Poems About Water Seeking Honest Critique
#water
Poems about water seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Oh, My God! Where's My Bikini?!
After taking a
cool swim, Jennifer ran back
to the beach and sat right down.
That was before she
looked at her sweaty naked
body and screamed her lungs out.
cool swim, Jennifer ran back
to the beach and sat right down.
That was before she
looked at her sweaty naked
body and screamed her lungs out.
#beach
#water
#fiction
#sports
#sensual
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What Is My Fiancé Doing At The Playboy Mansion?
Greg sneaked into the
grotto to watch three hot chicks
swimming naked in the pool.
But that was before
one of the chicks looked at Greg
and he saw that it was Jo.
grotto to watch three hot chicks
swimming naked in the pool.
But that was before
one of the chicks looked at Greg
and he saw that it was Jo.
#water
#fiction
#mystery
#sensual
#deception
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Journal December
She wants the bite of slick country memories,
to drive over county lines, take that long hike
--
A place that greens far from dark whiskey,
another space foreseen she'd lose sense of time.
It's the hue of wide pine rows, the crag, small leat
that leaks from aloft and bleeds off a hill.
It's the ache after walking,
the weight of her kit,
the scent of still mist
evaporating from land.
It's the quiet, an ice
that kisses each freckle
and reminds still muscles
to be steady but roam.
...
to drive over county lines, take that long hike
--
A place that greens far from dark whiskey,
another space foreseen she'd lose sense of time.
It's the hue of wide pine rows, the crag, small leat
that leaks from aloft and bleeds off a hill.
It's the ache after walking,
the weight of her kit,
the scent of still mist
evaporating from land.
It's the quiet, an ice
that kisses each freckle
and reminds still muscles
to be steady but roam.
...
#home
#water
#nature
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Ocean Breeze
I felt the ocean breeze.
I breathe in the scent of beach sand.
And I try not to sneeze.
With birds flying in the sky.
I make a sandcastle and don't ask why.
Fish swimming,with dolphins,wild and free.
With the ice cold water,despite the hot weather.
As you go in it with a group of friends.
You play together as kids and make amends.
The sun shines on your face.
The moon controls the tide at night with grace.
You look at it whatsoever with a wondering face.
Personally,I always found the ocean soothing.
With...
I breathe in the scent of beach sand.
And I try not to sneeze.
With birds flying in the sky.
I make a sandcastle and don't ask why.
Fish swimming,with dolphins,wild and free.
With the ice cold water,despite the hot weather.
As you go in it with a group of friends.
You play together as kids and make amends.
The sun shines on your face.
The moon controls the tide at night with grace.
You look at it whatsoever with a wondering face.
Personally,I always found the ocean soothing.
With...
#sea
#water
#nature
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My Scorpion King (Mm..Softly Levitating)
Flipping the covers back licking my fingers than sliding them inside my kitty cat
I felt a soft caress to my cheek
Where virtual and reality has come to meet
I heard you summoning for me
Tonight my back arched, mm.. you will taste of thee
Kisses to my clit… my eyes in rapid eye movement
The feel of his tongue swirling over my soft folds, this is meant
Dazing me in my slumber
He’s winter and I’m summer
He plays my mind likes he’s savored my passion in the fifth wonder
He leaned...
I felt a soft caress to my cheek
Where virtual and reality has come to meet
I heard you summoning for me
Tonight my back arched, mm.. you will taste of thee
Kisses to my clit… my eyes in rapid eye movement
The feel of his tongue swirling over my soft folds, this is meant
Dazing me in my slumber
He’s winter and I’m summer
He plays my mind likes he’s savored my passion in the fifth wonder
He leaned...
#war
#water
#lover
#seductive
#sun
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The Depths
Sometimes I am afraid of water.
When it's cold and dark.
Deep and mysterious.
When I don't know what is lurking beneath me.
Sometimes I am afraid of water.
When I am in a dream and see the shark circling.
When it's clear that
I have nowhere to escape.
Sometimes I am afraid of water.
When it's too hot and I feel like I will faint.
When I remember my mother putting me in the bathtub.
When all I could see was the steam rising and I screamed as my feet touched the surface.
When I can't remember anything after that.
...
When it's cold and dark.
Deep and mysterious.
When I don't know what is lurking beneath me.
Sometimes I am afraid of water.
When I am in a dream and see the shark circling.
When it's clear that
I have nowhere to escape.
Sometimes I am afraid of water.
When it's too hot and I feel like I will faint.
When I remember my mother putting me in the bathtub.
When all I could see was the steam rising and I screamed as my feet touched the surface.
When I can't remember anything after that.
...
#water
#SelfReflection
#fear
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With Hopes Of Getting A Cool Down From The Summertime Heat
Soon as Gary walked to the
outdoor shower, his eyes grew wide
at Natalie standing nude.
outdoor shower, his eyes grew wide
at Natalie standing nude.
#friendship
#summer
#water
#fiction
#sensual
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Do You Have Time For One More Skinny Dip?
Paula
had put her
jeans on
but saw John naked
with her top in one
hand and pointing at
lake with
the other
bare hand.
had put her
jeans on
but saw John naked
with her top in one
hand and pointing at
lake with
the other
bare hand.
#friendship
#beach
#water
#fiction
#sensual
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umbrella rain
No. 4 from The Children’s Collection]
“Rain never understands why people hide under their umbrellas!
Let us make a surprise to the rain by closing our umbrellas!”
–Mehmet Murat Ildan
i'm not afraid of walking in the rain,
although some folk may grumble and complain;
i like to feel rain rhythms on my face,
as shoulder to shoulder to earth they race.
my brother showed me how to drink the rain
by lolling out my tongue, and how to crane
my neck until my face was parallel
with where the...
“Rain never understands why people hide under their umbrellas!
Let us make a surprise to the rain by closing our umbrellas!”
–Mehmet Murat Ildan
i'm not afraid of walking in the rain,
although some folk may grumble and complain;
i like to feel rain rhythms on my face,
as shoulder to shoulder to earth they race.
my brother showed me how to drink the rain
by lolling out my tongue, and how to crane
my neck until my face was parallel
with where the...
#childhood
#sky
#rain
#water
#funny
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What Are You Guys Looking At?
After she got done
with swimming in the pool, Gwen
saw some guys staring at her.
That was before Gwen
saw that her Pepsi top was
wet and she had no bra on.
with swimming in the pool, Gwen
saw some guys staring at her.
That was before Gwen
saw that her Pepsi top was
wet and she had no bra on.
#beauty
#home
#water
#fiction
#sensual
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Scene casting 1
In the village, scarcely a mile from a city,
where fumes of cars seem less apparent,
where stars are more visible, the freckles of space,
the nicotiana lingers,
opens pale petals ready
to greet the bleak Moon.
An Atlas moth will hover,
wings half dipping,
dripping in shadows,
partially exposed.
The streetlight will lean,
over a pea-green rover,
made somewhere between
nineteen fifty-eight and seventy-three.
The man who drives it is quiet,
Scottish, five nine,
walks a Red Setter
with sunset to...
where fumes of cars seem less apparent,
where stars are more visible, the freckles of space,
the nicotiana lingers,
opens pale petals ready
to greet the bleak Moon.
An Atlas moth will hover,
wings half dipping,
dripping in shadows,
partially exposed.
The streetlight will lean,
over a pea-green rover,
made somewhere between
nineteen fifty-eight and seventy-three.
The man who drives it is quiet,
Scottish, five nine,
walks a Red Setter
with sunset to...
#home
#dogs
#night #water
#night #water
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Some Chick In The Lake
After finding some
clothes on the ground,
Scott spotted the
emergence of some
chick in the lake.
But while he stared
at her fairy wings, she
turned and saw him.
clothes on the ground,
Scott spotted the
emergence of some
chick in the lake.
But while he stared
at her fairy wings, she
turned and saw him.
#water
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#fairies
#sensual
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DU Poetry : Poems About Water Seeking Honest Critique