Scary by Top Critiquers Poems
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scary by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The Others
As I previously mentioned she was encountering "Them"
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
#aging
#evil
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
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6 Comments
Panic
I can’t breathe
What do you do when you can’t breathe?
You can’t find space.
There is no air to be had
People say to calm down
How can I calm down
Pulse is rapidly beating
Blood pressure steadily increasing
Natural Adrenaline is off the charts
Grabbing my chest feeling my heart
I C..A..N..T.. Breath
There is no space for any air
No space to ire
Walls steadily surround.
The body hitting the ground
“Stay calm help is on the way.”
Help!
Help!
I just wanted to breathe.
What do you do when you can’t breathe?
You can’t find space.
There is no air to be had
People say to calm down
How can I calm down
Pulse is rapidly beating
Blood pressure steadily increasing
Natural Adrenaline is off the charts
Grabbing my chest feeling my heart
I C..A..N..T.. Breath
There is no space for any air
No space to ire
Walls steadily surround.
The body hitting the ground
“Stay calm help is on the way.”
Help!
Help!
I just wanted to breathe.
#anxiety
#scary
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15 Comments
story for October
today skip over the spirits that grip
spit and rise twist the blade and I'm off
sulking in the background is a disturbance
sticking in my mind the beautiful trees
the orchard inviting sings to me
soon I am daydreaming
then I feel someone watching my reverie
reaching for my knife
practicing unsheathing it quickly
with a flick of the rist
an old grand dad
waiting for skin
somewhere in time my soul remembers
hand to hand combat
with a ready nod I let the trees know
should he approach
I'll go down on...
spit and rise twist the blade and I'm off
sulking in the background is a disturbance
sticking in my mind the beautiful trees
the orchard inviting sings to me
soon I am daydreaming
then I feel someone watching my reverie
reaching for my knife
practicing unsheathing it quickly
with a flick of the rist
an old grand dad
waiting for skin
somewhere in time my soul remembers
hand to hand combat
with a ready nod I let the trees know
should he approach
I'll go down on...
#anxiety
#scary
#spiritual #trees
#spiritual #trees
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3 Comments
WITHIN THE DARKNESS
Here I am still in the process of what night feels like, standing in the very abyss a room with only one way in and one way out. But yet still I remain in a trance staring, into the pits of the illusions that now has invaded my mind, seeking to get into my thoughts and emotions and feelings. Yet I am unafraid to face my fears of the unknown, that hides in the shadows of the illusions of night for I am not alone, in this world of the darkness as there is a light...a Halo over me shinning it's light down on my journey and travel and walk through the DARKNESS.
#scary
#mystery
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
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Death Veil
The black house perched on the hill,
was heavily haunted on a deadly still night.
It punctured the twilight,
that had bled mysterious pink light.
There she was.
Her movement obscure,
in the fog of midnight.
She wore a long tattered death veil.
No one would believe this tale.
Was she coming back or coming to?
In my shaken soul,
terror saunters through.
Does her beginning and end intersect?
She's half alive and half dead.
She turns with a penetrating stare
with hollow eyes of coal.
She came to collect...
was heavily haunted on a deadly still night.
It punctured the twilight,
that had bled mysterious pink light.
There she was.
Her movement obscure,
in the fog of midnight.
She wore a long tattered death veil.
No one would believe this tale.
Was she coming back or coming to?
In my shaken soul,
terror saunters through.
Does her beginning and end intersect?
She's half alive and half dead.
She turns with a penetrating stare
with hollow eyes of coal.
She came to collect...
#ghosts
#scary
143 reads
14 Comments
Blood Orgies
Before you it was just sex
Rough
Bdsm
So what ?
But you
The firestarter
Set off something in me
Vampires
Biting
Blood orgies
Can't stop what you've begun
Are you happy now ?
Rough
Bdsm
So what ?
But you
The firestarter
Set off something in me
Vampires
Biting
Blood orgies
Can't stop what you've begun
Are you happy now ?
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#evil
#scary
#vampires
496 reads
12 Comments
The Ring
To: Anybody
Once there was an girl that was named Samara. And she had a father who didn't care about her. So one day her mom who loves her drowned her in the dark well. And then there was a girl that was not Samara. And she had a boyfriend, basically. They watched this movie; got a call. The call said, " you will die in 7 days".
And the girl fell into the well, and was never to be seen again. Same as the boy. The end.
From, somebody.
Once there was an girl that was named Samara. And she had a father who didn't care about her. So one day her mom who loves her drowned her in the dark well. And then there was a girl that was not Samara. And she had a boyfriend, basically. They watched this movie; got a call. The call said, " you will die in 7 days".
And the girl fell into the well, and was never to be seen again. Same as the boy. The end.
From, somebody.
#nightmares
#scary
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4 Comments
Walls, sheets, curtains, all white...
In the silence of the night shadows creep.
Whispers of the unknown stir the soul.
A chill descends, fingers cold and thin,
tugging at the edges of sanity.
The walls breathe a pulse within the stone.
Echoes of footsteps, unseen yet near.
Eyes in the darkness, staring, unblinking.
A presence felt, but never seen.
The air grows thick, a suffocating dread.
Heartbeat pounding like a distant drum.
A flicker of light reveals a hollow face.
Fleshless grin, frozen in eternal scream.
Hands reach from the void,...
Whispers of the unknown stir the soul.
A chill descends, fingers cold and thin,
tugging at the edges of sanity.
The walls breathe a pulse within the stone.
Echoes of footsteps, unseen yet near.
Eyes in the darkness, staring, unblinking.
A presence felt, but never seen.
The air grows thick, a suffocating dread.
Heartbeat pounding like a distant drum.
A flicker of light reveals a hollow face.
Fleshless grin, frozen in eternal scream.
Hands reach from the void,...
#anxiety
#apathy
#emptiness
#ghosts
#scary
75 reads
8 Comments
Infestation of the Bawdy Snatchers
They don’t lurk in the shadows like they used to
Instead, they hide behind a device with prying eyes
Closely watching their every step, move and action
Sometimes approaching them with convincing lies
Oftentimes they cast a net with maliciously intent
As a young innocent victim falls for their trap
And much to their horror they find themselves
Fighting to find what they lost by a click in a snap
But then I sound the warning horn from the deep
Scanning the figures that fell all the way through
And with calculations I sit there in...
Instead, they hide behind a device with prying eyes
Closely watching their every step, move and action
Sometimes approaching them with convincing lies
Oftentimes they cast a net with maliciously intent
As a young innocent victim falls for their trap
And much to their horror they find themselves
Fighting to find what they lost by a click in a snap
But then I sound the warning horn from the deep
Scanning the figures that fell all the way through
And with calculations I sit there in...
#job
#scary
169 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity's ass whooping!
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#hurt
#lust
#scary
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4 Comments
BILLY - THE REVOLUTIONIST!
I feel like a revolutionist today, folks!
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
Armed & ready to fight prejudice -
With my words!
I had a dose of it last night.
Was told I was not welcome at a certain wine bar,
Situated here, near where I live.
Was told to watch my back -
Just because I'm English!
I only went along for the Karaoke...
Unfortunately,
The guy never saw the person behind the mask -
Never gave him a chance!
After all, I could've been the English guy,
Who fought to save his daughter's life,
The surgeon; instead, fighting...
#hate
#rejection
#scary
#despair
#disappointment
667 reads
39 Comments
Ragpickers
"Save the last dance for me..."
I give thee my decaying peeling flesh ripe
as the tuberose, heavy perfumery leaking
from the vulva neutralizing the miasmas,
foaming, saving it for the ragpickers, like
curdled semen dripping from an abalone's
shell, crawling out of my grave, four
minutes after death
I give thee my decaying peeling flesh ripe
as the tuberose, heavy perfumery leaking
from the vulva neutralizing the miasmas,
foaming, saving it for the ragpickers, like
curdled semen dripping from an abalone's
shell, crawling out of my grave, four
minutes after death
#dark
#erotic
#scary
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0 Comments
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