Minimalist Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#minimalist
The Life
Passion
Grit
Servitude
Whose ?
Grit
Servitude
Whose ?
#BDSM
#minimalist
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2 Comments
Poetry is the kind of friend
tapping me on
my shoulders
convincing me
that I matter,
looks straight
into my eyes
saying you
will outlive
this storm.
my shoulders
convincing me
that I matter,
looks straight
into my eyes
saying you
will outlive
this storm.
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#minimalist
58 reads
3 Comments
A simple complication
It's the sound
of blackbirds
forgetting
about life
as sunshine
rotates in a
ball hot &
round.
of blackbirds
forgetting
about life
as sunshine
rotates in a
ball hot &
round.
#nature
#humankind
#minimalist
45 reads
1 Comment
Why do you float?
Because I know
the way people
take every fault
and secret only
to rub it in your
face like vomit,
consider this
a free lesson
in pulling your
body back to
the ground.
the way people
take every fault
and secret only
to rub it in your
face like vomit,
consider this
a free lesson
in pulling your
body back to
the ground.
#minimalist
68 reads
3 Comments
(do you think of me with the lights on)
no matter
how tightly
I close
my eyes
he’s still
not you
how tightly
I close
my eyes
he’s still
not you
#sadness
#love
#lover #minimalist
#lover #minimalist
150 reads
7 Comments
It's March
I survived, rain celebrates.
#LGBT
#SixWordStory
#transgender #minimalist
#transgender #minimalist
94 reads
2 Comments
Some words
lessen as
we age.
we age.
#SixWordStory
#minimalist
70 reads
2 Comments
Girl X, Boy Y
They don't
wander with
dirt stained
hands
they spend
hours alone
inside dark
channels
as court
hearings
warp into
stages.
wander with
dirt stained
hands
they spend
hours alone
inside dark
channels
as court
hearings
warp into
stages.
#murder
#violence
#Britain #minimalist
#Britain #minimalist
93 reads
1 Comment
And the pillows stand as tombstones
He breaks
into me
like I'm
unconsecrated
ground
(oh god)
his skin
tastes like
suicide
into me
like I'm
unconsecrated
ground
(oh god)
his skin
tastes like
suicide
#sex
#lover
#minimalist
368 reads
32 Comments
Den
Even cthulu
lays their
tentacles
down.
lays their
tentacles
down.
#minimalist
97 reads
3 Comments
Other overrated bullshit
#lust
#sex
#minimalist
#apathy
#orgasm
206 reads
29 Comments
Doesn’t Fit in Other Categories
Sometimes I want to write you
Like now
I don’t really have anything to say
But I know
Just the writing aspect is good
It’s still a connection
Maybe you’ll say something back
And
Maybe I’ll laugh
Like now
I don’t really have anything to say
But I know
Just the writing aspect is good
It’s still a connection
Maybe you’ll say something back
And
Maybe I’ll laugh
#minimalist
172 reads
35 Comments
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