Poems About Prison Seeking Honest Critique
#prison
Fire Ring
First off
you gotta make it through that fire ring
of course I got that work, lets say im hiring
I part your Red Sea
the doctors can't bridge the gap
I clapped him on the top of his head
thats a jumping jack
you gotta make it through that fire ring
of course I got that work, lets say im hiring
I part your Red Sea
the doctors can't bridge the gap
I clapped him on the top of his head
thats a jumping jack
#sex
#violence
#LifeGoals #prison
#LifeGoals #prison
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Bars, Lines, Stanzas
Bars, Lines, Stanzas"
Bars, lines, stanzas, poetry, rap riddims/
Looking for the answers, trapped inside this prison
I can't let it go, cause rap is my addiction/
I know I'm just a single flow, from going back to prison
Still I pen my poems like, I didn't friggin listen/
Cause it is what it is, and it isn't what it isn't
Britain isn't great, but I love this Great Britain/
Raised out in country, but the place I rate is Brixton
The only place that loved me, when everybody didn't/
So I big em up in poetry, and respect is what I...
Bars, lines, stanzas, poetry, rap riddims/
Looking for the answers, trapped inside this prison
I can't let it go, cause rap is my addiction/
I know I'm just a single flow, from going back to prison
Still I pen my poems like, I didn't friggin listen/
Cause it is what it is, and it isn't what it isn't
Britain isn't great, but I love this Great Britain/
Raised out in country, but the place I rate is Brixton
The only place that loved me, when everybody didn't/
So I big em up in poetry, and respect is what I...
#hope
#courage
#prison
#rap
#determination
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Prison
Reeks of hell, ceiling lost in mould,
trapped behind a door hermetic.
Claustrophobia at its best, to unfold
as mental lunacy for days, kinetics
trapped inside feet within a square meter,
and I shall be no more, yet can I die?
For a fragile girl, this gruesome theatre
of criminals on top, below oppressed goodbyes.
Mistakes are easily ommitted...
Politicians, please do kill and steal.
Freedom prevails for your commited
endless cycle of pig life style and meal.
Politeness and diligence never matter, do they?
I...
trapped behind a door hermetic.
Claustrophobia at its best, to unfold
as mental lunacy for days, kinetics
trapped inside feet within a square meter,
and I shall be no more, yet can I die?
For a fragile girl, this gruesome theatre
of criminals on top, below oppressed goodbyes.
Mistakes are easily ommitted...
Politicians, please do kill and steal.
Freedom prevails for your commited
endless cycle of pig life style and meal.
Politeness and diligence never matter, do they?
I...
#regret
#drugs
#MentalHealth
#prison
#FeelingTrapped
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Plea Deal
How should I begin so as to end this plea?
I bleed from my heart for our reality
Continously we are seen as less than
It's harder to breathe in the free land
We're choking off of guns chain smoke
Nooses tightening even when provoked
I've wrote on this more than a few times
I'm tired of writing these type of rhymes
Time's of the essence; who wields the clock?
It's downright depressin'; even on the block
Glocks pop non-stop; aiming at my hue
We've tried everything; what's left to do?
The boys in blue and you...
I bleed from my heart for our reality
Continously we are seen as less than
It's harder to breathe in the free land
We're choking off of guns chain smoke
Nooses tightening even when provoked
I've wrote on this more than a few times
I'm tired of writing these type of rhymes
Time's of the essence; who wields the clock?
It's downright depressin'; even on the block
Glocks pop non-stop; aiming at my hue
We've tried everything; what's left to do?
The boys in blue and you...
#depression
#death
#MentalHealth #prison
#MentalHealth #prison
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psalm 10
___of Andrew___
for the forgotten of the earth
1 for thus saith the Lord in Zion,
of the tribe of judah, Lion:
I will give you rest.
2 come to Me, if, in your hunger,
you can bear your lack no longer;
put Me to the test.
3 when your thirst becomes your slaughter,
I will give you Living Water,
that you no more thirst.
4 I will break the bonds of prison,
e'en if you commit high treason;
Judgment Mine is First.
5 when your loins, stark naked, beg bread,
I will cover you in good...
for the forgotten of the earth
1 for thus saith the Lord in Zion,
of the tribe of judah, Lion:
I will give you rest.
2 come to Me, if, in your hunger,
you can bear your lack no longer;
put Me to the test.
3 when your thirst becomes your slaughter,
I will give you Living Water,
that you no more thirst.
4 I will break the bonds of prison,
e'en if you commit high treason;
Judgment Mine is First.
5 when your loins, stark naked, beg bread,
I will cover you in good...
#water
#food
#illness
#prison
#poverty
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Bound and Helpless in Chamber 44
I want you
Bound and helpless
Chamber 44
Are you listening ?
Bound and helpless
Chamber 44
Are you listening ?
#BDSM
#prison
#FeelingTrapped
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I'm your Prisoner
Your eroticism thrills me
A visceral burn
I simmer all day
Waiting for release
I’m your prisoner of want
Aroused and bothered
I wait in your sensual garden
My paradise of desire
A visceral burn
I simmer all day
Waiting for release
I’m your prisoner of want
Aroused and bothered
I wait in your sensual garden
My paradise of desire
#lust
#erotic
#lover
#prison
#sensual
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22 Comments
To Release The Captive Is Denied
Motion to release
the captive is denied for
she's now ready to
be stripped bare and used as this
colony's new breeding stock!
the captive is denied for
she's now ready to
be stripped bare and used as this
colony's new breeding stock!
#lust
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#prison
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Behind them walls ( stop doing stupid stuff)
Behind the walls: looking for freedom in a room full of individuals like you who made mistakes and bad choices. All you can do is sleep and work out to make the day go by faster. Behind them walls are rough and horrible for social media and a privileged state of mind. You are in there alone with your thoughts going crazy thinking of different things you can do next time and who you can call to bail you out if you get bail. When you are at your lowest point of your life whoever comes through with a blessing for you see freedom or put money on your books ride for that person and always has his...
#dark
#prison
#inequality
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BEHAVE OR BE ENSLAVED
Retribution or rehabilitation
What's the solution of the equation
My conclusion is that it's the former
Man's resolution for nonconformers
Employers ignore ya if you're a felon
Recidivism's high; back in jail again
It's a win, win for the former C.C.A.
And all the investors looking for pay
They say the days of slaves are history
Yet that's not true if you commit a felony
Was it all designed to be in a master's plan
The 2nd highest population of all the lands
What's the solution of the equation
My conclusion is that it's the former
Man's resolution for nonconformers
Employers ignore ya if you're a felon
Recidivism's high; back in jail again
It's a win, win for the former C.C.A.
And all the investors looking for pay
They say the days of slaves are history
Yet that's not true if you commit a felony
Was it all designed to be in a master's plan
The 2nd highest population of all the lands
#politics
#LifeStruggles
#prison #revenge
#prison #revenge
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Corridors & Encores
This game called life's a full contact sport
With many collisions in public opinion's court
Get caught slippin' and it'll ring your bell
A morgue, a jail cell or days of living hell
Where many dwell after sad, deferred dreams
As dreams become nightmares with loud screams
Without support teams being embedded in our corners
Desperation's equations may lead to wrong corridors
As mental calculators attempt to compute discernment
Miscalculations of minute fractions result in internment
Government or state property and maybe even...
With many collisions in public opinion's court
Get caught slippin' and it'll ring your bell
A morgue, a jail cell or days of living hell
Where many dwell after sad, deferred dreams
As dreams become nightmares with loud screams
Without support teams being embedded in our corners
Desperation's equations may lead to wrong corridors
As mental calculators attempt to compute discernment
Miscalculations of minute fractions result in internment
Government or state property and maybe even...
#death
#LifeStruggles
#prison
#nightmares
#choices
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HAPPY JUNETEENTH
Red, black and green
PanAfricanist's dream
Celebrating Juneteenth
Hue mens set free
End of slavery
Or so it seems
Except the thirteenth
Has loopholes beneath
Shackles and chains
Today on our brains
Torment sustained
Epigenetic remains
So many slain
Soil is stained
Clinically insane
Pain retained
PanAfricanist's dream
Celebrating Juneteenth
Hue mens set free
End of slavery
Or so it seems
Except the thirteenth
Has loopholes beneath
Shackles and chains
Today on our brains
Torment sustained
Epigenetic remains
So many slain
Soil is stained
Clinically insane
Pain retained
#dreams
#death
#MentalHealth
#freedom
#prison
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DU Poetry : Poems About Prison Seeking Honest Critique