Scifi by Top Critiquers Poems
#scifi
scifi by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum!
Hidden from humanity, Hideous to see
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
#aliens
#PopCulture
#scary
#scifi
#violence
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The Ultimate Queen (chapter one/part 2)
In the Vinu Mountains Maline has finished her nest for the coming of her child. This child is her first and quite possibly her last. Her body had a tendency to rid itself of the foreign object. For some reason, this one stayed till term. The Humm women produce offspring within a quarter of a moon phase. They are surrounded by four moons. Maline felt the stirring for her to prepare for the coming.
The mountain of Vin is rich in purple soil. The Humm tribe lived on the mountain for several generations. The height of males is five feet six inches. The females of the species' average...
The mountain of Vin is rich in purple soil. The Humm tribe lived on the mountain for several generations. The height of males is five feet six inches. The females of the species' average...
#dystopian
#scifi
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greetings
greetings from the infernal vortex
hopeful thoughts inside the internal gloom
mischief stands up valiantly and makes introductions
sweet surrender under casual assault
it's the nature of the void
war is ever present and sarcasm is the only tongue they know
why waste niceties when you know that's not what you feel
aggressive is the tone with them
outsiders' smell of fear, it has a peculiar scent
it alerts them to spies
violence is always the first to be aware
he releases his dogs of war
the weaker of the...
hopeful thoughts inside the internal gloom
mischief stands up valiantly and makes introductions
sweet surrender under casual assault
it's the nature of the void
war is ever present and sarcasm is the only tongue they know
why waste niceties when you know that's not what you feel
aggressive is the tone with them
outsiders' smell of fear, it has a peculiar scent
it alerts them to spies
violence is always the first to be aware
he releases his dogs of war
the weaker of the...
#aliens
#scifi
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6 Comments
YOU HAVE THE POWER WITHIN
What if you had the opportunity to discover a place deep, within the outer edges of time and space would you, consider the possibility that there is another realm of the unknown universe. Yet untapped by the subconsciousness of our mind, yet only seen through the naked eyes of awakening of the inner senses. What if you had the uncanny ability to see through mere solid matter, straight to the point of invading the depth of the core. What was once a pure solid matter of mass created, by liquid solution form in a laboratory created to stretch, and reform into any substance soft or hard. What if...
#universe
#moon
#evolution
#scifi
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Mutated Menagerie (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
We have all become mutations
Tested
Experimented with
horrifying results
Evolution has multiple ways through life
never a single one
Evolution is the alternative
for any existence
You were another in my garden
searching for that seed of birth
to grow onto and evolve
together as one, on earth.
Looking for life through deep space
Visions so vast
Light years from the human race
On that infinite road, we see planet ZYX13 up ahead
Orange and pinkish gases
Our space suits equipped, so we...
Tested
Experimented with
horrifying results
Evolution has multiple ways through life
never a single one
Evolution is the alternative
for any existence
You were another in my garden
searching for that seed of birth
to grow onto and evolve
together as one, on earth.
Looking for life through deep space
Visions so vast
Light years from the human race
On that infinite road, we see planet ZYX13 up ahead
Orange and pinkish gases
Our space suits equipped, so we...
#nature
#scifi
#ShortStory
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15 Comments
I'm trying to be a human
I'm not from earth
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
#aliens
#identity
#scifi
#sex
#vulnerability
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41 Comments
THE ADAM AND EVE POOL
#marriage
#rhyming
#scifi
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0 Comments
Green Cheese
I could get lost in space. Couldn't you?
Just to see beyond the midnight blue?
To listen with oscilloscopic ears
for music from all the well rung spheres,
and survey every crater on the moon
to Saturn and Jupiter's far-flung tune!
I'd fly through every luminous cloud,
(that makes each galaxy astro proud)
on the steampunk aether triplane wings
that angels use with quantum physic strings
for halo headlights through dark matter fog
and a big brain activated Captain's log...
since all those places sound great, to me, ...
Just to see beyond the midnight blue?
To listen with oscilloscopic ears
for music from all the well rung spheres,
and survey every crater on the moon
to Saturn and Jupiter's far-flung tune!
I'd fly through every luminous cloud,
(that makes each galaxy astro proud)
on the steampunk aether triplane wings
that angels use with quantum physic strings
for halo headlights through dark matter fog
and a big brain activated Captain's log...
since all those places sound great, to me, ...
#universe
#steampunk
#scifi
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Laika loitered in the streets
Sometimes she howled at the moon.
Certain men laid hands on her.
And they robbed her of her eagerness!
She had no plans, the bitch!
She just minded her own business...
So they put her in a cell.
That flew in the sky, so lost!
Lost in the air, in rotation...
She dialogued with loneliness!
In the light of yellow dawn.
The ship would not return to the ground.
They would never get her out of prison.
She decided to become a star.
PAR
Sometimes she howled at the moon.
Certain men laid hands on her.
And they robbed her of her eagerness!
She had no plans, the bitch!
She just minded her own business...
So they put her in a cell.
That flew in the sky, so lost!
Lost in the air, in rotation...
She dialogued with loneliness!
In the light of yellow dawn.
The ship would not return to the ground.
They would never get her out of prison.
She decided to become a star.
PAR
#dogs
#animals
#passion #scifi
#passion #scifi
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New Earth
I was reanimated from a cryogenic state
In November of the year Thirty-Thirty
And after a month of recovery
I had to be educated in New Earth’s history
Society decayed and went into a world war
But no nation was ever declared the victor
It seemed Mother Earth had enough and so
A century of cataclysms followed
Cities were swallowed by waves and rising seas
The earth shook from all erupting volcanoes
Fire flowed and ash spewed into the sky
Lands around the globe were left in darkness
And during this...
In November of the year Thirty-Thirty
And after a month of recovery
I had to be educated in New Earth’s history
Society decayed and went into a world war
But no nation was ever declared the victor
It seemed Mother Earth had enough and so
A century of cataclysms followed
Cities were swallowed by waves and rising seas
The earth shook from all erupting volcanoes
Fire flowed and ash spewed into the sky
Lands around the globe were left in darkness
And during this...
#hope
#science
#humankind #scifi
#humankind #scifi
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Rhapsodic Park - with Lilliputian
In an unsettling silence of the forgotten
haunting melody of rhapsodic incubation
creating a bubble of blue-vein clones
from the embryos of the cosmic cyclones
along with its Anthropomorphic beings
as if ancient wildebeest
A Centipede infiltrating my gray matter
the insomnia zone of my sleepless mind
attacking my psychic with little white pills
into the unfound anthropology realm
preying upon my cheese cracker stash
Implanting a chip exploiting my brain
breaking into my deepest hidden fears
manipulating...
haunting melody of rhapsodic incubation
creating a bubble of blue-vein clones
from the embryos of the cosmic cyclones
along with its Anthropomorphic beings
as if ancient wildebeest
A Centipede infiltrating my gray matter
the insomnia zone of my sleepless mind
attacking my psychic with little white pills
into the unfound anthropology realm
preying upon my cheese cracker stash
Implanting a chip exploiting my brain
breaking into my deepest hidden fears
manipulating...
#collaboration
#gothic
#mystery #scifi
#mystery #scifi
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Commencing The Passage Of My Soul (Water)
I have been captured in suspended animation
The evolution of my spiritual amalgamation
Where time stand stills
The essence of my vessel slipped through a realm of thy will
There are no inferior humans only the cosmic transported by the waves of sound
Love on the run with light years, and the Heavens is a treasure our fate has found
The vibration that lured me too
Will it be a human or panther that pulls me through
Truth given in the pulsate as a new beginning kisses the Grand Rising dew
The Autume Equinox...
The evolution of my spiritual amalgamation
Where time stand stills
The essence of my vessel slipped through a realm of thy will
There are no inferior humans only the cosmic transported by the waves of sound
Love on the run with light years, and the Heavens is a treasure our fate has found
The vibration that lured me too
Will it be a human or panther that pulls me through
Truth given in the pulsate as a new beginning kisses the Grand Rising dew
The Autume Equinox...
#rebirth
#scifi
#spiritual
#utopia
#water
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