Tanka Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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AmyMMosier
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:53am
Yesterday 3:53am
Her voice resonates
Her voice resonates
Strongly in my delighted ear;
My soul smiles -
As if she'd not died years ago
And been shut away in a wall ...
Strongly in my delighted ear;
My soul smiles -
As if she'd not died years ago
And been shut away in a wall ...
#tanka
32 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 4:23am
7th Feb 2025 4:23am
As A Result Of Attending Wyatt's Bash
On one Sunday, Kim
woke up and discovered that
she was naked and
hungover as a result
of attending Wyatt's bash.
woke up and discovered that
she was naked and
hungover as a result
of attending Wyatt's bash.
#alcohol
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
53 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 8:47pm
1st Feb 2025 8:47pm
Well? I Need To Do Something To Cool Off.
After looking all
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
#beach
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#tanka
87 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 1:58pm
26th Jan 2025 1:58pm
Shocked At The Sight Of Her Mother
Holly became shocked
at the sight of her mother
naked and getting
probed from behind by her kid
brother Toby and his rod.
at the sight of her mother
naked and getting
probed from behind by her kid
brother Toby and his rod.
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
103 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 7:56pm
25th Jan 2025 7:56pm
Asked To Come To Work Tomorrow
Jonathan called the
office and asked to come to
work tomorrow for
he and Barbara are both
nude and humping each other.
office and asked to come to
work tomorrow for
he and Barbara are both
nude and humping each other.
#deception
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
102 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
Cheating On Her Husband The Audio Way
Roberta made sure
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
120 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
You Couldn't Wait For Me. Could You?
Ashley went into
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#tanka
#threesome
111 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 11:33am
19th Jan 2025 11:33am
After We Got In The Cabin
After we got in
the cabin and found ourselves
isolated by
the snow, the girls and I stripped
and hump each other right there.
the cabin and found ourselves
isolated by
the snow, the girls and I stripped
and hump each other right there.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#tanka
#winter
123 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:38am
14th Jan 2025 3:38am
We Should Stay In Here
I agree with you
that we should stay in here and
let it snow
outside as long as we're both
warm and humping on this bed.
that we should stay in here and
let it snow
outside as long as we're both
warm and humping on this bed.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#tanka
#winter
168 reads
2 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 00:53am
12th Jan 2025 00:53am
Polar
As your air frostbites
tears form with the overflow;
shaping icicles
from the emotions that rage
in the chambers of my heart.
tears form with the overflow;
shaping icicles
from the emotions that rage
in the chambers of my heart.
#heartbroken
#sadness
#tanka
34 reads
16 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
Like What You See?
Jeff was hiking in
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
#fiction
#love
#river
#sex
#tanka
110 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 7:54pm
3rd Jan 2025 7:54pm
This Is What I Realized On The Beach
After spotting some
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
67 reads
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