Romantic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#romantic
romantic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Mercurial
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 6:16pm
4th Dec 2024 6:16pm
Lunar Alchemy
In the night of darkness,
The trees get taller on a full moon,
Branches get longer than noon,
Leaves are greener with veins thick.
Darkness gets darker,
Moonlight yearns for blood,
Squirrels hide in their treehouses,
When the beast walks through the forest.
A blend of a wolf and medusa’s head,
Spitting lethal poison out of their hissing voices,
Standing on hooves of a goat,
Looking for innocent blood to cherish its soul.
Walks distances, delving deeper,
Thirst builds up like a snowball,
Swaying anything on...
The trees get taller on a full moon,
Branches get longer than noon,
Leaves are greener with veins thick.
Darkness gets darker,
Moonlight yearns for blood,
Squirrels hide in their treehouses,
When the beast walks through the forest.
A blend of a wolf and medusa’s head,
Spitting lethal poison out of their hissing voices,
Standing on hooves of a goat,
Looking for innocent blood to cherish its soul.
Walks distances, delving deeper,
Thirst builds up like a snowball,
Swaying anything on...
#admiration
#love
#romantic
#strength
#TimeHeals
88 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 00:05am
4th Dec 2024 00:05am
Adulation Bombastry
In a daze of phlogiston and aether
and steampunk chunks of yesteryear vapor
I wrote love sonnets just to bequeath her
on a myriad of fine craft paper...
all for the castles in her maven sky
of woolgathering watercolor drops
the sunbeams brought to her passage bird eye
from lupine fields and fresh Aegilops.
She the canny nymph, and I the satyr,
who hoped she'd take a turn upon my flute
somewhere in my cavorting to mate her
or nurse the dew from her paradise fruit...
raised in that old Virginia for lovers
she already...
and steampunk chunks of yesteryear vapor
I wrote love sonnets just to bequeath her
on a myriad of fine craft paper...
all for the castles in her maven sky
of woolgathering watercolor drops
the sunbeams brought to her passage bird eye
from lupine fields and fresh Aegilops.
She the canny nymph, and I the satyr,
who hoped she'd take a turn upon my flute
somewhere in my cavorting to mate her
or nurse the dew from her paradise fruit...
raised in that old Virginia for lovers
she already...
#marriage
#PowerOfWords
#romantic
#wife
#WritingPoetry
214 reads
10 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 2:29am
3rd Dec 2024 2:29am
Forever be
I want to live
And breathe
For the air to be sweet
And the stars to gleam
For the sun to set
In the brightest rays of light
I want to watch it all
I want to fall
Just a little bit more
In love with you
To reside beside me
To forever be, you and me
What a fascinating thing
And breathe
For the air to be sweet
And the stars to gleam
For the sun to set
In the brightest rays of light
I want to watch it all
I want to fall
Just a little bit more
In love with you
To reside beside me
To forever be, you and me
What a fascinating thing
#FallingInLove
#romantic
205 reads
4 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 12:40pm
30th Nov 2024 12:40pm
Tall White Girl
Her body is like a statue,
When i gaze upon her its like I’m facing a star,
She’s so hot and it burns my guts with passion,
Her lips are so high, and her pride is so low.
Her hug is so tight, and I’m infatuated,
Makes me feel her heartbeats singing,
Between her precious breasts feeling,
I’m safe and so attached.
Her belly is soft and I’m drowning,
Exploring what’s in her navel,
Hoping I can see her before we met,
She’s bald and I’m down to the land undiscovered.
Never been here I cannot deny,
What a woman you...
When i gaze upon her its like I’m facing a star,
She’s so hot and it burns my guts with passion,
Her lips are so high, and her pride is so low.
Her hug is so tight, and I’m infatuated,
Makes me feel her heartbeats singing,
Between her precious breasts feeling,
I’m safe and so attached.
Her belly is soft and I’m drowning,
Exploring what’s in her navel,
Hoping I can see her before we met,
She’s bald and I’m down to the land undiscovered.
Never been here I cannot deny,
What a woman you...
#admiration
#beauty
#happiness
#obsession
#romantic
254 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 4:37am
25th Nov 2024 4:37am
Phosphorus
Phosphorus
You are phosphorus in me
You are the vital nutrient
All that I need is your chemistry in me
I evolve from a microbe on your Heavenly Body
You are phosphorus in me
You are the vital nutrient
All that I need is your chemistry in me
I evolve from a microbe on your Heavenly Body
#emotions
#inspirational
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
110 reads
4 Comments
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 00:19am
25th Nov 2024 00:19am
You said
You said you like my bullying
You like how I am kind of mean
You think my love for animals
Is the cutest thing you've ever seen
You like my crazy and you like my weird
Just like those other guys
I thought I heard it all and then
You said you like my eyes
When you look at them you smile more
I never liked my eyes
I never heard that one, they never said that one
before
You like my figure
You said I look hot in a dress
You like my hair
Even in the morning when it's a mess
You think I'm funny...
You like how I am kind of mean
You think my love for animals
Is the cutest thing you've ever seen
You like my crazy and you like my weird
Just like those other guys
I thought I heard it all and then
You said you like my eyes
When you look at them you smile more
I never liked my eyes
I never heard that one, they never said that one
before
You like my figure
You said I look hot in a dress
You like my hair
Even in the morning when it's a mess
You think I'm funny...
#boyfriend
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#love
#romantic
96 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 6:05pm
22nd Nov 2024 6:05pm
Sometimes I Daydream
I want to sleep next to you
Want to watch you breathe
Want to put my arm around you
I know I'll get hard
But
Ignore that
This is platonic
Unless it's not
And
We'll know if that happens...
Want to watch you breathe
Want to put my arm around you
I know I'll get hard
But
Ignore that
This is platonic
Unless it's not
And
We'll know if that happens...
#confessional
#crush
#friendship
#LifeAsAWriter
#romantic
217 reads
23 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
Our Hearts Beat As One (Whispers of Love) (collab w/ Sappho)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
#collaboration
#FallingInLove
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
174 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 00:36am
18th Nov 2024 00:36am
2024 November Poems >> moments to remember
No. 06
moments to remember
“Dream as if you’ll live
forever, live as if you’ll die
today.”—James Dean
let’s build a dream that no one else can dream:
of honeysuckle kisses full of rhyme;
red heart-to-heart love promises that theme
the mountainsides with passions in their prime.
let’s leave our footprints in the sinking sand,
ere some gigantic wave comes to the shore
and ferries it across some distant land
whence, wanderlusting, we must hopes explore.
let’s populate the river with dark skin,
and...
moments to remember
“Dream as if you’ll live
forever, live as if you’ll die
today.”—James Dean
let’s build a dream that no one else can dream:
of honeysuckle kisses full of rhyme;
red heart-to-heart love promises that theme
the mountainsides with passions in their prime.
let’s leave our footprints in the sinking sand,
ere some gigantic wave comes to the shore
and ferries it across some distant land
whence, wanderlusting, we must hopes explore.
let’s populate the river with dark skin,
and...
#boyfriend
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#romantic
124 reads
0 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 9:28pm
13th Nov 2024 9:28pm
Icarus's - The Sun
You would be surprised by the things I have seen.
And probably run away if you truly knew who I use to be.
If I was Superman, you would be my sun giving me life again.
But I'm more like Icarus, an arrogant and sinful man.
Who was never really into following God's master plan.
But since I have met you, I would follow you into heaven, scaling fences again and again.
For you there is nothing I wouldn't do.
This much I know is true.
I'd fly up to the heavens, just to barrel back to earth for a moment with you.
And probably run away if you truly knew who I use to be.
If I was Superman, you would be my sun giving me life again.
But I'm more like Icarus, an arrogant and sinful man.
Who was never really into following God's master plan.
But since I have met you, I would follow you into heaven, scaling fences again and again.
For you there is nothing I wouldn't do.
This much I know is true.
I'd fly up to the heavens, just to barrel back to earth for a moment with you.
#FallingInLove
#love
#mythology
#relationships
#romantic
130 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 12:14pm
11th Nov 2024 12:14pm
Within My Heart
Numerous times when I look or hear about people being lonely
I have a feeling of sadness deep inside
It makes me wonder if I would have been alone, before I found you
What would happen if you turned around and said goodbye
Honey it's you
you're what I'm living for
I have it all, nothing more
right from the start when I found you
Baby it's you
you were the one for me
the one who's been making me see
the world with you is such a brighter place
I now realize it's you
you are my brightest star
whether you're...
I have a feeling of sadness deep inside
It makes me wonder if I would have been alone, before I found you
What would happen if you turned around and said goodbye
Honey it's you
you're what I'm living for
I have it all, nothing more
right from the start when I found you
Baby it's you
you were the one for me
the one who's been making me see
the world with you is such a brighter place
I now realize it's you
you are my brightest star
whether you're...
#loneliness
#love
#lyrics
#relationships
#romantic
152 reads
6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 7:44am
10th Nov 2024 7:44am
2024 November Poems >> falling in love daze
No. 03
falling in love daze
“Have you ever watched a leaf leave a tree? It falls upward first, and then it drifts
toward the ground, just as i find myself drifting toward you.”—Beth Kephart
how i remember riverbanks we sat on,
watching abscond the may bugs that we spat on,
goosing beneath the bough you hung your hat on.
gosh! how i loved the way you made me kiss you!
how i recall the day i caught you crying,
when tritely,...
falling in love daze
“Have you ever watched a leaf leave a tree? It falls upward first, and then it drifts
toward the ground, just as i find myself drifting toward you.”—Beth Kephart
how i remember riverbanks we sat on,
watching abscond the may bugs that we spat on,
goosing beneath the bough you hung your hat on.
gosh! how i loved the way you made me kiss you!
how i recall the day i caught you crying,
when tritely,...
#emotional
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#lover
#romantic
115 reads
0 Comments
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