Poems About Money Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about money seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Josh
Joshua Bond
Joshua Bond
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 11:20pm
25th Nov 2024 11:20pm
Villanelle Nr.24 — Prosperity Gospel Turbo-Charged
Being a billionaire is a sign
of God’s blessing, and my Vocation:
to rule over you…, and that’s fine
I surrender to God’s design,
God’s plan for my life — my station
is being a billionaire; it’s a sign
you should accept gracefully — align!
to obey me is to obey God’s creation …
me to rule over you — and that’s fine.
Poor people are useless-eater-swine
ignorant of manifestation.
Being a billionaire is a sign
you are the branches but I am the vine
hence the regime of...
of God’s blessing, and my Vocation:
to rule over you…, and that’s fine
I surrender to God’s design,
God’s plan for my life — my station
is being a billionaire; it’s a sign
you should accept gracefully — align!
to obey me is to obey God’s creation …
me to rule over you — and that’s fine.
Poor people are useless-eater-swine
ignorant of manifestation.
Being a billionaire is a sign
you are the branches but I am the vine
hence the regime of...
#money
#politics
#power
#religion
#SelfWorth
30 reads
3 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 3:54am
23rd Nov 2024 3:54am
Family Secrets
Family Secrets
Don’t go round selling family secrets
The secrets I know would get me murdered
The things that I know wish I was dementia
The things I know I wish I could forget em
She smiles at me at the mention I know what she is worth surviving millions
But I must agree she is a beauty my heart still
Belongs to her even if I hate her
My heart belongs to her
She hates me but she won’t leave me
Don’t go round selling family secrets
The secrets I know would get me murdered
The things that I know wish I was dementia
The things I know I wish I could forget em
She smiles at me at the mention I know what she is worth surviving millions
But I must agree she is a beauty my heart still
Belongs to her even if I hate her
My heart belongs to her
She hates me but she won’t leave me
#breakup
#hate
#love #money
#love #money
31 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 6:19am
22nd Nov 2024 6:19am
A Hefty Fee
Reality always strikes between the eyes
Leaving it’s mark on the human psyche
Madness will cut everyone down to size
Life’s taxed even death costs a hefty fee
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Leaving it’s mark on the human psyche
Madness will cut everyone down to size
Life’s taxed even death costs a hefty fee
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#money
101 reads
23 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 1:20am
22nd Nov 2024 1:20am
I pay for certain things in Cash $$$
Yeah CASH
Remember that stuff ?
Booze for one
Don't need the government tracking me
Massages and hand jobs from Sha Sha
The massage is marginal
She handles dicks all day
Perfection man
Just the right amount of tension
Then release
Cash for her
No tracking Sha Sha
Hopefully she's not deported
Restaurant meals
Nothing worse than paying for a meal
3 weeks later on your cc card
With tax and tip that burger, beer and fries
What's that cost ?
It's Nueva York
You don't want to know ...
Remember that stuff ?
Booze for one
Don't need the government tracking me
Massages and hand jobs from Sha Sha
The massage is marginal
She handles dicks all day
Perfection man
Just the right amount of tension
Then release
Cash for her
No tracking Sha Sha
Hopefully she's not deported
Restaurant meals
Nothing worse than paying for a meal
3 weeks later on your cc card
With tax and tip that burger, beer and fries
What's that cost ?
It's Nueva York
You don't want to know ...
#culture
#food
#LifeAsAWriter #money
#LifeAsAWriter #money
83 reads
17 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 4:00am
17th Nov 2024 4:00am
Go the Green Backs
Rat a tat tat
Go the green backs
There is a scent of greed
Security all around
Vans full of cash
Ben counts 100
Don’t look that way
For comes another day
Guard drops down
Green greed escapes
Slapping em down
Picking em up
Blue marble spins on green
Turquoise beauty
Loves you when the rent is paid
Don’t pick up the tab
Ain’t licking the landing strip
Greed makes the world go round
Rat a Tat Tat
Go the green bucks
Go the green backs
There is a scent of greed
Security all around
Vans full of cash
Ben counts 100
Don’t look that way
For comes another day
Guard drops down
Green greed escapes
Slapping em down
Picking em up
Blue marble spins on green
Turquoise beauty
Loves you when the rent is paid
Don’t pick up the tab
Ain’t licking the landing strip
Greed makes the world go round
Rat a Tat Tat
Go the green bucks
#devil
#greed
#money
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0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 6:52am
16th Nov 2024 6:52am
Live positive
Live moments in positivity
Discard negative
Just did something
Gave away the key
To prosperity
If I sit and stew
And bake a monster of anger
Doesn’t help those i love
Think a circuit is undone
In my cerebellum
Scream at the tv when they don’t
Do what i say to comfort
And fatten the wallet
I cant just beat me
To pay for my sins
So I’m starting something new
Turn a lemon to victory
in my mind I’m aware i watch me
I’m living in positivity
Not down won’t...
Discard negative
Just did something
Gave away the key
To prosperity
If I sit and stew
And bake a monster of anger
Doesn’t help those i love
Think a circuit is undone
In my cerebellum
Scream at the tv when they don’t
Do what i say to comfort
And fatten the wallet
I cant just beat me
To pay for my sins
So I’m starting something new
Turn a lemon to victory
in my mind I’m aware i watch me
I’m living in positivity
Not down won’t...
#addiction
#grief
#money #sports
#money #sports
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oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 9:34am
11th Nov 2024 9:34am
Private Jets
Private jets
And chemtrails
Flying first class
45 minutes to my house
1 percent carbon footprint
132 times more than you
Caviar and silk robes
Paid for by your local mailman
Billions and billions
Can’t wrap my mind around
But they leave the check for the rest of us
And tweet about bullshit
They think is important
But not in my world
Have a birthday of decadence
Jet set to opulence
Must be nice for a peasant
Close as you get
Be their servant
Pick up...
And chemtrails
Flying first class
45 minutes to my house
1 percent carbon footprint
132 times more than you
Caviar and silk robes
Paid for by your local mailman
Billions and billions
Can’t wrap my mind around
But they leave the check for the rest of us
And tweet about bullshit
They think is important
But not in my world
Have a birthday of decadence
Jet set to opulence
Must be nice for a peasant
Close as you get
Be their servant
Pick up...
#environment
#hypocrisy
#money #vanity
#money #vanity
46 reads
0 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 5:37pm
3rd Nov 2024 5:37pm
Social Con Artists
I keep trying to break even but I just keep breaking odd
When it’s debts to liabilities and everything is mortgaged by the deficit of anxiety
Calibrate to find the best fit line
As I learn to operate in the chaos from a place of peace
Resolve structured after a vision fortified
We are not making home, we’re just trying to meet the ends
No use rehashing the lessons we’ve already learned
When the consumer is the kindling for the way the world burns
We’re buying back the illusion of what we own with every penny that we earn
In a world clothed of...
When it’s debts to liabilities and everything is mortgaged by the deficit of anxiety
Calibrate to find the best fit line
As I learn to operate in the chaos from a place of peace
Resolve structured after a vision fortified
We are not making home, we’re just trying to meet the ends
No use rehashing the lessons we’ve already learned
When the consumer is the kindling for the way the world burns
We’re buying back the illusion of what we own with every penny that we earn
In a world clothed of...
#anxiety
#corruption
#LifeStruggles
#money
#politics
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0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 11:58pm
2nd Nov 2024 11:58pm
On The Hill
On the hill
All the pennies dropped
Should have bought a mansion on the hill
Tried to be a winner
I’m such a loser through and through
All the time I spent
Instead of being present
Chasing dollar signs
Being on the wrong side
I still remember
My first time
It was 1994….Eagles and Niners
Garner laid it down and I
Collected two bills
The start of something
So destructive
Wish I could go back cause
I see it’s killing my family
Pennies dropped
Add up to a bucket ...
All the pennies dropped
Should have bought a mansion on the hill
Tried to be a winner
I’m such a loser through and through
All the time I spent
Instead of being present
Chasing dollar signs
Being on the wrong side
I still remember
My first time
It was 1994….Eagles and Niners
Garner laid it down and I
Collected two bills
The start of something
So destructive
Wish I could go back cause
I see it’s killing my family
Pennies dropped
Add up to a bucket ...
#addiction
#greed
#money #sports
#money #sports
51 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 1:47am
31st Oct 2024 1:47am
The sheep pay for my sins
The sheep pay for my sins
I make a call to you all
I’m being persecuted like an Orange Jesus
Won’t you get up and scream out or
Better yet open up your pocketbook
So you don’t have to suffer like me
Guilty of everything accused of
You don’t care about such nonsense
To busy chasing immigrants
Or the latest culture wars book burning being cancelled or trans bathrooms
You’re behind on your rent
Electricity being cut off
Need new tires on a shit pickup
But all I...
I make a call to you all
I’m being persecuted like an Orange Jesus
Won’t you get up and scream out or
Better yet open up your pocketbook
So you don’t have to suffer like me
Guilty of everything accused of
You don’t care about such nonsense
To busy chasing immigrants
Or the latest culture wars book burning being cancelled or trans bathrooms
You’re behind on your rent
Electricity being cut off
Need new tires on a shit pickup
But all I...
#deception
#emptiness
#greed
#manipulation
#money
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
A WICKED WORLD
As long as I can remember I never truly thought that my hometown. 🌆 NEW YORK CITY 🏙️ WOULD BE BLANKET IN SHADES OF 🌑 DARKNESS. THE YEARS OF THE INVASION 2020 to now 2024 OF THE MAGGOTS, CALLED THE NEW COMERS OF AMERICA. IMMIGRANTS AS THEY WERE SENT BY BUSES AND PLANES, even walking across the border. WHO KNEW WILL BE DESTROYING THE CITY LIFE. 😲 YET here is the truth of the devastation of crimes, with no punishment or jail time, murders and robbery, and the senseless killings of American citizen. WHO are people young and elderly and childrens....
#money
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#werewolves
83 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 11:04am
24th Oct 2024 11:04am
Off With Their Heads
Round them all up and take them down
It's quite unhealthy to leave them around
They breed disease and kill the trees
Pollute the air, make it hard to breathe
How many could you feed, instead of spending on luxuries?
Fancy cars and bigger homes, leave them alone
Disconnected from the masses, zero taxes paid, were the dumb asses
Surrounded by an echo chamber, everyone loves your flavor
Compliments, singing praises but, you're being manipulated
Only contempt for humanity, altered perception of reality
Community can't be bought and sold, no one...
It's quite unhealthy to leave them around
They breed disease and kill the trees
Pollute the air, make it hard to breathe
How many could you feed, instead of spending on luxuries?
Fancy cars and bigger homes, leave them alone
Disconnected from the masses, zero taxes paid, were the dumb asses
Surrounded by an echo chamber, everyone loves your flavor
Compliments, singing praises but, you're being manipulated
Only contempt for humanity, altered perception of reality
Community can't be bought and sold, no one...
#corruption
#greed
#lies
#manipulation
#money
86 reads
2 Comments
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