Poems About the Morning Seeking Honest Critique
#morning
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 6:37pm
9th Feb 2025 6:37pm
My Imaginary Girl
Be my wife, for you alone can arouse me.
I’m obsessed with no one else but you.
Smile at me, and hold me as you do in my dreams.
Darling, let me feel your sensual embrace.
Kiss my lips softly like the brush of the wind.
Say that your true love will never end.
I’m not sure if you aren’t just a fantasy,
So tell me that you’re as real as you can be.
Be my wife, for wedding you is my chief desire.
Make me experience incomparable bliss.
Your beauty and exceptional talent impress me.
I want to hear you sing sweet love songs.
...
I’m obsessed with no one else but you.
Smile at me, and hold me as you do in my dreams.
Darling, let me feel your sensual embrace.
Kiss my lips softly like the brush of the wind.
Say that your true love will never end.
I’m not sure if you aren’t just a fantasy,
So tell me that you’re as real as you can be.
Be my wife, for wedding you is my chief desire.
Make me experience incomparable bliss.
Your beauty and exceptional talent impress me.
I want to hear you sing sweet love songs.
...
#beauty
#dreams
#love #morning
#love #morning
92 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 00:11am
8th Feb 2025 00:11am
so what to do, silly ..
no milk in the fridge
so no tea
sugar
I’m not your sugar
honey
we could always have coffee
hate coffee
in my tea
so no tea
sugar
I’m not your sugar
honey
we could always have coffee
hate coffee
in my tea
#morning
73 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 3:34am
6th Feb 2025 3:34am
The Portrait Of One So Ticklish
Julie smiled big at Tori.
Julie's modeling for Tori's art class project.
That's before Mark walked in.
He sat on top of Julie's back.
Then, he started tickling her all over.
Julie's modeling for Tori's art class project.
That's before Mark walked in.
He sat on top of Julie's back.
Then, he started tickling her all over.
#art
#fiction
#friendship
#morning
#relationships
66 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 5:36pm
26th Jan 2025 5:36pm
Antemeridian
She was a wee slip of a thing
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
#dawn
#moon
#morning #sun
#morning #sun
141 reads
14 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 00:53am
25th Jan 2025 00:53am
dregs
the table was broken
on its last legs
a lifetime of breakfasts
runny eggs
on its last legs
a lifetime of breakfasts
runny eggs
#morning
54 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 00:30am
19th Jan 2025 00:30am
ennui
it will be sunday again in the
morning I’ll
get up, have a cup of tea, read the paper,
roll a
cigarette, make some toast and
get dressed
eventually
it will be monday
morning I’ll
get up, have a cup of tea, read the paper,
roll a
cigarette, make some toast and
get dressed
eventually
it will be monday
#morning
59 reads
9 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 5:22pm
15th Jan 2025 5:22pm
Coffee and women
I drink coffee black...
I like my women dark, too!
Strong coffee and
...plump and playful on my palette.
Both get me perky...
Coming and going...
bedroom and bathroom.
Just a touch of sweetness.
I like my coffee and my women...
piping hot! Can't get enough of
the taste and...the heat!!!
Mmmmmmmm!
A pleasure to wake up!
I like my women dark, too!
Strong coffee and
...plump and playful on my palette.
Both get me perky...
Coming and going...
bedroom and bathroom.
Just a touch of sweetness.
I like my coffee and my women...
piping hot! Can't get enough of
the taste and...the heat!!!
Mmmmmmmm!
A pleasure to wake up!
#coffee
#morning
#women
172 reads
4 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 4:17am
26th Nov 2024 4:17am
PURE HUMMING BIRD JOY (PURE HUMMING BIRD WAY) (11-24-2024, Palm Springs, California)
upon reopening my eyes
after only twenty five minutes
this morning
of my perfectly imperfect
as usual
sitting in stillness
zen meditation
where now here
in these first few moments
of my heart centered
peaceful
open being s
return
while serenely
looking back out
with all my senses
and heart
now more widely open
at this newly unfolding
beautifully flowing ...
after only twenty five minutes
this morning
of my perfectly imperfect
as usual
sitting in stillness
zen meditation
where now here
in these first few moments
of my heart centered
peaceful
open being s
return
while serenely
looking back out
with all my senses
and heart
now more widely open
at this newly unfolding
beautifully flowing ...
#fall
#morning
#nature
#SelfReflection
#uplifting
105 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 00:29am
24th Nov 2024 00:29am
another cup
one cup of tea and I’m more than
ready to go out of a morning
so grey and windy and wet and
who am I kidding, fill her back up ..
ready to go out of a morning
so grey and windy and wet and
who am I kidding, fill her back up ..
#morning
#tea
126 reads
5 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 00:26am
10th Nov 2024 00:26am
Here and Now
It took a lot to get to here
Sweat runs down the day laborer
Sleeps in the sun while all are moving
Drops her off to school to go back to sleep
Turning in the covers thoughts win me over
Can’t sleep thinking with my brain turned off
She ends her day of learning my dreams go to sleep dreaming
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers that
Dreams are heaven when you’re laying down ...
Sweat runs down the day laborer
Sleeps in the sun while all are moving
Drops her off to school to go back to sleep
Turning in the covers thoughts win me over
Can’t sleep thinking with my brain turned off
She ends her day of learning my dreams go to sleep dreaming
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers
Back in the soil of everyday life
Brain can’t sleep my body suffers that
Dreams are heaven when you’re laying down ...
#morning
#night
#passion
56 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 5:22am
7th Nov 2024 5:22am
A Day Of Consequence
I woke up late this morning, alarm’s silent call,
And scrambled through chaos, the house bore it all.
In haste, I ran wild, made a mess as I sped,
Rushing to work while I felt like the dead.
Missed the bus because I’d forgotten my phone,
Had to run back, feeling cold to the bone.
Late to my office I got a angry stare,
For a day going south, it was too much to bear.
In a foul mood I shouted, at people who I knew,
Leaving me colder, alone with the blue.
And worse it became, as my troubles amassed,
Thinking two clocks...
And scrambled through chaos, the house bore it all.
In haste, I ran wild, made a mess as I sped,
Rushing to work while I felt like the dead.
Missed the bus because I’d forgotten my phone,
Had to run back, feeling cold to the bone.
Late to my office I got a angry stare,
For a day going south, it was too much to bear.
In a foul mood I shouted, at people who I knew,
Leaving me colder, alone with the blue.
And worse it became, as my troubles amassed,
Thinking two clocks...
#morning
51 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 1:01pm
16th Oct 2024 1:01pm
Autumn's Embrace
Because we are poets
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
#dogs
#fall
#lover
#morning
#WritingPoetry
172 reads
26 Comments
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