Poems About Patience Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about patience seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
silent_lotus
Poem Published
28th May 2023 5:07pm
28th May 2023 5:07pm
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#utopia
#faith
#fate
#patience
#acceptance
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drinkingflux
mila throat
mila throat
Poem Published
15th May 2023 9:34pm
15th May 2023 9:34pm
[WIP]
the pulp of an orange
twisting like a labyrinthine
tear my carpels apart
consume my pericarp
tenuous chiffon, unveil me
rip me from my seams
pick out the loose threads
something you'll never mend
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(when i first got together with
my partner, it was hard for me
i was unused to feeling
the rawness and reality of love.
so quickly i became obsessed
with that idea and i felt afraid.
i didn't want him to leave me
and the only type of love...
twisting like a labyrinthine
tear my carpels apart
consume my pericarp
tenuous chiffon, unveil me
rip me from my seams
pick out the loose threads
something you'll never mend
.
.
.
.
.
.
(when i first got together with
my partner, it was hard for me
i was unused to feeling
the rawness and reality of love.
so quickly i became obsessed
with that idea and i felt afraid.
i didn't want him to leave me
and the only type of love...
#patience
#FirstLove
#sacrifice #obsession
#sacrifice #obsession
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Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
8th Apr 2023 10:36pm
8th Apr 2023 10:36pm
Silence with stillness - NaPoWriMo2023 #8
Silence with stillness;
appreciated,
amongst numerous attentions,
holidayed respite
from rat raced demands.
Momentary,
as a wind rustled leaf
on the tree,
caressed
and not forced,
such joy can fade
yet these moments
needn't be held
forever
brief junctures
fronting junctions to next steps
before once more
into life's breached peace.
appreciated,
amongst numerous attentions,
holidayed respite
from rat raced demands.
Momentary,
as a wind rustled leaf
on the tree,
caressed
and not forced,
such joy can fade
yet these moments
needn't be held
forever
brief junctures
fronting junctions to next steps
before once more
into life's breached peace.
#silence
#patience
#NaPoWriMo2023
136 reads
1 Comment
TranquilChi
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2023 4:44am
2nd Apr 2023 4:44am
Enter Nirvana
Breathe in the moment
exhale exhaustion
follow the movement
and grasp ascension
One step at a time
there's no rush no worry
higher and higher we climb
no deadline no need to scurry
all is well you are doing just fine
at the top you'll find a breath taking view
release your 'self' to tranquil nirvana
abandon all worries be born anew
be cleansed of any and all stigmata
transcend all that's unbecoming of you
now it's time we began to descend
retreat back to our existence
allow the soul time to mend ...
exhale exhaustion
follow the movement
and grasp ascension
One step at a time
there's no rush no worry
higher and higher we climb
no deadline no need to scurry
all is well you are doing just fine
at the top you'll find a breath taking view
release your 'self' to tranquil nirvana
abandon all worries be born anew
be cleansed of any and all stigmata
transcend all that's unbecoming of you
now it's time we began to descend
retreat back to our existence
allow the soul time to mend ...
#happiness
#patience
#TimeHeals
#meditation
#emotions
314 reads
3 Comments
ExtremeTalksAlexx
Alexx
Alexx
Poem Published
8th Mar 2023 1:26am
8th Mar 2023 1:26am
The One You Listened To
I am the one who throws down the highest spade.
I am the one who says whatever without shade !
I’m the one told them it was ok to invade ,not only did I tell them that it was ok , I showed them the way.
not only did I show them the way ,I showed them my way , the only way I took .
I didn’t procrastinate or bait the hook I show them what it took good or bad happy or sad . who am I , im the one that told you it was ok meanwhile you never said thanks ..
I am the one who says whatever without shade !
I’m the one told them it was ok to invade ,not only did I tell them that it was ok , I showed them the way.
not only did I show them the way ,I showed them my way , the only way I took .
I didn’t procrastinate or bait the hook I show them what it took good or bad happy or sad . who am I , im the one that told you it was ok meanwhile you never said thanks ..
#strength
#patience
#misunderstood
#hypocrisy
#sacrifice
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jemac
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2023 4:14pm
2nd Feb 2023 4:14pm
My heart
her heart
isn't perfect
it is layered with emotions
pulsing through thick veins
it has been punished
brutally
it has felt utter joy
kindness
love
there are times
she is shaken
by its depths
memories are carried
in the deep wells
pumping life into each
sacred moment
many times she
has wondered
marveled at this
muscle
that feels too much
its desire to go on
without knowing
how or why
it still beats
rhythmically ...
isn't perfect
it is layered with emotions
pulsing through thick veins
it has been punished
brutally
it has felt utter joy
kindness
love
there are times
she is shaken
by its depths
memories are carried
in the deep wells
pumping life into each
sacred moment
many times she
has wondered
marveled at this
muscle
that feels too much
its desire to go on
without knowing
how or why
it still beats
rhythmically ...
#love
#patience
#LifeAsAWriter #tolerance
#LifeAsAWriter #tolerance
328 reads
5 Comments
a_piscean_dream
Tierra
Tierra
Poem Published
7th Jan 2023 3:33am
7th Jan 2023 3:33am
Poem #1: January '23 (The Beginning)
Reflections of the Mind:
A full-bodied moon
Backed by a space blue sky
Giant trees' silhouettes
Listen for the wind's subtle cry
Blocked
In the physical and mental senses
Pencil in hand
Pensive demands, too tense
A swell of dysfunction
Collapsing into waves of routine
Wipe away the dust
Expose what lies beneath
A full-bodied moon
Backed by a space blue sky
Giant trees' silhouettes
Listen for the wind's subtle cry
Blocked
In the physical and mental senses
Pencil in hand
Pensive demands, too tense
A swell of dysfunction
Collapsing into waves of routine
Wipe away the dust
Expose what lies beneath
#courage
#identity
#mirror
#patience
#vulnerability
255 reads
1 Comment
cabcool
Poem Published
4th Jan 2023 9:17pm
4th Jan 2023 9:17pm
pacific prospectus
Blessed are the peacemakers, and one sure way of peacemaking
is to let the fire of contention alone. Neither fan it, nor stir it, nor add fuel to it, but
let it go out by itself. Begin your ministry with one blind eye and one deaf ear.—
Charles Spurgeon
if you can swallow
your own dark words
before you shoot them
at provocateurs and fools
and if you can cool the flames
that others sling at you
before they swell and cripple the light
that heals your soul
perhaps the green hills shall be...
is to let the fire of contention alone. Neither fan it, nor stir it, nor add fuel to it, but
let it go out by itself. Begin your ministry with one blind eye and one deaf ear.—
Charles Spurgeon
if you can swallow
your own dark words
before you shoot them
at provocateurs and fools
and if you can cool the flames
that others sling at you
before they swell and cripple the light
that heals your soul
perhaps the green hills shall be...
#kindness
#peace
#patience
#redemption
#sacrifice
293 reads
1 Comment
silent_lotus
Poem Published
26th Dec 2022 2:12pm
26th Dec 2022 2:12pm
phen 0m ena
#motivational
#patience
#LifeCycle
#gratitude
#sensual
258 reads
0 Comments
TellyLace88
I_Am_Her
I_Am_Her
Poem Published
24th Dec 2022 7:29am
24th Dec 2022 7:29am
Slipping Away
The beginning is what breaks my heart the most
Having experienced you at that playfully intimate level
We were both so insatiable of each other
Now it is bleek
Resentful
And so terribly lonely
We grow colder with each passing day
I fear this is the end
Why cant we find our way
I allow my mind to wonder
To lazily float through the memories of us
Oh how you made me feel alive
More alive then I've ever felt before
Your fascination and adoration for me was something I could trust
The electricity you would send...
Having experienced you at that playfully intimate level
We were both so insatiable of each other
Now it is bleek
Resentful
And so terribly lonely
We grow colder with each passing day
I fear this is the end
Why cant we find our way
I allow my mind to wonder
To lazily float through the memories of us
Oh how you made me feel alive
More alive then I've ever felt before
Your fascination and adoration for me was something I could trust
The electricity you would send...
#sadness
#relationships
#heartbroken
#patience
#disappointment
924 reads
5 Comments
a_piscean_dream
Tierra
Tierra
Poem Published
16th Dec 2022 4:33am
16th Dec 2022 4:33am
Find the Quiet
Do what you have to
Find the quiet
An elusive meeting between hushed noise and silence
Dawn
Dusk
Blue-toned sections of day in which life is less chaotic
Solo journeys
Rushed, in a hurry
Look within, provide your soul with some guidance
Extroverted
Introverted
Existence in tranquility, not one-sided
Inner vibrance
Natural realignment
Withdraw yourself, a delicate resignment
Go ahead, embrace what is private
Do what you have to
Find the quiet
Find the quiet
An elusive meeting between hushed noise and silence
Dawn
Dusk
Blue-toned sections of day in which life is less chaotic
Solo journeys
Rushed, in a hurry
Look within, provide your soul with some guidance
Extroverted
Introverted
Existence in tranquility, not one-sided
Inner vibrance
Natural realignment
Withdraw yourself, a delicate resignment
Go ahead, embrace what is private
Do what you have to
Find the quiet
#silence
#peace
#patience
298 reads
4 Comments
DreamIllusions
Poem Published
13th Oct 2022 8:34pm
13th Oct 2022 8:34pm
Blah blah blah
I'm tired of talking to myself
No one listening to me
These thoughts
Sitting on a shelf getting dusty
Covered in things I almost said
Words that didn't quite fall out
Trapped in the cobwebs
Stuck between my teeth
What did you say
I didn't hear you, I was busy
Too busy
For what I had to say
Everyone is blah blah blah
With their words so loud
So I just go sit down
Silent in the crowd
I'm tired of listening to myself
Being the only one who hears me
These words
Hanging on the line getting...
No one listening to me
These thoughts
Sitting on a shelf getting dusty
Covered in things I almost said
Words that didn't quite fall out
Trapped in the cobwebs
Stuck between my teeth
What did you say
I didn't hear you, I was busy
Too busy
For what I had to say
Everyone is blah blah blah
With their words so loud
So I just go sit down
Silent in the crowd
I'm tired of listening to myself
Being the only one who hears me
These words
Hanging on the line getting...
#relationships
#childhood
#friendship
#patience
#memories
365 reads
5 Comments
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