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love...romance...
In the glow of silver stars,
in the embrace of soft clouds,
our secrets are revealed
in the lap of soft petals,
we share a long kiss
and the roads turn pink
with embarrassment
as they stare at us
our bodies,
wrapped and dangling in
gauzy threads,
and the flesh melting
in our warm emotions
lips entangled in
crazy conversations
in the half light of the moon
my eyes are closed n
your nose is buried
in the folds of my flesh
our genitals dancing
and entwined
in the meadow
as soft as silk ribbons
and these romantic moments
have a charm that is difficult
to understand
but not difficult to
appreciate,
in fact
i am becoming addicted….
Published 18th Mar 2024
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18th Mar 2024 11:29am
18th Mar 2024 4:18pm
18th Mar 2024 11:34am
Beautiful erotica expression...
It's not easy to write well and you've done just that.
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
It's not easy to write well and you've done just that.
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
18th Mar 2024 4:17pm
Hello dear artist
Thank you so much for appreciating me with such a beautiful response... I liked... 🥰
Thank you so much for appreciating me with such a beautiful response... I liked... 🥰
18th Mar 2024 5:28pm
19th Mar 2024 8:47am
18th Mar 2024 6:40pm
Favourite lines:
in the lap of soft petals,
we share a long kiss
and the roads turn pink
with embarrassment
as they stare at us
The next lines do make me wonder if you were making love in a roadside hammock:
our bodies,
wrapped and dangling in
gauzy threads, [sounds like a hammock here]
and the flesh melting
in our warm emotions
in the lap of soft petals,
we share a long kiss
and the roads turn pink
with embarrassment
as they stare at us
The next lines do make me wonder if you were making love in a roadside hammock:
our bodies,
wrapped and dangling in
gauzy threads, [sounds like a hammock here]
and the flesh melting
in our warm emotions
19th Mar 2024 8:49am
our bodies,
wrapped and dangling in
gauzy threads..... it is about transparent attire..well thanks SS
wrapped and dangling in
gauzy threads..... it is about transparent attire..well thanks SS
19th Mar 2024 00:37am
This is more like it, Dimpy! As a very good & longtime friend of mine once wrote... 'Romance, you got me in a trance' This is it! Your new avatar sniffing that rose looks great too. You look & sound like a pop star right now. :-)
19th Mar 2024 00:45am
Hey :)
Thank you very much for appreciating me by RL entry... it's nice that my words reminded you of your friend...n yaaa I liked your warm compliment... ❤
Thank you very much for appreciating me by RL entry... it's nice that my words reminded you of your friend...n yaaa I liked your warm compliment... ❤
19th Mar 2024 00:44am
19th Mar 2024 00:46am
19th Mar 2024 4:44pm
Wow.. another great poem.. love the subtle plays of passion and sensualness.. look forward to reading more of your poems!
19th Mar 2024 4:53pm
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20th Mar 2024 6:11pm
Great piece of romance with a little erotic under current, you have away of expressing yourself Lady. Tight
21st Mar 2024 00:54am
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23rd Mar 2024 6:51am
hey LJ
so glad to see you here : )
hope you're having a good weekend
THANK YOU for reading n adding this stuff in your RL...
so glad to see you here : )
hope you're having a good weekend
THANK YOU for reading n adding this stuff in your RL...
9th Apr 2024 4:05am
This evocative poem is a sensual exploration of love and romance. your command of vivid, poetic language creates a captivating and immersive reading experience.
your pen masterful blend of sensual imagery, poetic language, and genuine emotion. your ability to craft a captivating and immersive narrative through the use of free verse is truly impressive.
your pen masterful blend of sensual imagery, poetic language, and genuine emotion. your ability to craft a captivating and immersive narrative through the use of free verse is truly impressive.
9th Apr 2024 12:23pm
