Poems About Peace Seeking Honest Critique
#peace
Senryu - Haz Lo
Sad to say they died
doing what they didn't love
each moment precious
doing what they didn't love
each moment precious
#dreams
#love
#peace
#risk
#SelfDiscovery
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Vanished into the Night
The moonlight spills like silver tears,
Tears of a love that vanished in fear,
In whispers soft, through moonlit beams,
A melody mourning in forgotten dreams,
Our laughter, once a symphony, now a sigh,
Two souls adrift beneath a pale, moonlit sky,
Secrets shared in whispered tales,
Now echoes in the shadows that fail,
Hand in hand, we danced on stardust's gleam,
A timeless waltz, in an ethereal dream,
Eyes met, gazes locked in a starlit stare,
A love story written in the cosmic air,
But shadows crept, whispers turned to...
Tears of a love that vanished in fear,
In whispers soft, through moonlit beams,
A melody mourning in forgotten dreams,
Our laughter, once a symphony, now a sigh,
Two souls adrift beneath a pale, moonlit sky,
Secrets shared in whispered tales,
Now echoes in the shadows that fail,
Hand in hand, we danced on stardust's gleam,
A timeless waltz, in an ethereal dream,
Eyes met, gazes locked in a starlit stare,
A love story written in the cosmic air,
But shadows crept, whispers turned to...
#dreams
#inspirational
#LifeAsAWriter
#love
#peace
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Longing
A sleepless night begins, and, much like another
I crawl through the darkness as the mind sunders
Words are gone, horror a newfound companion
Until the dawn, it's a quest for a new oblivion
Silence is everywhere, a sight ever so solemn
In these times that oh so wish to be forgotten
Shaking, moving, quickly twisting, hastily breathing
Moans and begging, asking for a reply: but nothing.
Suddenly, a faint light. New odour. Invisible sight.
Rattling at the door of the spirit, with such might!
Transported to another land, I smile, and...
I crawl through the darkness as the mind sunders
Words are gone, horror a newfound companion
Until the dawn, it's a quest for a new oblivion
Silence is everywhere, a sight ever so solemn
In these times that oh so wish to be forgotten
Shaking, moving, quickly twisting, hastily breathing
Moans and begging, asking for a reply: but nothing.
Suddenly, a faint light. New odour. Invisible sight.
Rattling at the door of the spirit, with such might!
Transported to another land, I smile, and...
#anxiety
#meditation
#nature
#peace
#rhyming
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WONDERS OF THE WORLD
You wield the beauty of all the world’s wonders.
It resonates from your delicate skin,
Shining in the light of your eyes,
Flowing through your hair, like the Nile River,
An eternal cascade of grace and splendor.
Your beauty is projected in all that you do,
Every gesture, every smile, a testament to your essence.
You have the grace of all the angels in heaven,
A celestial elegance that blesses every moment.
Like Proverbs 3:15-18, it speaks so true of you:
“She is more precious than rubies; nothing you desire can compare with...
It resonates from your delicate skin,
Shining in the light of your eyes,
Flowing through your hair, like the Nile River,
An eternal cascade of grace and splendor.
Your beauty is projected in all that you do,
Every gesture, every smile, a testament to your essence.
You have the grace of all the angels in heaven,
A celestial elegance that blesses every moment.
Like Proverbs 3:15-18, it speaks so true of you:
“She is more precious than rubies; nothing you desire can compare with...
#love
#peace
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Reset
My heart is racing
My body is aching
One punch
Kick
Block
My sweat pours down my face
I’m still aching
The mentality of a warrior
Runs through my veins
I have the reins
Fighting has been my way of coping
I feel more in control
When I am sore
I fight harder
Another four punch combo
Ending with a KO
When life gets me down
I tend to frown thinking of the past
But I can’t do that
I have to look past what’s been done
And know that I can move on
So one punch
Two punch
Block ...
My body is aching
One punch
Kick
Block
My sweat pours down my face
I’m still aching
The mentality of a warrior
Runs through my veins
I have the reins
Fighting has been my way of coping
I feel more in control
When I am sore
I fight harder
Another four punch combo
Ending with a KO
When life gets me down
I tend to frown thinking of the past
But I can’t do that
I have to look past what’s been done
And know that I can move on
So one punch
Two punch
Block ...
#courage
#healing
#meditation
#peace
#sports
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Quiet peace of mind.
I close my eyes
& see the world
For what it truly is,
I hear the silence
In the noise
& feel the peaceful bliss.
& see the world
For what it truly is,
I hear the silence
In the noise
& feel the peaceful bliss.
#peace
#SelfReflection
#strength
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Therapy Session #3
Therapist : You spoke about “Home”
What does home represent ?
Protagonist :
Home represents a construct.
in its natural cocoon,
it blooms with sprung wings of elegance.
Home is a muse to unsung poetry.
love’s elusive grace
the ministry of presence.
Home drew its first breath on March 27th.
I found true perspective in beauty and loss.
her eyes agleam on first sight.
she sought me out and broke my will.
Home was born unlike the others.
the color blue under the sanguine skies
I've...
What does home represent ?
Protagonist :
Home represents a construct.
in its natural cocoon,
it blooms with sprung wings of elegance.
Home is a muse to unsung poetry.
love’s elusive grace
the ministry of presence.
Home drew its first breath on March 27th.
I found true perspective in beauty and loss.
her eyes agleam on first sight.
she sought me out and broke my will.
Home was born unlike the others.
the color blue under the sanguine skies
I've...
#happiness
#honesty
#hope
#peace
#vulnerability
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A Ceasefire for a Genocide, He Begs
It's time for this war to end
the old white man said standing
on land irrigated with the
blood of forty thousand, blood
of mostly women and children.
It must end, for just six hours,
words wafting over rubble,
drifting through hospitals now
only morgues, whispering
through schools the children lie
under instead of learning in,
whirling through evacuation
camps evacuated by bombs.
It's time to end this war
the old white man pled, gripping
the lectern while talking
about a country he denies
exists,...
the old white man said standing
on land irrigated with the
blood of forty thousand, blood
of mostly women and children.
It must end, for just six hours,
words wafting over rubble,
drifting through hospitals now
only morgues, whispering
through schools the children lie
under instead of learning in,
whirling through evacuation
camps evacuated by bombs.
It's time to end this war
the old white man pled, gripping
the lectern while talking
about a country he denies
exists,...
#peace
#war
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Moving Away From The Past (II)
Darkness cannot drive out darkness; only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that.
Martin Luther King, Jr.
Martin Luther King, Jr.
#hope
#inspirational
#peace
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Get Outta My Head
A decade ago unexpectedly I had miracle vision
Heaven opened serendipitous and ornate walked her by decision
Not just any but her specially given entrusted to me
This woman submitted to love a good man who yearns reciprocity
Both have big ideas and long for family shared
She embodied me in essence all ten years and genuinely cares
Meeting was not by chance but so godly ordained
In five days strangers became bound she would share his last name
Its puzzling how two weeks fused both uniquely fit
By three months two souls were inseparable and could...
Heaven opened serendipitous and ornate walked her by decision
Not just any but her specially given entrusted to me
This woman submitted to love a good man who yearns reciprocity
Both have big ideas and long for family shared
She embodied me in essence all ten years and genuinely cares
Meeting was not by chance but so godly ordained
In five days strangers became bound she would share his last name
Its puzzling how two weeks fused both uniquely fit
By three months two souls were inseparable and could...
#nostalgia
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
#peace
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Night
I want to break out into the night
Go somewhere far from sight
Drifting into the absence of light
Beyond the reach of the fight
Under the stars surrounded by peace
All the cares and worries come to cease
Hidden from the world, able to release
The company of shadows makes the anxiety decrease
Stillness brings serenity to my soul
The solitude facilitates me gaining control
Free from the weight of playing a role
Recharging the energy that the daylight stole
I'd try to keep moving to stay ahead of the sun ...
Go somewhere far from sight
Drifting into the absence of light
Beyond the reach of the fight
Under the stars surrounded by peace
All the cares and worries come to cease
Hidden from the world, able to release
The company of shadows makes the anxiety decrease
Stillness brings serenity to my soul
The solitude facilitates me gaining control
Free from the weight of playing a role
Recharging the energy that the daylight stole
I'd try to keep moving to stay ahead of the sun ...
#escape
#freedom
#night
#peace
#silence
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Or Else
If you need violence to make religious converts,
you have no real faith,
because you have
no confidence, no comfort
in your own belief
and no way to speak
from your heart
about God.
you have no real faith,
because you have
no confidence, no comfort
in your own belief
and no way to speak
from your heart
about God.
#Buddhist
#peace
#religion
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