Poems About Sacrifice Seeking Honest Critique
#sacrifice
Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
Fight For Love
I'm willing to fight for your love,
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
#LGBT
#LookingForLove
#love
#romantic
#sacrifice
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 00:19am
22nd Jun 2024 00:19am
Sacrificial Repossession
On the cross Jesus gave his life with his sacrifice
But motherfuckas are still acting a fool and not living right,
“Every walk of life is doing the same backwards ass shit
On the real he should make a special appearance and cleanse this bitch,
“His sacrifice was for all either they were evil or good
Look at the fucked up world now, you can consider it one big hood,
“Humanity have the nerve to want to travel the stars
But like caged animals we will be kept within our Earthly bars,
“Jesus should take back what he has given...
But motherfuckas are still acting a fool and not living right,
“Every walk of life is doing the same backwards ass shit
On the real he should make a special appearance and cleanse this bitch,
“His sacrifice was for all either they were evil or good
Look at the fucked up world now, you can consider it one big hood,
“Humanity have the nerve to want to travel the stars
But like caged animals we will be kept within our Earthly bars,
“Jesus should take back what he has given...
#disappointment
#sacrifice
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10 Comments
Aquatic-Vehicle
Lexiloo
Lexiloo
Poem Published
10th Jun 2024 9:14am
10th Jun 2024 9:14am
The Cult
Mumble the hymn
Without a stutter
And the gardenias
They’ll creep up
To hug her
Lifeless body
To become one with nature
Or join the cult.
Without a stutter
And the gardenias
They’ll creep up
To hug her
Lifeless body
To become one with nature
Or join the cult.
#corruption
#death
#evil #sacrifice
#evil #sacrifice
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Seelie
Poem Published
1st Jun 2024 5:54am
1st Jun 2024 5:54am
My Inferno
I immolate in my holy fire.
I cry on the pyre
where I will breathe
my last breath
on the breeze,
frozen in the heat.
I lie motionless
and watch the flame
as it undulates.
My fate sealed,
my hate steeled.
My heart
no longer beats,
and my flesh burns
in the scintillating heat.
Raining embers
have left their impression
on my bones.
They've taken their toll
outside of my control.
I'm sick, I can't eat,
I'm incomplete.
All my dreams
and romantic things ...
I cry on the pyre
where I will breathe
my last breath
on the breeze,
frozen in the heat.
I lie motionless
and watch the flame
as it undulates.
My fate sealed,
my hate steeled.
My heart
no longer beats,
and my flesh burns
in the scintillating heat.
Raining embers
have left their impression
on my bones.
They've taken their toll
outside of my control.
I'm sick, I can't eat,
I'm incomplete.
All my dreams
and romantic things ...
#dark
#love
#sacrifice
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Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
9th May 2024 1:47pm
9th May 2024 1:47pm
Note to Friends and a Poem by Mother
Note to friends and a poem by my mother -
I've been advised by my doctors to practice strict bed rest until my baby arrives, which means I won't be writing for a few days. While it's a bit frustrating to slow down, I know it's what's best for my baby and me.
I'm in good hands. A special friend has graciously stepped in to help with my workload, and Joseph, my ever-supportive partner, is by my side, ensuring I'm comfortable and cared for every step of the way. And of course, David continues to provide financial support for which I’m grateful.
As I...
I've been advised by my doctors to practice strict bed rest until my baby arrives, which means I won't be writing for a few days. While it's a bit frustrating to slow down, I know it's what's best for my baby and me.
I'm in good hands. A special friend has graciously stepped in to help with my workload, and Joseph, my ever-supportive partner, is by my side, ensuring I'm comfortable and cared for every step of the way. And of course, David continues to provide financial support for which I’m grateful.
As I...
#motherhood
#pregnancy
#sacrifice
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4 Comments
HowlingHeart
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 4:46pm
3rd May 2024 4:46pm
The Silence in our Friendship
You did this to us it was all your fault; You mesmerized us and led us to your cult.
the time we shared the hours you stole. How we look back upon them so miraculous and true was the time we had. You stole our very will, was that always your goal. We were helpless to resist. Lost in your comfort like a ship lost in the fog and mist. The world around us fills with deception so the darkness grows. Through the darkness coming in from all sides, we couldn't see beyond the end of our nose.
Trust lost and spirit broken, a rage inside us that we thought long since past is...
the time we shared the hours you stole. How we look back upon them so miraculous and true was the time we had. You stole our very will, was that always your goal. We were helpless to resist. Lost in your comfort like a ship lost in the fog and mist. The world around us fills with deception so the darkness grows. Through the darkness coming in from all sides, we couldn't see beyond the end of our nose.
Trust lost and spirit broken, a rage inside us that we thought long since past is...
#friendship
#love
#sacrifice
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PAR
Poem Published
2nd May 2024 10:31pm
2nd May 2024 10:31pm
Letter to the Martyr in the Eye of the Hurricane
In the scars you carry
I see the story of courage.
You are the altar where bravery is sacrificed,
where the soul rises in sacrifice.
Each wound is a verse, each mark, a poem.
The pain you endured is the ink that writes your epic.
Your hands, once firm, now trembling,
held the sword of justice.
Your eyes, once full of hope,
they saw the world break into pieces.
And still, you remain standing,
rising like a beacon in the darkness.
Martyr's body,
you are the silent testimony of the struggle.
Your veins are rivers...
I see the story of courage.
You are the altar where bravery is sacrificed,
where the soul rises in sacrifice.
Each wound is a verse, each mark, a poem.
The pain you endured is the ink that writes your epic.
Your hands, once firm, now trembling,
held the sword of justice.
Your eyes, once full of hope,
they saw the world break into pieces.
And still, you remain standing,
rising like a beacon in the darkness.
Martyr's body,
you are the silent testimony of the struggle.
Your veins are rivers...
#anxiety
#hope
#hurt
#mirror
#sacrifice
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd May 2024 9:23pm
2nd May 2024 9:23pm
New Property Of That One Outlaw Motorcycle Club
Ellie woke up so hungover.
She sees a dragon tattooed on her.
She belongs to the Shoguns.
She sees a dragon tattooed on her.
She belongs to the Shoguns.
#alcohol
#corruption
#fiction
#sacrifice
#suffering
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 10:57am
24th Apr 2024 10:57am
Nothing will go to waste
Welcome to my c-oven
you'll be sanctified
later on, you'll be purified
tomorrow, you'll be rectified
It's time...
it's time for the sacrifice
the sacrifice of YOU!
You wait for the cows to come home
but baby you squirm like an earthworm
sinker, hook & line
your organs we will dine
We slaughter and then we deep fry
crispy on the inner thigh
I now want more, just like a drunken whore
Like it or not,
dissected and cooked,
before you rot
Justify
Comply ...
you'll be sanctified
later on, you'll be purified
tomorrow, you'll be rectified
It's time...
it's time for the sacrifice
the sacrifice of YOU!
You wait for the cows to come home
but baby you squirm like an earthworm
sinker, hook & line
your organs we will dine
We slaughter and then we deep fry
crispy on the inner thigh
I now want more, just like a drunken whore
Like it or not,
dissected and cooked,
before you rot
Justify
Comply ...
#food
#religion
#rhyming
#sacrifice
#satirical
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6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 11:36pm
19th Apr 2024 11:36pm
april songs: journey of life 8
april song 08—conferment
preferent the sacrifices
when the age of reason flow’rs,
for to rise above each crisis
opens new redemption doors.
in the giving and receiving,
hearts are touched and soles are healed,
as beholding is believing
and new confidence is sealed.
let the strife be no deterrent
to the questing of your dreams;
in the end, the sweet conferment
of the stimme of living streams.
though the odyssey be trying,
you shall find recurrent pause
to the weary soul relying
on the...
preferent the sacrifices
when the age of reason flow’rs,
for to rise above each crisis
opens new redemption doors.
in the giving and receiving,
hearts are touched and soles are healed,
as beholding is believing
and new confidence is sealed.
let the strife be no deterrent
to the questing of your dreams;
in the end, the sweet conferment
of the stimme of living streams.
though the odyssey be trying,
you shall find recurrent pause
to the weary soul relying
on the...
#courage
#hope
#NaPoWriMo2024
#sacrifice
#strength
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cabcool
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 2:58am
19th Apr 2024 2:58am
april songs: journey of life 6
april song 06—concupiscent
could the seed of every woman
save the seed of every man,
fate would fashion an in lieu plan
that the cosmos could not span.
for the seed of but one woman
could the serpent’s head make squash,
though the heel of this One True Man
felt a bruise—a mere wish-wash.
antecedent concupiscence
lusts the fountains of the mind,
as does consequent imprudence
leave all innocence behind.
but the vantage of the nations,
clothed with lowly righteousness,
is unmoved by mock oblations,...
could the seed of every woman
save the seed of every man,
fate would fashion an in lieu plan
that the cosmos could not span.
for the seed of but one woman
could the serpent’s head make squash,
though the heel of this One True Man
felt a bruise—a mere wish-wash.
antecedent concupiscence
lusts the fountains of the mind,
as does consequent imprudence
leave all innocence behind.
but the vantage of the nations,
clothed with lowly righteousness,
is unmoved by mock oblations,...
#birth
#motherhood
#NaPoWriMo2024
#redemption
#sacrifice
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cabcool
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 2:52am
19th Apr 2024 2:52am
april songs: journey of life 5
april song 05—infantile
thus the specimental blueprint
nurtured by umbilicus
comes to terms with awesome foot-sprint
whose Seed shall deliver us.
infantile—complete but helpless
—in the milk of human care.
shall He bloom blood-red and selfless,
with whose love none can compare?
is the crown of thorns too prickly
for the innocent of birth?
does the Cross bring death too quickly
to redeem a fallen earth?
could the seed of every woman
save the seed of every man,
fate would fashion an in lieu plan ...
thus the specimental blueprint
nurtured by umbilicus
comes to terms with awesome foot-sprint
whose Seed shall deliver us.
infantile—complete but helpless
—in the milk of human care.
shall He bloom blood-red and selfless,
with whose love none can compare?
is the crown of thorns too prickly
for the innocent of birth?
does the Cross bring death too quickly
to redeem a fallen earth?
could the seed of every woman
save the seed of every man,
fate would fashion an in lieu plan ...
#birth
#LifeCycle
#motherhood
#NaPoWriMo2024
#sacrifice
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