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Untamable
I don't live for you,
Don't you dare tell me what to do you don't own me.
I will make this known far and wide that I'm the one that controls my life.
I'll strive to be whoever I want to be,
I'll be myself,
I will do me,
I'll let you do you.
Just let me be me.
I'm uncontainable,
I'm unbreakable,
I'm untamable.
I am the beholder of my own destiny,
I need to be who I want be and not another copy.
I need to make mistakes just to learn who I am and I don't want to be so damn protected.
I want to be respected,
live my life uncorrected,
And live unprotected.
Don't treat me like a child!,
I dream dreams that are wild and out of this world,
I follow my own beat as I lead my own path.
I'm uncontainable,
I'm unbreakable,
I'm untamable.
Don't you dare tell me what to do you don't own me.
I will make this known far and wide that I'm the one that controls my life.
I'll strive to be whoever I want to be,
I'll be myself,
I will do me,
I'll let you do you.
Just let me be me.
I'm uncontainable,
I'm unbreakable,
I'm untamable.
I am the beholder of my own destiny,
I need to be who I want be and not another copy.
I need to make mistakes just to learn who I am and I don't want to be so damn protected.
I want to be respected,
live my life uncorrected,
And live unprotected.
Don't treat me like a child!,
I dream dreams that are wild and out of this world,
I follow my own beat as I lead my own path.
I'm uncontainable,
I'm unbreakable,
I'm untamable.
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Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 7:10am
"I am the beholder of my own destiny,
I need to be who I want be and not another copy.
I need to make mistakes just to learn who I am and I don't want to be so damn protected."
~sheer power of a strong-souled warrior woman and wild child wrapped in one..
this is a lovely independence.. good that you Know your worth. may it take you everywhere you wanna go!
be well.. enjoyed your thoughts ;)
~d
I need to be who I want be and not another copy.
I need to make mistakes just to learn who I am and I don't want to be so damn protected."
~sheer power of a strong-souled warrior woman and wild child wrapped in one..
this is a lovely independence.. good that you Know your worth. may it take you everywhere you wanna go!
be well.. enjoyed your thoughts ;)
~d
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Re: Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 10:38pm
Thank you darksighs, that's how I wanted the reader to feel when reading this.
Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 10:41am
The power that radiated from this poem is amazing. It's fierce & carries a confrontational tone that makes the reader feel like "whoa, you got it" Lol
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Re: Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 10:39pm
Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 5:26pm
Hi Rocky,
This one is awesome, powerful and heartfelt. I love the assertive tone " dont you dare".. You write beautifully as always,
Thank you for this one Rocky!! Tis to following the beat of your own drum
This one is awesome, powerful and heartfelt. I love the assertive tone " dont you dare".. You write beautifully as always,
Thank you for this one Rocky!! Tis to following the beat of your own drum
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Re: Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 10:34pm
Thank you mocha
I wanted to write something about being original and able to be in control of my own life
I wanted to write something about being original and able to be in control of my own life
Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 10:21pm
Damn Ms. Jackson.. wish i could write music.. this is so catchy.. would be great to hear you sing this one.. your ink bleeds attitude.. and it just pours out in your words.. really dig this one.. but it reminds me of old school attitude.. in the likes of, Janet Jackson, or Madonna.. or a beautiful combination of both.. great ink.. into the list it goes.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 10:28pm
Wow really like Janet Jackson & Madonna?! :D
I didn't think it was that good, but I guess it is if it reminds you about good old school attitude.
I guess I had a strong influence from old school music from Michael Jackson to James Brown and Janet Jackson to Madonna and Selena.
I didn't think it was that good, but I guess it is if it reminds you about good old school attitude.
I guess I had a strong influence from old school music from Michael Jackson to James Brown and Janet Jackson to Madonna and Selena.
Re: Re. Untamable
7th Aug 2015 11:21pm
Ms. Jackson.. i think so.. love James Brown, and old Motown.. I'm a metal/rock guy.. but love all music.. But that element is alive in you.. i feel it.. Janet, Madonna, James, Michael.. and even older.. A little, Aretha Franklin, the Supremes.. Al Green, Bobby Womack, Teddy Pendergrass, Otis Redding, Stevie Wonder, maybe even some Ray Charles.. i feel deep roots in what you do.. much thanks for sharing.. and don't change.. your soul is very deep.. and it bleeds attitude.. embrace that part of yourself.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re. Untamable
8th Aug 2015 10:29am
Strong powerful piece that roars against conformity and control great piece also don't know if you noticed but accidentally forgot to add the un to the containable part in the end (or you might have done that on purpose I don't know) anywho keep up the great work
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