Poems About Patience Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about patience seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:55am
Yesterday 11:55am
simplesmente mata-me de amor
read the title
forget the subtitles
forget the subtitles
#love
#murder
#music
#patience
#silence
36 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:09am
Yesterday 3:09am
Storytime! Shut up and Listen!
#courage
#patience
#TimeHeals #vanity
#TimeHeals #vanity
62 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 1:32pm
6th Feb 2025 1:32pm
Hush
Bring me the dawn
Though my longing wanes
Fading like a candle guttering in the void
This darkness is not of night
But of silence—vast, endless
A chasm where voices are swallowed
Where echoes are entombed
My road remains unwritten
A path unspooled into nothingness
Promises once spoken now ash on my tongue
Dreams once held now smoke in the abyss
A covenant sworn beneath celestial fire
To walk among the stars
Now broken, now spent
Cast to the gutter with the last ember of my cigarette
O hush of...
Though my longing wanes
Fading like a candle guttering in the void
This darkness is not of night
But of silence—vast, endless
A chasm where voices are swallowed
Where echoes are entombed
My road remains unwritten
A path unspooled into nothingness
Promises once spoken now ash on my tongue
Dreams once held now smoke in the abyss
A covenant sworn beneath celestial fire
To walk among the stars
Now broken, now spent
Cast to the gutter with the last ember of my cigarette
O hush of...
#night
#patience
35 reads
2 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 5:47am
25th Jan 2025 5:47am
The Wolftrap Bar
A tall glass of water you are”
The words I had no control of
Marooned at Wolfstrap
Except I wasn’t trapped
The bar partially empty
I had drank a few
Before I met you
You helped me sober up
And got me home
Alone I had felt
Until you made me melt,
My cold heart thawed out
I might be thinking out loud
But I may have found
The one I’ve been waiting for
I sank to the floor
An interesting predicament
Do you wish to be friends?
Or will you possibly,
Hopefully, maybe
Be mine
I’ve lived a...
The words I had no control of
Marooned at Wolfstrap
Except I wasn’t trapped
The bar partially empty
I had drank a few
Before I met you
You helped me sober up
And got me home
Alone I had felt
Until you made me melt,
My cold heart thawed out
I might be thinking out loud
But I may have found
The one I’ve been waiting for
I sank to the floor
An interesting predicament
Do you wish to be friends?
Or will you possibly,
Hopefully, maybe
Be mine
I’ve lived a...
#alcohol
#emotions
#patience
40 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 10:12pm
26th Dec 2024 10:12pm
SUBMISSION OF THE HEART
What will it take for you to be on a submission with honesty and truth and trust. 💗 For let's take it farther than what we say and do, for after all our actions will speak louder than our own words. THAT may not carry true value at first, as we exchange our thoughts and insight and ideas. The real true potential of our realness of our strength and courage and perseverance. Which
with the honesty and truth and trust, to be able to share our lives together as one. For God Almighty by the grace of his power and blessings, 🙏 will change the situation around and rewrite, the...
with the honesty and truth and trust, to be able to share our lives together as one. For God Almighty by the grace of his power and blessings, 🙏 will change the situation around and rewrite, the...
#courage
#honesty
#kindness
#patience
#spiritual
75 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 3:02am
13th Dec 2024 3:02am
Conjuring your strength
Do you really know what is your strength and courage and perseverance. 🤔 When you feel that you are all alone, within the very foundation of your mind. 🧠 YET you refuse to bend down on your knees, for you remain resilient on standing on your own two feet. WITH the deepness of your own heart. 💖 FOR sure you have the ability to truly manifest, 👁️ that which you want and need, Even if it means there must be a sacrifice. 😔 TO be made of your own self and dignity. For sure everything comes at a price, To not to have to deal with, what you don't...
#courage
#kindness
#LifeCycle
#patience
#wisdom
95 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 2:20pm
2nd Dec 2024 2:20pm
Affirmations
Dreams fill your nights with all secrets you hide.
The ghosts that wander through your mind.
Whispers of your past you hear in the dark.
People that touched deepest corners of your heart.
A place where you let your thoughts roam free.
Scars you carry that no one else can see.
Things you loved so fiercely it left you in ruins.
Songs you sing when the world is not in tune.
Fears keep you awake when the night is still.
No moments of joy make your heart truly thrill.
Someone you ever felt a connection so profound. ...
The ghosts that wander through your mind.
Whispers of your past you hear in the dark.
People that touched deepest corners of your heart.
A place where you let your thoughts roam free.
Scars you carry that no one else can see.
Things you loved so fiercely it left you in ruins.
Songs you sing when the world is not in tune.
Fears keep you awake when the night is still.
No moments of joy make your heart truly thrill.
Someone you ever felt a connection so profound. ...
#confessional
#humankind
#identity
#myself
#patience
105 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 00:24am
29th Nov 2024 00:24am
Paranoid ergonomics...
Sporadically succinct.
Incomparably subjunctive.
Unsettling minimalism.
Unnecessary hyperbolic!
Sitting on the couch watching the news.
Hunger for cornflakes and porn movies.
Do we have the 70's back?
With what magnitude do I measure absence?
In degrees of lack, perhaps.
Incomparably subjunctive.
Unsettling minimalism.
Unnecessary hyperbolic!
Sitting on the couch watching the news.
Hunger for cornflakes and porn movies.
Do we have the 70's back?
With what magnitude do I measure absence?
In degrees of lack, perhaps.
#anxiety
#apathy
#dark
#mirror
#patience
73 reads
6 Comments
Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 10:57am
24th Nov 2024 10:57am
Housed on unsteady grounds
Shy on the attempt to bring up sharing space
Knew it’d be possible based on the feel
Came in reality & realized it wouldn’t be
caked
Understood early the table talks would be often to clear air
The perfect plan didn’t include taking accountability but gripping responsibility
Run it right & there’ll be help to it continue but run it the opposite & it may run over you
(Go steady when feeling the blues)
Knew it’d be possible based on the feel
Came in reality & realized it wouldn’t be
caked
Understood early the table talks would be often to clear air
The perfect plan didn’t include taking accountability but gripping responsibility
Run it right & there’ll be help to it continue but run it the opposite & it may run over you
(Go steady when feeling the blues)
#choices
#kindness
#learning
#patience
#support
68 reads
0 Comments
silent_lotus
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 12:14pm
16th Nov 2024 12:14pm
' wings
poem as image
#nature
#patience
#women
72 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 3:04pm
11th Nov 2024 3:04pm
Washing the sheets of the ghosts in this madhouse
In the shadows of regret I walk.
Carrying the heavy load of my choices.
Echoes of decisions whisper in my mind...
Bathing me in yellow flowers with every step
like a bitter memory.
Disappointment as a constant specter.
Black wings that surround the heart...
Smothering the light with a veil of sadness.
Bath you in yellow flowers without time
for the desire to change that consumes me.
If I could go back in time and rewrite history...
Erase mistakes or heal wounds
or even exchange each tear for a new moment.
Bath him in...
Carrying the heavy load of my choices.
Echoes of decisions whisper in my mind...
Bathing me in yellow flowers with every step
like a bitter memory.
Disappointment as a constant specter.
Black wings that surround the heart...
Smothering the light with a veil of sadness.
Bath you in yellow flowers without time
for the desire to change that consumes me.
If I could go back in time and rewrite history...
Erase mistakes or heal wounds
or even exchange each tear for a new moment.
Bath him in...
#anxiety
#depression
#ghosts
#patience
#sadness
89 reads
5 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 5:30am
23rd Oct 2024 5:30am
I Can’t Remember
I Can’t remember
Can’t remember
Walk in a room what for
I don’t know as the day begins anew
Can’t remember when I started to forget
Cobwebs on my brain
Try to brush them off
I can’t remember
Say to myself check it out
Get on my phone to look it up
Who am I why am I here
Can’t remember when
And I’ve got cobwebs on the cranium
I can’t remember when I
Started to forget
Blank pages in my mind
Sit and stew but the key is simple
Think about something else ...
Can’t remember
Walk in a room what for
I don’t know as the day begins anew
Can’t remember when I started to forget
Cobwebs on my brain
Try to brush them off
I can’t remember
Say to myself check it out
Get on my phone to look it up
Who am I why am I here
Can’t remember when
And I’ve got cobwebs on the cranium
I can’t remember when I
Started to forget
Blank pages in my mind
Sit and stew but the key is simple
Think about something else ...
#aging
#memories
#nostalgia #patience
#nostalgia #patience
88 reads
0 Comments
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