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magichearts
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 1:49am
1st Mar 2025 1:49am
महकने दो कियारियों में लगे फूलों को
इस हंगामे मे अंदाज़-ए-गदर इनका अनोखा हैं !
इस हंगामे मे अंदाज़-ए-गदर इनका अनोखा हैं !
#healing
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0 Comments
SweetBobbyBlu
Easin On In
Easin On In
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 4:32pm
28th Feb 2025 4:32pm
Heat
#dirty
#erotic
#porn #sex
#porn #sex
81 reads
0 Comments
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:59pm
27th Feb 2025 1:59pm
Macey May
When I was around seven years old, my mom would take us kids to her boyfriends house, who ended up becoming my step dad eventually. While she was inside visiting him, I would take off and wonder the woods, looking for flying squirrels and turtles, flipping over rocks in the creek, hunting for salamanders. That is until one day during the visit, I noticed new neighbors moving in next door, and there she stood, brown messy hair, kinda short, and had alot of bothers just like myself. As she turned her head, we made eye contact and both of us smiled, she waved and I watched as she ran up to her...
#kindness
56 reads
2 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 10:41am
27th Feb 2025 10:41am
Guess You Had To Be There
It is I, once again. Who want’s a story? If you wanna hear one, I have a funny one. To me it’s funny, anyways. You all might be reading this and shaking your heads. Thinking to yourselves, “Damian’s gonna try comedy again, run for the hills before he gets started.”
I never promised good comedy, folks. For some reason a, Joey G, story popped in my head today and I started laughing out loud. So, I thought I’d share.
First off, he a self-confessed hypochondriac. I mean if he goes down a rabbit hole, hears about a health scare, it puts him on edge.
...
I never promised good comedy, folks. For some reason a, Joey G, story popped in my head today and I started laughing out loud. So, I thought I’d share.
First off, he a self-confessed hypochondriac. I mean if he goes down a rabbit hole, hears about a health scare, it puts him on edge.
...
#prose
119 reads
20 Comments
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 9:50am
26th Feb 2025 9:50am
Flash Back
My mom's at the point within her fight against cancer where her body looks like skin laid over bone. So it's easy to forget all the chaos of my childhood even more when I look at her. My heart continually aches for her, but for a moment yesterday, I found my patience quickly wear thin as she chatted with other family members that had come to visit, reminiscing on what her kids were like as we grew up.
My aunt was talking about disciplining out of control kids, to which my mom looks at her and says, " I never had to lay a hand on my kids."
I felt this tiny burn inside...
My aunt was talking about disciplining out of control kids, to which my mom looks at her and says, " I never had to lay a hand on my kids."
I felt this tiny burn inside...
#forgiveness
#strength
73 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 1:03am
26th Feb 2025 1:03am
Progressive Rock Scene In France
During the mid to late 1960's the world was changing. The younger generation was fed up & angry with the government and the Vietnam War. In the US & UK numerous psychedelic rock bands began to emerge. This hippie movement was gaining momentum and spreading their message with music. Bands like the Jefferson Airplane, The Grateful Dead, The Vanilla Fudge, King Crimson, Donovan, Cream, The Soft Machine, Pink Floyd, and countless others began touring at home and abroad. Many of these acts began performing in smaller venues in Holland, Germany, Italy and France.
Similar to the...
Similar to the...
#music
#nonfiction
#PopCulture
66 reads
12 Comments
SweetBobbyBlu
Easin On In
Easin On In
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 6:41pm
25th Feb 2025 6:41pm
Have I Ever Tried Anal?
#dirty
#erotic
#lust #sex
#lust #sex
61 reads
0 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 1:13pm
25th Feb 2025 1:13pm
Escape from this Afterlife
I
There is an interview with American billionaire,
Bob Bigelow, where he confidently and
matter-of-factly talks about the afterlife, a
confidence that comes from a lifetime of
funding:
Studies into the paranormal.
His motivation stems from losing loved ones.
He wanted to make contact with them.
He wanted to know that they lived on.
II
On another interview, with 60 minutes, he tells
Lesley Stahl or somebody:
“Aliens exist. They are right under our noses.
I don’t give a...
There is an interview with American billionaire,
Bob Bigelow, where he confidently and
matter-of-factly talks about the afterlife, a
confidence that comes from a lifetime of
funding:
Studies into the paranormal.
His motivation stems from losing loved ones.
He wanted to make contact with them.
He wanted to know that they lived on.
II
On another interview, with 60 minutes, he tells
Lesley Stahl or somebody:
“Aliens exist. They are right under our noses.
I don’t give a...
#shadows
23 reads
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Cipher_O
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 1:13pm
25th Feb 2025 1:13pm
Escape from this Afterlife (Part 2&3 of 3)
Escape from this Afterlife (Part 2 of 3)
I
Imagine waking up with amnesia in a world
you do not recognize or know anything about.
You begin to study this world and notice
that there is something inside of you that
constantly alludes to there being more
than meets the eye.
You look deeper, receiving confirmations
of your suspicions.
But only as transitory signs in the corner
of your eye.
II
They tell you that there is a spectrum of
systems, from science to religion, which ...
I
Imagine waking up with amnesia in a world
you do not recognize or know anything about.
You begin to study this world and notice
that there is something inside of you that
constantly alludes to there being more
than meets the eye.
You look deeper, receiving confirmations
of your suspicions.
But only as transitory signs in the corner
of your eye.
II
They tell you that there is a spectrum of
systems, from science to religion, which ...
#shadows
27 reads
0 Comments
SweetBobbyBlu
Easin On In
Easin On In
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 5:15pm
24th Feb 2025 5:15pm
The Panty Drop
#dirty
#erotic
#sex
112 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
In Musk, Should We Trust??
Zombified Society
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
#CallToAction
#dystopian
#manipulation
#scifi
#technology
58 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 10:50am
24th Feb 2025 10:50am
And We All Pay The Price
Grand designs no mere mortal understands
Shaping the future for ages to come
We are the instruments in death and treachery
False flag paranoia order of the day
They always know better than you and I
And they designate
Who to terminate
In silence subjugate
Opposition decimate
Know not 'til it's too late
Remote control decide fate
Visions of a new world they create
The war is lost before it starts
We stand no chance
Most won't even know it's on
Don't try to resist
Elite made...
Shaping the future for ages to come
We are the instruments in death and treachery
False flag paranoia order of the day
They always know better than you and I
And they designate
Who to terminate
In silence subjugate
Opposition decimate
Know not 'til it's too late
Remote control decide fate
Visions of a new world they create
The war is lost before it starts
We stand no chance
Most won't even know it's on
Don't try to resist
Elite made...
#conflict
#dystopian
#fate
#nonfiction
#politics
73 reads
12 Comments
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