Scifi Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scifi
scifi seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Io
Io.
I've never understood how to circumnavigate the Gods,
how to lay in their lashes of skirts -- all belly.
I'd go rippling pale upon wide mouths of infinite blue. Your eyes were that blue when howling at stars.
I think of them when luminous, shivering, ending,
the ache of which, I'm told, may be measured on an app.
I paint the maplines of your face,
without seeing it sometimes.
It's become faded from view like the Muses who sing
to cold riverbeds, colder still for their lack of slashed gills.
Each one is...
I've never understood how to circumnavigate the Gods,
how to lay in their lashes of skirts -- all belly.
I'd go rippling pale upon wide mouths of infinite blue. Your eyes were that blue when howling at stars.
I think of them when luminous, shivering, ending,
the ache of which, I'm told, may be measured on an app.
I paint the maplines of your face,
without seeing it sometimes.
It's become faded from view like the Muses who sing
to cold riverbeds, colder still for their lack of slashed gills.
Each one is...
#love
#apocalypse
#scifi
165 reads
0 Comments
The Human Parasite
For millenniums, we have been observing a planet in distress.
The planet is infested by a parasite called human.
We have waited a long time and we will not wait any longer.
The human parasite is the only life form that is ruining the planet.
If we do not intervene now, it will be too late.
The planet will not survive the infestation of this deadly organism.
We must stop the depletion of the earth’s vital resources.
The human parasites express a murderous and hostile trait.
We have fully tested these beings and the experiments have failed.
The...
The planet is infested by a parasite called human.
We have waited a long time and we will not wait any longer.
The human parasite is the only life form that is ruining the planet.
If we do not intervene now, it will be too late.
The planet will not survive the infestation of this deadly organism.
We must stop the depletion of the earth’s vital resources.
The human parasites express a murderous and hostile trait.
We have fully tested these beings and the experiments have failed.
The...
#earth
#universe
#humankind
#aliens
#scifi
201 reads
10 Comments
Life Of Adventure
for awhile i lived
in green bluff iowa
catacombs in mexico
a cellar growing mushrooms
i ran with anthem sprinters
socialized with vampires
travelled to african savanna
(through the big screen tv)
spent an evening strolling
attired in a wonderful ice cream suit
past the halloween tree
with uncle einar
i was chased by t-rex
while singing the body electric
pathways lit by golden apples of the sun
terrified by child assassins
driven crazy by the weather
played hopscotch
in...
in green bluff iowa
catacombs in mexico
a cellar growing mushrooms
i ran with anthem sprinters
socialized with vampires
travelled to african savanna
(through the big screen tv)
spent an evening strolling
attired in a wonderful ice cream suit
past the halloween tree
with uncle einar
i was chased by t-rex
while singing the body electric
pathways lit by golden apples of the sun
terrified by child assassins
driven crazy by the weather
played hopscotch
in...
#inspirational
#books
#scifi
140 reads
1 Comment
Raindancing in a Desert Through a Timewarp
You are a one-way Time machine headed ever deeper into the future. Time wedges itself between you and the past and grows, pushing you further apart. That distance doesn’t generate clarity or insight, but it can be a room where Hope and Disappointment learn how to have a conversation, so Hope doesn’t grow up to be Expectation or Attachment. Complicating matters, your central processor can glitch: interrupted interpretations, inventing false inventory, introducing a retroactive, unintentional attention intervention. Hindsight 2.0 is not effective antivirus prevention as advertised. It’s not...
#dreams
#narrative
#memories
#LifeGoals
#scifi
221 reads
0 Comments
Hovering Over
Hovering over a vacant lot was this disc shaped craft all lit up.
#haiku
#fiction
#dialogue
#aliens
#scifi
194 reads
2 Comments
The Number On Christine's Neck
Leonard noticed the
number on Christine's
neck and realized
she was the android
Zachary had built.
number on Christine's
neck and realized
she was the android
Zachary had built.
#friendship
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#confusion
#scifi
202 reads
2 Comments
Our Scanners Probed A Comet
Our scanners probed a
comet that zoomed its way past
our ship still in space.
comet that zoomed its way past
our ship still in space.
#universe
#haiku
#fiction
#dialogue
#scifi
189 reads
4 Comments
Professor Kane's Prized Specimen
Professor Kane's prized specimen from a crashed
alien ship dropped its pods and allowed them to crack
open and reveal the naked clones of
the base personal including the professor.
alien ship dropped its pods and allowed them to crack
open and reveal the naked clones of
the base personal including the professor.
#fiction
#aliens
#ignorance
#sensual
#scifi
229 reads
6 Comments
Along a weed blossom lane - a rift in time
A rift in time
Split a man in two
Two men emerged
On opposite sides
Of an iridescent fissure
The second man
A young man heading north east
Not knowing who he will become
After the wilderness of youth
A spiritless well paid career?
Failures and success
Ebbing fulfillment?
Marital acquiescence
Fatherly responsibilities
Accepted…run from…shirked?
The first man
An old man heading south west
Smiled as he forgot who he was
The fog was kind
Wandering to the grave ...
Split a man in two
Two men emerged
On opposite sides
Of an iridescent fissure
The second man
A young man heading north east
Not knowing who he will become
After the wilderness of youth
A spiritless well paid career?
Failures and success
Ebbing fulfillment?
Marital acquiescence
Fatherly responsibilities
Accepted…run from…shirked?
The first man
An old man heading south west
Smiled as he forgot who he was
The fog was kind
Wandering to the grave ...
#flowers
#travel
#mystery #scifi
#mystery #scifi
278 reads
6 Comments
Possibly Her First UFO Encounter
After a nightly
swim, Julie walked back to the
cabin but a light appeared.
swim, Julie walked back to the
cabin but a light appeared.
#night
#fiction
#aliens
#ignorance
#scifi
210 reads
2 Comments
The One We Chose To Lead The Mission
This is Colonel
John Adam
MacTabby who
will lead a starship with
his fellow catstronauts
to a new planet our
sensors located which is called Earth.
John Adam
MacTabby who
will lead a starship with
his fellow catstronauts
to a new planet our
sensors located which is called Earth.
#earth
#cats
#fiction
#dialogue
#scifi
187 reads
2 Comments
Entered The Hole
After they stripped, Jill entered
the hole and Ted followed her.
the hole and Ted followed her.
#stars
#fiction
#mystery
#sensual
#scifi
215 reads
2 Comments
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