Minimalist Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#minimalist
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 5:03pm
12th Feb 2025 5:03pm
Eat Me
Well sorta ..
New Art concept
Place Mats
What do you think ??
New Art concept
Place Mats
What do you think ??
#art
#food
#minimalist
109 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 11:16am
10th Feb 2025 11:16am
Fight
Your weakness is money in their bank!
#corruption
#greed
#minimalist #politics
#minimalist #politics
110 reads
19 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 3:33pm
8th Feb 2025 3:33pm
Hold My Beer
🍺
I didn't know how to gracefully release
an emotional undercurrent
in a manner that was clear
and concise
without becoming the monster I hate
Until the Poem said, Pssst. . .
Hold my beer.
I didn't know how to gracefully release
an emotional undercurrent
in a manner that was clear
and concise
without becoming the monster I hate
Until the Poem said, Pssst. . .
Hold my beer.
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeStruggles
#minimalist
#WritingPoetry
312 reads
31 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 4:23pm
7th Feb 2025 4:23pm
~fluoresce reds, of a bloodied rose.. am I & you
the peaking platonic tactic
of you, drunk in an egoistic
hue of a synthetic fairyland
..in luring mirages.. a lying
oasis of striking candied pinks
splattered outta tiny cochineals
& in electric piercing geometric
rays of coppery sulphate blues..
doesn’t even shake a pint
of this an ancient Himalayan
risen plate in a terrific tectonic
& never ever try to drive in
even a sterile shallowly pinch
of an aching pain.. waiting
to be endlessly bled out
in dripping reds of this ...
of you, drunk in an egoistic
hue of a synthetic fairyland
..in luring mirages.. a lying
oasis of striking candied pinks
splattered outta tiny cochineals
& in electric piercing geometric
rays of coppery sulphate blues..
doesn’t even shake a pint
of this an ancient Himalayan
risen plate in a terrific tectonic
& never ever try to drive in
even a sterile shallowly pinch
of an aching pain.. waiting
to be endlessly bled out
in dripping reds of this ...
#love
#minimalist
#music
#rose
#ValentinesDay
102 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:54am
7th Feb 2025 10:54am
The pain that is love
Love is all around us
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
#breakup
#love
#minimalist #philosophical
#minimalist #philosophical
165 reads
24 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:47am
5th Feb 2025 11:47am
I see sunshine
kissing rooftops
of every building
this morning
as eyes slowly
turn themselves
into fountains,
knowing you
are missing
from me.
of every building
this morning
as eyes slowly
turn themselves
into fountains,
knowing you
are missing
from me.
#minimalist
157 reads
0 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 7:44pm
3rd Feb 2025 7:44pm
Forcing Myself to Write for Some Unknown Reason
I never know what I'm trying to say.
So I wing it.
And, try to write something.
Precise.
Cause,
English is not a good language for poetry.
It sounds so choppy.
So malformed.
Bereft of inspiration.
Borrowed words from passing cultures.
This is narration.
This is the tautology.
Of stating a fact.
Forcing myself to write.
So I don't forget the difference.
Between prose
And.
Poetry.
So I wing it.
And, try to write something.
Precise.
Cause,
English is not a good language for poetry.
It sounds so choppy.
So malformed.
Bereft of inspiration.
Borrowed words from passing cultures.
This is narration.
This is the tautology.
Of stating a fact.
Forcing myself to write.
So I don't forget the difference.
Between prose
And.
Poetry.
#metaphor
#minimalist
54 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 1:23pm
3rd Feb 2025 1:23pm
Games People Play
People don't play games, games play people
Whatever game you're playing is the game you're playing with yourself.
Whatever game you're playing is the game you're playing with yourself.
#minimalist
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
118 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 10:41am
3rd Feb 2025 10:41am
Don't Stop Knowing Nothing
Don't!
Don't believe what you see
Stop!
Stop believing what you read
Knowing!
Knowing that I aint you and you aint me
Nothing!
Nothing you know will set you free
Don't believe what you see
Stop!
Stop believing what you read
Knowing!
Knowing that I aint you and you aint me
Nothing!
Nothing you know will set you free
#lies
#minimalist
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
116 reads
14 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 2:53pm
2nd Feb 2025 2:53pm
~misc. minimalist random scribbles:: summated from a past
1.
wafts the nightly run dunes
in a myriad ringing perfumy
runes~ lawsonia-in-blooms
2.
petrified mindfringes
drinks in the syringing rains-
levitational petrichors now
3.
hazy galloping fast, vastly
zebrine skies- tingle & tango
her moony third eye🌔
4.
#Monsoonal #TanglishMinimalist
#mridangam skies rumbly
whelm as #TalaiKaveri tears
5.
oh the giant cannibal
monsoonal glooms, how
you gobble up even
dimly living daylights! ...
wafts the nightly run dunes
in a myriad ringing perfumy
runes~ lawsonia-in-blooms
2.
petrified mindfringes
drinks in the syringing rains-
levitational petrichors now
3.
hazy galloping fast, vastly
zebrine skies- tingle & tango
her moony third eye🌔
4.
#Monsoonal #TanglishMinimalist
#mridangam skies rumbly
whelm as #TalaiKaveri tears
5.
oh the giant cannibal
monsoonal glooms, how
you gobble up even
dimly living daylights! ...
#love
#memories
#minimalist #WritingPoetry
#minimalist #WritingPoetry
118 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 12:23pm
2nd Feb 2025 12:23pm
A typical Sunday morning
As I looked into her blackhole,
I knew she needed to use the porcelain thrown
As I waited, I began working on my origami birds
20 minutes later, I heard a swishing, whirlpool like sound coming from the bathroom
She was like, "I'm cuckoo for cocoa puffs"!
"Ok, Let's eat!"
I knew she needed to use the porcelain thrown
As I waited, I began working on my origami birds
20 minutes later, I heard a swishing, whirlpool like sound coming from the bathroom
She was like, "I'm cuckoo for cocoa puffs"!
"Ok, Let's eat!"
#art
#food
#minimalist #ThrillSeeking
#minimalist #ThrillSeeking
133 reads
18 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 10:47am
31st Jan 2025 10:47am
The Life Of A Rockstar
Love call for Rockstars:
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
#deception
#manipulation
#minimalist
#music
#PopCulture
113 reads
16 Comments
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