Poems About the Morning Seeking Honest Critique
#morning
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 5:36pm
26th Jan 2025 5:36pm
Antemeridian
She was a wee slip of a thing
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
#dawn
#moon
#morning #sun
#morning #sun
57 reads
12 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 00:53am
25th Jan 2025 00:53am
dregs
the table was broken
on its last legs
a lifetime of breakfasts
runny eggs
on its last legs
a lifetime of breakfasts
runny eggs
#morning
36 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 00:30am
19th Jan 2025 00:30am
ennui
it will be sunday again in the
morning I’ll
get up, have a cup of tea, read the paper,
roll a
cigarette, make some toast and
get dressed
eventually
it will be monday
morning I’ll
get up, have a cup of tea, read the paper,
roll a
cigarette, make some toast and
get dressed
eventually
it will be monday
#morning
50 reads
9 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 5:22pm
15th Jan 2025 5:22pm
Coffee and women
I drink coffee black...
I like my women dark, too!
Strong coffee and
...plump and playful on my palette.
Both get me perky...
Coming and going...
bedroom and bathroom.
Just a touch of sweetness.
I like my coffee and my women...
piping hot! Can't get enough of
the taste and...the heat!!!
Mmmmmmmm!
A pleasure to wake up!
I like my women dark, too!
Strong coffee and
...plump and playful on my palette.
Both get me perky...
Coming and going...
bedroom and bathroom.
Just a touch of sweetness.
I like my coffee and my women...
piping hot! Can't get enough of
the taste and...the heat!!!
Mmmmmmmm!
A pleasure to wake up!
#coffee
#morning
#women
154 reads
4 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 4:17am
26th Nov 2024 4:17am
PURE HUMMING BIRD JOY (PURE HUMMING BIRD WAY) (11-24-2024, Palm Springs, California)
upon reopening my eyes
after only twenty five minutes
this morning
of my perfectly imperfect
as usual
sitting in stillness
zen meditation
where now here
in these first few moments
of my heart centered
peaceful
open being s
return
while serenely
looking back out
with all my senses
and heart
now more widely open
at this newly unfolding
beautifully flowing ...
after only twenty five minutes
this morning
of my perfectly imperfect
as usual
sitting in stillness
zen meditation
where now here
in these first few moments
of my heart centered
peaceful
open being s
return
while serenely
looking back out
with all my senses
and heart
now more widely open
at this newly unfolding
beautifully flowing ...
#fall
#morning
#nature
#SelfReflection
#uplifting
78 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 00:29am
24th Nov 2024 00:29am
another cup
one cup of tea and I’m more than
ready to go out of a morning
so grey and windy and wet and
who am I kidding, fill her back up ..
ready to go out of a morning
so grey and windy and wet and
who am I kidding, fill her back up ..
#morning
#tea
118 reads
5 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 00:26am
10th Nov 2024 00:26am
Here and Now
It took a lot to get to here
Sweat runs down the day laborer
Sleeps in the sun while all are moving
Drops her off to school to go back to sleep
Turning in the covers thoughts win me over
Can’t sleep thinking with my brain turned off
She ends her day of learning my dreams go to sleep dreaming
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers that
Dreams are heaven when you’re laying down ...
Sweat runs down the day laborer
Sleeps in the sun while all are moving
Drops her off to school to go back to sleep
Turning in the covers thoughts win me over
Can’t sleep thinking with my brain turned off
She ends her day of learning my dreams go to sleep dreaming
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers that
Dreams are heaven when you’re laying down ...
#morning
#night
#passion
46 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 5:22am
7th Nov 2024 5:22am
A Day Of Consequence
I woke up late this morning, alarm’s silent call,
And scrambled through chaos, the house bore it all.
In haste, I ran wild, made a mess as I sped,
Rushing to work while I felt like the dead.
Missed the bus because I’d forgotten my phone,
Had to run back, feeling cold to the bone.
Late to my office I got a angry stare,
For a day going south, it was too much to bear.
In a foul mood I shouted, at people who I knew,
Leaving me colder, alone with the blue.
And worse it became, as my troubles amassed,
Thinking two clocks...
And scrambled through chaos, the house bore it all.
In haste, I ran wild, made a mess as I sped,
Rushing to work while I felt like the dead.
Missed the bus because I’d forgotten my phone,
Had to run back, feeling cold to the bone.
Late to my office I got a angry stare,
For a day going south, it was too much to bear.
In a foul mood I shouted, at people who I knew,
Leaving me colder, alone with the blue.
And worse it became, as my troubles amassed,
Thinking two clocks...
#morning
45 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 1:01pm
16th Oct 2024 1:01pm
Autumn's Embrace
Because we are poets
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
#dogs
#fall
#lover
#morning
#WritingPoetry
161 reads
26 Comments
Alviola
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 9:16pm
12th Oct 2024 9:16pm
The Gift of the Night
The skin sees the shape of heat,
fans only make the charcoal glow,
the metal gate is like the sole
of an iron, I put ice cubes
on the bed the dogs lie on.
As I sleep, the night exhales,
cools the water in the plumbing.
Upon waking, I splash my face,
and it is a bristling comfort.
I shut my eyes and treat myself
to what is like a morning prayer.
It is warm after a while though,
I exhaust what the night provides
in seconds,...
fans only make the charcoal glow,
the metal gate is like the sole
of an iron, I put ice cubes
on the bed the dogs lie on.
As I sleep, the night exhales,
cools the water in the plumbing.
Upon waking, I splash my face,
and it is a bristling comfort.
I shut my eyes and treat myself
to what is like a morning prayer.
It is warm after a while though,
I exhaust what the night provides
in seconds,...
#hope
#morning
#sleep
108 reads
2 Comments
sharadejahan
sharad
sharad
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 11:11am
3rd Oct 2024 11:11am
Dough and Desire
#erotic
#morning
#romantic
#sensual
#sex
401 reads
8 Comments
sharadejahan
sharad
sharad
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 6:02pm
2nd Oct 2024 6:02pm
Dawn
In dawn’s soft light before the day,
I find you resting, gently splayed.
Your vulva opens like petals in bloom,
Inviting my tongue to break the room's gloom.
I trace your smoothness, soft and wet,
A honeyed taste I won’t forget.
The slide of my tongue, a slow, sweet dive,
Addictive and tender, making you alive.
You push my head with thighs wrapped tight,
Pulling me closer, craving the bite.
Your body speaks, wanting more,
As I explore deeper, the taste you adore.
Your moans are whispers in the morning glow,
As...
I find you resting, gently splayed.
Your vulva opens like petals in bloom,
Inviting my tongue to break the room's gloom.
I trace your smoothness, soft and wet,
A honeyed taste I won’t forget.
The slide of my tongue, a slow, sweet dive,
Addictive and tender, making you alive.
You push my head with thighs wrapped tight,
Pulling me closer, craving the bite.
Your body speaks, wanting more,
As I explore deeper, the taste you adore.
Your moans are whispers in the morning glow,
As...
#erotic
#morning
#orgasm
#sensual
#sex
409 reads
14 Comments
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