Poems About Manipulation Seeking Honest Critique
#manipulation
Poems about manipulation seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Calkid817
Poem Published
25th Sep 2023 4:16pm
25th Sep 2023 4:16pm
Love Lie
I used to love
I used to care
But now those feelings
Are no longer there
All this time
I never could see
That it was never
Really about me
You only love
To get attention
But you could never
Show affection
So if this is really ends
Your love
Was something
I'll have to pretend
I used to care
But now those feelings
Are no longer there
All this time
I never could see
That it was never
Really about me
You only love
To get attention
But you could never
Show affection
So if this is really ends
Your love
Was something
I'll have to pretend
#heartbroken
#breakup
#manipulation
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sycorah
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2023 9:02pm
23rd Sep 2023 9:02pm
MAN IS JUST A MAN 2
Verse#1
Paralyzed tongue
Spiritually blinded eyes
That is created to see nothing beyond our own reality
Stone and cold hearts
It traps low frequency
Leaving the hollowed vibration
The echoes the sounds of dead end illusions
Disconnection from
Any and everything living on the face of this earth
And far and far beyond
They trade our love with bloodshed
As our innocence lies in the palm's of their hands, and still they must divide us
Chours
What kind of world are we living...
Paralyzed tongue
Spiritually blinded eyes
That is created to see nothing beyond our own reality
Stone and cold hearts
It traps low frequency
Leaving the hollowed vibration
The echoes the sounds of dead end illusions
Disconnection from
Any and everything living on the face of this earth
And far and far beyond
They trade our love with bloodshed
As our innocence lies in the palm's of their hands, and still they must divide us
Chours
What kind of world are we living...
#God
#humankind
#manipulation
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LonelyBrokenDemon
Ritshe
Ritshe
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2023 4:28pm
22nd Sep 2023 4:28pm
Illusions
The difference between you and me is quite simple.
It's just that what you call a lie,
I call it being in an illusion.
Sometimes you tend to keep people
Under an illusion just to make them happy
By telling them the things that they wish to hear.
But I guess, keeping the ones you love
or perhaps anyone for that matter in an illusion,
Can be the best and the worst thing you can
ever do to them.
And again, It's ironic for me to say
I hate illusions when I love the one where
I force myself to be in, close to you.
It's just that what you call a lie,
I call it being in an illusion.
Sometimes you tend to keep people
Under an illusion just to make them happy
By telling them the things that they wish to hear.
But I guess, keeping the ones you love
or perhaps anyone for that matter in an illusion,
Can be the best and the worst thing you can
ever do to them.
And again, It's ironic for me to say
I hate illusions when I love the one where
I force myself to be in, close to you.
#love
#secrets
#lies
#sacrifice
#manipulation
329 reads
1 Comment
Hayleeh82
Haylee
Haylee
Poem Published
19th Sep 2023 8:25am
19th Sep 2023 8:25am
This can’t be
What’s wrong with Me?
Did i let this happen to me?
Am i so insecure with myself that I’m stuck?
Can this process be undone?
Questions running though my head
Feeling as i am defeated
Happening ever so slowly
Never realizing the bigger picture.
Wondering if i could have stopped it
Each one did their damage To me
Leaving me worse then before
Always wondering if i can heal
Never fully able to before the next
Is this my new home?
Never going Back
Did i let this happen to me?
Am i so insecure with myself that I’m stuck?
Can this process be undone?
Questions running though my head
Feeling as i am defeated
Happening ever so slowly
Never realizing the bigger picture.
Wondering if i could have stopped it
Each one did their damage To me
Leaving me worse then before
Always wondering if i can heal
Never fully able to before the next
Is this my new home?
Never going Back
#regret
#heartbroken
#lies
#bittersweet
#manipulation
206 reads
1 Comment
Hayleeh82
Haylee
Haylee
Poem Published
19th Sep 2023 6:05am
19th Sep 2023 6:05am
Fixable or Not
Sometimes it brings out the worse
Not this time surprisingly
Talking about this is never easy
Starts with finding out
Leading to the mood changing
Knowing what’s next
Prepping myself for the fight
Answers all your questions
Not hiding anything
I’m ok if you believe or not
I know I’m faithful to you
Reminding you every time this happens
I can only take so much
Each time seems to be worse
Cutting deeper than before
Making it harder to forget and forgive
I’m not ready to give up
I am done doing it...
Not this time surprisingly
Talking about this is never easy
Starts with finding out
Leading to the mood changing
Knowing what’s next
Prepping myself for the fight
Answers all your questions
Not hiding anything
I’m ok if you believe or not
I know I’m faithful to you
Reminding you every time this happens
I can only take so much
Each time seems to be worse
Cutting deeper than before
Making it harder to forget and forgive
I’m not ready to give up
I am done doing it...
#relationships
#conflict
#manipulation #deception
#manipulation #deception
194 reads
1 Comment
Results_May_Vary
Poem Published
18th Sep 2023 11:20am
18th Sep 2023 11:20am
Straw House
Knock three times and blow your house down
Watching you scratch from atop the cloud
Open up and watch them all drown
I'm screaming without making a sound
All I wanted was a piece
All I needed was to hear
All I got was rot and disease
All you had was the fear
I'd find you out
Snap your fingers and my attention breaks
Demanding more than what it takes
Hold back the rage till my eyes leak
Slam the door and toss the key away
All I wanted was a ghost
All I needed was a hand
All I got was codependence ...
Watching you scratch from atop the cloud
Open up and watch them all drown
I'm screaming without making a sound
All I wanted was a piece
All I needed was to hear
All I got was rot and disease
All you had was the fear
I'd find you out
Snap your fingers and my attention breaks
Demanding more than what it takes
Hold back the rage till my eyes leak
Slam the door and toss the key away
All I wanted was a ghost
All I needed was a hand
All I got was codependence ...
#family
#abuse
#bullying
#denial
#manipulation
225 reads
2 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
9th Sep 2023 9:36pm
9th Sep 2023 9:36pm
I Never Learn
#heartbroken
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#manipulation
#deception
247 reads
6 Comments
Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
28th Aug 2023 3:31am
28th Aug 2023 3:31am
Mickey Mouse Hat Of Horns
#evil
#tragedy
#hypocrisy
#sacrifice
#manipulation
217 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Aug 2023 3:18am
24th Aug 2023 3:18am
FROM BEYOND
A BEGINNING A MIDDLE AND A END...🤔 Have you ever heard a silent voice off from the distance, yet it sounds so clear like a whisper from the wind. Have you ever heard someone calling your name, yet when you look behind you 🤔 there's no one standing there, looking over your shoulder.👁️👁️ Have you ever heard of the illusions that you see and hear that you see aren't real👁️👁️ but yet you begin to question your own chain of thoughts, and your own questions as you silently talk to thyself, for is it your sanity or your...
#regret
#conflict
#honesty
#separation
#manipulation
248 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Aug 2023 12:02pm
18th Aug 2023 12:02pm
A New Dress That She Plans On Wearing
Jennifer asked some friends over to her place
because she wanted an honest opinion on
a new dress that she plans on wearing to Kate's
birthday party and catch the eye of Jason Stone.
because she wanted an honest opinion on
a new dress that she plans on wearing to Kate's
birthday party and catch the eye of Jason Stone.
#friendship
#birthday
#fiction
#temptation
#manipulation
205 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Aug 2023 8:43pm
14th Aug 2023 8:43pm
The One Time At A Ski Resort
#corruption
#porn
#fiction
#dialogue
#manipulation
198 reads
0 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
10th Aug 2023 12:18pm
10th Aug 2023 12:18pm
Dark "Draconian Law"
First we invade and persuade every mortal human being, threw various methods and many ritualistical schemes!!
Threw all performance 🎭 and art presented to their eyes and minds, by televisions and on movie screens!!
While remaining concealed moving in the shadows in secrecy, which helps cloak are democracy, and make it that much harder to be revealed or even seen!!
Symbols an signs in symbiotic connections is how we'll keep them trapped and blind all done by design!
Poisoning everything the masses use, from food to water and drinks, even...
Threw all performance 🎭 and art presented to their eyes and minds, by televisions and on movie screens!!
While remaining concealed moving in the shadows in secrecy, which helps cloak are democracy, and make it that much harder to be revealed or even seen!!
Symbols an signs in symbiotic connections is how we'll keep them trapped and blind all done by design!
Poisoning everything the masses use, from food to water and drinks, even...
#dark
#evil
#TruthOfLife
#sacrifice
#manipulation
370 reads
4 Comments
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