Poems About Sex Seeking Honest Critique
#sex
Poems about sex seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Confessions Of A Polite Paparazzi
I really didn't mean to scare them.
I just asked them for a favor.
Got pictures of one position.
Now need some of another.
I just asked them for a favor.
Got pictures of one position.
Now need some of another.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#sex
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1 Comment
Dark symphonics (With Nevermindthegaps)

#dirty
#obsession
#orgasm
#porn
#sex
47 reads
14 Comments
Dark symphonics (with Betty)

#dirty
#orgasm
#porn #sex
#porn #sex
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5 Comments
Lunch Break
Why the Fuck are you not in my bed?
I ran all the way home from work
I get this instead
Not to worry, I have thirty minutes left
Sit on that couch
I will do the rest
What do you mean you feel unwanted, undesired, unclaimed
Boo you are wearing my cuffs
Hanging off a chain. Are you insane?
Now it’s twenty-five minutes, and I got to go
The boss had a meeting
Nobody knows
Come on, just whip it out
I’m juiced and ready to go
No? What is this truly about?
You found what? Where? ...
I ran all the way home from work
I get this instead
Not to worry, I have thirty minutes left
Sit on that couch
I will do the rest
What do you mean you feel unwanted, undesired, unclaimed
Boo you are wearing my cuffs
Hanging off a chain. Are you insane?
Now it’s twenty-five minutes, and I got to go
The boss had a meeting
Nobody knows
Come on, just whip it out
I’m juiced and ready to go
No? What is this truly about?
You found what? Where? ...
#dirty
#lust
#sex
61 reads
9 Comments
I left the wig on when we f**ked
We’d gotten the diagnoses
that we have terminal
cancer of the relationship.
we tried chemo
and rebounds
and screaming at each other
until our lungs ran out of air
and sorrow carved
in our face like glacier canyons
You could never love me
even with the lights off
too afraid, I guess,
of what that looks like
maybe my mercurial touch
across those empty spaces
in your chest are like a slime mold
or a toxin,
or a cluster of tender-feelings herpes,
infecting you with...
that we have terminal
cancer of the relationship.
we tried chemo
and rebounds
and screaming at each other
until our lungs ran out of air
and sorrow carved
in our face like glacier canyons
You could never love me
even with the lights off
too afraid, I guess,
of what that looks like
maybe my mercurial touch
across those empty spaces
in your chest are like a slime mold
or a toxin,
or a cluster of tender-feelings herpes,
infecting you with...
#lover
#obsession
#passion
#romantic
#sex
68 reads
4 Comments
Just Look At Your Chest
For
crying
out loud, Kate!
What happened to
your bikini top?
What do you mean what am
I talking about? Just look
at your chest! I cannot believe
that you suddenly decided to
come out of the water topless like that!
crying
out loud, Kate!
What happened to
your bikini top?
What do you mean what am
I talking about? Just look
at your chest! I cannot believe
that you suddenly decided to
come out of the water topless like that!
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#water
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Talk About A Bad Dream
Debi Sue was still sleeping.
But she woke up via creaking door.
An insane naked man entered.
He laughed while tearing her clothes off.
She screamed and woke up all alone.
But she woke up via creaking door.
An insane naked man entered.
He laughed while tearing her clothes off.
She screamed and woke up all alone.
#dark
#fiction
#nightmares
#scary
#sex
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My Sister's Sleepwalking In The Nude Again
John was walking to Marc's.
He was getting some stuff for Mom.
Suddenly, he just spotted Nikki.
She was walking naked in downtown Cleveland.
He grabbed and dragged her rump home.
He was getting some stuff for Mom.
Suddenly, he just spotted Nikki.
She was walking naked in downtown Cleveland.
He grabbed and dragged her rump home.
#city
#family
#fiction
#MentalHealth
#sex
49 reads
2 Comments
You Were Expecting Someone Else?
Hi. You must be Miranda.
Yes. I am. You expecting someone else?
Actually, you're just too early.
Is someone here with you?
Only Tom. He's my husband. You okay?
I see you already are.
Okay. I'm on the bed.
Right. Got some Hawaiian Tropic on you.
Oh, yes. That feels good.
What the...? Oh, my God!
I take it Tom's humping you now.
I can't... I'm not supposed...!
Come on. Feels too good to resist.
Oh, God! Please, Maggie! Make him stop!
Yes. I am. You expecting someone else?
Actually, you're just too early.
Is someone here with you?
Only Tom. He's my husband. You okay?
I see you already are.
Okay. I'm on the bed.
Right. Got some Hawaiian Tropic on you.
Oh, yes. That feels good.
What the...? Oh, my God!
I take it Tom's humping you now.
I can't... I'm not supposed...!
Come on. Feels too good to resist.
Oh, God! Please, Maggie! Make him stop!
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#threesome
#tolerance
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The Lingering Taste
Our love affair did not end
with the clapping of thunder,
but with a soft whimper
of acceptance.
You remained and softened
inside of me
as if surrendering to what
would never be again.
As you pulled out,
I caught a fleeting glimpse of your
skilled and accomplished shaft,
remembering how I
pressed you to my face.
The kisses I planted there
now bloom bittersweet upon my tongue—
a final, lingering taste of us.
with the clapping of thunder,
but with a soft whimper
of acceptance.
You remained and softened
inside of me
as if surrendering to what
would never be again.
As you pulled out,
I caught a fleeting glimpse of your
skilled and accomplished shaft,
remembering how I
pressed you to my face.
The kisses I planted there
now bloom bittersweet upon my tongue—
a final, lingering taste of us.
#breakup
#disappointment
#sex
116 reads
1 Comment
She had f**king rabies

#horror
#illness
#rhyming
#sex
#teens
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4 Comments
Please! Get Out Of Here Quick Before They Come Back!
Todd and Cody stepped inside.
They found Lisa naked and tied tightly.
She begged them to run.
Cody left only to hear a noise.
Her parents done the same to Todd.
They found Lisa naked and tied tightly.
She begged them to run.
Cody left only to hear a noise.
Her parents done the same to Todd.
#BDSM
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#suffering
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