Poems About Lust Seeking Honest Critique
#lust
Poems about lust seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 8:16pm
8th Feb 2025 8:16pm
Seven Levels of Paradiso
The tips of your fingernails sail across my skin
just as your wet tongue sails across my lips.
Eye to eye, we share what makes us cry,
however personal, neither are afraid to tell.
Vulnerable armor we wear now as we talk
as we have somewhat surrendered so far.
And this talk of armor turning to tears,
as we witness ourselves melt emotionally.
Spirits high as we share giggles and winks.
To explore the other both spiritually and on flesh.
Surrendering by sharing lips and hot breaths.
Surrendering by...
just as your wet tongue sails across my lips.
Eye to eye, we share what makes us cry,
however personal, neither are afraid to tell.
Vulnerable armor we wear now as we talk
as we have somewhat surrendered so far.
And this talk of armor turning to tears,
as we witness ourselves melt emotionally.
Spirits high as we share giggles and winks.
To explore the other both spiritually and on flesh.
Surrendering by sharing lips and hot breaths.
Surrendering by...
#erotic
#lust
#orgasm
#passion
#sex
176 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 5:09pm
8th Feb 2025 5:09pm
Lady Of Pain
my lightshine alters according to the darkness within
my very old soul must maintain a balance
too dark and I become Sadistic
too much light and I lack substance
chaste of vision it is with my sexual sacrifices I struggle
it is the most heady of magics and offerings
though I must refrain in part
encouraging the dark arts is daunting
to call it back once it's unleashed is difficult
so I obstain from opening that portal
to arouse a God is not adviseable
if I fail to appease and then atone, he will punish me ...
my very old soul must maintain a balance
too dark and I become Sadistic
too much light and I lack substance
chaste of vision it is with my sexual sacrifices I struggle
it is the most heady of magics and offerings
though I must refrain in part
encouraging the dark arts is daunting
to call it back once it's unleashed is difficult
so I obstain from opening that portal
to arouse a God is not adviseable
if I fail to appease and then atone, he will punish me ...
#dark
#lust
73 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 1:28am
8th Feb 2025 1:28am
psycho
a fascination with the darkness
sometimes the psycho comes out of me
seriously demented, I know chaos is a part of my brain matter
my tastes are extreme
you play the game well
my soul noticed you right away
manuevering in the background
hitting tension points and getting what you want from people
my mind wasn't in focus yet
my vixen came at you right away with my go to
did you really think that was me?
well, it is a little bit
testing the waters I wanted to know you
you didn't take the bait. impressive
my...
sometimes the psycho comes out of me
seriously demented, I know chaos is a part of my brain matter
my tastes are extreme
you play the game well
my soul noticed you right away
manuevering in the background
hitting tension points and getting what you want from people
my mind wasn't in focus yet
my vixen came at you right away with my go to
did you really think that was me?
well, it is a little bit
testing the waters I wanted to know you
you didn't take the bait. impressive
my...
#love
#lust
115 reads
11 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 00:57am
8th Feb 2025 00:57am
wild
I'm missing you today, I wanted you to know
the wind blows south and I think of you
imagining being where you are, out in the free
my thoughts find you lonley, missing me too
my love for you doesn't fade
emptiness plagues me where you're not
my hollow spaces, crave you
desire burns through me
secret passion, my confession
you're too good for me I think
wrestling with my demons I believe it's me you see
my soul wonders how the other women hold up
I'm sure they are beautiful knowing you
with great taste and an...
the wind blows south and I think of you
imagining being where you are, out in the free
my thoughts find you lonley, missing me too
my love for you doesn't fade
emptiness plagues me where you're not
my hollow spaces, crave you
desire burns through me
secret passion, my confession
you're too good for me I think
wrestling with my demons I believe it's me you see
my soul wonders how the other women hold up
I'm sure they are beautiful knowing you
with great taste and an...
#love
#lust
118 reads
9 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 11:47pm
7th Feb 2025 11:47pm
Kinky buffet
#BDSM
#dirty
#lust
#sex
#temptation
251 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 9:16pm
7th Feb 2025 9:16pm
Lusting Quietly for You
Suffering in silence
We'd do well together
It will never happen
I'll injure myself instead
That always takes the edge off
It lasts for a day
Then I start all over again
We'd do well together
It will never happen
I'll injure myself instead
That always takes the edge off
It lasts for a day
Then I start all over again
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#seductive
#silence
260 reads
24 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:44am
7th Feb 2025 10:44am
This Pussy Is A Blazing!
#erotic
#lust
#porn
#rhyming
#sex
266 reads
15 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 11:52pm
6th Feb 2025 11:52pm
Babygirl
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#sensual
#temptation
221 reads
0 Comments
Ambjr
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 2:37pm
6th Feb 2025 2:37pm
gospel
fingers trace scripture onto skin
that tastes of tomorrow's promise
and yesterday's mistakes
her thighs are sacred temples
where I worship like a heathen
speakin in tongues
til she's caught between breath
and beggin
makin sounds that’d shatter halos
spillin hot blasphemy onto sheets
every touch a sacrament
every moan a prayer
baptized in sweat and flesh
findin redemption in damnation
where heaven and hell collide
that tastes of tomorrow's promise
and yesterday's mistakes
her thighs are sacred temples
where I worship like a heathen
speakin in tongues
til she's caught between breath
and beggin
makin sounds that’d shatter halos
spillin hot blasphemy onto sheets
every touch a sacrament
every moan a prayer
baptized in sweat and flesh
findin redemption in damnation
where heaven and hell collide
#lover
#lust
#passion #sex
#passion #sex
190 reads
3 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 3:37am
6th Feb 2025 3:37am
My Submissive Student
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#passion
225 reads
1 Comment
XiaoLong
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 00:43am
6th Feb 2025 00:43am
Pretty Face To f**k
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sensual
#sexy
216 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:39pm
5th Feb 2025 11:39pm
Mums best friend
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#temptation
92 reads
0 Comments
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