Poems About Snow Seeking Honest Critique
#snow
Ashley_M_Hardy
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 8:44am
6th Feb 2024 8:44am
Ice (Haiku)
Alabaster gleam
Iridescence petrified
Frozen northern lights
Iridescence petrified
Frozen northern lights
#snow
#haiku
186 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2024 2:27am
22nd Jan 2024 2:27am
Better To Stay Warm Than Freezing
You know, it's such
a good thing we
are both naked
in here instead
of being out
in the cold snow.
a good thing we
are both naked
in here instead
of being out
in the cold snow.
#home
#snow
#fiction
#dialogue
#sensual
204 reads
2 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
19th Jan 2024 6:35pm
19th Jan 2024 6:35pm
Snow-white
Free fall
Oh my goodness! I am falling!
Nothing to grab hold on
Petrified with fear
I close my eyes
Mother why did you let me go of?
Zero gravity
No more free falling
But lightweighted floating
I am dancing gracefully
Pirouetting like a ballerina
In my hectagon tutu
Far below
My brothers and sisters
Cover the ground with a
Glistening white blanket
Wait a moment!
I will come and join you!
Oh my goodness! I am falling!
Nothing to grab hold on
Petrified with fear
I close my eyes
Mother why did you let me go of?
Zero gravity
No more free falling
But lightweighted floating
I am dancing gracefully
Pirouetting like a ballerina
In my hectagon tutu
Far below
My brothers and sisters
Cover the ground with a
Glistening white blanket
Wait a moment!
I will come and join you!
#snow
116 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Jan 2024 1:52pm
18th Jan 2024 1:52pm
After We Got Out Of That Winter Storm
It's a good thing we
got out of the snow and back
in the house. We'll just
wait for our wet clothes to dry.
Why are you staring at me?
got out of the snow and back
in the house. We'll just
wait for our wet clothes to dry.
Why are you staring at me?
#snow
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
200 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 4:50pm
8th Jan 2024 4:50pm
Blizzards
because you are the opposite
from my other side
turned inside out
autumn's cold khaki
that clicks below
of the heels
elbows hurt
and hands slip
on door handles
abrasive mouth
kissing the back of my neck
because you are autumn
of my other skin
burned by a blizzard
autumn without shades of blue.
from my other side
turned inside out
autumn's cold khaki
that clicks below
of the heels
elbows hurt
and hands slip
on door handles
abrasive mouth
kissing the back of my neck
because you are autumn
of my other skin
burned by a blizzard
autumn without shades of blue.
#fall
#snow
#mirror
#art
#emotions
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Nov 2023 3:25pm
20th Nov 2023 3:25pm
Who Is That Stupid?
Cody
looked out the
living
room window and saw
somebody walking
in the snow before
asking
"Who is that
stupid?"
looked out the
living
room window and saw
somebody walking
in the snow before
asking
"Who is that
stupid?"
#home
#winter
#nature
#snow
#fiction
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Apr 2023 1:29pm
1st Apr 2023 1:29pm
It Got So Hot In My Apartment
One day, it got so
hot in my apartment
that I had to open
a window and let
the falling snow
hit my bare skin.
hot in my apartment
that I had to open
a window and let
the falling snow
hit my bare skin.
#home
#snow
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
154 reads
4 Comments
jemac
Poem Published
10th Mar 2023 5:59pm
10th Mar 2023 5:59pm
encapsulated
where her journey began
a mystery
wind took her small frame
still full of color
and vibrancy
whimsical flight
soaring
her colors slowly
fading to a golden brown
wing of hope
lifted and swirled
she holds fast to her seed
she is life
having survived a warm
wistful summer
of extravagance
against so much blue
sun kissed
silky with green
let loose
spear in the coolness
of autumn
with no set direction
she flutters ...
a mystery
wind took her small frame
still full of color
and vibrancy
whimsical flight
soaring
her colors slowly
fading to a golden brown
wing of hope
lifted and swirled
she holds fast to her seed
she is life
having survived a warm
wistful summer
of extravagance
against so much blue
sun kissed
silky with green
let loose
spear in the coolness
of autumn
with no set direction
she flutters ...
#inspirational
#nature
#snow #LifeAsAWriter
#snow #LifeAsAWriter
282 reads
10 Comments
Sedic_J_Huxwell
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2023 11:06pm
22nd Jan 2023 11:06pm
Snowland
Snowland
Today is almost over.
Tonight the moon did glow.
Between early morning
and midafternoon,
tomorrow, sometime soon
it will snow.
Darkness passes by,
now all but a few are still asleep.
Outside,
not a sound.
Not a peep.
A soft blanket of white
lay upon the ground.
Snowflakes are falling,
so intricately designed.
Winter is calling.
For some,
it's time to relax and unwind.
Those who sit by the fire and read a book.
Sleds and snowballs,
children play.
So much beauty all...
Today is almost over.
Tonight the moon did glow.
Between early morning
and midafternoon,
tomorrow, sometime soon
it will snow.
Darkness passes by,
now all but a few are still asleep.
Outside,
not a sound.
Not a peep.
A soft blanket of white
lay upon the ground.
Snowflakes are falling,
so intricately designed.
Winter is calling.
For some,
it's time to relax and unwind.
Those who sit by the fire and read a book.
Sleds and snowballs,
children play.
So much beauty all...
#storm
#snow
265 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Nov 2022 6:06pm
24th Nov 2022 6:06pm
Simon Looked Outside
Simon looked outside
and saw the neighborhood kids
having snowball fights.
and saw the neighborhood kids
having snowball fights.
#home
#winter
#snow
#fiction
#senryu
282 reads
0 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
19th Oct 2022 7:14pm
19th Oct 2022 7:14pm
ALL OF FOOD
When I was a young lad
My father would take us to the slopes
To become the greek god versions of ourselves
Over three days we would test our bodies
Then fall in a heap at the doorstep of the Auburn Sizzler
To compete for the tallest mountain of food
The way all of food tasted
After three days skiing
Is how you feel to me
My father would take us to the slopes
To become the greek god versions of ourselves
Over three days we would test our bodies
Then fall in a heap at the doorstep of the Auburn Sizzler
To compete for the tallest mountain of food
The way all of food tasted
After three days skiing
Is how you feel to me
#snow
#food
#sensual
295 reads
2 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
5th Sep 2022 4:15pm
5th Sep 2022 4:15pm
CRADLED & CRUSHED
She hears in my
cradled and crushed
mane the sound
of snow crunching
underfoot
cradled and crushed
mane the sound
of snow crunching
underfoot
#snow
#peace
#meditation
292 reads
2 Comments
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