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Banshee
Hearing singing from afar
Brings this simple traveler to tears
Must explore this lovely voice
To pay my compliments to her gift
I see a wondrous nude goddess
The sight of a beauty I never seen
Long hair that touches her bottom and eyes of the bluish ocean
Her skin smooth and flawless
She continues singing as I say “excuse me miss”
I walk closer and repeat myself “excuse me miss!”
Putting my hand on her shoulder she stops and looks away
I look down and see a dead body, look up to see her facing me
Saying “who did this?!”
She opens her mouth and releases her pipes
This time a sound of a horrid scream
Covering my ears but it doesn’t help; I pass out from the pain
I awake chained to a wall in a dusty cave
Both of us naked with her thrusting against me
This is like a dream, the feeling of her warm pussy
A slave to her desires… well I could get used to this
Thrusting hard with her hips, they quiver with each movement
Looking up into my eyes with her mouth wide, bringing her lips against mine
Gushing wet covers my dick and flows down her leg
She lets out a shivered gasp as my cum shoots inside
Giving me a smile, she steps back and touches her pussy
Playing with the outside cum she says “baby, please be a baby”
I am in shock and fear as I wish to just get out of there
“Please miss let me go!” She grabs a knife, walks towards me then pushes it into my heart
Brings this simple traveler to tears
Must explore this lovely voice
To pay my compliments to her gift
I see a wondrous nude goddess
The sight of a beauty I never seen
Long hair that touches her bottom and eyes of the bluish ocean
Her skin smooth and flawless
She continues singing as I say “excuse me miss”
I walk closer and repeat myself “excuse me miss!”
Putting my hand on her shoulder she stops and looks away
I look down and see a dead body, look up to see her facing me
Saying “who did this?!”
She opens her mouth and releases her pipes
This time a sound of a horrid scream
Covering my ears but it doesn’t help; I pass out from the pain
I awake chained to a wall in a dusty cave
Both of us naked with her thrusting against me
This is like a dream, the feeling of her warm pussy
A slave to her desires… well I could get used to this
Thrusting hard with her hips, they quiver with each movement
Looking up into my eyes with her mouth wide, bringing her lips against mine
Gushing wet covers my dick and flows down her leg
She lets out a shivered gasp as my cum shoots inside
Giving me a smile, she steps back and touches her pussy
Playing with the outside cum she says “baby, please be a baby”
I am in shock and fear as I wish to just get out of there
“Please miss let me go!” She grabs a knife, walks towards me then pushes it into my heart
Published 25th Feb 2015
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25th Feb 2015 7:03pm
Well...that a hot and crazy write, D. I suppose there are worse ways to go....
25th Feb 2015 7:08pm
25th Feb 2015 7:11pm
Fighting off 200 warriors with just a sward then killing myself at the end.
Saving the world from a comet like Armageddon ;-)
Saving the world from a comet like Armageddon ;-)
25th Feb 2015 7:13pm
Great first four stanzas
even wilder from there on in
you just went with the flow of the pen
worked well xD
even wilder from there on in
you just went with the flow of the pen
worked well xD
25th Feb 2015 7:17pm
Thanks Rose. This write went very fast. I love writing about mythical creatures. :-)
25th Feb 2015 7:22pm
Fast can be quite productive
often if i linger too long on a line it doesnt work as well as
when I write quickly my thoughts just flowing
often if i linger too long on a line it doesnt work as well as
when I write quickly my thoughts just flowing
25th Feb 2015 7:26pm
25th Feb 2015 7:14pm
Crazy write, DC.. but nicely done.. if this is number 3, then 1 would have to be heaven.. clever ink, young blood..
Dave
Dave
25th Feb 2015 7:18pm
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26th Feb 2015 7:03am
I'm a big fan of mystical creatures too :-)
Glad they're not real though, lol.
Glad they're not real though, lol.
Anonymous
26th Feb 2015 00:50am
I like this! don't take this the wrong way, but this makes me want to be the banshee in the poem lol
26th Feb 2015 7:44am
I rather be the guy. Its a great way to die, lol. Though the girl does get the sex and lives so i guess she wins ;-)
26th Feb 2015 4:21am
wow i like it i just hope her pussy was made of gold or something like that. lol good job
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