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New Love
With you I don’t have to disguise
The love in my eyes
Our souls carry
Our untold story
With you
There’s no more wondering why
Only butterflies
The love in my eyes
Our souls carry
Our untold story
With you
There’s no more wondering why
Only butterflies
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6th Jan 2024 11:36pm
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6th Jan 2024 11:37pm
Re. New Love
6th Jan 2024 11:34pm
love is like a drug sometimes. and it seems to be much safer than real narcotics to. (laughing here)
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7th Jan 2024 1:03am
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7th Jan 2024 00:56am
Love is scary but worth it. Like flying for the first time to see someone who lives a thousand miles away. Can't wait to see if Mother Mary is really as holy as she claims to be 😉
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7th Jan 2024 2:47am
The first two lines especially moved me. It's wonderful to not have to suppress your love.
I don't mean to imply I only loved the first two lines. The whole poem is beautiful and profound- and I'm happy for you.
I don't mean to imply I only loved the first two lines. The whole poem is beautiful and profound- and I'm happy for you.
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7th Jan 2024 12:22pm
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7th Jan 2024 4:59am
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12th Jan 2024 3:27am
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7th Jan 2024 7:12am
"With you
There’s no more wondering why
Only butterflies"
The flutter of joyful anticipation is preferable to questioning apprehension. Glad you have found this contentment.
There’s no more wondering why
Only butterflies"
The flutter of joyful anticipation is preferable to questioning apprehension. Glad you have found this contentment.
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7th Jan 2024 12:24pm
Thank you, Sir Solomon.
I am content and a whole bunch of other amazing, wonderful things.
I am content and a whole bunch of other amazing, wonderful things.
Re. New Love
7th Jan 2024 11:55pm
Re. New Love
8th Jan 2024 11:54am
..and butterflies are beautiful. A perfect poem for the story being told.
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9th Jan 2024 12:15pm
Thank you, Thor
Butterflies and giddiness, all so very new to me. He’s got me feeling 16 again, lol.
Butterflies and giddiness, all so very new to me. He’s got me feeling 16 again, lol.
Re. New Love
8th Jan 2024 2:28pm
Love the butterfly feeling of love conveyed in this. Purely open & fluttering tummy & beating hearts
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9th Jan 2024 12:16pm
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10th Jan 2024 5:51am
Dear H,
It’s a relief to me to know that love like this can exist. When I think back to my own experiences I was such a loser 🙄
Im digging your rhyming vibe. Such a gift. H🌷
It’s a relief to me to know that love like this can exist. When I think back to my own experiences I was such a loser 🙄
Im digging your rhyming vibe. Such a gift. H🌷
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11th Jan 2024 4:46pm