Metaphor Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#metaphor
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 8:56pm
26th Nov 2024 8:56pm
OUT WITH THE TRASH
They say that we have to learn to walk away. FROM the very deepness of the negativity. 😞 That has no real reason to be able to judge, you in your own thoughts and insight and spiritual subconsciousness. Yet they do 🤨🤔 YET why they dislike you and they have no real reason. THAT THEY CAN REALLY JUSTIFY, THE TRUTH OF THE REASON BEHIND THE REAL MOTIVE. 🤔 Fact check ✔️ For sure some people's are just creatures of habits. 🤨 AS we have took the time to notice, the kinds of mental mind games. THAT has stimulate the truth covering it up behind...
#CallToAction
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 7:06pm
20th Nov 2024 7:06pm
The Coming
Yelling cursing, noise level terror
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't speak
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't speak
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
#abuse
#DomesticViolence
#home
#metaphor
#school
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 4:05pm
20th Nov 2024 4:05pm
Sage of ages
unadulterated sinful lust, of the dark arts
rub the need, it will rise within
inked in blood, my faith
secret of sorcery, not to be misunderstood
a sacred ritual begins
upon the alter of desire, I plead
placating God with what I give
torrid seed, there are some among us that displease
an offering of silence for these unfortunates
all to keep the balance
purifications rites, taken seriously
as I chant to listening ears
the angels watch on somberly
reserving judgement for the almighty
my prayers rise...
rub the need, it will rise within
inked in blood, my faith
secret of sorcery, not to be misunderstood
a sacred ritual begins
upon the alter of desire, I plead
placating God with what I give
torrid seed, there are some among us that displease
an offering of silence for these unfortunates
all to keep the balance
purifications rites, taken seriously
as I chant to listening ears
the angels watch on somberly
reserving judgement for the almighty
my prayers rise...
#metaphor
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 10:18am
20th Nov 2024 10:18am
Feuer mit Schwertern
Das Feuer tanzt auf blankem Stahl
Ein Funkensprung im finstren Saal
Die Klinge singt, ein Lied so wild
Im Flammenschein wird Blut erfüllt
For the English speakers:
The fire dances on the blade
A spark ignites where shadows fade
The sword it sings, a song of strife
In fiery glow, it drinks of life
Ein Funkensprung im finstren Saal
Die Klinge singt, ein Lied so wild
Im Flammenschein wird Blut erfüllt
For the English speakers:
The fire dances on the blade
A spark ignites where shadows fade
The sword it sings, a song of strife
In fiery glow, it drinks of life
#fire
#metaphor
#narrative
#rhyming
#strength
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 2:21pm
19th Nov 2024 2:21pm
The Silent Cartographer
In the realm where shadows softly hum,
And silent whispers through dreams come,
A cartographer maps the soul’s great maze,
Charting the truth in moonlit haze.
A predator looms, fierce and wild,
The untamed fear of a guarded child.
Chased through woods of fractured thought,
By shadows of battles never fought.
An infant stirs, fragile and new,
The seed of beginnings breaking through.
Its cries echo with tender grace,
The yearning for love’s eternal face.
The faceless runner on twisted lanes,
Fleeing...
And silent whispers through dreams come,
A cartographer maps the soul’s great maze,
Charting the truth in moonlit haze.
A predator looms, fierce and wild,
The untamed fear of a guarded child.
Chased through woods of fractured thought,
By shadows of battles never fought.
An infant stirs, fragile and new,
The seed of beginnings breaking through.
Its cries echo with tender grace,
The yearning for love’s eternal face.
The faceless runner on twisted lanes,
Fleeing...
#dreams
#metaphor
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 12:06pm
18th Nov 2024 12:06pm
The Many Faces of Love
Love is a flame,
burning brightly in the quiet of night,
its warmth a sanctuary,
its heat a warning of what may consume.
It flows like a river,
carving paths through stone hearts,
changing the landscape
with each twist and turn.
Love is a storm,
fierce winds of passion and fear,
breaking, bending, and rebuilding,
leaving us cleansed yet raw.
It sings as a melody,
soft as a lullaby,
or sharp and raw,
echoing in the chambers of longing.
It stretches like a bridge,
connecting the unspoken...
burning brightly in the quiet of night,
its warmth a sanctuary,
its heat a warning of what may consume.
It flows like a river,
carving paths through stone hearts,
changing the landscape
with each twist and turn.
Love is a storm,
fierce winds of passion and fear,
breaking, bending, and rebuilding,
leaving us cleansed yet raw.
It sings as a melody,
soft as a lullaby,
or sharp and raw,
echoing in the chambers of longing.
It stretches like a bridge,
connecting the unspoken...
#love
#metaphor
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
YOUR ENERGY LEVEL
There will come a time in each of our lives, for the mind to develop a sense of rebuilding, your thoughts on a positive level. Because with real substance with real intelligences, with your own thoughts to believe that you can
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
#CallToAction
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 5:59pm
9th Nov 2024 5:59pm
home
gathering myself, I consider my life
twisted and barren in places
disturbed by crazy thoughts, in others
dreaming wildly and reaching for starlight
winding my way through the haze
struggling to find my voice, through anxieties hold
falling into oblivion, to find my way home again
natural epiphaines and stoned out of my gourd
the heights so impossible, the lows devestating
taking risks and laying low
loved by the masses, to having no one to care at all
an interesting ride to be sure
wisdom gathered, thoughts...
twisted and barren in places
disturbed by crazy thoughts, in others
dreaming wildly and reaching for starlight
winding my way through the haze
struggling to find my voice, through anxieties hold
falling into oblivion, to find my way home again
natural epiphaines and stoned out of my gourd
the heights so impossible, the lows devestating
taking risks and laying low
loved by the masses, to having no one to care at all
an interesting ride to be sure
wisdom gathered, thoughts...
#metaphor
#nature
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 4:21pm
8th Nov 2024 4:21pm
GOING AGAINST THE GRAIN
As I raise upon another day in this world 🌍 of chaos and drama. I am awakening up on this day to learn, that the Democrats, are playing the blame game. 😞 Trying to figure out who's at fault??🤨 FOR this disaster of there Hope, of still being in charge, as the Democrat party. Yet all your have to do is look at thyself, for sure it's annoying but yet look at the situations. THAT you all have created not really caring, knowing whatever we do comes with repercussion and consequences.. 😞 YET you still believe that you got it in the 💰 💰 💰 bags...
#ignorance
#LifeStruggles
#metaphor
#politics
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 5:57pm
6th Nov 2024 5:57pm
A RIGHTEOUS CHANGE
Here we are now going through a celebration, moment of a movement of tranquility and peace again. 🤗 For sure as we exchange thoughts on the nonsense, that we had to deal with in the last four years. 🤨 It's been hell on earth 🌎 with the increase of immigrants, with the invasion across sanctuary state. 🤨 For sure there were high prices of gas and food and homes and apartments, let's not forget, about the lies and false promises, and propaganda to get those of you who believed, that they are looking out for YOU. 😠 Just to have you believe that they care...
#epic
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 10:33pm
3rd Nov 2024 10:33pm
BREAKING OF THE POWER
Here we are in remission of our thoughts, filled with so much anxiety and chaos and confusion, along with these dramatic changes. Leaving you sometimes feeling more unsure, when you begin to feel like this world. 🌍 Isn't the same world that you once knew, as it changed not for the betterment of your own thoughts but your mind and life. For we have to learn how to separate the things that doesn't matter to US. FOR you know your own self value and self worth.
#metaphor
#philosophical
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:37pm
1st Nov 2024 11:37pm
WISE WORDS OF WISDOM
As those who know what is fact and not fiction, truly how do you visualize the world. 🌍For sure just ask thyself what would you rather, have bad or good, for sure what would you rather have four years ago, 😊 Or would you rather have right now. 🤔 Yet I wonder if you will have the perseverance, to survive in a place, that has been changed by the powers that be. 🤨 For as this very existence has become, something out of a bad horrible dream. But yet it's here in full bloom in visions of our lives and eyes 👁️👁️.
...
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#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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