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PAR
Poem Published
10th Jan 2024 2:44pm
10th Jan 2024 2:44pm
Hide and Seek
Beyond the veil of words and forms
there lies a realm of light and love.
Where mystics soar like graceful swans
and taste the bliss of good above.
To leave behind the world of sense
and dive into the depths of soul.
To find the source of peace immense
and feel the oneness of the whole.
Search the unknown for a clue.
Hope to find something that's true.
Face the risks and the dangers.
Meet the foes and the strangers.
To see the beauty in all things
and hear the music of the spheres.
To touch...
there lies a realm of light and love.
Where mystics soar like graceful swans
and taste the bliss of good above.
To leave behind the world of sense
and dive into the depths of soul.
To find the source of peace immense
and feel the oneness of the whole.
Search the unknown for a clue.
Hope to find something that's true.
Face the risks and the dangers.
Meet the foes and the strangers.
To see the beauty in all things
and hear the music of the spheres.
To touch...
#mirror
#myself
#pagan
#magic
#witches
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PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Jan 2024 5:18pm
7th Jan 2024 5:18pm
Love and Pain
I was always a rogue with you
Then I started to love you
Still in that phase
I wanted to see you bound
Just sitting next to me
Occasionally leaning over to twist your nipples
Hoping you'd do the same to me if I ever untied you
Yeah all kinds of bdsm pleasures
But then you got religion without the religion
That sounds weird but it's me
No matter what I say or do short of daggers
You always come back to me
To which I'm grateful
Purity has its moments
They don't last long
Winter just started
I long for your heat
Then I started to love you
Still in that phase
I wanted to see you bound
Just sitting next to me
Occasionally leaning over to twist your nipples
Hoping you'd do the same to me if I ever untied you
Yeah all kinds of bdsm pleasures
But then you got religion without the religion
That sounds weird but it's me
No matter what I say or do short of daggers
You always come back to me
To which I'm grateful
Purity has its moments
They don't last long
Winter just started
I long for your heat
#love
#BDSM
#lover
#pagan
#suffering
399 reads
28 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
5th Jan 2024 2:39pm
5th Jan 2024 2:39pm
Across the Hilltops Danced
The religion of one age is the literary entertainment of the next.” - Emerson
What fairy feet across the hilltop danced
before the Christ and first Mohammedans arrived
to render all these stones a blasted heresy?
We lean our picnic on the moss and eat
our sandwiches, removed from fear of blasphemy
to talk and think on Mother Nature’s gifts, the seat
of what may once have been a grand temple.
The children run towards the ancient lake
on which a royal barge may have lilted,
the raiments gilded by a cyclop’s eye
that...
What fairy feet across the hilltop danced
before the Christ and first Mohammedans arrived
to render all these stones a blasted heresy?
We lean our picnic on the moss and eat
our sandwiches, removed from fear of blasphemy
to talk and think on Mother Nature’s gifts, the seat
of what may once have been a grand temple.
The children run towards the ancient lake
on which a royal barge may have lilted,
the raiments gilded by a cyclop’s eye
that...
#spiritual
#mythology
#pagan #magic
#pagan #magic
124 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2024 11:41am
2nd Jan 2024 11:41am
Poem with no rhyme
I let my thoughts fly
and free myself from worries.
I open my heart and connect my essence.
I look at the blue sky and feel at peace.
I watch the celestial Wheel
marveling at its splendor...
the clock of the universe
and the map of my soul.
The Wheel is the different facets of life
that affect our energies and actions.
The Wheel intersperses our shadows and virtues.
Wheel of life,
cycle of death and rebirth,
Wheel of destiny,
path of evolution and growth.
I behold the heavenly Wheel ...
and free myself from worries.
I open my heart and connect my essence.
I look at the blue sky and feel at peace.
I watch the celestial Wheel
marveling at its splendor...
the clock of the universe
and the map of my soul.
The Wheel is the different facets of life
that affect our energies and actions.
The Wheel intersperses our shadows and virtues.
Wheel of life,
cycle of death and rebirth,
Wheel of destiny,
path of evolution and growth.
I behold the heavenly Wheel ...
#spiritual
#mirror
#pagan
#magic
#witches
124 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
30th Dec 2023 4:56pm
30th Dec 2023 4:56pm
Obsession 2.0
I've got this YOU obsession
It's under control
Problem is ....
I don't want it under control
I want the mayhem of desire
Clawing and scratching
Fingernails on chalkboards
Insomnia with hard-ons raging
Tired, horny and exhilarated
Placid is not good for long
I'll do what you ask of me
I'm trying too
Some addictions are easier
Substances
French Fries
Work and Working out
Healthy and not so
Call me Daddy or not but just call
It's under control
Problem is ....
I don't want it under control
I want the mayhem of desire
Clawing and scratching
Fingernails on chalkboards
Insomnia with hard-ons raging
Tired, horny and exhilarated
Placid is not good for long
I'll do what you ask of me
I'm trying too
Some addictions are easier
Substances
French Fries
Work and Working out
Healthy and not so
Call me Daddy or not but just call
#addiction
#pagan
#StreamOfConsciousness #obsession
#StreamOfConsciousness #obsession
257 reads
23 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2023 3:36am
22nd Dec 2023 3:36am
Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
Truth is all that blue sky and sunshine are bad for you
Give me a perfectly gray day
Or grey if you're going UK
Everyone wants a water view
Give me the alley
Stray cats and beggars
Broken glass
Twilight is paradise
Dusk and my broken heart
Give me a perfectly gray day
Or grey if you're going UK
Everyone wants a water view
Give me the alley
Stray cats and beggars
Broken glass
Twilight is paradise
Dusk and my broken heart
#identity
#city
#myself #pagan
#myself #pagan
211 reads
24 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 10:01pm
5th Dec 2023 10:01pm
You asked me how I am
Edgy
Moody
Horny
Irritatable
That's when I want you most
Moody
Horny
Irritatable
That's when I want you most
#lust
#confessional
#myself
#CharlesBukowski
#pagan
254 reads
22 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 3:59pm
26th Nov 2023 3:59pm
Excalibur
Remaining tempted to crack vulgar wise
at my sixty years of sophomoric age
tempers routine existence with surprise
at wit in modicum upon a page,
stuck in adolescent irreverence
half cast in the whirlwind patina
of mortality in disseverance...
like Bosnia and Herzegovina,
or better yet, a classical decay,
like marbled Mediterranean blocks
longing for former glory in the day
when youth withstood multivariate shocks
reminisced in a Roman alphabet...
as it's the doom of men...when they forget.
at my sixty years of sophomoric age
tempers routine existence with surprise
at wit in modicum upon a page,
stuck in adolescent irreverence
half cast in the whirlwind patina
of mortality in disseverance...
like Bosnia and Herzegovina,
or better yet, a classical decay,
like marbled Mediterranean blocks
longing for former glory in the day
when youth withstood multivariate shocks
reminisced in a Roman alphabet...
as it's the doom of men...when they forget.
#pagan
#redemption
147 reads
2 Comments
javalini
Poem Published
12th Nov 2023 12:33pm
12th Nov 2023 12:33pm
BRIGHT MORNING PRAYER
i am a devotee
of the star king
Ra,
touched
by silver hands
and swallowed by
heat
and light
i am healed
delivered
sanctified
saved
and resurrected
in the glory His bright
and holy day
amen
of the star king
Ra,
touched
by silver hands
and swallowed by
heat
and light
i am healed
delivered
sanctified
saved
and resurrected
in the glory His bright
and holy day
amen
#happiness
#sun
#summer #pagan
#summer #pagan
142 reads
4 Comments
_Sunshine_
Poem Published
9th Nov 2023 7:54pm
9th Nov 2023 7:54pm
Witches' Work
Bubble, boil, trouble and toil
Holy water, herbs, and sacred oil
Potion, ritual, incantation
Carry out will through spell creation
A touch of black magic and divination
Moss and leaves, mushrooms and mold
Scientific research, and stories told
Invoke the silver moon and the sun of gold
Hand in hand with the gods of old
Fire burns and water runs cold
Stable stone and wild wind
A spirit is a guide and a faery a friend
A new beginning waits at every end
Find your path and blaze a trail
Making mistakes doesn’t mean that you fail...
Holy water, herbs, and sacred oil
Potion, ritual, incantation
Carry out will through spell creation
A touch of black magic and divination
Moss and leaves, mushrooms and mold
Scientific research, and stories told
Invoke the silver moon and the sun of gold
Hand in hand with the gods of old
Fire burns and water runs cold
Stable stone and wild wind
A spirit is a guide and a faery a friend
A new beginning waits at every end
Find your path and blaze a trail
Making mistakes doesn’t mean that you fail...
#spiritual
#pagan
#magic #witches
#magic #witches
166 reads
1 Comment
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
31st Oct 2023 6:19am
31st Oct 2023 6:19am
Athena!
The moon and huntress are a team
and woe to he who heeds them not
in all facets of his manly thought
or in every fever pitch dream
where the lady of the hour
demonstrates all but she are stupid,
and even dominates Cupid
with all of her nocturnal power!
She! Enchantress unparalleled,
who flirts with Jove himself at times
when his meridian sublimes
and thereby is no longer withheld
from the glory of her pale sphere...
and game safe far...or fatefully near!
and woe to he who heeds them not
in all facets of his manly thought
or in every fever pitch dream
where the lady of the hour
demonstrates all but she are stupid,
and even dominates Cupid
with all of her nocturnal power!
She! Enchantress unparalleled,
who flirts with Jove himself at times
when his meridian sublimes
and thereby is no longer withheld
from the glory of her pale sphere...
and game safe far...or fatefully near!
#love
#moon
#night
#mythology
#pagan
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0 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
17th Sep 2023 6:39pm
17th Sep 2023 6:39pm
Dancing Flames
magic
resides in fire
and moonlight
spark lights
fuel ignites
music incites
smoke pours
ash implores
spirit soars
hearts sway
souls play
bodies obey
desires to
dance in fires
requires
vanquished
fears
of blisters and tears
be not afraid
piper’s been paid
begin the parade
dancers
prancers
necromancers
magic
resides in fire
and moonlight
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
resides in fire
and moonlight
spark lights
fuel ignites
music incites
smoke pours
ash implores
spirit soars
hearts sway
souls play
bodies obey
desires to
dance in fires
requires
vanquished
fears
of blisters and tears
be not afraid
piper’s been paid
begin the parade
dancers
prancers
necromancers
magic
resides in fire
and moonlight
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
#inspirational
#spiritual
#pagan #fear
#pagan #fear
195 reads
2 Comments
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