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My muse is here
It rains in my heart
Like tears on the city
Quelle est cette langueur?
Qui pénètre mon cœur?
Just a smile from you
Enlightens my soul
Un sourire de vous
Je suis comme saoul
What is this sudden happiness
Who illuminates my goddess
The sky is blue, my love is here
She is my muse and I love her
Published 12th Feb 2014
| Edited 13th Feb 2014
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12th Feb 2014 2:22pm
"My muse is here and I love you"
No word to describe but "cute"
Lovely write.
No word to describe but "cute"
Lovely write.
12th Feb 2014 2:32pm
13th Feb 2014 1:23am
I love it!!! My muse is here too and I feel the happiness same as you..... :)
Thank you for capturing in words how I happen to feel also...... Very beautiful expression of love... :) <3
Thank you for capturing in words how I happen to feel also...... Very beautiful expression of love... :) <3
13th Feb 2014 2:08am
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- Edited 13th Feb 2014 11:23pm
13th Feb 2014 11:22pm
The 3 stanzas seem much better and I Iike the fact that it concentrates on the message itself, the love for muse.
Now I see what you mean about the rhyme in second stanza, you -vous, soul-saoul :)
Very nice!
Now I see what you mean about the rhyme in second stanza, you -vous, soul-saoul :)
Very nice!
14th Feb 2014 8:34am
