Scary by Top Critiquers Poems
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scary by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
They're Coming For You
Living corpses gets out to enjoy the party tonight
the exploding space probe awakens their bodies to life
army of undead prowlers craving raw meat
be fast or be killed, you're their flavor of the week
Back to eat, eat and eat again
they feel just hunger
no love no mercy no pain
they move slow, wobble & rock
they're tireless creatures, they never seem to stop
Make 'em die
a shot in the head
only way to survive
in the night of the living dead
the exploding space probe awakens their bodies to life
army of undead prowlers craving raw meat
be fast or be killed, you're their flavor of the week
Back to eat, eat and eat again
they feel just hunger
no love no mercy no pain
they move slow, wobble & rock
they're tireless creatures, they never seem to stop
Make 'em die
a shot in the head
only way to survive
in the night of the living dead
#death
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#zombies
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story for October
today skip over the spirits that grip
spit and rise twist the blade and I'm off
sulking in the background is a disturbance
sticking in my mind the beautiful trees
the orchard inviting sings to me
soon I am daydreaming
then I feel someone watching my reverie
reaching for my knife
practicing unsheathing it quickly
with a flick of the rist
an old grand dad
waiting for skin
somewhere in time my soul remembers
hand to hand combat
with a ready nod I let the trees know
should he approach
I'll go down on...
spit and rise twist the blade and I'm off
sulking in the background is a disturbance
sticking in my mind the beautiful trees
the orchard inviting sings to me
soon I am daydreaming
then I feel someone watching my reverie
reaching for my knife
practicing unsheathing it quickly
with a flick of the rist
an old grand dad
waiting for skin
somewhere in time my soul remembers
hand to hand combat
with a ready nod I let the trees know
should he approach
I'll go down on...
#anxiety
#scary
#spiritual #trees
#spiritual #trees
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3 Comments
Panic
I can’t breathe
What do you do when you can’t breathe?
You can’t find space.
There is no air to be had
People say to calm down
How can I calm down
Pulse is rapidly beating
Blood pressure steadily increasing
Natural Adrenaline is off the charts
Grabbing my chest feeling my heart
I C..A..N..T.. Breath
There is no space for any air
No space to ire
Walls steadily surround.
The body hitting the ground
“Stay calm help is on the way.”
Help!
Help!
I just wanted to breathe.
What do you do when you can’t breathe?
You can’t find space.
There is no air to be had
People say to calm down
How can I calm down
Pulse is rapidly beating
Blood pressure steadily increasing
Natural Adrenaline is off the charts
Grabbing my chest feeling my heart
I C..A..N..T.. Breath
There is no space for any air
No space to ire
Walls steadily surround.
The body hitting the ground
“Stay calm help is on the way.”
Help!
Help!
I just wanted to breathe.
#anxiety
#scary
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15 Comments
Death Veil
The black house perched on the hill,
was heavily haunted on a deadly still night.
It punctured the twilight,
that had bled mysterious pink light.
There she was.
Her movement obscure,
in the fog of midnight.
She wore a long tattered death veil.
No one would believe this tale.
Was she coming back or coming to?
In my shaken soul,
terror saunters through.
Does her beginning and end intersect?
She's half alive and half dead.
She turns with a penetrating stare
with hollow eyes of coal.
She came to collect...
was heavily haunted on a deadly still night.
It punctured the twilight,
that had bled mysterious pink light.
There she was.
Her movement obscure,
in the fog of midnight.
She wore a long tattered death veil.
No one would believe this tale.
Was she coming back or coming to?
In my shaken soul,
terror saunters through.
Does her beginning and end intersect?
She's half alive and half dead.
She turns with a penetrating stare
with hollow eyes of coal.
She came to collect...
#ghosts
#scary
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14 Comments
WITHIN THE DARKNESS
Here I am still in the process of what night feels like, standing in the very abyss a room with only one way in and one way out. But yet still I remain in a trance staring, into the pits of the illusions that now has invaded my mind, seeking to get into my thoughts and emotions and feelings. Yet I am unafraid to face my fears of the unknown, that hides in the shadows of the illusions of night for I am not alone, in this world of the darkness as there is a light...a Halo over me shinning it's light down on my journey and travel and walk through the DARKNESS.
#scary
#mystery
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
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0 Comments
Blood Orgies
Before you it was just sex
Rough
Bdsm
So what ?
But you
The firestarter
Set off something in me
Vampires
Biting
Blood orgies
Can't stop what you've begun
Are you happy now ?
Rough
Bdsm
So what ?
But you
The firestarter
Set off something in me
Vampires
Biting
Blood orgies
Can't stop what you've begun
Are you happy now ?
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#evil
#scary
#vampires
460 reads
12 Comments
My New House, with an extra bonus (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
I bought this house
It was so damn cheap
But never thought
This place would give me the creeps
When I opened the gate on the floor
And climbed down the stairs
I switched on the lights to see
I think I'm gonna have nightmares
The walls with hanging bodies
Jars filled with chloroform
With fetuses and body parts
Children preserved, born deformed
What kind of wicked mind
Could arrange such a place
A twisted human survey
Images seen, difficult to erase
The flickering of lights
A dead flower...
It was so damn cheap
But never thought
This place would give me the creeps
When I opened the gate on the floor
And climbed down the stairs
I switched on the lights to see
I think I'm gonna have nightmares
The walls with hanging bodies
Jars filled with chloroform
With fetuses and body parts
Children preserved, born deformed
What kind of wicked mind
Could arrange such a place
A twisted human survey
Images seen, difficult to erase
The flickering of lights
A dead flower...
#fear
#Halloween
#horror #scary
#horror #scary
105 reads
9 Comments
Infestation of the Bawdy Snatchers
They don’t lurk in the shadows like they used to
Instead, they hide behind a device with prying eyes
Closely watching their every step, move and action
Sometimes approaching them with convincing lies
Oftentimes they cast a net with maliciously intent
As a young innocent victim falls for their trap
And much to their horror they find themselves
Fighting to find what they lost by a click in a snap
But then I sound the warning horn from the deep
Scanning the figures that fell all the way through
And with calculations I sit there in...
Instead, they hide behind a device with prying eyes
Closely watching their every step, move and action
Sometimes approaching them with convincing lies
Oftentimes they cast a net with maliciously intent
As a young innocent victim falls for their trap
And much to their horror they find themselves
Fighting to find what they lost by a click in a snap
But then I sound the warning horn from the deep
Scanning the figures that fell all the way through
And with calculations I sit there in...
#job
#scary
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6 Comments
BILLY - THE REVOLUTIONIST!
I feel like a revolutionist today, folks!
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
#hate
#rejection
#scary
#despair
#disappointment
578 reads
37 Comments
In the silence of the room
In the silence of the room,
shadows weave through fabric and memories.
Draped in the weight of time and whispers.
The dark trousseau is a tapestry of lives
touched by the unseen,
where the essence of yesterdays lingers softly.
It is here that the heart finds its echoes,
in the folds of a past that never fades.
It whispers secrets of forgotten promises
and undying love, bathed in the cold glow of memory.
Each piece, touched by the hands of fate,
carries the weight of hopes that once danced in the dark. ...
shadows weave through fabric and memories.
Draped in the weight of time and whispers.
The dark trousseau is a tapestry of lives
touched by the unseen,
where the essence of yesterdays lingers softly.
It is here that the heart finds its echoes,
in the folds of a past that never fades.
It whispers secrets of forgotten promises
and undying love, bathed in the cold glow of memory.
Each piece, touched by the hands of fate,
carries the weight of hopes that once danced in the dark. ...
#dark
#depression
#evil
#fear
#scary
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4 Comments
Becoming Obsolete
Listening to my hidden self and footsteps loud
and clear, feeling the madness of the dark veil
in the naked expressions of my euphoria.
Bathing myself in vicarious splendor
lusting for tremors of imaginary love
seducing my mind and becoming obsolete
fraying at the seams in my dark boutique.
Being born with a caul without purpose-altering
spaces reflecting empty places
thinking that life is just a window seat
looking out into the dark oblique.
and clear, feeling the madness of the dark veil
in the naked expressions of my euphoria.
Bathing myself in vicarious splendor
lusting for tremors of imaginary love
seducing my mind and becoming obsolete
fraying at the seams in my dark boutique.
Being born with a caul without purpose-altering
spaces reflecting empty places
thinking that life is just a window seat
looking out into the dark oblique.
#dark
#scary
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Nightmare From Hell
In my nightmares
I see myself
pounding my oldest
brother's face into
the concrete to the
point where I can't stop
I wake up pissed off
At the whole freaking world
Taking my anger out
on everyone including
My famiy which
isn't good for my soul
I see myself
pounding my oldest
brother's face into
the concrete to the
point where I can't stop
I wake up pissed off
At the whole freaking world
Taking my anger out
on everyone including
My famiy which
isn't good for my soul
#dark
#death
#evil
#scary
#nightmares
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