Minimalist by Top Critiquers Poems
#minimalist
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 7:55am
18th Dec 2024 7:55am
intermediate hours
these
intermediate
hours
look back
at me,
i burrow
myself into
early
thoughts,
wanting to
get them
placed
before
my eyelids
flutter and
surrender
to this
long length
of hour's
movements.
intermediate
hours
look back
at me,
i burrow
myself into
early
thoughts,
wanting to
get them
placed
before
my eyelids
flutter and
surrender
to this
long length
of hour's
movements.
#emotions
#FreeVerse
#metaphor #minimalist
#metaphor #minimalist
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4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
30th Dec 2023 11:50am
30th Dec 2023 11:50am
Wolf
I ask for food from anyone
that passes by me
at the door of any
fast food restaurant
any beans pasta place
come undone
I ask you to feed me
feed me with that
that you cannot eat
because too little or poisonous
I don't know... like salads
watercress lemon soap
how would I feed myself to a wolf
wolf that feeds the pack
wolf that goes hungry
of the pack
just a wolf
a wolf
nestled on the far side of the moon
in a howl that amplifies
the shine of the stars!
that passes by me
at the door of any
fast food restaurant
any beans pasta place
come undone
I ask you to feed me
feed me with that
that you cannot eat
because too little or poisonous
I don't know... like salads
watercress lemon soap
how would I feed myself to a wolf
wolf that feeds the pack
wolf that goes hungry
of the pack
just a wolf
a wolf
nestled on the far side of the moon
in a howl that amplifies
the shine of the stars!
#spiritual
#mirror
#food
#minimalist
#poverty
106 reads
2 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:49pm
24th Dec 2024 1:49pm
Fabric Of Being
if I touched
the fabric of your being
unravelled you
thread by thread
what would I find
the fabric of your being
unravelled you
thread by thread
what would I find
#love
#minimalist
#sensual
153 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Jul 2022 4:04am
8th Jul 2022 4:04am
Summer Madness...
This is the look you make when you cannot get your hair cut
Therefore, you razor cut it yourself
Mmm… Hello Summer
Therefore, you razor cut it yourself
Mmm… Hello Summer
#summer
#vanity
#minimalist #culture
#minimalist #culture
507 reads
13 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
25th Jul 2023 6:31am
25th Jul 2023 6:31am
Moo
No boundaries
Vaguely distracted
Wandering
like a lost cow
nearing a cliff
Vaguely distracted
Wandering
like a lost cow
nearing a cliff
#depression
#animals
#minimalist #choices
#minimalist #choices
307 reads
11 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
6th Jul 2023 2:46am
6th Jul 2023 2:46am
You don't complete me.
You just see me
without flinching,
As if I was whole.
.
without flinching,
As if I was whole.
.
#love
#gratitude
#minimalist
454 reads
18 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
12th May 2021 4:20pm
12th May 2021 4:20pm
At Amber
vizz ###
#SelfReflection
#minimalist
329 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
16th Jan 2018 00:47am
16th Jan 2018 00:47am
back streets ..
and the city seen
from a nearby hill is not
the city I love -
city I know can
only be seen
by it's crap
streets, not
from above ..
from a nearby hill is not
the city I love -
city I know can
only be seen
by it's crap
streets, not
from above ..
#city
#SelfReflection
#Britain #minimalist
#Britain #minimalist
649 reads
2 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
16th Aug 2024 7:10am
16th Aug 2024 7:10am
Alas
I called to speak some words last night
and found you still asleep,
although there might've been some fright,
such company you keep.
I walked the path to where you dream
but in your own grave way,
you might have urged me on to scream
the words I came to say.
But all around the fresh mown grass
calmed me, as if this June,
had laid her lightest cloak on a lass,
asleep, beneath the moon.
and found you still asleep,
although there might've been some fright,
such company you keep.
I walked the path to where you dream
but in your own grave way,
you might have urged me on to scream
the words I came to say.
But all around the fresh mown grass
calmed me, as if this June,
had laid her lightest cloak on a lass,
asleep, beneath the moon.
#minimalist
#rhyming
127 reads
6 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
26th Jun 2019 3:30am
26th Jun 2019 3:30am
My Poetry Was Lousy You Said
I'm leaving my body on a daily basis
or is it my bodies failing me
It's all relative Albert
Free drugs are like free hugs
how can one say no
smouldering ashtrays are bad for health
Sugar tax the poor to feed the wealthy
how then will I indulge my smack habit
try killing the pain
Cold turkey bones picked carcass
just another wanksgiving parade
distorted dissasosiated
some what in denial
A setting sun for junkies
waiting around to die
One last waltz in the sky
with the crazy...
or is it my bodies failing me
It's all relative Albert
Free drugs are like free hugs
how can one say no
smouldering ashtrays are bad for health
Sugar tax the poor to feed the wealthy
how then will I indulge my smack habit
try killing the pain
Cold turkey bones picked carcass
just another wanksgiving parade
distorted dissasosiated
some what in denial
A setting sun for junkies
waiting around to die
One last waltz in the sky
with the crazy...
#minimalist
#philosophical
437 reads
0 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 1:50am
18th Jun 2024 1:50am
I'm Nothing, How are You?
So
this is the only avenue i have
kept in my back pocket
rocking out to muted sounds
i am
but a man
nothing more
but so much less
than you
could confide in
an ignorant claim
of self-defiance
oh my
i thought
for a brief second, that
i might be something
maybe have a thing to offer
yet it turns out
i'm just a pretty mess
like the aborted rest
of this shovel
all i can do is grovel
fuck them
and fuck you too
i'm here
but i'll never be you
motherfucker.
this is the only avenue i have
kept in my back pocket
rocking out to muted sounds
i am
but a man
nothing more
but so much less
than you
could confide in
an ignorant claim
of self-defiance
oh my
i thought
for a brief second, that
i might be something
maybe have a thing to offer
yet it turns out
i'm just a pretty mess
like the aborted rest
of this shovel
all i can do is grovel
fuck them
and fuck you too
i'm here
but i'll never be you
motherfucker.
#anger
#despair
#emptiness
#minimalist
#StreamOfConsciousness
169 reads
1 Comment
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
13th Apr 2022 3:29am
13th Apr 2022 3:29am
Legion
New life growing within
spawn for a crawling apocalypse
there's nowhere to hide
spawn for a crawling apocalypse
there's nowhere to hide
#dark
#war
#death #minimalist
#death #minimalist
407 reads
2 Comments
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