Poems About Redemption Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poems about redemption seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Shon
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 5:21pm
31st Dec 2024 5:21pm
The eve of new year 2025
I'm going out not knowing.
hoping to find some knowing.
This year has been a trike.
Hoping next years betta.
Or at least no worst.
Through there's room
A plenty for betta.
For me and all others.
Other year...
lured by a lover.
This time last year.
Future promising looked.
Lover left me.
Off with my best friend.
Oh I do miss the fella lol.
Other things other.
Didn't seem to go right.
Going with the flow do I.
The ebb & flow of the tide. ...
hoping to find some knowing.
This year has been a trike.
Hoping next years betta.
Or at least no worst.
Through there's room
A plenty for betta.
For me and all others.
Other year...
lured by a lover.
This time last year.
Future promising looked.
Lover left me.
Off with my best friend.
Oh I do miss the fella lol.
Other things other.
Didn't seem to go right.
Going with the flow do I.
The ebb & flow of the tide. ...
#forgiveness
#kindness
#love
#redemption
#TimeHeals
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APissPoorShaman
Ryszard
Ryszard
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 5:54am
30th Dec 2024 5:54am
Untamed
Love is not the gentle breeze of fairy tales
there are no happy ending with love untamed
but an unbreakable vow
melting skin from boney fingers
if we take our oath lightly and cast it out
A love so deep the gods themselves
cannot sate the yearning to be more than we are
It is not the love of neat little houses and routine
nor two point three kids and a tesla living in the garage
but the kind of love that makes demons blush
and mothers lift cars from children trapped beneath
Love demanding sacrifice, your...
there are no happy ending with love untamed
but an unbreakable vow
melting skin from boney fingers
if we take our oath lightly and cast it out
A love so deep the gods themselves
cannot sate the yearning to be more than we are
It is not the love of neat little houses and routine
nor two point three kids and a tesla living in the garage
but the kind of love that makes demons blush
and mothers lift cars from children trapped beneath
Love demanding sacrifice, your...
#love
#redemption
#sacrifice
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Shon
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 10:27pm
29th Dec 2024 10:27pm
The Fairies in the Fog
Walking home last night.
A fog eliminated the view.
Replacing all colours with a grey hue.
Tabula rasa moment.
I'm in the zone.
My mind thoughts & words mingle.
In that place, jumbled yet unformed.
Words painting visual imagines.
Of eclectic hues and colours.
Sky and clouds became a canvas.
Primed in gray tones.
Silhouettes back lit by street lights.
The world desaturated.
Devoid of colour.
Gray on grey on gray. ...
A fog eliminated the view.
Replacing all colours with a grey hue.
Tabula rasa moment.
I'm in the zone.
My mind thoughts & words mingle.
In that place, jumbled yet unformed.
Words painting visual imagines.
Of eclectic hues and colours.
Sky and clouds became a canvas.
Primed in gray tones.
Silhouettes back lit by street lights.
The world desaturated.
Devoid of colour.
Gray on grey on gray. ...
#gratitude
#hope
#redemption
#SelfReflection
#fairies
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oskar
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 7:13pm
28th Dec 2024 7:13pm
the glory
The glory of vanity
This Saturday started well
I did my exercise, two toasts and coffee
Going to a café for lunch, elegantly driving
There, this, for winter- mild day
As I entered a person rushed in front of me
Opened the door wide, I thanked him grandly
But I felt old, is this the way people see me
At home when not compared to someone youthful
I dance in the living room and feel
Glorious, but outside, my feet are reluctant to
Lift from the ground
I wish people would see me then and not the doddering old fool
This Saturday started well
I did my exercise, two toasts and coffee
Going to a café for lunch, elegantly driving
There, this, for winter- mild day
As I entered a person rushed in front of me
Opened the door wide, I thanked him grandly
But I felt old, is this the way people see me
At home when not compared to someone youthful
I dance in the living room and feel
Glorious, but outside, my feet are reluctant to
Lift from the ground
I wish people would see me then and not the doddering old fool
#courage
#love
#motivational
#redemption
#respect
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Styxian
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 2:19am
23rd Dec 2024 2:19am
Adjacent Fires
Dreams are like sermons from false prophets
Grasping for that grain of truth
within a mind full of grandeur
Indeed, if it wakes me
I may jot down key words
around the edges of the current page
within my bible
That lays upon the nightstand
beside the bed
That word; Holy, glaring like a mockery
So I never close the book, to expose the cover
to my lifetime sins
when I'd digress from each commandment
Just to wait and see
if I get to wake up in the mornings
~ ...
Grasping for that grain of truth
within a mind full of grandeur
Indeed, if it wakes me
I may jot down key words
around the edges of the current page
within my bible
That lays upon the nightstand
beside the bed
That word; Holy, glaring like a mockery
So I never close the book, to expose the cover
to my lifetime sins
when I'd digress from each commandment
Just to wait and see
if I get to wake up in the mornings
~ ...
#hope
#redemption
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oskar
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 10:06am
15th Dec 2024 10:06am
penniless in Le Havre edited stuff
Penniless in le Havre.
In the time of my nadir penniless in Le Havre
in the drizzle, I saw the blue neon light of a bar
I met sailors from my country
they gave me cigarettes and wine
also money so I could take the train home
thanks to the generosity of the poor
I had a pencil and a block of paper and tried to
collect my thoughts of what I was thinking.
Found I was more educated than I thought
that is what reading a thousand books does to your brain confuse
you to believe that you are better than others.
I also saw my...
In the time of my nadir penniless in Le Havre
in the drizzle, I saw the blue neon light of a bar
I met sailors from my country
they gave me cigarettes and wine
also money so I could take the train home
thanks to the generosity of the poor
I had a pencil and a block of paper and tried to
collect my thoughts of what I was thinking.
Found I was more educated than I thought
that is what reading a thousand books does to your brain confuse
you to believe that you are better than others.
I also saw my...
#kindness
#love
#motivational
#redemption
#respect
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oskar
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 7:46pm
9th Dec 2024 7:46pm
merciful (edited)
the meaningless
why is it that we who have no connection
with those who have the power of what
gets heard and published.
Today, we drove from Cascais to Lisbon
a drive that usually took half an hour
it took an hour more because of modern time
had upset the calculation
a modern society is measured by how many
cars are on the road at the same time
we who sit at home are in the news reminded
of this by those who call this progress
after this profound observation, the rest is
pointless history is eaten by false history
...
why is it that we who have no connection
with those who have the power of what
gets heard and published.
Today, we drove from Cascais to Lisbon
a drive that usually took half an hour
it took an hour more because of modern time
had upset the calculation
a modern society is measured by how many
cars are on the road at the same time
we who sit at home are in the news reminded
of this by those who call this progress
after this profound observation, the rest is
pointless history is eaten by false history
...
#courage
#motivational
#redemption
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DarkPopPrincess
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 4:50pm
8th Dec 2024 4:50pm
I May Be That Girl
I may be that disabled girl who's so sick she cannot work a normal job, but she's the artist that will save so many lives. She's the artist who knows that her art will heal herself in a way a normal job can't.
I may be that girl who was rarely ever chosen, rarely ever picked, but I know now that I will let love find me. I need many years alone. But I'm a caring individual who won't beg for love; I will things happen the way they're supposed to.
I may be that girl who thinks she'll off herself if things get too hard, but I'm going to try anyway and do this artist thing....
I may be that girl who was rarely ever chosen, rarely ever picked, but I know now that I will let love find me. I need many years alone. But I'm a caring individual who won't beg for love; I will things happen the way they're supposed to.
I may be that girl who thinks she'll off herself if things get too hard, but I'm going to try anyway and do this artist thing....
#hope
#redemption
#TimeHeals
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DarkPopPrincess
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 9:50pm
3rd Dec 2024 9:50pm
Putting The Blame Back On Those Who Have Hurt Me
I almost went into a self harm spiral, but I stopped myself,
and instead, I yelled at them instead of myself.
This is progress.
Yes, blame society,
fuck blaming myself.
and instead, I yelled at them instead of myself.
This is progress.
Yes, blame society,
fuck blaming myself.
#redemption
#strength
#TimeHeals
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oskar
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 8:35am
30th Nov 2024 8:35am
pre surgery
pre-surgery
I have growth on my lower leg
which I bravely ignored till my wife
said I was smelling
It offended me, who showers every morning
I went to see my doctor, a woman in her
the sixties, she insisted on kissing me when I visit
as a result, I love her
Yes, it was a tumor surgery, the ninth of
Dismember
My doctor's name is Teresa, I knew a woman
in Curacao, she was lovely too, named Teresa
When I left her office, I noticed she
didn't kiss me, but said something about
iodine, changing the wound, putting on ...
I have growth on my lower leg
which I bravely ignored till my wife
said I was smelling
It offended me, who showers every morning
I went to see my doctor, a woman in her
the sixties, she insisted on kissing me when I visit
as a result, I love her
Yes, it was a tumor surgery, the ninth of
Dismember
My doctor's name is Teresa, I knew a woman
in Curacao, she was lovely too, named Teresa
When I left her office, I noticed she
didn't kiss me, but said something about
iodine, changing the wound, putting on ...
#kindness
#love
#motivational
#redemption
#strength
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DarkPopPrincess
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 4:08pm
29th Nov 2024 4:08pm
My Sacred Temple
I plan to build a temple for the true outcasts.
For the hardcore skeptics,
for the potential murderers and convicts,
for the orphans and widows,
for the lonely and scared,
for the prostitutes,
and more.
Open debate, social events, support groups, amusement parks, and more will be created.
Partake in the true experience of Heaven on Earth!
There are no sermons, but the voice of people will be heard.
No hierarchy...God is everywhere!
For the hardcore skeptics,
for the potential murderers and convicts,
for the orphans and widows,
for the lonely and scared,
for the prostitutes,
and more.
Open debate, social events, support groups, amusement parks, and more will be created.
Partake in the true experience of Heaven on Earth!
There are no sermons, but the voice of people will be heard.
No hierarchy...God is everywhere!
#philosophical
#redemption
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
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DarkPopPrincess
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 9:29pm
28th Nov 2024 9:29pm
Terra/Sarah
"Terra: Back off! I'm with the Titans! They'll be coming to--
Slade: You don't belong with the Titans.
Terra: You don't know anything about me!
Slade: On the contrary, Terra. I know everything about you. I've been watching you for some time. I know why you're always running away.
Slade: I know your secret, little girl.
Terra: No!
Slade: Earthquakes. Avalanches. Mudslides. Everywhere you go, you try to do good. And everywhere you fail. So everyone turns against you.
Slade: You lack control, Terra. And when...
Slade: You don't belong with the Titans.
Terra: You don't know anything about me!
Slade: On the contrary, Terra. I know everything about you. I've been watching you for some time. I know why you're always running away.
Slade: I know your secret, little girl.
Terra: No!
Slade: Earthquakes. Avalanches. Mudslides. Everywhere you go, you try to do good. And everywhere you fail. So everyone turns against you.
Slade: You lack control, Terra. And when...
#love
#redemption
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