Poems About Sex Seeking Honest Critique
#sex
Poems about sex seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Little Death
Steady the rhythm and pace
Enjoy being
Lost in the deep space of time
Shared breathing
Angles tried and adjusted
Truly seeing
Speed builds up in acceleration
Heat beat speeding
Nails dig in and hold
Remember your breathing
Cannon fires, smoke as a trail
Soal Screaming
To go in a blaze of glory
Time retreating
With every little death
I retell this story
It's worth repeating
Enjoy being
Lost in the deep space of time
Shared breathing
Angles tried and adjusted
Truly seeing
Speed builds up in acceleration
Heat beat speeding
Nails dig in and hold
Remember your breathing
Cannon fires, smoke as a trail
Soal Screaming
To go in a blaze of glory
Time retreating
With every little death
I retell this story
It's worth repeating
#sex
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5 Comments
Earthly Fellowship
He embraces a lover, not only because of lust,
but because he's learning that human
flesh—every part has always been divine.
As he enters her, efficiency is not the goal.
Speed, success, procreation—
these are distractions from the trust in her breaths.
Is this not prayer, this joining of two as one,
becoming something greater than their parts?
For in the gentle press of lips and
the strength of hips finding cadence
there is joy, there is worship,
in this tender, earthly fellowship.
but because he's learning that human
flesh—every part has always been divine.
As he enters her, efficiency is not the goal.
Speed, success, procreation—
these are distractions from the trust in her breaths.
Is this not prayer, this joining of two as one,
becoming something greater than their parts?
For in the gentle press of lips and
the strength of hips finding cadence
there is joy, there is worship,
in this tender, earthly fellowship.
#prayer
#religion
#sex
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No Thanks. I'm Just Here To Visit A Friend.
Tim came to Glendale early.
He caught Michelle posing naked for Monique.
Monique asked Tim to join.
He caught Michelle posing naked for Monique.
Monique asked Tim to join.
#art
#confusion
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
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What Have I Been Drinking Last Night?
Kevin woke up very hungover.
He saw Jennifer looking with a smile.
Kevin placed hands on forehead.
He saw Jennifer looking with a smile.
Kevin placed hands on forehead.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#hurt
#sex
36 reads
0 Comments
FROM HEAD TO TOE

#erotic
#seductive
#sensual #sex
#sensual #sex
124 reads
1 Comment
The Psychosexual Realm of Rape (Cauldron Kill Series)

#evil
#sex
#violence
19 reads
1 Comment
I'm Ready For My Massage If You Are
Marina was reading the newspaper.
Ryan came in with the Hawaiian Tropic.
She disrobed and laid naked.
Ryan came in with the Hawaiian Tropic.
She disrobed and laid naked.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#tolerance
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Follow My Yellow Brick Road part 2 of chapter 1
"Ok, I guess I have to guess what I lost," I said a little pissed.
"Girl, think. You're in a maid's uniform, you're wearing red stiletto heels and if you really took the time to look yourself over, you're not wearing anything underneath."
My mouth fell open. "I AM HERE FOR SEX!" I yelled.
"Well, you don't have to be so appalled about it. Do you have sex?" Kien asked
"I have sex. But this is crazy.?" I said
"Listen, you came here, to retrieve something...
"Girl, think. You're in a maid's uniform, you're wearing red stiletto heels and if you really took the time to look yourself over, you're not wearing anything underneath."
My mouth fell open. "I AM HERE FOR SEX!" I yelled.
"Well, you don't have to be so appalled about it. Do you have sex?" Kien asked
"I have sex. But this is crazy.?" I said
"Listen, you came here, to retrieve something...
#lust
#sex
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6 Comments
You See Hustler's Latest Issue?
Dad has really gone nuts.
What makes you say that, Mindy Sue?
You see Hustler's latest issue?
Oh, yes. With Winona as its centerfold.
Now you know why I said that.
What makes you say that, Mindy Sue?
You see Hustler's latest issue?
Oh, yes. With Winona as its centerfold.
Now you know why I said that.
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
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0 Comments
Why Is The Wedding Off?
Why is the wedding off?
Sarah had done something behind Josh's back.
What would that be, David?
You remember the Hustler Club?
Sure. We had Josh's bachelor party there.
Where Sarah is the... entertainment?
Could you be more specific?
Lynda said Sarah did it for money.
And Josh went ballistic anyway?
You got that right, Roy.
That's just freaking great. Any more goodies?
Sarah's dad promised Josh something.
A job at that electronics firm. Right?
Not anymore... after what Sarah had pulled.
Sarah had done something behind Josh's back.
What would that be, David?
You remember the Hustler Club?
Sure. We had Josh's bachelor party there.
Where Sarah is the... entertainment?
Could you be more specific?
Lynda said Sarah did it for money.
And Josh went ballistic anyway?
You got that right, Roy.
That's just freaking great. Any more goodies?
Sarah's dad promised Josh something.
A job at that electronics firm. Right?
Not anymore... after what Sarah had pulled.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#marriage
#sex
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One Comes To Work At The Wrong Time
Dave came to work early.
He saw Melissa naked in the studio.
Dave should've stayed with Lucy.
He saw Melissa naked in the studio.
Dave should've stayed with Lucy.
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sex
107 reads
2 Comments
Bad girl

#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#sex
#temptation
179 reads
0 Comments
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