Poems About Sex Seeking Honest Critique
#sex
Poems about sex seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Not on Christmas Eve...
Not gonna shave my head...
...but not gonna lie in bed...
going to church instead...
of doing you!!!
Praying to God so loud!
My head is saintly bowed!
Shouting it oh so loud...
I'm not sucking it!
Christmas is almost...here!
My morals you can't steer!
Have yourself another beer!
That's all your gonna get!
Tomorrow's another day!
Then maybe you'll get your way!
If I come back to stay...
...with your sorry ass!
Merry Christmas Eve...
...go masturbate loser!
...but not gonna lie in bed...
going to church instead...
of doing you!!!
Praying to God so loud!
My head is saintly bowed!
Shouting it oh so loud...
I'm not sucking it!
Christmas is almost...here!
My morals you can't steer!
Have yourself another beer!
That's all your gonna get!
Tomorrow's another day!
Then maybe you'll get your way!
If I come back to stay...
...with your sorry ass!
Merry Christmas Eve...
...go masturbate loser!
#relationships
#religion
#sex
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Sparing a Life - A soldier's story
She sighed in acceptance as my lips brushed the delicate skin of her collarbone, a tender exploration in a world hardened by hate. My tongue circled the nipple of her breast, round, and round, as if mimicking a childhood game. She held her place, not breathing. I smelled the sweetness of her milk and remembered the soft suckling of her child now asleep in the crib.
The woman I embraced was tangled in the chains of military might neither of us understood. The quiet of her apartment was a sanctuary but battles raged in the distance. In another life, we might have met in the...
The woman I embraced was tangled in the chains of military might neither of us understood. The quiet of her apartment was a sanctuary but battles raged in the distance. In another life, we might have met in the...
#dark
#mother
#sex #war
#sex #war
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TRUTH
An undressed woman
is a form to lay bare
the vulnerable
in myriad colors:
live sensuous delicious
like true sex exposing
naked truths through body
peep into ever
growing consciousness
R K Singh
is a form to lay bare
the vulnerable
in myriad colors:
live sensuous delicious
like true sex exposing
naked truths through body
peep into ever
growing consciousness
R K Singh
#passion
#sex
#temptation
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I Imagine
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sex
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Wonderland Secret
I once hung a garland of white
Protecting me from what goes bump in the night
I once laid a vine of red
Best-laid traps under my bed
Protection from the essence of you
Growling
Snarling
Trying to tear me right through
Gentling the touch
Timid in bravery.
Little did I know
You were not here to save me
Light as the snow
as it flutters
Landing on heated skin
Synchronized breaths
Words spoken with eyes
Knowing without saying
Truth in the cries
The moon will witness the pain
As we...
Protecting me from what goes bump in the night
I once laid a vine of red
Best-laid traps under my bed
Protection from the essence of you
Growling
Snarling
Trying to tear me right through
Gentling the touch
Timid in bravery.
Little did I know
You were not here to save me
Light as the snow
as it flutters
Landing on heated skin
Synchronized breaths
Words spoken with eyes
Knowing without saying
Truth in the cries
The moon will witness the pain
As we...
#dirty
#lover
#passion #sex
#passion #sex
191 reads
25 Comments
Danger on a dark road
#dreams
#erotic
#lover
#porn
#sex
205 reads
24 Comments
A Result Of The New Years Eve Party
New Years Day
finds Jillian waking
up and seeing her robe open and
flashing her naked body before she saw Rob
in the bathroom throwing up as a
result of the New Years
Eve party.
finds Jillian waking
up and seeing her robe open and
flashing her naked body before she saw Rob
in the bathroom throwing up as a
result of the New Years
Eve party.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
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I'm Not A Little Girl Anymore, Dad!
You're always telling
me what to do, Dad!
But no more because
I allowed myself to
pose topless in front
of this photographer
no matter what type
of garbage you keep
on force feeding me!
me what to do, Dad!
But no more because
I allowed myself to
pose topless in front
of this photographer
no matter what type
of garbage you keep
on force feeding me!
#dialogue
#fiction
#freedom
#FreeVerse
#sex
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Traveling Across The Miles By Train
It was while they were
traveling across the miles
by train after spending
Christmas with her family
that Elizabeth and her
roommate Judy got turned
on, stripped down and
kissed and touched each
other all over until they
reached the peak of
orgasm and collapsed.
traveling across the miles
by train after spending
Christmas with her family
that Elizabeth and her
roommate Judy got turned
on, stripped down and
kissed and touched each
other all over until they
reached the peak of
orgasm and collapsed.
#Christmas
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#lesbian
#sex
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She Finds Herself Underneath The Playboy Mansion
Sylvia woke in a grotto.
She's naked with two chicks touching her.
Then, Hugh Hefner walked in.
She's naked with two chicks touching her.
Then, Hugh Hefner walked in.
#confusion
#fiction
#home
#LGBT
#sex
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Lap Dance
First, you grab him and guide him to the couch, pushing him gently until he sits. Drop to your knees, crawling toward him with deliberate, slow movements. As you reach him, slither up his lap, breathing him in before planting a soft kiss on his neck. Whisper, “You’re all I want.”
Slowly, you pull your top over your head, revealing you "forgot" to wear a bra. Taking his face in your hands, you press against him playfully, teasing with your touch. Bite your lip as you pull back, slipping out of your skirt. You keep your panties on, letting your hands trail your body as you...
Slowly, you pull your top over your head, revealing you "forgot" to wear a bra. Taking his face in your hands, you press against him playfully, teasing with your touch. Bite your lip as you pull back, slipping out of your skirt. You keep your panties on, letting your hands trail your body as you...
#erotic
#porn
#seductive
#sex
#sexy
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The Gift That I Had Just Got For You
After seeing that I don't
like being far from home
at Christmas, she lifted
up the sweater she was
wearing and flashed her
naked body before saying
"I hope you like the gift
that I had just got for you."
like being far from home
at Christmas, she lifted
up the sweater she was
wearing and flashed her
naked body before saying
"I hope you like the gift
that I had just got for you."
#Christmas
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
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DU Poetry : Poems About Sex Seeking Honest Critique