Poems About Lust Seeking Honest Critique
#lust
Poems about lust seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
KristinaX
Poem Published
9th May 2025 8:30pm
9th May 2025 8:30pm
Make me kneel, make me beg... (see note)
You said kneel,
and I dropped
not from weakness,
but from hunger
too sharp to carry standing.
Your silence bruised louder
than any scream.
This skin remembers.
The bite of leather,
the sweet drag of dread,
how I flinched just right
when you almost touched.
I stayed there
naked in the knowing
begging without words,
bleeding without wounds.
You thought I wanted mercy.
But come closer, ...
and I dropped
not from weakness,
but from hunger
too sharp to carry standing.
Your silence bruised louder
than any scream.
This skin remembers.
The bite of leather,
the sweet drag of dread,
how I flinched just right
when you almost touched.
I stayed there
naked in the knowing
begging without words,
bleeding without wounds.
You thought I wanted mercy.
But come closer, ...
#BDSM
#lust
#passion
#sex
#suffering
139 reads
40 Comments
mike_will
Mike Will
Mike Will
Poem Published
9th May 2025 3:34pm
9th May 2025 3:34pm
You
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#sex
#temptation
148 reads
0 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
8th May 2025 9:00pm
8th May 2025 9:00pm
Just choke me already
#BDSM
#lust
#relationships
#sex
#suffering
134 reads
20 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
8th May 2025 2:15pm
8th May 2025 2:15pm
Stuck in your web
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#erotic
#lust
#sensual
#technology
143 reads
21 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
7th May 2025 00:45am
7th May 2025 00:45am
Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#erotic
#love
#lust
#sensual
218 reads
40 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
6th May 2025 8:32pm
6th May 2025 8:32pm
Chapter 3 - Room 762
It seemed like an eternity until 1 o’clock. Finally, at the exact time, he approached room 762. Rachel must have been watching for him because the swung slowly open before he could knock. Then Rachel appeared, wearing a short summer dress with small daisy prints. It was cut low and her cleavage was smooth with several freckles glistening.
" I'm so glad you came," Rachel whispered, her voice barely above the hum of the air conditioning.
Jacob's throat felt tight, but he managed to find his voice. "I wouldn't have missed this, Rachel."
...
" I'm so glad you came," Rachel whispered, her voice barely above the hum of the air conditioning.
Jacob's throat felt tight, but he managed to find his voice. "I wouldn't have missed this, Rachel."
...
#betrayal
#lust
#sex
113 reads
0 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
5th May 2025 1:33pm
5th May 2025 1:33pm
Chapter 2 Conversation in the Park
Jacob walked slowly through the park, the trees whispering secrets in the gentle breeze as he pondered his next move. His mind was a whirlwind, torn between the excitement of the unexpected invitation and the responsibility he felt towards Rachel and her son. He knew he had to tread carefully; the stakes were too high for impulsive decisions.
He found an empty bench and sat down, his gaze lost in the dance of sunlight filtering through the leaves. He pulled out the napkin once more, tracing the numbers with his finger, as if they might reveal the true intention behind Rachel's...
He found an empty bench and sat down, his gaze lost in the dance of sunlight filtering through the leaves. He pulled out the napkin once more, tracing the numbers with his finger, as if they might reveal the true intention behind Rachel's...
#betrayal
#lust
132 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
5th May 2025 10:08am
5th May 2025 10:08am
Happiest place
#erotic
#lover
#lust #seductive
#lust #seductive
276 reads
0 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
2nd May 2025 8:11pm
2nd May 2025 8:11pm
A brief lesson on one-upmanship
sweat soaked
arched back,
screaming
with your hot cum
dripping from
the corners
of my mouth
and
somehow
you think
you
won
arched back,
screaming
with your hot cum
dripping from
the corners
of my mouth
and
somehow
you think
you
won
#lust
#obsession
#revenge
405 reads
12 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
2nd May 2025 1:06am
2nd May 2025 1:06am
A Chance Encounter
Chapter draft: A Chance Encounter
The Drury Hotel in downtown Saint Louis buzzed with the energy of the early morning. The clinking of silverware and the low murmur of conversation filled the air as guests shuffled in and out of the dining area, fueling up before a day of conference meetings. Jacob, a solitary traveler with no agenda but to explore the city, found himself amidst the hurried crowd, sipping his coffee and observing the flurry of activity.
At a nearby table, a young family caught his eye. Rachel, a woman with a gentle smile and eyes that held questions, was...
The Drury Hotel in downtown Saint Louis buzzed with the energy of the early morning. The clinking of silverware and the low murmur of conversation filled the air as guests shuffled in and out of the dining area, fueling up before a day of conference meetings. Jacob, a solitary traveler with no agenda but to explore the city, found himself amidst the hurried crowd, sipping his coffee and observing the flurry of activity.
At a nearby table, a young family caught his eye. Rachel, a woman with a gentle smile and eyes that held questions, was...
#betrayal
#deception
#family #lust
#family #lust
134 reads
1 Comment
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
30th Apr 2025 7:01pm
30th Apr 2025 7:01pm
KristinaX
Hello Kristina, caress the urge and know me
With a soft touch, the untouchable
Your beauty astounds me
Your sexuality arouses a temptress
With enchantments spilling from my lips
I empty the chalice of its scorn
feverish with delight
My demons greet
seduction over midnight's orgasm
You wicked Vixen, touch me deeply
arousing my senses and sating my need
Provoke the harlot in me
Who steals kisses while you sleep
tenderly tending to your ache
blushing bare and open
to receive the kiss of a devil ...
With a soft touch, the untouchable
Your beauty astounds me
Your sexuality arouses a temptress
With enchantments spilling from my lips
I empty the chalice of its scorn
feverish with delight
My demons greet
seduction over midnight's orgasm
You wicked Vixen, touch me deeply
arousing my senses and sating my need
Provoke the harlot in me
Who steals kisses while you sleep
tenderly tending to your ache
blushing bare and open
to receive the kiss of a devil ...
#erotic
#lust
301 reads
9 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Lust Seeking Honest Critique
