Poems About Strength Seeking Honest Critique
#strength
Poems about strength seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Hashman
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 12:27pm
21st Mar 2025 12:27pm
I Can...I Will
My heart is full
But sometimes...
my soul feels so empty.
What is there?
Who am I?
Why should I care?
sometimes my soul
floats on thin air,
but then I think,
then I remember
"I Got Jesus"
I will rise
I can be
I do matter,
I will make a difference
I will B the difference!
But sometimes...
my soul feels so empty.
What is there?
Who am I?
Why should I care?
sometimes my soul
floats on thin air,
but then I think,
then I remember
"I Got Jesus"
I will rise
I can be
I do matter,
I will make a difference
I will B the difference!
#courage
#love
#strength
98 reads
2 Comments
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 4:29pm
20th Mar 2025 4:29pm
Holding On
Your Majesty,
I had a dream that I was so small in the center of your all mighty hand.
I held on to your one fnger with ten of my own.
Could you hear me crying, begging you to enclose me and stick me in your pocket?
You must have, because you did.
All the while they were tearing at my soul, telling me all the things, well...you heard them too.
Laughing at me, mocking you.
Mocking my faith in you.
But im thankful for your rest, as I slept within your Pavillion, riding by your side, protected from further destruction.
Every once in a while, you...
I had a dream that I was so small in the center of your all mighty hand.
I held on to your one fnger with ten of my own.
Could you hear me crying, begging you to enclose me and stick me in your pocket?
You must have, because you did.
All the while they were tearing at my soul, telling me all the things, well...you heard them too.
Laughing at me, mocking you.
Mocking my faith in you.
But im thankful for your rest, as I slept within your Pavillion, riding by your side, protected from further destruction.
Every once in a while, you...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#love
#redemption
#strength
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 2:00pm
19th Mar 2025 2:00pm
It's alright to cry
Did you know that when we cry alone in the wee hours of the night, we are only releasing our hurt and pain that we feel deeper than deep, as a woman or a man yeah I know that as a man we aren't supposed, to show that part of us, as a man for sure it's not that we are weak, for sure we have our own emotions and genuine feelings just like a woman. For sure it's alright to cry so that we can shed, the deepness of the truth of the pain that comes, with the hurt. BUT yet you shouldn't stay in that moment of regret, for sometimes things just happen for a righteous reason, as sometimes things just...
#anger
#confusion
#courage
#grief
#strength
112 reads
2 Comments
BlkLyrycE
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 6:23am
19th Mar 2025 6:23am
Self Reflection
#anxiety
#emotions
#hope #strength
#hope #strength
56 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 5:43am
19th Mar 2025 5:43am
Resilience, Gratitude and Growth
I - Resilience
If you’re able to
Stay strong through adversity
You will be OK
II - Gratitude
Appreciation
Fosters positivity
Gifting fulfillment
III - Growth
Continued learning
Will emphasize improvement
On your long journey
If you’re able to
Stay strong through adversity
You will be OK
II - Gratitude
Appreciation
Fosters positivity
Gifting fulfillment
III - Growth
Continued learning
Will emphasize improvement
On your long journey
#gratitude
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
125 reads
6 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:20am
19th Mar 2025 3:20am
Unapologetically
I have no filter
fresh outta apologies
I found my inner self
HE roared back
Genuinely told in caution
greet to introductions
no holds claps
or innuendo snap attack
Sarcasm love language #6
Deadpool sharp direct logic
(cut to end words)
slice harsh into explained speech
Sword tongue spoken
biblic Thank you Lord
I’m mirrored so unique its gospel
[Revelation 19:15] PREACH
Greatness dumb to synopsis
is the preferred stood way
to effectively instruct
my professed class of...
fresh outta apologies
I found my inner self
HE roared back
Genuinely told in caution
greet to introductions
no holds claps
or innuendo snap attack
Sarcasm love language #6
Deadpool sharp direct logic
(cut to end words)
slice harsh into explained speech
Sword tongue spoken
biblic Thank you Lord
I’m mirrored so unique its gospel
[Revelation 19:15] PREACH
Greatness dumb to synopsis
is the preferred stood way
to effectively instruct
my professed class of...
#acceptance
#honesty
#myself
#SelfReflection
#strength
116 reads
2 Comments
Sage_6_paths_light
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 7:21am
17th Mar 2025 7:21am
Belief the only truth
Belief its strength is unfathomable
A power that creates
Any truth imaginable.
Danny Giesbrecht
A power that creates
Any truth imaginable.
Danny Giesbrecht
#emotions
#gratitude
#strength
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 11:30am
16th Mar 2025 11:30am
Galadriel's Choice
Silent hope beats in the heart,
mixed with the fear of failure,
for valiance is proven in the art
of preserving loyalty in the behaviour,
when tested amid seductive trials,
the domain of inner strength,
then weakness battles in denial,
seeking excuses, while one repents.
Galadriel stood by the well
that predicts doom of the races.
As if a mirror beyond mere spells,
true teller, not of fortune, but of faces.
She wanted to ignite within
the spark of higher immortality,
not innately, despite all sin,
but...
mixed with the fear of failure,
for valiance is proven in the art
of preserving loyalty in the behaviour,
when tested amid seductive trials,
the domain of inner strength,
then weakness battles in denial,
seeking excuses, while one repents.
Galadriel stood by the well
that predicts doom of the races.
As if a mirror beyond mere spells,
true teller, not of fortune, but of faces.
She wanted to ignite within
the spark of higher immortality,
not innately, despite all sin,
but...
#courage
#determination
#dreams
#JRRTolkien
#strength
92 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 1:27am
16th Mar 2025 1:27am
Soul Music
Red Rover, Red Rover
Send Sally Right Over
where you going
where have you been
hope you're nice and warm
and your heart is full
peace to your mind
and love to your soul ♥♥♥
Send Sally Right Over
where you going
where have you been
hope you're nice and warm
and your heart is full
peace to your mind
and love to your soul ♥♥♥
#love
#strength
98 reads
2 Comments
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 3:07pm
13th Mar 2025 3:07pm
Arms
My slumber fed me with delight, only to awaken my anorexia come morning.
#emotions
#strength
86 reads
3 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 11:29am
9th Mar 2025 11:29am
low tide
retreat
not in defeat
pull back
breathe deep
call it a day
don't listen
to what they say
strength is inside you
years go by
minutes so few
retreat
not in defeat
come back tomorrow
stronger than today
not in defeat
pull back
breathe deep
call it a day
don't listen
to what they say
strength is inside you
years go by
minutes so few
retreat
not in defeat
come back tomorrow
stronger than today
#redemption
#strength
97 reads
2 Comments
Ayu_Shi
Ayushi
Ayushi
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 8:17pm
28th Feb 2025 8:17pm
Hope
Someday we'll get there,
where all imagined, comes true,
someday we'll get there,
when I end my days of rue,
And on that day,
you'll come to me, giddy with a smile,
then there you'll see, there is no me,
but fragments of my mind.
For I am lost, away in thoughts,
that keep me up all day,
for I am gone, somewhere within the dawn,
that help me wither away.
[But maybe, if all goes well]
someday we'll get there,
where all imagined, comes true,
someday we'll get there,
when I end my days of rue.
where all imagined, comes true,
someday we'll get there,
when I end my days of rue,
And on that day,
you'll come to me, giddy with a smile,
then there you'll see, there is no me,
but fragments of my mind.
For I am lost, away in thoughts,
that keep me up all day,
for I am gone, somewhere within the dawn,
that help me wither away.
[But maybe, if all goes well]
someday we'll get there,
where all imagined, comes true,
someday we'll get there,
when I end my days of rue.
#healing
#hope
#strength
67 reads
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