing act, holding...
#anxiety
#love
8 reads
0 Comments
Betty
Published
Yesterday 1:43pm
Yesterday 1:43pm
466 days and some change
you ask if I had a
tetanus shot
before you pull
my naked madness
to yours
foreheads pressed,
your hands circle
my waist as
that razor sharp
bear-trap
on your chest
creaks on rusty springs
and baby
if it takes 10,000 hours
to develop callus enough
to endure
then I am
emotional fucking psoriasis
a mountain of
uncalcified heart skin
chronically rubbed off
against your chest spires
and I’ll give you
10,000 movie magic
moments ...
tetanus shot
before you pull
my naked madness
to yours
foreheads pressed,
your hands circle
my waist as
that razor sharp
bear-trap
on your chest
creaks on rusty springs
and baby
if it takes 10,000 hours
to develop callus enough
to endure
then I am
emotional fucking psoriasis
a mountain of
uncalcified heart skin
chronically rubbed off
against your chest spires
and I’ll give you
10,000 movie magic
moments ...
#love
#obsession
#passion #romantic
#passion #romantic
89 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Published
Today 1:12am
Today 1:12am
When it gets that way
When it gets that way sometimes, we have to decide, not to deny the truth that keeps, slapping you in the face. 😯
WHEN it gets to that way how much more will you. Keep on believing the lies, that they won't abuse you, emotionally and mentally and physically. 😯 How much more do you think, you gonna keep taking, for truly can you really denying yourself and be honest when ask thyself. 🤔 WHAT do you want and need, in your life and love dreams. For sure when in those kinds of situations, you only have one mission, Then it's time to leave for a more righteous,...
WHEN it gets to that way how much more will you. Keep on believing the lies, that they won't abuse you, emotionally and mentally and physically. 😯 How much more do you think, you gonna keep taking, for truly can you really denying yourself and be honest when ask thyself. 🤔 WHAT do you want and need, in your life and love dreams. For sure when in those kinds of situations, you only have one mission, Then it's time to leave for a more righteous,...
#abuse
#dialogue
#fear
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
21 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Published
Yesterday 10:59pm
Yesterday 10:59pm
Intoxicated
You did not call me
I went to you by choice
The sight of you in that dress
A dress that not many can pull off
Oh
I’m going to pull it off
You turn a smile with your lips
That naturally looked thoroughly kissed
Sucked and fucked
Painted in a blush-toned
"Baby, it should be red"
The way you look
Hungry does not describe it
Thirst is not it either
It more like “other”
A hodgepodge of wants, desires, and god blushing sex
Did you just breathe me in deep
Take it all in
Learning...
I went to you by choice
The sight of you in that dress
A dress that not many can pull off
Oh
I’m going to pull it off
You turn a smile with your lips
That naturally looked thoroughly kissed
Sucked and fucked
Painted in a blush-toned
"Baby, it should be red"
The way you look
Hungry does not describe it
Thirst is not it either
It more like “other”
A hodgepodge of wants, desires, and god blushing sex
Did you just breathe me in deep
Take it all in
Learning...
#erotic
#lust
100 reads
9 Comments
Solomon_Song
Published
Yesterday 4:49pm
Yesterday 4:49pm
WHAT THE CHAMBERMAID SAW
#marriage
#sex
58 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Published
Today 4:56am
Today 4:56am
Back to Gemini
(Castor and Pollux 2)
Back to Gemini that space between him and I
When we see eye to eye in that dual personality
One’s a fly by and the other can be the fall guy
Like a balance act between absurdity and rationality
And perhaps this is why Gemini is my favorite constellation
As if the astrological sign is in line with that characterization
There are two temperaments but usually logic is at the helm
While the mad enthusiastic maniac wants to overwhelm
Castor and Pollux watch from their positions in the sky
It’s like their...
Back to Gemini that space between him and I
When we see eye to eye in that dual personality
One’s a fly by and the other can be the fall guy
Like a balance act between absurdity and rationality
And perhaps this is why Gemini is my favorite constellation
As if the astrological sign is in line with that characterization
There are two temperaments but usually logic is at the helm
While the mad enthusiastic maniac wants to overwhelm
Castor and Pollux watch from their positions in the sky
It’s like their...
#confessional
#identity
#myself
#stars
#universe
10 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Published
Yesterday 3:12am
Yesterday 3:12am
Bourbon and Trouble Redux
Don't know nothing about religion
Politics stay away from me
I know about hard work
Women and bourbon
That's enough trouble for any man
Politics stay away from me
I know about hard work
Women and bourbon
That's enough trouble for any man
#alcohol
#job
#religion #women
#religion #women
79 reads
21 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Published
Today 8:48am
Today 8:48am
~the cacti mirror
intensely quintessential
yet gracing in minimalistic
magnetic sanctums
ahh.. what are you..
drawing wholly
as a soulful pull
your-
(mirroring truth
.. prickly thorns in adorn
a natural salt n pepper scape
that I yearn to be in a chaos
of an adsorptive~ absorptive
abrasive immersion
drinking in
your spiced saltish succulence-
an albuminous manna .. with
an eternal nectarine, a holy yellow yolk
in an ecstatically...
yet gracing in minimalistic
magnetic sanctums
ahh.. what are you..
drawing wholly
as a soulful pull
your-
(mirroring truth
.. prickly thorns in adorn
a natural salt n pepper scape
that I yearn to be in a chaos
of an adsorptive~ absorptive
abrasive immersion
drinking in
your spiced saltish succulence-
an albuminous manna .. with
an eternal nectarine, a holy yellow yolk
in an ecstatically...
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational #love
#inspirational #love
47 reads
1 Comment
Duende
Published
30th Mar 2025 1:00pm
30th Mar 2025 1:00pm
Spicy Fifty
i am a spicy fifty
with flirtini eyes
a slippery nipple
and gunfire spirit
gonna astro your
pop gin your coke
bomb your skittle
let me disco your
drumstick, snicker
your tini sex your
beach peach your
martini flora dora
your piña colada
gonna blow your
job or your gasms
& cougar you pink
royal your bermuda
golden your dream
bunny your easter
ocean your breeze
oatmeal your cookie
bloody your mary lime
your...
with flirtini eyes
a slippery nipple
and gunfire spirit
gonna astro your
pop gin your coke
bomb your skittle
let me disco your
drumstick, snicker
your tini sex your
beach peach your
martini flora dora
your piña colada
gonna blow your
job or your gasms
& cougar you pink
royal your bermuda
golden your dream
bunny your easter
ocean your breeze
oatmeal your cookie
bloody your mary lime
your...
#dirty
#erotic
376 reads
26 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Jizzman
Jizzman
Published
4th Apr 2025 4:01pm
4th Apr 2025 4:01pm
TRUMP IS BACK!
Trump is back, oh yeah baby...
DRILL BABY DRILL!
You said 'baby' already!
Yeah but I'm here for the thrill...
Mr Vance!
Trump is back...
He’s gonna save your back,
Your reputation -
(Even though it's in the shitter)
Ala, ala... my baby's back!
He wants everyone sacked.
If I were you,
I'd take a permanent vacation...
To Ukraine!
Ala ala Trump -
Alas, you know he’s been lyin',
No matter what Musk is tryin'.
He shoulda stayed gone for good!
Ah wooo, ah wooo.
Now Zelenski wants to kick...
DRILL BABY DRILL!
You said 'baby' already!
Yeah but I'm here for the thrill...
Mr Vance!
Trump is back...
He’s gonna save your back,
Your reputation -
(Even though it's in the shitter)
Ala, ala... my baby's back!
He wants everyone sacked.
If I were you,
I'd take a permanent vacation...
To Ukraine!
Ala ala Trump -
Alas, you know he’s been lyin',
No matter what Musk is tryin'.
He shoulda stayed gone for good!
Ah wooo, ah wooo.
Now Zelenski wants to kick...
#anger
#anxiety
#bittersweet
#confusion
#despair
199 reads
18 Comments
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