Poems About Science Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about science seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
13th Nov 2021 8:20pm
13th Nov 2021 8:20pm
Unless I go blind
Is it eyes that the first instance gifted?
Or it was a vision percieving itself solely...
In front, a Flame Imperishable shifted
and twisted its unknownness how... holily?
There is a spark in it, causing benediction.
Otherwise it wouldn't have a starting point..
It would be a ghostly unachieved prediction
that the Fourth attempt would disappoint.
Isn't our God the fourth attempt?
The Trinity that we rever like love,
the very own immortality, exempt
from death of falling apart, unworthy of.
Isn't it a paradox? ...
Or it was a vision percieving itself solely...
In front, a Flame Imperishable shifted
and twisted its unknownness how... holily?
There is a spark in it, causing benediction.
Otherwise it wouldn't have a starting point..
It would be a ghostly unachieved prediction
that the Fourth attempt would disappoint.
Isn't our God the fourth attempt?
The Trinity that we rever like love,
the very own immortality, exempt
from death of falling apart, unworthy of.
Isn't it a paradox? ...
#identity
#science
#God
#astronomy
#JRRTolkien
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Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
9th Oct 2021 5:23am
9th Oct 2021 5:23am
Cyborgs
Angus & Julia stone: The Devils Tears.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=SpzT-4jRb3Y
Tender sigh
twilight beckons
a moonlit glow
comfort given
I falter not
under the stars,
brave I’m not
but I am sure
beyond the threshold
becomes the norm
would you recognize
I was once human
I trust in you
to be who you are
do you trust me too—
I can take you there
can you take me there
can we leave today…
https://youtube.com/watch?v=SpzT-4jRb3Y
Tender sigh
twilight beckons
a moonlit glow
comfort given
I falter not
under the stars,
brave I’m not
but I am sure
beyond the threshold
becomes the norm
would you recognize
I was once human
I trust in you
to be who you are
do you trust me too—
I can take you there
can you take me there
can we leave today…
#science
#scifi
448 reads
4 Comments
OG-Poetry
Poem Published
5th Oct 2021 10:50pm
5th Oct 2021 10:50pm
… guide in the mirror
which pride is your guide,
or that feeling you belong,
does your pride reside
in humanity’s zone,
are you sharing,
caring, nice and kind,
or eaten bare
like a melon rined
is love and peace
a spiritual tone,
or spite everyone
and be left alone,
which do hang
your proud hat on..
a guild that
is not really you,
dis-information is
contagious as the flu,
if you actually sat,
read a book or two, ...
or that feeling you belong,
does your pride reside
in humanity’s zone,
are you sharing,
caring, nice and kind,
or eaten bare
like a melon rined
is love and peace
a spiritual tone,
or spite everyone
and be left alone,
which do hang
your proud hat on..
a guild that
is not really you,
dis-information is
contagious as the flu,
if you actually sat,
read a book or two, ...
#science
#humankind
#HumanRights
#SelfDiscovery
#reading
393 reads
4 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
28th Jul 2021 9:43am
28th Jul 2021 9:43am
Symbiote
Ownership
of
the means
of
Production
Stellar machine & the art of process.
Pieces put together by invisible gremlins.
Workshop fluidity – Piece by piece.
Placed into conveyor delivery systems.
Reabsorbed into the main frame.
Compelling further production methods.
Sending biology into space/time.
A point somewhere in horizontal monads.
Symbiote of itself as a mystery.
Self unto it’s Self triggering in unawareness.
Free will is questionable verily.
Parasitic usurpation meanders consciousness. ...
of
the means
of
Production
Stellar machine & the art of process.
Pieces put together by invisible gremlins.
Workshop fluidity – Piece by piece.
Placed into conveyor delivery systems.
Reabsorbed into the main frame.
Compelling further production methods.
Sending biology into space/time.
A point somewhere in horizontal monads.
Symbiote of itself as a mystery.
Self unto it’s Self triggering in unawareness.
Free will is questionable verily.
Parasitic usurpation meanders consciousness. ...
#romantic
#secrets
#identity
#science
#humankind
539 reads
4 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2021 5:47pm
23rd Jul 2021 5:47pm
Polar Opposition
they pass
- without acknowledgment
as if not part
of the same universe
- they pass
without acknowledgment
not stopping or meeting
to discuss
they pass
- without acknowledgment
each moving further
from the other
- they pass
without...
- without acknowledgment
as if not part
of the same universe
- they pass
without acknowledgment
not stopping or meeting
to discuss
they pass
- without acknowledgment
each moving further
from the other
- they pass
without...
#politics
#science
449 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
29th May 2021 8:49pm
29th May 2021 8:49pm
Scientific Experiments
Medical scientists have secretly done many unlawful experiments on human subjects.
Politicians and scientists are without doubt the wickedest people on this planet.
Military scientists have also carried out numerous illegal experiments on people.
Scientists have kidnapped and murdered many people because of scientific research.
How did scientists find out the amount of time an animal can live without food or water?
They had to starve animals to death and monitor and document every part of the process.
Some...
Politicians and scientists are without doubt the wickedest people on this planet.
Military scientists have also carried out numerous illegal experiments on people.
Scientists have kidnapped and murdered many people because of scientific research.
How did scientists find out the amount of time an animal can live without food or water?
They had to starve animals to death and monitor and document every part of the process.
Some...
#murder
#science
#evil
#animals
#humankind
403 reads
2 Comments
DecipherMe
Poem Published
19th May 2021 2:34am
19th May 2021 2:34am
To Bite the Sun
Earth:
Equitorial red,
pinch pleat arms of liquid alloy
whip around electric currents,
unfurl a curtain of crinkled colorless waves,
shrieking lashes of Venus' belt against the sunlight.
The cascade of the curtain is steeped in green and violet
faces of spectres and sky dogs.
The rod — a daffodil of hard iron-nickel.
With scant pleats spun off the rod,
the moon's dust
succumbs to the empty.
The sun picks and shades around
the shreds of a veil —
in regolith's scattered charge,
peels off the blocks of...
Equitorial red,
pinch pleat arms of liquid alloy
whip around electric currents,
unfurl a curtain of crinkled colorless waves,
shrieking lashes of Venus' belt against the sunlight.
The cascade of the curtain is steeped in green and violet
faces of spectres and sky dogs.
The rod — a daffodil of hard iron-nickel.
With scant pleats spun off the rod,
the moon's dust
succumbs to the empty.
The sun picks and shades around
the shreds of a veil —
in regolith's scattered charge,
peels off the blocks of...
#identity
#science
#sun
#sky
#metaphor
428 reads
2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
9th Apr 2021 10:59pm
9th Apr 2021 10:59pm
“Just How Far Ahead Is All of This New Tech ?” ... A Poem written by Big Virge 8/9/2020
So .......
“Just How Far Ahead,
Is All of This New Tech ?” ...
Because It’s Now Become ...
Something That STUNS ...
Like ... TASER Guns ... !!!
That Tech Heads Suggest ...
Is A Way To Progress ...
... Humanity’s Ends ...
Well ... I’m NOT So Sure ...
That New Tech Is PURE ... !?!
Or Is What Offers A CURE ...
For Humanity’s Flaws ...
When Tech Is Conditioned ...
To IMPOSE RESTRICTIONS ...
On How Humans Be Living ... !!!
...
“Just How Far Ahead,
Is All of This New Tech ?” ...
Because It’s Now Become ...
Something That STUNS ...
Like ... TASER Guns ... !!!
That Tech Heads Suggest ...
Is A Way To Progress ...
... Humanity’s Ends ...
Well ... I’m NOT So Sure ...
That New Tech Is PURE ... !?!
Or Is What Offers A CURE ...
For Humanity’s Flaws ...
When Tech Is Conditioned ...
To IMPOSE RESTRICTIONS ...
On How Humans Be Living ... !!!
...
#technology
#science
#humankind
#LifeChangingMoment
#evolution
300 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
5th Apr 2021 11:46pm
5th Apr 2021 11:46pm
relieved but somewhat offended
result of my brain scan was
that it was 'unremarkable'. and you wonder why I laughed
that it was 'unremarkable'. and you wonder why I laughed
#science
361 reads
8 Comments
DaVinci_07
Leo
Leo
Poem Published
18th Feb 2021 8:32pm
18th Feb 2021 8:32pm
Perseverance
It is a Mars thing.
Launched July 30, 2020
Florida heat
Arriving on February 18, 2021
Touching cold red soil
Jezero Crater, Mars
May it hold the answers you seek.
Robots like Rover and Ingenuity.
Tech like: Moxie, Range Trigger, MEDA, PIXL
RIMFAX, SHERLOC, SuperCam
To the smart folks
We all should pay attention to
Instead of the Influencers, Instagram Models,
Critics, Athletes and Talking heads
Kudos to you!
Here is to Perseverance paying off,
And your...
Launched July 30, 2020
Florida heat
Arriving on February 18, 2021
Touching cold red soil
Jezero Crater, Mars
May it hold the answers you seek.
Robots like Rover and Ingenuity.
Tech like: Moxie, Range Trigger, MEDA, PIXL
RIMFAX, SHERLOC, SuperCam
To the smart folks
We all should pay attention to
Instead of the Influencers, Instagram Models,
Critics, Athletes and Talking heads
Kudos to you!
Here is to Perseverance paying off,
And your...
#science
#earth
#universe #astronomy
#universe #astronomy
1189 reads
18 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
15th Feb 2021 3:52am
15th Feb 2021 3:52am
TWO POEMS
WE ARE BASKETS
I know that
Beneath the surface
We are long stiff fibers
Bound to inner frame
Interspersed
Red and blue threads
Conveying
All significance
Still what I see
Is art
WE ARE FLOWERS
Bees know how
The honey's made
For me it’s just the luscious
Glimmering excitement
Of an impossibly
Sweet world
On a spoon entering mouth
Coating buds in nectar
As if I were myself a flower
Eager to be pollinated
I know that
Beneath the surface
We are long stiff fibers
Bound to inner frame
Interspersed
Red and blue threads
Conveying
All significance
Still what I see
Is art
WE ARE FLOWERS
Bees know how
The honey's made
For me it’s just the luscious
Glimmering excitement
Of an impossibly
Sweet world
On a spoon entering mouth
Coating buds in nectar
As if I were myself a flower
Eager to be pollinated
#science
#flowers
#art
339 reads
1 Comment
Josh
Joshua Bond
Joshua Bond
Poem Published
10th Feb 2021 9:40pm
10th Feb 2021 9:40pm
Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.12 — Planet of the Apeshits
I fear for the day when animals treat humans
like humans treat animals — cooped up in confined spaces,
fed body-altering GM food, injected with hormones,
chlorinated drinking water, harvested for body-parts,
experimental herd vaccinations … etc, … etc, …
like humans treat animals — cooped up in confined spaces,
fed body-altering GM food, injected with hormones,
chlorinated drinking water, harvested for body-parts,
experimental herd vaccinations … etc, … etc, …
#science
#animals
#nature
#food
#humankind
727 reads
17 Comments
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