Poems About Mythology by Top Critiquers
#mythology
Long Ago
The dark castle in the deep forest
A princess is resurrected
During the second birth
The last battle of possession
Cosmic keys to the creation of earth.
A princess is resurrected
During the second birth
The last battle of possession
Cosmic keys to the creation of earth.
#forest
#mythology
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Valhalla Awaits
the tares of the field care not for winter or summer
they worship the cold and the hot alike
singing throughout history
sailing through time itself they made a cradle here
for their offspring, they have prevailed
under a veil of secrecy
the drum of the heart beats strong in the soul of their children
Valhalla awaits us brethren of ice and spring
eat and be replenished
space is vast we sail ever strong
mightily claiming what is ours
pagan to some as were the first men
before the sun rose here
sailing...
they worship the cold and the hot alike
singing throughout history
sailing through time itself they made a cradle here
for their offspring, they have prevailed
under a veil of secrecy
the drum of the heart beats strong in the soul of their children
Valhalla awaits us brethren of ice and spring
eat and be replenished
space is vast we sail ever strong
mightily claiming what is ours
pagan to some as were the first men
before the sun rose here
sailing...
#metaphor
#mythology
#TruthOfLife
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The White Wolf
The elders say there once was upon a time a story was told by the ancient ones, about the white wolf that roam the country side, traveling in the woods of forgotten time in search of the wolf pack. For it was said that kind of white wolf was some kind of ancient god, with mystical powers of protection over the land, and the spiritual creatures who live in this land buried deep into the forest of mother nature. For the elders say that this white wolf only has one purpose, and that is to protect all that exist on the land of what time has forgotten. For this white wolf was born from a special...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#mythology
#philosophical
#symbolism
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EROTIC CORRESPONDENCE BETWEEN DAPHNE AND APOLLO
Wrote Daphne to Apollo:
'Your pearl stream I could swallow,
in exchange my elixir
I offer to your lick, sir.'
Wrote Apollo to Daphne:
'Then haste to kneel before me,
I'll allow Divine pleasure
unlock to you my treasure.'
'For princely orbs and sceptre
your lips make good receptor.
It would be like a blessing
to have your tongue's caressing.'
'The finest ambrosia
I'm sure could not come near
the taste of divine honey
that would run from your cunni.'
Wrote Daphne, ever...
'Your pearl stream I could swallow,
in exchange my elixir
I offer to your lick, sir.'
Wrote Apollo to Daphne:
'Then haste to kneel before me,
I'll allow Divine pleasure
unlock to you my treasure.'
'For princely orbs and sceptre
your lips make good receptor.
It would be like a blessing
to have your tongue's caressing.'
'The finest ambrosia
I'm sure could not come near
the taste of divine honey
that would run from your cunni.'
Wrote Daphne, ever...
#erotic
#rhyming
#mythology
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myth of the myth
do you think the Phoenix
does not mourn the loss
of all that came before
flaming feathers
an agony of memory
as they burn to cinders
remembering...
remembering...
& do you not believe
they remember
everything
each moment
beautiful & broken
in those previous days
aching...
choking...
keening their pain
into smoke-filled skies
lungs thick with ash
voice hoarse & ragged
echoing...echoing...echoing
into haunted silence
...
does not mourn the loss
of all that came before
flaming feathers
an agony of memory
as they burn to cinders
remembering...
remembering...
& do you not believe
they remember
everything
each moment
beautiful & broken
in those previous days
aching...
choking...
keening their pain
into smoke-filled skies
lungs thick with ash
voice hoarse & ragged
echoing...echoing...echoing
into haunted silence
...
#admiration
#mythology
#spiritual #strength
#spiritual #strength
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El Cipitio
His father was Morning Star
His mother was Sihuehuet*, goddess of the moon
He was the product of a forbidden romance
But his can be a tale, one of terror and gloom
When the queen’s affair had been discovered
Her husband went to the Teotl* seeking justness
So the Aztec god cursed both mother and child
Her husband believed he had received justice
The boy’s feet were bent backwards
Given a conical hat and a pot belly of enormous girth
A ghastly sight for the few that have seen him
Always as a child, doomed to walk the earth ...
His mother was Sihuehuet*, goddess of the moon
He was the product of a forbidden romance
But his can be a tale, one of terror and gloom
When the queen’s affair had been discovered
Her husband went to the Teotl* seeking justness
So the Aztec god cursed both mother and child
Her husband believed he had received justice
The boy’s feet were bent backwards
Given a conical hat and a pot belly of enormous girth
A ghastly sight for the few that have seen him
Always as a child, doomed to walk the earth ...
#mythology
#scary
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Meditrinalia

#lover
#magic
#mythology #pagan
#mythology #pagan
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Myth Haikus
Thoth
Scroll of stars unfolds,
wisdom flows through measured time.
Eye records it all.
Gilgamesh
Walls rise to the sky,
friendship forged, yet doomed to fade.
Mortals seek their name.
Tupă
Thunder splits the night,
roaring whispers through the storm.
Creation takes breath.
Amaterazu
Hidden in her cave,
sunlight fades, the world grows cold.
Hope draws her to dance.
Shango
Drums thunder the sky,
lightning splits the heavens wide. ...
Scroll of stars unfolds,
wisdom flows through measured time.
Eye records it all.
Gilgamesh
Walls rise to the sky,
friendship forged, yet doomed to fade.
Mortals seek their name.
Tupă
Thunder splits the night,
roaring whispers through the storm.
Creation takes breath.
Amaterazu
Hidden in her cave,
sunlight fades, the world grows cold.
Hope draws her to dance.
Shango
Drums thunder the sky,
lightning splits the heavens wide. ...
#culture
#mirror
#mythology
#religion
#tradition
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[NaPoWriMo - 2025 Collection] Flowers from Thoughts
Prelude
Flush wisteria, lavender
ripened upon their vine
Eliot’s hyacinth couple
deep purple, beyond the rain-
pummeled garden gate
A mossy footpath, wet
seeping between toes
of bare feet, droplets plop
extend upward, fall
into Earth's moistened mouth
. . .Other echoes
Inhabit the garden. Shall we follow?
Not to learn but remember
nor think back to before
November circumstance
tilled the soil of withered slumber
for...
Flush wisteria, lavender
ripened upon their vine
Eliot’s hyacinth couple
deep purple, beyond the rain-
pummeled garden gate
A mossy footpath, wet
seeping between toes
of bare feet, droplets plop
extend upward, fall
into Earth's moistened mouth
. . .Other echoes
Inhabit the garden. Shall we follow?
Not to learn but remember
nor think back to before
November circumstance
tilled the soil of withered slumber
for...
#nature
#mythology
#nostalgia
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Patient Zer0
Time stamped & marked
Interwoven intricacies -
This captured monogram
Of value stands still,
Like the beginning.
Standing celestial, still,
The air over there -
Enveloped expanding,
Meeting with the minds,
Blood brain barrier
Inferior, to lock pick
Free radical, influencers,
Ordained by pain -
Or something in this vein.
Pulsating beacon -
Frequencies a constant,
Across horizons
Of every type & kind,
Embedded in the mind,
This archetype
Remakes...
Interwoven intricacies -
This captured monogram
Of value stands still,
Like the beginning.
Standing celestial, still,
The air over there -
Enveloped expanding,
Meeting with the minds,
Blood brain barrier
Inferior, to lock pick
Free radical, influencers,
Ordained by pain -
Or something in this vein.
Pulsating beacon -
Frequencies a constant,
Across horizons
Of every type & kind,
Embedded in the mind,
This archetype
Remakes...
#astrology
#mythology
#philosophical
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I fell into sin
Eiffel
high and mighty
Like Mars
Among the stars
A ground of war and produce
Always against
The tribes afar
A valley full of people
Protect the common faith
A monument of dictatorship
Of captives in a cage
A Universelle Exposition
To crush the German truth
Exposing Gods testimony
The evil forbidden fruit
A God who's messengers are deaf
A God who's followers are blind
They will be ashamed
When they get left behind
I fell from a tower
And birthed into sin ...
high and mighty
Like Mars
Among the stars
A ground of war and produce
Always against
The tribes afar
A valley full of people
Protect the common faith
A monument of dictatorship
Of captives in a cage
A Universelle Exposition
To crush the German truth
Exposing Gods testimony
The evil forbidden fruit
A God who's messengers are deaf
A God who's followers are blind
They will be ashamed
When they get left behind
I fell from a tower
And birthed into sin ...
#mythology
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Saints And Sinners Week (Halo)
To the world as I humbly bow in respect
The rite of passage to remain standing, whispering to the wind, is not over yet
Don’t try to chain my mind so fast
The beauty of my strength lies in my intelligence, which can never be measured by time, it will always outlast
So, placing your hands on hips, I still rise as I thrive without having to move my lips
Devoid to squeal mundane thoughts, my wisdom befalls in that sweeten, cherished melanin gift
Something to possess, few will never have
Filth is the...
The rite of passage to remain standing, whispering to the wind, is not over yet
Don’t try to chain my mind so fast
The beauty of my strength lies in my intelligence, which can never be measured by time, it will always outlast
So, placing your hands on hips, I still rise as I thrive without having to move my lips
Devoid to squeal mundane thoughts, my wisdom befalls in that sweeten, cherished melanin gift
Something to possess, few will never have
Filth is the...
#angels
#heaven
#mythology
#spiritual
#water
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DU Poetry : Poems About Mythology by Top Critiquers