Poems About Water Seeking Honest Critique
#water
Poems about water seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sacred Waters
I do so long to know
the ways of the wise Pueblo
all these secrets they unveil
along every bare sagebrush trail
Carving this poetry into the hills
doing what their spirit then wills
high above this field below
with its patchwork of icy snow
For there is harmony in the breeze
carried down from mountained trees
filling the wintered desert air
with a symphony beyond compare
As I make my lone steady way
on this ordinary holy day
to these hot sacred springs
in search of any healing each...
the ways of the wise Pueblo
all these secrets they unveil
along every bare sagebrush trail
Carving this poetry into the hills
doing what their spirit then wills
high above this field below
with its patchwork of icy snow
For there is harmony in the breeze
carried down from mountained trees
filling the wintered desert air
with a symphony beyond compare
As I make my lone steady way
on this ordinary holy day
to these hot sacred springs
in search of any healing each...
#water
#spiritual
#confessional
#culture
#tradition
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10 Comments
Haiku #15
The full moon shines
Reflects in the calm water
Crows are silent
Reflects in the calm water
Crows are silent
#birds
#moon
#night
#water
#nature
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Forensic water
As I breathe autonomously
I slip through the vengeance
Of her belittled sentiment
I want to move forward
Envy is the begging of cancer
You can treat it by burning it
With laser treatment
Maybe that's why she's forensic
I'm forensic because my lust
For art is a second tongue
That bilingually makes me laugh
At times when needed
Ever think of times when you've been
Forensic like water that shimmers
On your body as you qualify
For been a star in this rock n roll lipcurl
For he is forensic,...
I slip through the vengeance
Of her belittled sentiment
I want to move forward
Envy is the begging of cancer
You can treat it by burning it
With laser treatment
Maybe that's why she's forensic
I'm forensic because my lust
For art is a second tongue
That bilingually makes me laugh
At times when needed
Ever think of times when you've been
Forensic like water that shimmers
On your body as you qualify
For been a star in this rock n roll lipcurl
For he is forensic,...
#anger
#lust
#water
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Winter Brook
It always makes me take a look
this cold icy winter brook
echoing its old sound
across the snow muffled ground
Soothing in rhythm and rhyme
taking me to another time
when water was the way
when poetry truly had its say
So, I follow the clear flow
going where it wants to go
always ever downstream
ever deeper within dream
But to the very same place
where I can finally face
the lessons it will teach
make its wisdom within reach
Until it is time for me to leave
knowing no one can deceive...
this cold icy winter brook
echoing its old sound
across the snow muffled ground
Soothing in rhythm and rhyme
taking me to another time
when water was the way
when poetry truly had its say
So, I follow the clear flow
going where it wants to go
always ever downstream
ever deeper within dream
But to the very same place
where I can finally face
the lessons it will teach
make its wisdom within reach
Until it is time for me to leave
knowing no one can deceive...
#winter
#water
#nature
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
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long night weeping
There is a certain pleasure in weeping; grief finds in tears
both a satisfaction and a cure.”—Ovid
the tireless rain,
the endless weeping of the dark and sullen skies,
flooding again
the aquifers that brim my red and swollen eyes;
sorrows full bred,
disconsolate, the clouds that feed my sateless lake,
unsnug in bed,
yet dreading how to face the day when i awake.
wherefore these tears
that heave the bosom of my slumbrous, starless night?
what are your fears:
are not my songs sufficient for a guiding light?
give...
both a satisfaction and a cure.”—Ovid
the tireless rain,
the endless weeping of the dark and sullen skies,
flooding again
the aquifers that brim my red and swollen eyes;
sorrows full bred,
disconsolate, the clouds that feed my sateless lake,
unsnug in bed,
yet dreading how to face the day when i awake.
wherefore these tears
that heave the bosom of my slumbrous, starless night?
what are your fears:
are not my songs sufficient for a guiding light?
give...
#sadness
#heartbroken
#rain
#night
#water
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The Awe Of A Winter Wonderland
Unto the barren what dreams become bare by the absence of trees
Where fantasies are found in dreams as we atrial in the subconscious of our sleep
Snowcapped mountains as far as the eyes can see
Polar bears swimming in the depth of the frigid oceans just as easy as breeze
Their time of the season as human huddle under blankets for Winter’s cold hibernation
As the Artic fox roam in search of prey or be consumed by the nature victor’s starvation
Enjoy your presence upon the Earth and surround yourself with love
The blanket of the Winter season is...
Where fantasies are found in dreams as we atrial in the subconscious of our sleep
Snowcapped mountains as far as the eyes can see
Polar bears swimming in the depth of the frigid oceans just as easy as breeze
Their time of the season as human huddle under blankets for Winter’s cold hibernation
As the Artic fox roam in search of prey or be consumed by the nature victor’s starvation
Enjoy your presence upon the Earth and surround yourself with love
The blanket of the Winter season is...
#sun
#winter
#water #lover
#water #lover
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A Beach Combing Distraction
Joey
was playing
a game
of volleyball on
the beach before he
saw Karen coming
out of
the water
right there.
was playing
a game
of volleyball on
the beach before he
saw Karen coming
out of
the water
right there.
#friendship
#beauty
#beach
#water
#fiction
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The Realm of Golden Beams and Gentle Caresses
In the realm where golden beams ignite,
Passion's fervent chase, ablaze with light.
Cheeks stained with crimson, yearning's plea,
A flush of ardor, soul's awakening, set free.
A gentle caress of water's embrace,
Delights that shiver, veiling truths in grace.
A stream of dreams, a whispering flow,
Stirring depths within, where secrets glow.
Savor the freedom, the sea's reign untamed,
Gliding through depths, liberation unchained.
With each stroke, unravel the unknown,
Leaving ripples of longing, passion sown.
Recline,...
Passion's fervent chase, ablaze with light.
Cheeks stained with crimson, yearning's plea,
A flush of ardor, soul's awakening, set free.
A gentle caress of water's embrace,
Delights that shiver, veiling truths in grace.
A stream of dreams, a whispering flow,
Stirring depths within, where secrets glow.
Savor the freedom, the sea's reign untamed,
Gliding through depths, liberation unchained.
With each stroke, unravel the unknown,
Leaving ripples of longing, passion sown.
Recline,...
#summer
#fire
#water
#sensual
#seductive
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Brian Spotted A Blonde In Microbikini
After walking to
the pool, Brian spotted a
blonde in microbikini.
After she smiled and
said "hi", the alarm went off
and woke Brian from that dream.
the pool, Brian spotted a
blonde in microbikini.
After she smiled and
said "hi", the alarm went off
and woke Brian from that dream.
#dreams
#water
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
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Quite A Scorcher. Is It?
"Quite a
scorcher. Is
it?" was
what Jessica said
after Keith spotted
her sitting naked
and next
to the pool
outside.
scorcher. Is
it?" was
what Jessica said
after Keith spotted
her sitting naked
and next
to the pool
outside.
#friendship
#summer
#water
#fiction
#sensual
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Staring At Her From The Back Porch
Maggie
was in the
middle
of swimming naked
before she saw Jeff
staring at her from
the back
porch which was
next door.
was in the
middle
of swimming naked
before she saw Jeff
staring at her from
the back
porch which was
next door.
#friendship
#home
#water
#fiction
#sensual
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Oh, My God! Where's My Bikini?!
After taking a
cool swim, Jennifer ran back
to the beach and sat right down.
That was before she
looked at her sweaty naked
body and screamed her lungs out.
cool swim, Jennifer ran back
to the beach and sat right down.
That was before she
looked at her sweaty naked
body and screamed her lungs out.
#beach
#water
#fiction
#sports
#sensual
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DU Poetry : Poems About Water Seeking Honest Critique