Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
Today 1:33am
Today 1:33am
Ocean
I never really gave much thought to the ocean
You'd rarely find me at the beach
It existed in its own space outside of my daily routine
I neither liked or disliked it
It simply was
That has changed
I have come to the conclusion that the ocean can go fuck itself
I would swim to the bottom and pull the plug
Watch it drain out of existence
Were it possible
The world would undoubtedly burn
I would be sat next to you roasting marshmallows
Holding you in my arms
Happily...into oblivion
...
You'd rarely find me at the beach
It existed in its own space outside of my daily routine
I neither liked or disliked it
It simply was
That has changed
I have come to the conclusion that the ocean can go fuck itself
I would swim to the bottom and pull the plug
Watch it drain out of existence
Were it possible
The world would undoubtedly burn
I would be sat next to you roasting marshmallows
Holding you in my arms
Happily...into oblivion
...
#bittersweet
#frustration
#happiness
#loneliness
#relationships
31 reads
5 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
20th May 2024 3:48am
20th May 2024 3:48am
We All Have Something We Can’t Get Out
the poem unwritten
sticks in your throat
choking you on unresolved emotions
because they weren’t there
or they were but they never sat write on the page just double entendres filled with classical lies
that taste like bullshit you’d spoon feed
to ass-kissers and cynics
sprinkled with cliches
that fall from your mind as easy
as “sun dappled dew drops”
to clunk lifeless and forlorn
on A4
reeking of posterity and lingering tobacco
smoke on yellow stained fingers
some poems...
sticks in your throat
choking you on unresolved emotions
because they weren’t there
or they were but they never sat write on the page just double entendres filled with classical lies
that taste like bullshit you’d spoon feed
to ass-kissers and cynics
sprinkled with cliches
that fall from your mind as easy
as “sun dappled dew drops”
to clunk lifeless and forlorn
on A4
reeking of posterity and lingering tobacco
smoke on yellow stained fingers
some poems...
#dark
#frustration
#philosophical
87 reads
6 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
20th May 2024 00:25am
20th May 2024 00:25am
WHENEVER I LOOK INTO YOUR EYES
Whenever I have the chance to look into your eyes all I see,
Is someone and something that fills me with love and glee,
Your heart is so very honest, also so innocent, and also so pure,
Gives me faith within the knowing whatever happens, we'll endure,
I'd gladly if asked and if you think necessary, change my ways,
I'd try my damnest to make you happy the rest of your days,
I try very hard and ignore it since at the moment I know it's in vein,
But, everyday in everyway I pray for you wanting to return again,
For my instinct takes...
Is someone and something that fills me with love and glee,
Your heart is so very honest, also so innocent, and also so pure,
Gives me faith within the knowing whatever happens, we'll endure,
I'd gladly if asked and if you think necessary, change my ways,
I'd try my damnest to make you happy the rest of your days,
I try very hard and ignore it since at the moment I know it's in vein,
But, everyday in everyway I pray for you wanting to return again,
For my instinct takes...
#bittersweet
#frustration
#gratitude #love
#gratitude #love
96 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
18th May 2024 7:03pm
18th May 2024 7:03pm
From Summer's Reccurent Souvenirs
Dante enjoys his Winter comedy
with Beatrice under Virgil's care
but here , what here ???
it is hot, .......hot .................hot.,
but, me, oh me !!!
i am living hell; a real purgatory
and this is my very blazing summer
the same heat, the same cricket
who exhausted all his whiz
and wants to pack his valise
and the same spinning singsong
the same sun, and the same mirage
of the transparent silhouettes
that waddle and wiggle thru' the waving heat
and the sun's ever aflame, slashing my skin
...
with Beatrice under Virgil's care
but here , what here ???
it is hot, .......hot .................hot.,
but, me, oh me !!!
i am living hell; a real purgatory
and this is my very blazing summer
the same heat, the same cricket
who exhausted all his whiz
and wants to pack his valise
and the same spinning singsong
the same sun, and the same mirage
of the transparent silhouettes
that waddle and wiggle thru' the waving heat
and the sun's ever aflame, slashing my skin
...
#anxiety
#boredom
#frustration #rejection
#frustration #rejection
39 reads
0 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
17th May 2024 8:49pm
17th May 2024 8:49pm
Love’s Cocktail
This lemon wedge,
floating in gin and angostura bitters.
Three words at the thin end —
and a wedding ring at the rind. Parched,
in Saharan dunes, by a calling sea,
refreshing rain, pours
rivulets streaming down the panes
of the cold glassed hot-house where I lie,
locked and shrivelled.
The brazen sun beats
while my panting tongue —
lolls.
floating in gin and angostura bitters.
Three words at the thin end —
and a wedding ring at the rind. Parched,
in Saharan dunes, by a calling sea,
refreshing rain, pours
rivulets streaming down the panes
of the cold glassed hot-house where I lie,
locked and shrivelled.
The brazen sun beats
while my panting tongue —
lolls.
#bittersweet
#emptiness
#frustration
#loneliness
#regret
66 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th May 2024 8:22pm
14th May 2024 8:22pm
Reaching Myself
It's so good to hear you sounding so good and happy, man that's awesome!
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You gotta pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You gotta pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
#frustration
#LifeStruggles
#myself
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfWorth
57 reads
6 Comments
Sexyseaschelle
Poem Published
14th May 2024 3:21am
14th May 2024 3:21am
Chaotic Thoughts
Have u ever felt so lost inside, its hard to comprehend?
Have u ever wondered who u are, but u just have to pretend?...
Have u fought a silent battle, while trying hard to find..... the YOU thats YOU inside of you, to give u peace of mind?
I just cannot explain it, how this struggle is so real.
No matter what you think you know, you don't know how I feel!
Im so sick of this addiction, but its all I've ever known.
And no matter high or sober, I still feel so all alone.
The high fills me with guilt and shame and so much that I regret.
But...
Have u ever wondered who u are, but u just have to pretend?...
Have u fought a silent battle, while trying hard to find..... the YOU thats YOU inside of you, to give u peace of mind?
I just cannot explain it, how this struggle is so real.
No matter what you think you know, you don't know how I feel!
Im so sick of this addiction, but its all I've ever known.
And no matter high or sober, I still feel so all alone.
The high fills me with guilt and shame and so much that I regret.
But...
#confusion
#emptiness
#frustration #rejection
#frustration #rejection
88 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th May 2024 11:26pm
13th May 2024 11:26pm
If you're going to shoot, then shoot, don't talk
Art?
Fuck art!!
Fuck me, Fuck You!
Fuck all of it!
Just fucking do it!!!!
Whatever it is
However it turns out is the way it is
Poetry!??
Fuck poetry!!
Fuck poets, fuck poems!
Most poets are pretentious stupid assholes that think they know everything and everyone
Quite a few on this site actually
You don't have the key or knowledge to unlock anything
Many of you know so much about nothing at all
Did you truly read what you just wrote
You sound pathetic
The use of all of these metaphors mean...
Fuck art!!
Fuck me, Fuck You!
Fuck all of it!
Just fucking do it!!!!
Whatever it is
However it turns out is the way it is
Poetry!??
Fuck poetry!!
Fuck poets, fuck poems!
Most poets are pretentious stupid assholes that think they know everything and everyone
Quite a few on this site actually
You don't have the key or knowledge to unlock anything
Many of you know so much about nothing at all
Did you truly read what you just wrote
You sound pathetic
The use of all of these metaphors mean...
#anger
#art
#frustration
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
72 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th May 2024 8:37pm
11th May 2024 8:37pm
Don't Judge Me, Look At Yourself
People always ask me, are you alright?
You looked bummed out
Or they say Cheer Up!!
Smile!!!
What's the matter with you?
And I just stare at them
Nothing is wrong with me
Must be something with my face
Or my eyes that makes me look angry, sad or crazy
Some little girl no more then 7 walked up to me yesterday
She handed me a flower and told me to cheer up
It made me smile
I felt like taking the flower & shoving it down her throat
Piss off fucker!
You looked bummed out
Or they say Cheer Up!!
Smile!!!
What's the matter with you?
And I just stare at them
Nothing is wrong with me
Must be something with my face
Or my eyes that makes me look angry, sad or crazy
Some little girl no more then 7 walked up to me yesterday
She handed me a flower and told me to cheer up
It made me smile
I felt like taking the flower & shoving it down her throat
Piss off fucker!
#anger
#frustration
#misunderstood
87 reads
8 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
10th May 2024 12:56pm
10th May 2024 12:56pm
Charm and Harm
Charm and Harm
Some hearts are stones, and some stones can be more tender, when the heart is tough
and the touch is rough and the feelings are fossilized shells, then let befriend the rock. and kiss the cement block and flirt with mountains and woo the forest, and kiss the vipers, at least, they are human beings steady in their spot, and fast in their resistance to weather's tempests ,and times tides,,, moving with their beauty, but not moving and shifting in position and roots...
Hearts that close their shutters from poetic zephyr to breathe in, and...
Some hearts are stones, and some stones can be more tender, when the heart is tough
and the touch is rough and the feelings are fossilized shells, then let befriend the rock. and kiss the cement block and flirt with mountains and woo the forest, and kiss the vipers, at least, they are human beings steady in their spot, and fast in their resistance to weather's tempests ,and times tides,,, moving with their beauty, but not moving and shifting in position and roots...
Hearts that close their shutters from poetic zephyr to breathe in, and...
#disappointment
#frustration
#heartbroken #regret
#heartbroken #regret
65 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th May 2024 4:53pm
8th May 2024 4:53pm
Tell It Like It Is
Dare i stir your dormant waters
Awaken a swirl of wordy trouble
Dare i titillate your nervous bone
While the funny bone is deadly stoned
If you find me too abusive
Say it, i would be much thankful
If you find me even aggressive;
I want a slap in my face to wake me up
Or a counter-aggressiveness
To make me feel how harsh i am..
Send me you feedback, be arrogant
With critical ranting, verbose spitting
And slang insinuation,
Use your torrid stark tongue
Vomit that thing still stuck on your...
Awaken a swirl of wordy trouble
Dare i titillate your nervous bone
While the funny bone is deadly stoned
If you find me too abusive
Say it, i would be much thankful
If you find me even aggressive;
I want a slap in my face to wake me up
Or a counter-aggressiveness
To make me feel how harsh i am..
Send me you feedback, be arrogant
With critical ranting, verbose spitting
And slang insinuation,
Use your torrid stark tongue
Vomit that thing still stuck on your...
#disappointment
#frustration
#regret
90 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
6th May 2024 6:19am
6th May 2024 6:19am
Knuckle-dragger Rampage
One chess game teaches ramifications
and yet we continue to pollute
with every counterproductive commute
in our ecologic relations
since we are the apes who refuse to learn
beyond our personal advantage
and all of the progress we mismanage
into a declining maelstrom churn
of an ever baneful Charybdis mash
no doubt to be soon set aglow someday
by waves of radioactive decay
long smoking like a global calabash
because the anger of Earth's apex ape
preempted sapience from taking shape.
and yet we continue to pollute
with every counterproductive commute
in our ecologic relations
since we are the apes who refuse to learn
beyond our personal advantage
and all of the progress we mismanage
into a declining maelstrom churn
of an ever baneful Charybdis mash
no doubt to be soon set aglow someday
by waves of radioactive decay
long smoking like a global calabash
because the anger of Earth's apex ape
preempted sapience from taking shape.
#apathy
#disappointment
#frustration #ignorance
#frustration #ignorance
86 reads
10 Comments
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